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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: dream_kudi

oh no!!!!!!!!!!!! don't separate a-k please 😭 😭 😭 but anways keep up the good work 😛

dont worry even if A-K separate, it wont be for too long. I dont like wen A-K separate

love,

rani

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Posted: 19 years ago
im sure ull get more than 20 comments cause this is the best fan fic eva! Pluz i luv ur fan fic! Plz do cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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con sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Mindblowing!!! 😳 😳 😳

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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

im sure ull get more than 20 comments cause this is the best fan fic eva! Pluz i luv ur fan fic! Plz do cont. soon!

thanx a lot for your sweet comment. but ppl still dont leave enuf comments. im still waiting for atleast 20.

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Posted: 19 years ago
how many more do u need? lol...
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Posted: 19 years ago
10 more to go

i have the next 3 parts written out but i wont post until i get 20 comments
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh plz don't break my heart i can't wait any longer plzzzzzzzzzz do post the next partssssssssssssss 😳 if u want 20 post i can do that for u within any second does that counts
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: lucky-moon

oh plz don't break my heart i can't wait any longer plzzzzzzzzzz do post the next partssssssssssssss 😳 if u want 20 post i can do that for u within any second does that counts

okay lucky-moon, ima post the next part for you. coming up in minute.

love,

rani

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Posted: 19 years ago

The next morning, angad gets a call from shabbir

A: hello?

S: hi angad. this is shabbir. how is everything...how is kripa?

A: everything is good....but i need to talk to you

S: yeah me too...but go ahead

A: yaar shabbir tumne hume woh gaane de kar hum par bohut bada problem daal diya. we tried singing it but we cant seem to get the feelings out. i dont think we will be able to sing songs like these. We cant relate to them.

S: oh! i called you to tell you that your recording is next week

A: next week? par hum india itni jaldi kaise aa jaye?

S: nahi india mein nahi...wahi london mein.

A: london? lekin...yaha par kaise?

S: you dont need to worry about that. all the preparations are done. all you need to do is get there on monday

A: monday? lekin hum bilkul bhi prepared nahi hai. i told you ...we cant relate to these...these sad songs

S: hmm.....you know what for now you guys just go there for the recording. the music directors will help you out. and if you still cant do it then you will get some more time to practice. these songs are really important for the album.....we need to show the world how versatile you are. if all you sing are the romantic songs then you're talent is not fully shown. so just go there this monday...you have 2 days to practice some more. okay?

A: i guess. we'll see.

S: ok i'll talk to you later. i have to do something rite now. bye

A: take care.....bye

Angad hangs up and goes to his room. When he enters, he see kripa fixing the bed. He goes and hugs her from behind, taking her completely by surprise.

K: angad!!! tum bhi na! mujhe dara hi diya

A: maine? tum mujhse darti ho?

K: main tumse nahi, tumhe khone se dart hu

A: to phir tumhe koi darr nahi hona chahiye.....tum mujhe kabhi bhi nahi kho sakti.....because I'm yours forever!

Kripa smiles and turns around to look at him.

K: tum itne udhaas kyo ho?

A: shabbir ka phone aaya tha

K: and?

A: humari recording....its on monday...rite here in london

K: what? in london? lekin....how are we gonna sing that song?

A: i hav no clue...but shabbir said that the music directors are gonna help us out. so i hope they can or else........

K: yeah.

On monday.............................

kripa and angad go to the recording studio to meet the music directors. Then kripa and angad go to separate rooms to practice their song with the directors, one with kripa and one with angad.

(music director: MD)

In Angad's room.........

MD: ok lets see your song.......did u practice?

A: yeah i did but i cant get the feelings out. i cant relate to the situation in this song.....

In kripa's room...........

MD: you cant relate to it? but the most important part of singing is being able to sing any song with the right emotions

K: i know sir...but I just cant relate to this particular situation

In angad's room...................

MD: okay...lets try this together

A: ok

Then he starts to sing the first few lines

A:

Tu hi bata zindagi

jo bhi hua kyon hua

khoyi hai kyu har khushi

kiski lagi baddua

Tu.....

MD: wait stop.....youre right. you dont have the feel in it. this wont work. we hav to do sometihng about this

In kripa's room........

MD: your song will not sound good without the emotion.. lets try it again. imagine that someone just broke your heart. imagine that angad just left you forever.

K: k i'll try again......

Zindagi mein koyi kabhi aaye na rabba
Aaye jo koyi toh phir jaaye na rabba
Dene ho gar mujhe baad mein aansoo…
Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba
Toh..

MD: ok that was a lot better....so try the whole thing now

In angad's room.........

MD: ok i still dont feel the emotions. this wont work. you need to get those emotions. ok imagine that ms. kripa is gonna leave you forever.....how would you feel?

A: ok i'll try

angad closes his eyes to imagine this. but then he opens his eyes in a few seconds

A: im sorry sir....i cant even imagine kripa leaving me...she never would.

The MD let out a breath of frustration. it was going to take a lot of effort and hard work to make angad sing this song in the rite way, with the rite feel and emotion.

In kripa's room...............

K (ending the song):

Toh pehele koyi hasaaye na rabba....

MD: good job!! that was much better...all you need to do is practice some more. There is still some emotions missing. so just work on that. i dont think we'll be able to recoord today. so i guess you can go home now and then i'll give you guys a call about wen you can come in for a recording.

K: okay. thank you sir

kripa and angad walk out of their rooms at the same time and bump into each other.

K: so?

A:(smiles): nothing!

K(smiles): same here

they start laughing and hold hands. Both of them were finding a hard time in singing their song with full emotion. They just couldnt imagine what life would be without each other. Angad took kripa's hand in his and both of them walked out of the recording studio. When they got home, they were so tired of trying too hard of sing the same songs that they fell asleep on the couch while watching TV. When kripa woke up, it was 5 in the evening. seeing angad sleep like a baby, she decided not to wake him up. She slowly got up and went to their room. Seeing the mess, she started cleaning the room. After fixing everything, she started to fix angad's closet that was in a complete mess. He had just shoved his clothes in when he was unpacking and everything was in disorder. She fixed all his clothes and then started fixing the little drawer in the closet. There she found some files and important documents so she thought that she should give it to someone in the house because it wudnt be safe in angad's messy closet.

As she stepped out of the door, she bumped into kartick.

K: uh...bhai!

ka(turns around to see kripa): what?

K: yeh files mujhe angad ke kamre mein mili.....i thought that i should give it to someone else

Ka: let me see......

kartick took the files and skimmed thru it. Then he handed back the files to kripa.

Ka: yeh sab angad ki documents hai...uske college ke documents.....I dont care about them. Just put them in his study

K: study? he has a study?

Ka: yeah. the last door on the right. just put it there, in the box that says "important files" on it

K: okay

Ka: wait! you need his keys to get in. he always keeps it locked.

K: locked? okay i'll get it.

Kripa never knew that angad had his own study. He never told her this in the one whole week that she was here.She went to their room and took angad's house keys She went towards the study and opened it. When she opened it, she was shocked. It was the cleanest thing she had ever seen. she couldnt believe her own eyes. how was angad's study so clean? he never bothered keeping anything else clean, then how come his study was so clean?

kripa walked up to the closet in the room. She opened it and saw a few boxes kept in there that had different things labeled.she saw the one that was labeled "important files", another was labeled " Contacts" , another was labeled " Kripa" She quickly opened the box and was amazed to see pictures of kripa and angad together. She smiled to herself. and moved her hand across the pictures. After a while, she put the box back in the place it was in before. She quickly took the box that said "important files" and then put it back. As she was about to close the door to the closet, she came across another box labeld" old pictures". She took the box out and opened it. The box had pictures of angad when he was a baby and then when he graduated from elementary school. He looked so cute even when he was little. Then she saw a few photos of Angad with a girl when he was about 15. She smiled realizing that this was the 'first girlfriend' that angad was talking about on their way to London. Kripa was about to close the box when she came across another picture of angad. She slowly opened the box again and took the picture out. She stared at it for a few seconds and then tears rolled out of her eyes. She was shocked at what she was seeing. Then she looked in the box again and found 5 more photos like the one she had just seen. Looking at all this, she dropped the box.

coming up::::::::: what did kripa see that shocked her so much?????????????????

Thats it for today. I hope everyone liked it. Just guess what kripa might have seen. you guys will find out soon.

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