Kya yahin pyar hai LAST PRT P. 180/ 183!! - Page 17

is story main ek suthra nahin k dosre vilian ki zarurat pad geyi 😡 😡 anyways pls cont soon 😆

k im gonna continue writing the next part in 10 minutes. i just got home.

awww i dont waan c angad kripa seperated! Great part though! Luved it! cont. soon!

recap:
kripa and angad get a party and everyone is happy. on the other hand, naina and damini make a plan to separate angad and kripa coz they think that kripa is playing with angad too.

next part:
Prithvi is getting discharged at the hospital but he is supposed to get arrested. but he doesnt mind coz he really wants to repent on all him mistakes. he has accepted the fact that kripa will never be his and he doesnt want to lose a frnd like angad.

When its time for him to get discharged, naina is in the hospital with him. she has tears in her eyes coz she doesnt want prithvi to get arrested. she is feeling really guilty b/c all this is happening coz of her son.

The police come to prithvi's room and handcuff him. naina tries to stop them but they lead prithvi to their van. but someone stops them. everyone looks behind to see...............

P: kripa???

K: Officer....aap mr. prithvi bose ko arrest nahi kar sakte.maine apni complaint wapis le li hai aur ab prithvi ke release orders bhi issue ho chucke hain. here are the release orders.

kripa hands the release orders to the inspector. he looks at them and releases prithvi. prithvi is shocked coz he never expected kripa to forgive him. he went up to her.

P: kripa.....yeh sab tumne.....mere liye....kyon?

K: prithvi...i never hated you. agar tumne mere saath yeh sab kuch kiya to maine bhi tumhare saath kuch kam nahi kiya. i betrayed your trust and that for me is the biggest crime. so i dont want you to be punished for my mistakes. i have nothing against you.

kripa smiles and turns back to leave. but prithvi stops her.

P: kripa ruko...........

K(turning back): kya hua prithvi?

P: kripa can i ask you for something? i hope you wont mind.........

K: kya hain prithvi? what do you want?

P: kripa........can i hug you....for the last time?

with tears in her eyes kripa gives prithvi a friendly hug and they hug for a few minutes. at this time naina is watching them. she hasnt heard anything but she is shocked to see kripa hug prithvi. she cudnt believe that if so much has happened between P n K, then how can kripa hug him? she thought that kripa was two-timing angad and prithvi. this disgusted her and her hatred towards kripa grew.

:::NEXT SCENE:::
kripa comes home from meeting prithvi and she walks in to see everyone in the living room - her parents, angad, and NAINA. kripa was a little surprised to see her there.
she went up to her and was about to hug naina when naina stopped her.

N: rehne do kripa. tumhare yeh dikhawa bandh karo. yaha to tum ek achi ladki hone ka natak karti ho aur waha tum prithvi ke saath....disgusting kripa!

kripa was shocked to hear this. she looked at angad but he wasnt looking at her. she looked at her parents and her mom looked at her with an "i'm sorry but i cant help" expression on her face.

K: aunty yeh sab aap kya keh rahi hai? prithvi aur mein...hum sirf dost hain. aur yeh sab angad ko bhi pata hain. kyon angad?

she went to angad and held his arm but he still sint look at her. she was getting even more frustrated.

N: oh stop it kripa!! maine angad ko tumhari sachai batha di hain. maine usse bataya ki kaise tumne usse itna bada dhoka diya....tum abhi bhi prithvi se milti ho? aakhir tum chahti kya ho? ek side par angad aur ek side par prithvi?

K: aunty plzzzzz......aise plzz mat kahiye. mein to sirf angad se......

N: nahi kripa tum angad se nahi sirf apne aap se pyar karti ho. agar tum angad se pyaar karti to aaj prithvi ko police se nahi bachati. aakhir prithvi ne itna kuch kiya tumhare saath. to kyon bachaya tumne prithvi ko????

A:(YELLS)STOP IT MOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

N: angad?? tum iss ladki ka side le rahe ho. isne to....

A: stop it! kripa ne kuch nahi kiya. woh to prithvi ko bachana nahi chahti thi. lekin maine usse bataya ki humne bhi prithvi ke saath kuch kam galat nahi kiya. maine usse force kiya aur issi liye usne yeh case wapis liye hai mom.......kripa ne kuch nahi kiya. i believe her. i know she loves me!

kripa looked at angad in complete shock. from his behaviour earlier, she has thought that he had beleived his mom. but she was really happy. she ran into angad's arms.

K:angad....i love you angad. Thanks for believing in me. i love you!!!!!!!!!

A: I love you too.

he let go off her and turned to his mom.

A: mom, agar aap apne bete ko khona nahi chahti to plzz agli baar kripa ke bare mein kuch bolne se pehle hazar baar sochna. mein kripa ke khilaaf ek bhi shabd nahi sununga. never mom!

he then turned to kripa's mom and dad

A: mom...dad....me kripa ko lunch par le jana chahta hoon.

D: ha angad kyon nahi..go and enjoy. itna sab kuch ho jaane ke baad, you deserve all the happiness.

angad grabbed kripa's hand and left the house. naina looked at them get into the car and leave.

N(thinking): oh angad....iss kripa ne tum par kya jadoo kar diya hai? lekin mein uski asliyat sab ke saamne la kar hi rahoongi. aur agar maine aisa nahi kiya.....to mer nam bhi Naina Khanna nahi!!!!!!

ok thats it for now. i'll try to update it tomorrow.
I'm a senior member guys, im so happy!

wonderful!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
oh my god....ur story just rocks! its so different from the other fanfic...
amazing!! continue soon plz!!

Narges

Recap:

Naina blames kripa for still two-timing angad and prithvi. Angad supports kripa and get angry at his mom for blaming kripa. Angad and kripa leave to have lunch.

Next part:

Angad and kripa are at the restaurant again and everyone is coming up to them to congratulate them on their engagement. They are very happy that finally they had each other and now they were going to get married.

Then suddenly, someone comes up to them and congratulates them as well. Kripa and angad don't recognize him so they are surprised to see him being so friendly with them.

(stranger = s)

s: hello…I'm Shabbir, Shabbir Ahluwalia.

A: hi…I'm Angad khanna and this is my fianc kripa Sharma.

S: oh yeh. Ms. Sharma. Everyone knows ms. Sharma, daughter of Mr. Suryaban Sharma. Pleades to meet you ms. Sharma.

K:( smiles) : same here.

S: so mr. Khanna, I had come here yesterday for lunch and I saw you two here as well. I think it was really sweet of you to sing a song for your beloved. And I think you did a great job at singing that song.

A: oh. Thank you.

S: mr khanna….

A: oh please call me angad.

S: ok. Angad I think you have a lot of potential, to be a singer I mean. I think your voice can become the next sensation all over India. I wanted to give you an offer.

A: an offer? For what?

S: an offer to sing for my company, Soul Music. I think you can become a big star overnight.

A: star? Oh no mr. Ahluwalia

S: just call me shabbir.

A: ok. Shabbir, I never had any intentions of becoming a singer. I just sang that song for kripa. I don't think I'm interested in this offer. I'm sorry.

S: are you serious angad? Yaha pe itne sare log yeh jo singer bane ke liye itna struggle karte hain…aur tum, you are declining my offer?

A: ya I know shabbir. But I never thought of becoming a singer. You must understand…….

S: ok. Ok. You know what. Here's my card. If you ever change your mind, just give me a call. My offer is always be there.

A: ok…I'll think about it.

S: ok then, I'll take your leave now. Good bye ms. Sharma, bye angad.

He left and angad looked at the card that shabbir had given him. Shabbir was the owner of Soul Music Company, the biggest music company in India. Angad couldn't believe that he had been given an offer by Soul Music Company. But he still maintained that he didn't want to be a singer. But kripa had other views. Kripa took his hand in hers.

K: Oh my god angad!!!! The Shabbir Ahluwalia ne tumhe singing ka offer diya hain. Thts great!!! Oh my god, I just cant believe this.

A: nahi kripa, I don't want to become a singer. Uss din maine tumhare liye gaya tha aur who bhi dil se. aur mein iss jasbaad ko ek profession bana do? Nahi kripa, I don't want this.

K: oh come on angad. Everyone here has heard you. I love your voice. I want you to become a singer. Mein chahti hoon ke tum mere liye gana gao aur who bhi iss poori duniya ke saamne. I want you to become a singer and sing for me "mr. Angad khanna". Wont you do this for me?

A: lekin kripa…yeh mein…

K: come on angad. Ek baar usse phone to karo. After that, you ca still decline his offer. Lekin try karne me kya harj hai?

A: I guess youre right. I'll call him tomorrow.

K: thts like a good boy!!!

A:( jokingly) lekin aaj, today I wanna spend all my time with you, kya pata kal ho na ho

K(puts her hand on his mouth): nahi angad. Aisa phir mat kehna. Agar tumhe kuch ho jayega to mein bhi zinda nahi rahoongi. I cant live without you angad. Don't say anything like this again!

Angad looked into her eyes. She was almost going to cry. He hugged her tightly and then kissed her forehead. She looked into his eyes and grabbed his hand and left the restaurant. She dragged him into her car and drove off. During the ride, she didn't say anything and he didn't ask her. he let her drive. She drove for almost an hour and then stopped in front of a temple far away from people. There was no one there. She got out of the car and so did he. She took his hand and went inside the temple.

When they got in, angad saw how beautiful this temple was. He looked around to see all the idols of the gods, they were beautiful. But he still wasn't sure why they were there.

A: kripa…hum yaha kyon?

K: angad aao mere saath.

Kripa led him to one of the god's idols and sat in front of it.

A: kripa…..

K: angad, jab bhi mujhe takleef hui ya pareshani hui, to mein yaha a jati thi. Yaha mujhe itna sukoon milta tha ki mein kuch waqt ke liye apni saari problems bhool jaati thi.

Angad still didn't know why she had brought him here.

A: kripa…….lekin……….

K: angad…iss mandir se mere bohut yaadein judi hui hai. Yaha par aakar mujhe itna pyaar mila hain ki yeh mandir mera ghar ban gaya tha. Aur yeh bhagwan ki murti mere mom and dad ki tarah hai.

Angad looked into her eyes and was still confused. She had so much peace in them that she was a totally different person in the temple. She looked free from all her problems and all her tensions.

A: kripa….mujhe darr lag raha hain. Tumhe…..

K: nahi angad. Iss mandir mein kissi bath ka koi daar nahi hai.

K: angad mein tumse kuch maangna chahti hoon………

A: mujhse?

K: ha angad. Jab tumne mere mom and dad ke saamne mera haath manga tha, I was really very happy to see how much you respected them. Lekin abhi bhi ek aisa kaam hai jo tumne nahi kiya.

A: maine? Aisa kya kaam baki hai?

K: angad tumne mere bhagwaan se mera haath nahi maanga.

K: mein chahti hoon ke tum issi bhagwaan ke samne ek kasam lo. Mera hamesha saath nibhaneki kasam.

A: I promise kripa. Mein tumhara saath kabhi bhi nahi chodoonga. Never.

Kripa smiled with tears in her eyes. She held her closed fist in front of angad. He looked at her fist. It was tightly closed as if she had something in it. He opened her fist to see……

A: kripa yeh………..

K: angad mein chahti hoon ke tum mere bhagwaan ke samne meri maang me apne naam ka sindoor bharo.

Angad looked at her and then looked at the sindoor in her hand. He took a pich of the sindoor and put it on her head. Kripa closed her eyes as she gave herself to angad. After angad was done putting the sindoor, he kissed her forehead and both of them took the blessings of god. They were now married spiritually. Maybe not legally, but they were married for all they cared.

After spending some time in the temple, they got into her car again and started driving back towards the city. They didn't speak the whole time. All they did was steal glances at each other and smiled secretly. They couldn't believe that they had just gotten married. But they had decided to keep all this just to themselves. They wanted their parents to enjoy their formal wedding. they had decided to just pretend that they weren't married.

After they reached kripa's house, angad was about to get out of the car when kripa stopped him.

K: angad…………….

K: thanks.

A: thanks? For what?

K: for falling in love with me.

angad got back in the car and hugged her.

A: thank you too kripa.

K: me? For what angad?

A: for making me fall in love with you……

They just sat in her car in each others arms…………………………………………

Coming up: angad calls shabbir and they plan to meet for his first recording. But nain has some other plans.

I hope you guys liked it and I hope you guys don't get confused with all my hindi. Sorry but I had to make the dialogues in hindi to make it more effective. 😊

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awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thnx for the nice comments guys. i'll try my best to update sunday morning. 😊

sorry i cant update today. i have loads of hw and i have been procrastinating so i guess i'll just update it tomorrow or something. i still need to think about how to write the next part. so i guess just have patience for now.

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Originally posted by: desiigirl19

sorry i cant update today. i have loads of hw and i have been procrastinating so i guess i'll just update it tomorrow or something. i still need to think about how to write the next part. so i guess just have patience for now.

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heyy lol thats okk i fully understand!!!

lol good luck with ur homwork!!

lut of luv and sugar

Hina