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Posted: 19 years ago

k guys here is the next part...THE CONCERT. this i sthe most important part of the story.
Kripa is left all alone by angad as he leaves. She has tears in her eyes but quickly wipes them and gets into her car.
k(thinkng): i know i hurt you angad. and im sorry for that. but i promise that tonight will change our lives for the better. mujhe apni himmat rakhni hogi.
Kripa drives to her hairdresser and spents about 2 hrs there. then she goes home and her mom is waiting for her.
k :hi mom!
M:(scared): kripa.....
K: mom kya hua?
m: kripa doctor ka phone aaya tha.
k: doctor? kya hua mom?
M: doctor ne kaha ke tumhare dad ne apna haath hilaya. he moved!!
k: what? mom thts great news!!! we have to go to the hospital rite now. i have to see dad!
m:(stops kripa): nahi kripa!!!
k: mom?
m: kripa aaj tumhare life ka sabse bada din hain. tum nahi aaogi. i'll go alone. plzzz
K: lekin mom.....dad..
m: mere liye kripa. aaj tum peeche nahi hatogi. okay?
k: yes mom. ur right. aaj mein kuch aisa karoongi ke dad bhi khush ho jayenge.
kripa hugs her mom and her mom wishes her good luck and leaves to go to the hospital. kripa is sad that she cant go with her but she also knows that if she does everything rite tonite then everything will be alrite.
Scene 2: THE CONCERT
Its 7:30 and the college field is filled with lots of ppl. some from the college and others were their dates. themusic was on high and ppl had already started dancing to it. frnds were having fun, couples were moving to the beat, and everyone was happy.
Kripa entered the field with prithvi on her side and everyone stopped at what they were doing and looked at the best couple of last year. prithvi was thrilled at the attention he was getting but kripa was a little uncomfortable. not bcoz she was getting attention but bcoz she dint want to share the spotlight with prithvi.
Right behind them came another couple. They looked pretty good together but not as good as kripa and prithvi. they were anita and angad. kripa and angad looked at each other. she couldnt stop noticing how cute he was looking all dressed up in a black tuxedo and angad couldnt stop noticiing kripa in a beautiful black dress that hugged her body like it was part of it. her hair was up in a pretty bun and only a few hairs were on her face. she looked gorgeous. angad wanted to run to her and hug her and kripa wanted the same but neither of them acted on their feelings.
Soon the music started all over again and all the couples started dancing. kripa was dancing with prithvi and angad was dancing with anita. but thier eyes were on each other. it was a slow dance and they were close to their dates but they wanted to be close to each other. everyone was enjoying dancing with their dates but kripa and angad were enjoying looking at each other. in the background a beautiful song was going on.


Juda hoke bhi, tu mujhme kahi baaki hai
Palkon mein ban ke aasoon, tu chali aati hain
Kaise zinda hoon mein zindagi, bin tere mein
Dard hi dard baaki raha hai seene mein
Saas lena bhar hi yaha, jeena nahi hai
Ab to aadat si hain mujhko aise jeene mein

Juda hoke bhi, tu mujhme kahi baaki hai
Palkon mein ban ke aasoon, tu chali aati hain

Paas mere hain tu har pal, shab ke andhere mein
Paas mere hain tu har dam ujhle savere mein
Dil se dhadkan bhoola dena aasan nahi hai
Ab to aadat si hain mujhko aise jeene mein

Juda hoke bhi, tu mujhme kahi baaki hai
Palkon mein ban ke aasoon, tu chali aati hain
Ab to aadat si hain mujhko aise jeene mein

and then the song ends. angad felt like everything he felt was in that song. there were tears in his eyes and kripa heart was hurting as she saw angad cry.

Then it was time for the annual speech by the class president, and that was KRIPA.
(the anchor = ac)

ac: good evening everyone. are you guys enjoying?

everyone: YEAH!!!!

ac: ok so now is the time you all have been waiting for. the speech by the class president. she is the most beautiful girl here and...

The anchor is introducing her when her phone rings.

K :hello? mom..what is it. i hav to go up for the speech.

m: beta. there some good news for you.

kripa's mom tells her something.

k: (happy): what??? mom i'm so happy.

then the anchor finally asks her to come up on the stage.

ac: and that is the one and only MISS KRIPA SHARMA!!!!

k: mom, i'll talk to you later. i have to go.

Kripa goes onto the stage and everyone is applauding. the guys are whistling and the girls are cheering for her. she goes up on the stage and looks at the crowd. she was nervous. not bcoz she had to speak in front of all these ppl but bcoz she was nearing the execution of her plan. She looks at Anita and anita nods at her and kripa smiles. anita leaves to go somewhere.

ac: good evening miss kripa sharma. you are looking gorgeous tonight.

k: thnks. good evening ev....

ac: hold on miss kripa sharma! today we are going to do sometihng different. before the usual speech, miss kripa gets to pick any guy in this college to enjoy a dance with. so miss kripa go ahead.

kripa dint expect this but she smiled at the anchor. she looked around and then she finally looked at prithvi smiling and confident that she was gonna pick him.

ac: so can you guys guess who she will pick?

everyone starts cheering

everyone: PRITHVI!!!! PRITHVI!! PRITHVI!!!!!

Prithvi starts smiling even more and kripa grabs the mike.

k: TODAY THERE IS SOMEONE HERE THAT I WANNA DANCE WITH. SOMEONE REALLY SPECIAL TO MY HEART.

everyone looks at prithvi and angad feels really hurt and turns back to leave.

K: THAT SOMEONE TOLD ME THAT " KRIPA...NOTHING IS FOREVER"

angad stops after hearing this but doesnt turn around.

k: AND TODAY I WANT TO TELL THAT PERSON SOMETHING:

Kitni akeli thi woh rahen hum jinpe ab tak akele chalte rahenTujhse bichhad ke bhi o bekhabar tere hi gham mein jalte rahenTune kiya jo shikwa hum woh gila kar naa sake

Hum bewafa hargiz na the par hum wafa kar naa sake

IF NOTHING IS FOREVER....

WILL YOU BE MY NOTHING ANGAD??

everyone looked at angad and he turned back. he looked at kripa and she looked at him. he put his arms in the air gesturing her to come and give him a hug. she ran off the stage and went ran up to him and hugged him tightly. there were tears in theri eyes. but this time they were tears of joy. they hugged each other for quite a while and everyone was staring ant them.

suddenly a strong force separated them. kripa turned around to see prithvi standing there. prithvi was mad as hell. she was horrified by the look he had on his face.

P: what the hell is this kripa????

he grabbed her by the arm and started pulling her away from angad. kripa screamed as she was getting hurt. evryone was looking at them shocked. angad couldnt take it anymore and went towards prithvi. he stopped prithvi and took kripa away from him. she went behind angad to seek protection.

A: stop it prithvi!!! tumne kripa ko haath lagane ki himmat kaise ki?

P: oh shut up angad!! kripa is my gf. mein uske saath kuch bhi karoo. tumhe isse kya. just move!!!

prithvi pushes angad and grabs kripa again and starts to leave. but then someone puts a tape on the speaker.

k: prithvi??? get off me!

p: come on kripa. humari shaadi hone wali hia. its ok.

k: (pushes prithvi really hard): stop it prithvi! plzzz

p:(angry) dekho kripa. tumhe achi tara jaanti ho ki tumhare dad ki zindagi mere haathon mein hai! agar tumne meri baath nahi maani to mujhe unki jaan lene me zyada waqt nahi lagega. samjhi? agar tum chahti ho ke mein tumhare dad ki jaan le lu to theek hai. main abhi..

K: nahi! plzz prithvi. mere saath aisa mat karna. i know i hurt you. but i always cared for you. plzz mere saath aisa mat karna. plzzz

Prithvi is shocked to hear this. he remembers this from the night he went to kripa's house.

p:(whispers to kripa): kripa what the hell is this.

Then someone plays a video and everyone looks at it.

K: prithvi…prithvi yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?

P: kripa…mein tumse pyaar kar raha hoon. I really love you kripa.

K(struggling to get away): prithvi plzz. Stop it!! This is not funny. Let go of me.

Prithvi doesn't stop so kripa grabs a vase and hits him really hard. Prithvi falls on the floras there is blood coming out of his head. But he is still conscious as he is not hurt very badly. He gets really angry and pushes kripa on the bed and tries to force her.

P: kripa mein tumhe nahi chodoonga. Tumne mere saath….I'll show you kripa Sharma ki prithvi bose bhi kya hain. U GET IT??

she starts to cry and keeps struggling to push him away but he doesn't stop. But suddenly kripa says something that pierces prithvis heart very deeply.

K: (in a loud voice) LET GO OF ME PRITHVI!! I HATE YOU PRITHVI!! I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

Everyone looks at it and prithvi is shocked to see all this on tape. he remembers the night he had attempted to rape kripa.

p:(really angry) kripa..tumhare itni himmat. yeh sab tumne......shayad tum bhool gayi ho ki tumhare dad ki zindagi abhi bhi mere haathon mein hein. DID YOU FORGET IT??

k: nahi prithvi. mein kaise bhool sakti hoon. tumhare wajah se....

k: lekin ab sab kuch theek ho jayega. DAD COMA SE BAHAR AA GAYE HAIN!!!!!! you get it? he is fine now. aur tum unka kuch bhi nahi bigad sakte. nothing!!!

p: (shocked but starts laughing): tum mera kuch nahi bigad sakti kripa. nothing. aur aaj tak maine jo nahi kiya woh mein aaj tumhe karke dikha doonga.

prithvi grabs kripa's arm and starts walking towards the exit and to his car. rite then he hears a gun shot. he turns back to see police there.

p: police?

(police = po)

po: MR. PRITHVI BOSE YOU ARE UNDER ARREST. FOR THREATENING AND MOLESTATION. APNE AAP KO POLICE KE HAWAL KAR LO

P: never. kripa mein tumhe itni aasani se jeetne nahi doonga. never!!1

he starts to leave when there is another gunshot. prithvi stops and looks at kripa with a "i wanna kill you" look . kripa gets scared but when prithvi moves his hand towards her neck he falls on the ground. kripa is horrified but see that the police shot him in his back and he collapse due to that. kripa is shocked. did prithvi die??

comping up: did prithvi die? what will happen next?

here is the concert guys. so plzz leave comments. im waitng for them. i think the next part is also very important. so stay tuned!!

😊

DONT FORGET TO LEAVE YOUR COMMENTS. THEY HELP ME A LOT. :)

Edited by desiigirl19 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
it gr8 asusll i jt luv it pplz contt 😃 😃 keep up the gud wrk
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Posted: 19 years ago
yahooooooooooooooo angad and kripa together 😃 !!!!!too good 👏 👏 !!!!! u know what 😉 😉 !! i will tell u but plz don't say it to anyone!! i think i'm in love with this fan fic 😆

take care of urself
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Posted: 19 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!! that was jus awesome!! plz continue soon!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was great but wasn't angad there i mean when they hear the tape 😕 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part 😊 i hope prithvi's dead 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: khushi19

that was great but wasn't angad there i mean when they hear the tape 😕 😕

yeah angad was there

but the scene was about kripa exposing prithvi. in the scene angad is one of the spectators as well who is shocked to see all this. coz remember he doesnt know that prithvi threatened kripa and all tht stuff.

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Posted: 19 years ago
yaa, idea is good. i hope ekta learns some from here 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
when are u going to write ur next part coz i can't wait 😊

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