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Posted: 19 years ago

😊

here is the next part.

recap: kripa drags angad to her car and drives off somewhere with him.

next part:

kripa keeps driving and doesnt anwer angad's questions. he keeps on asking her where she is going but she doesnt answer. he assumes that she is going to the hospital. but kripa drives and parks on the beach. the opens the cover of her car so now its like a convertible. angad is completely shocked that kripa decided to come to the beach at this time

A: kripa...yeh beach par....

K: angad inn taron ko dekh rahen ho? koi kabhi ginn nahi paega ki aasma me kitne tarein hain. aur theek waise hi yeh koi jaan nahi paega ki mere dil mein tumhare liye kitna pyaar hai. shayad mein bhi nahi.

kripa hugs angad and kisses his cheek ever so gently.

A:(a little surprised) kripa...you are so unpredictable. tum aise gaadi chala rahi thi ki maine socha tum hospital jaa rahi hogi. prithvi se....

K(interrupting and puts her finger on his lips): shhhhhh...

K: angad aaj raat mein sab ko bhool jana chahti hoon. Angad....mein tumse kuch kehna chahti hoon....

A: mujhse? kaho...

K: I'm sorry..

A: its ok kripa...mein..

K: nahi angad. mujhe aaj kehne do. i'm sorry for hurting you. i'm sorry for letting you cry. and i'm sorry for....uss raat hamare beech jo kuch bhi hua...i'm sorry for regretting it. lekin aaj raat...

K: I want to forget this world. I want to forget all the problems. I want to forget our past. I want to forget our future.....all i want to remember is this night with you angad. ONLY YOU!!!! aur mein tumse yeh wada karti hoon ki aaj raat hamare beech jo kuch bhi hoga...I will never regret that. never!

kripa gently kisses angad as she has tears in her eyes. angad looks at her and sees her cry. this brings tears to his eyes as well. he kisses kripa's eyes. then her cheeks. then her lips. they can feel all the love and passion within them. in the background the song is going on.....

Tujhe dekh dekh sona (angad kisses kripa gently)

Tujhe dekh kar hai jagna

Maine yeh zindagani (he takes her earings off)

Sang teri beethani

Tujhme basi hain meri jaan.

Haye…

Jiya dhadak dhadak (kripa hugs angad really tight)

Jiya dhadak dhadak

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaye

Kabse hain dil mein mere (He opens her hair)

Armaan kahi unkahe

Inko tu sunle aaja (he kisses her neck)

Chahat ke rang chadaja

Inko tu sunle aaja

Chahat ke rang chadaja

Kehna kabhi to mera maan

Haye…

Jiya dhadak dhadak

Jiya dhadak dhadak

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaye

Lagta yeh kyon mujhe (he looks into her eyes with so

Sadiyon se chahoon tujhe much passion that her heart

Lagta yeh kyon mujhe melts)

Sadiyon se chahoon tujhe

Mere sapno mein aake

Apna mujhko bana ke

Mujh pe tu kar ehsaan

Haye..

Jiya dhadak dhadak (They finally kiss so passionately

Jiya dhadak dhadak that they get lost into each

Jiya dhadak dhadak jaye other)

THEN THE SCENE FOCUSES ON THE BEAUTIFUL FULL MOON AND THE BRIGHT NIGHT SKY.

❤️

thts it for this part. i hope you like it. i know i did a lousy job at the whole romantic scene. so just try you best to understand.

nd dont forget to leave your comments. 😊😊

karipa thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow so romantic plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
I like it... but have to move to Fanfictions section.

Moved. 😳
desiigirl19 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
thnx for the good comments
i will continue soon...maybe today....or maybe tomorrow morning

so stay tuned 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was great plz cont soon. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ur fanfic is amazing, fantabulous, terrific, marvelous, wonderful, awesome....can't even think of any word to describe it now. Plz continue soon!!!!!!
desiigirl19 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
i will continue soon guys. just thinking of how to write the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
well we are also waiting for the next part
😆
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Posted: 19 years ago


recap: angad and kripa become one!

next part:

The strong sunlight wakes up kripa. she opens her eys to see her in angad's arms. when she looks at the serene expression on his face, she automatically smiles. this was the first time kripa was so happy after a long time.

she noticed that angad was also getting disturbed by the sun. so she went closer to him so that she was blocking the sunlight. she went to angad ears and....

k(screams): i loVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!

A: kripa......kya hua......

kripa laughs and angad realizes that it was kripa's prank.

A: you!!!!

angad chases kripa around the beach and finally gets hold of her and both of them fall on the sand with angad on top of kripa. he looks into her eyes and she is drawn into his. after all he had the most gorgeous eyes ever!

angad got closer to her and gently kissed her and then let her go.

k(shyly): good morning! (smiles naughtily)

A: agar mujhe har subha aise wish karogi to main har subha tumhare saath jaagna pasand karoonga.

K: aur agar aise wish nahi kiya to?

A: to main kisi aur ko dhoond loonga! isme kaunsi badi baath hai. waise bhi...angad khanna pe to saari ladkiyan martii hain

K(annoyed): what?.....angad...
kripa hits him jokingly and he hugs her and kisses her forehead. obviously he was joking and she knew that. now that they were back together, no one in this world could separate them....not even prithvi!
kripa suddenly remembered prithvi.

K:(lets go of angad): angad.....hume ghar chalna chahiye...

A: yeah ok lets go...waise bhi tumhari mom hamara intezaar kar rahi hogi na!

K:(remembers something): oh nahi...mom to hospital mein hogi dad ke saath....i have to see him rite away angad...he out of his coma.

A: what? great news kripa!!! tumne mujhe ye kal kyon nahi bataya?

K: (stroking his cheek): kyonki mein kal raat ka har pal sirf tumhare saath guzarna chahti thi.i wanted to forget the world. all i wanted was you!

angad kisses her cheek and hugs her again.

after a while, they get into her car and drive off to her house.

A: kripa?? tumhare ghar...lekin maine to socha tha ki hum hospital jaane wale the...

K: angad!!! kya tumhe lagta hain ki hum iss halat mein hospital jayenge? apne aap ko aaine mein dekha hai kya? tumhare baalon mein bhi reth hai...just look at youself!

A: mein? tumne apne aap ko dekha hain? tumhara yeh black dress...black se zyada brown lag raha hain...itna sand to beach par bhi nahi hota jitna tumhare is "black dress" aur tumhare iss chehre par hain..

K: angad!!!!.......oh whatever....ab hume jaldi se andar jaana chahiye. we hav to take a shower and go to the hospital as soon as possible. ok ab chalo....

kripa drags angad in her house and as she expected no one was there. she pushed angad into his room and goes to her room but angad follows her in and grabs her from behind.

K: angad??!! chodo mujhe...go take a shower...we have to leave in 30 minutes.

A: shower...ok chalo lets take a shower.

he takes her hand and is about to go in her bathroom but she pulls him out.

K: angad??? yaha nahi tumhare kamre mein!

A: mere kamre mein? ok theek hai..chalo lets go to my room.
he drags her again but she stops him again

K: angad...tum apne kamre mein jaake shower lo..akele!

A: lekin kripa...
before he can finish she pushes him out of her room. she is about to go to her bathroom when she hears someone knock on the door.

K: angad???? ab kya hua?

A: kripa woh mein....akele mein bore ho raha tha..chalo na saath me shower lete hain.

K: nahi angad( she closes the door on him)
then when she turns around she hears a knoch again

K: angad!!!!

A: kripa woh towel....

K: towel...yeh lo towel. ab jao

A: nahi kripa...mujhe towel nahi..towel mein tum chahiye tha

K: angad...........
she closes the door on him again and then when she turns around she hears a knoch again. this time she gets really frustrated

K: what now angad?????

A: kripa mein woh kapdo ke bina....

K: nahi angad....mein tumhe kapdo ke bina nahi miloongi!!! now leave!

A: nahi kripa..mein to yahi keh raha tha ki mere paas spare kapde nahi hain...to mein...

K(really embarrased): oh. ok wait!
she goes to her closet and gets out a pair of clothes

K: yeh lo angad..

A(looking at the clothes): kripa...yeh..yeh to mere kapde hain.....

K: ha angad. wo tum apni saari luggage meri car mein...uss din ke baad....

A:(with tears) kripa plzzz...mujhe uss din ki yaad mat dilana jis din hamare faslein bad gayi thi. plz!

K(smiles with tears in her eyes): she hugs angad and then suddenly wipes her tears and pushes him out of the room

K: enough Mr. angad khanna!!!now you will go take a shower and meet me downstairs in exactly 30 minutes. okay?? aur ha...dont be late!!!

angad gets scared and rushes to his room.

30 minutes later......

angad is waitng for kripa downstairs. she finally comes and gives him a smile. he doesnt smile back.

K: angad??? kya hua?

A:(with an angry face): kripa thts it. mein aur yeh sab bardaash nahi kar sakta. i mean meri bhi koi izzat hai!

K: angad...lekin hua kya?

A: kripa tumne mere saath aisa kyon kiya? shayad tumhe meri koi parva nahi tha..

K: angad lekin...maine kya kiya?

A: kripa tum....TUM 2 MINUTE LATE HO!!!!!

k(relieved): angad!!! tumne to mujhe dara hi diya
she hits angad playfully and he gives her a cute smile.

angad and kripa get into the car and drive off to the hospital to meet kripa's dad.

coming up: what will happen at the hospital???

i hope you guys liked this part.

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Posted: 19 years ago
ok i mite write the next part as wel. so stay tuned....

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