New Maneet and RN FF 'ISHQ'

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CHARACTERS:
Maan Singh Khurana: A business tycoon , an arrogant person , hate girls and only have one female friend since childhood his best friend Naveen's sister Naina but after Naveen's incident he didn't know where she is. He needs protection so he will come to live in KMA. Played by our GC
Geet Handa: A bubbly girl, the daughter of Handa's the big industrialists and is a cadet in KMA. Played by our DD
Naina Singh Ahluwalia: A no-nonsense girl, very determined and is a cadet in KMA. She came to KMA to prove her brother's innocence. Played by Priyanka Bassi
Rajveer Singh Shekhawat: A very serious kind of person, loves to be a soldier and is a captain in KMA and in Indian army. He is on the mission to protect the triggers. Played by Rajeev Khandelwal
Vivek Singh Khurana: Maan Singh Khurana's smaller brother. A cadet in KMA. He is a fun loving, happy-go-lucky guy unlike his brother. Played by Vivek Mashura
Tasha Singh: Brigadier Chandok's daughter, a fun loving girl and is a cadet in KMA. She is Shefali's sister and loves to make friends. Played by Vaishnavi Dhanraj
Alekh Sharma: A prisoner who came to KMA to change into a good person. Played by Arjun Bijlani
Khushi Bajpai: A bubbly girl from a rich family and a cadet in KMA. Played by Sanaya Irani
Additi Singh: Brigadier Chandok's daughter, Tasha's sister and later Gunny's love interest. She is a captain in Indian Army. She is also on the misson to protect the triggers. Played by Suhasi Goradia Dhami
Gunraj Singh Randhawa: A captain in Indian Army. A fun loving guy and loves to be a soldier. He would eventually like Additi. He is also on the misson to protect the triggers. Also known as Gunny. Played by Ankur Nayyar
Brigadier Chandok: Commandant of KMA, a strict person and the father of Shefali and Tasha.
Major Nair: A very strict person and the Vice Principal of KMA.
Dr Shalini: In charge of the infirmary, a fun loving woman and match maker of the academy. Played by Aparna Tilak
Dr Ritu Mishra: Psychiatrist of the academy. Played by Shewta Salve
Subedar Suri: in charge of the mess.
Subedar Lolita Sen: In charge of girl's hostel.

PART 1:

Ambala Haryana mein basi Kanchanjunga Military Academy jiski diwaaron ke andar ek alag hi duniya basti hai' jahan insan ke sharir ke saath uske irade bhi mazbut banate hai' jahan ek common man enter hota hai jo ek soldier banke bahar nikalta hai. Aur yeh possible hota hai kai saare processes se guzar kar... And Simon says ki successful hone ke liye hard work aur discipline ki zarurat hoti hai... yeh hai Simon ' mera matlab hai

Brigadier Chandok Singh is military academy ka principal'

Enters The Brigadier tough and strict straightening out one of his cadets and telling them to be disciplined' and follow the motto of the academy which is strength and honor and he leaves.

Brigadier Chandok enters his cabin & starts interviewing first year cadets' who will be arriving in shortly along with two new captains'

Scene switch to Naina walking into the academy'before entering the academy she salutes at the fire bowl that is placed in the entrance of Kanchanjunga Military Academy'she goes towards Brigadier's room to give her interview. She talks to the girl standing outside Brig's room.

Girl: Hi I am Tasha Singh and you?

Naina: Hi I am Naina Singh.Tumhara Brig se koi relation hai kya?

Tasha: Ahh well haan he's my father.

Naina: Ohh

An orderly comes and say's: Naina Singh Brig is calling you.

Naina: Ok and enters Brig's room.

Brig: Cadet Naina Singh tum exam dene late pohanchi thi.

Naina: Sir who raaste mein curfew laga hua tha lekin phir bhi main exam mein paas hui.

Brig: Ladkian kabhi soldier nahin ban sakti.

Naina: Sir main aap ko soldier ban kar dikhaingi and leaves.

Outside KMA a police van stops and some people step out. They went in and met Suriji.

Suriji met a young man whose name was Alekh and took him to the mess.

Outside KMA a car stops and steps out a beautiful girl wearing a pink top and blue jeans. His father and brother steps out from the car.

1st man: Geet tu KMA kyun join karma chahti hai?

Geet: Aur kyun na karoon veerji.

2nd man: kyunki puttarji aapse yeh training nahin hogi.

Geet: Nahin papaji main aapko soldier ban kar dikhaingi yeh mera vaada hai aapse and she bids them good bye and steps in KMA.

She goes towards brig's cabin and meets a young man exiting from there he introduces him as Vivek Singh Khurana.

Geet: You mean Maan Singh Khurana ke bhai

Vivek: Haan aur tum?

Geet: Geet Handa.

Vivek: You mean Handa's ki beti.

Geet: Haan, and enters brig's room.

Brig gives her the same lecture and Geet leaves and bumps into a boy, they give their introductions and she says sorry and leaves. Alekh goes in brig's room.

Brigadier looks at Alekh and says "Cadet Sharma you have been brought here from jail so you can change all your bad habits"
Alekh looks at Brigadier "apun aaya nahi hai" again looks at him "bheja gaya hai"
Brigadier calmly says "so that mean' you aren't going to change a bit cadet"Within, fifteen minutes Alekh answered Brigadier's question and leaves from there saying "apun chalta hai" before leaving he also says "Jai Hind Sir".
Brigadier told his peon to close the gates at sharp six o' clock' than he gets a call from somewhere'
Captain Rajveer Singh Shekawat enters 'KMA' and salutes at the fire-bowl'
"So' your, finally back Captain Rajveer Singh Shekawat" Rajveer turns around and looks at Brigadier'while he continues "I was never impressed by you and never will be" also he adds on "you, didn't have the guts to quit the army so you took the job at my academy'"
Rajveer finally speaks up "in first place'I didn't want to come here" looks at Brigadier than says "I was posted here'even I am not interested in working with you after what happened few years ago with Navin"
Brigadier was getting mad and leaves from there after throwing Navin's picture on the floor'
Voice over' Nobody wants to keep relationship with a traitor' but after many years... (Naina comes and picks up Navin's picture) my death brought my sister, Naina Singh to KMA (Naina looks at Navin's picture with tears rolling down her cheekS)' but the sad part is that she has to keep her identity hidden from everyone or else she would have never gotten admission over here in first place'

PRECAP: MAAN SINGH KHURANA

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Posted: 14 years ago
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this sounds prety interestin
do pm me plz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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this is interesting...u have combined maaneet and RN together...will be waiting for you to update
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PART 2:
Raj: Fresher???
Naina: Yes sir.
Raj: Name??
Naina: Cadet Naina'..Ahh'..Singh
Raj: Interesting name Naina Ah Singh
Naina: Sir yeh kiski photograph hai???
Brig: Ek traitor ki
He snatches the photo from Naina's hand and throws it in the dustbin nearby. Naina leaves. Naina goes to her room and meets her room mates.
Geet: Hi I am Geet Handa.
Tasha: Hi Geet I am Tasha Singh.
Geet: And you??
Naina: Naina Singh.
LOCATON: BOYS HOSTEL
Vivek: Hi I am Vivek Singh Khurana
Alekh: Apun ko koi faraq nahin parta tu kaun hai.
Vivek stares at him and started setting his things.
Outside KMA gates a black BMW came and stopped. A very handsome man stepped out of the car wearing black waistcoat and pants, he had bodyguards around him and he entered KMA and went straight to brig's cabin.
Guys I think you all know who the man is''
Man: Hello Brig Chandok.
Brig: Hello Mr. Maan Singh Khurana.
Maan: Hello sir how are you doing.
Brig: I am fine Mr. Khurana and you??
Maan: I am fine sir.
Brig: Two Captains are chosen for the responsibility of your protection they are:
Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat &
Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa
Brig: Captain Rajveer has arrived and Captain Randhawa will be arriving any time. And there was a knock on the door.
Man: May I come in sir.
Brig: Yes come in.
Man: Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa reporting for duty sir.
Brig: Good afternoon Captain.
Captain: Good afternoon sir.
Brig calls for the orderly and asks him to call Captain Rajveer.
Brig: So you are from NDA.
Captain: Yes sir I am from National Defence Academy.
There was a knock on the door.
Raj: May I come in sir.
Brig: Yes Captain and meet Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa.
Raj: Hello Captain Randhawa.
Captain: Hello Captain Shekhawat and please don't be so formal and call me Gunny.
Raj: Ok Gunny and don't be so formal and call me Raj.
Gunny: Ok Raj.
Brig: Captains meet him, he is Mr. Maan Singh Khurana.
Both Captains: Hello Mr. Khurana.
Maan: Hello Captains.
Brig: Now his protection is your responsibility Captains.
Captains: Yes sir.
Brig: And Captain Rajveer give them a round of the academy and show them their respective rooms.
Raj: Yes sir.
Brig: And Captains two more faculty members are joining our faculty.
Lieutenant Additi Singh Councilor &
Dr Ritu Mishra Psychiatrist.
Captains: Yes Sir and they leave Brig's room with Maan and Raj takes them for a round of the academy as both were new at the place.

PRECAP: Maneet meet for the first time and Maan recognizes Naina. Will Maan reveal the truth of Naina?? Or he would help her in her mission.

Edited by sweetgirls1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice introduction of the characters...maan will not reveal anything about naina, i think
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PART 3:

Captain Rajveer gave them the round of the academy and at last they went to the mess. They entered the mess and Suriji gave them a very warm welcome. Raj introduced them to Suriji and they both were happy to meet him. After sometime the mess started filling with cadets. They were very angry at someone.
Vivek: Yaar ye major apne aap ko samajhta kya hai.
Geet: Haan yaar sale ne hamse itni bhaari bhaari borian uthwain aur bechari Naina usse toh kitni bhaari sacks uthwain.
Tasha: Haan yaar pata nahin who time par wahan pohanchi bhi hogi ya nahin.

Raj from the back: What happened cadets?
Tasha: Aap?? While Vivek was looking at Maan.
Raj: Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat Strategy and Communication ka teacher.
Geet: Oh.
Raj: And cadets yeh hain Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa
Warfare techniques ke teacher.
Vivek: Hello Sir.
Gunny: Hello.
Raj: Aur yeh hain Mr. Maan Singh Khurana.
Vivek: Hello Mr. Khurana.
Maan: Vivek abhi tumhare major ya brig yahan nahin hain.
Vivek: Sorry bro and hugs him.
Geet goes to bring coffee and due to wet floor slips and Maan catches her on time. And then eye contact ******
They come back to the present and Geet said thank you while Taha and Vivek were giggling. Raj asked their names.
Tasha: Cadet Tasha Singh sir.
Vivek: Cadet Vivek Singh Khurana.
Geet: Cadet Geet Handa
Raj: And you young man.
Alekh: Apun Alekh.
Raj: Cadet Tasha aap'..
Tasha: Brig ki choti beti.
Gunny: Ok.

Naina enters the mess and she recognizes Maan but Maan was still confused as he has seen this girl before.
Gunny: And you cadet whats your name?
Naina: Cadet Naina Singh sir.
Now Maan recognizes her.
Naina excused herself from there and Maan said that he wants to go to his room and went behind Naina. Vivek understands the situation and distract others. Naina went to the lake and Maan also came there. Naina was sitting on a rock and Maan called out her name three times but she didn't reply.
Maan shouted: Naina.
Naina: Are Maan aap yahan.
Maan: Naina tum yahan kya kar rahi ho.
Naina: Who Maan main aise hi lake par aagai.
Maan: Naina I mean tum KMA mein kya kar rahi ho?
Naina: Soldier banne aai hoon.
Maan: Nahin Naina tum yahan Navin ki waja se aai ho, maine tum logon ko us incident ke baad dhoondne ki koshish ki lekin tum logon ka kuch pata nahin chala.
Naina: Dhoond ke kya kar lete aap Maan, aap bhi wahi kehte jo poori dunya kehti hai mere bhaiya ke bare mein.
Maan: Naina just shut up tum ne yeh soch bhi kaise liya ke main Naveen ke bare mein kuch aisa kahoonga he's my best friend aur who ek traitor nahin ho sakta.
Naina gets a little bit happy that someone is there who believes that Naveen is innocent.
Naina: Kya aap bhaiya ko sahi sabit karne mein meri help karenge.
Maan: Bhala yeh koi poochne ki baat hai main apne best friend ke liye jaan bhi de sakta hoon.
Naina: Thanks and they go back to the academy.


PRECAP: Lt. Additi and Dr. Ritu enter KMA.

Edited by sweetgirls1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey...its pretty intresting...
do continue soon...
n pls pm me...:)
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PART 4:
Maan and Naina came back to the academy. They were going to the mess while Geet spotted them.
Geet: Are Naina tum Mr. Khurana ke saath???
Naina: Han who main lake par gai thi toh mujhe raaste mein mil gayye. Maan was just looking at Geet's beauty and her innocent face.
Geet: Khair chod tune notice board parha.
Naina: Yaar main abhi toh wapis aai hoon.
Geet: Sorry acha sun ek hafte baad fresher's ball hai aur us mein humein akele jaana hai aur humein partner game mein milega.
Naina: Nice.
Geet: Mr. Khurana aap bhi aayenge na????
Maan was lost in her beauty and without thinking he said: Ya sure.
And Naina understood what Maan was thinking and gave a mischievous smile to Maan and Maan gave her the I-will-kill-you
look.
Geet: Aur tujhe pata hai ek nai ladki ne KMA join kia hai. Aur woh Bajpai industries ke Mr. Rishabh Bajpai ki choti beti Khushi Bajpai hai. (Played by Sanaya Irani). She is very kind hearted aaj hi sabse dosti karli siwai us khooni sharabi ke.
Naina: Are yaar who toh yahan sudharne aaya hai na.
Geet: Haan phir bhi hai toh who khooni sharabi na.
Maan: Aap log cadet Alekh ki baat kar rahe hain??
Geet: Ji. Maan leaves and they go to the mess.
Khushi: Hi Geet.
Geet: Hi Khushi, by the way she is Naina your room mate.
Naina: Lekin hum chaar log ek room mein fit kaise aayenge.
Tasha: Humare rooms alag hogaye hain main aur Geet roommates hain aur tum aur Khushi roommates ho. Every one was happy in the mess as Fresher's ball is a big night for cadets.
A beautiful girl enters KMA wearing light pink churidaar with peshwaas, she bumps into Raj.
Girl: Hi Captain Rajveer.
Raj: Hiii.
Girl: Raj behave yourself.
Raj: Maine aap ko kahin dekha hai shakal toh jaani pehchani hain bilkul meri best friend Additi ke jaisi lekin kapre uske jaise nahin hain.
Additi: Raj just shut up main ab yahan teacher hoon isliye yeh kapre pehne hain.
Raj: Oh.
Gunny came there and said: Hi Raj.
Raj: Hi Gunny meet Additi.
Gunny: Hi Additi I am Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa you can call me Gunny.
Additi: Hi Gunny.
Gunny was lost in her beauty but something caught his attention that was a beautiful girl wearing saree, she came there and said Hi.
Additi: Hi.
Raj and Gunny: Hiii
Additi didn't like Gunny's attitude towards the girl for what reason she didn't know.
Ritu: I am Dr. Ritu Mishra.
Additi: I am Lt. Additi Singh.
Raj: Captain. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.
Gunny: I am Captain Gunraj Singh Randhawa.
Ritu: Ok I would meet you all later I have to go to brig. She went from there and Raj and Gunny saw her till she was out of sight. And they took Additi to the mess to meet Suriji.

PRECAP: Fresher's Ball.


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PART 5:

One week passed in the preparations of the fresher's ball. Every cadet was very happy for the ball. And finally the day arrived for which they all were waiting for. Girls were getting ready in Dr. Shalini's room as she has advised them to do so and boys were getting ready in their own rooms.

Geet: Boys ko toh aaj heart attack aane wala hai.

Tasha: Ya kyunki hum bohat ache lagenge.

Additi: Girls socho agar mere aur Tasha ke ilawa tum mein se kisiko dad ya Maj. Nair mill gaye toh?

Shalini: Mera toh heart fail ho jaye ga.

Ritu: Mujhe toh heart attack aajaye ga

Naina came out from the washroom and asked: Main kaisi lag rahi hoon. She was looking beaytiful.

Tasha: You look sexy.

Additi: You look hot.

Ritu: Ambulance mangwalo.

Shalini: Yup.

Geet: Naina you look damn good.

Naina: Ok Ok main tayar hogai hoon toh ab main sab ki help karti hoon.

Geet: Ab main dress change karne jati hoon she came back after ten minutes:

Tasha: You look beautiful.

Naina: Yup.

Ritu: Shalini ek aur ambulance mangwa lena.

Shalini: Ya sure.

Tasha: Ab main jaati hoon. After ten minutes she came out wearing this:

Geet: Oye hoye kya lag rahi hai.

Khushi: Nice

Naina: Wah.

Additi: Sis you look hot.

Tasha: Thanks.

Additi: Ab main jaati hoon. After ten minutes she came out.

Tasha nearly fainted: You look awesome.

Naina: You look good ma'am.

Khushi: Ya you look good ma'am.

Additi: Oh please don't call me ma'am.

Geet: Ok you look hot.

Additi: Thanks

They girls went to the hall. Male Captains, cadets and Maan were already there. Girls entered and all of them were fainted. Maan was lost in Geet's beauty, Raj was looking at Naina, Vivek was lost in Tasha, Alekh was looking at Khushi and Gunny was looking at Additi.

PRECAP: Dance with kismat connection...

Edited by sweetgirls1 - 14 years ago
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sorry guys kuch prob hai pics nahin aayen

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