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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 8:

Maan was in his room remembering his childhood.

Flashback:

Two ladies were sitting on a chair and talking. A girl of 8 years came there and she was crying and said: Sameera aunty genie ne mujhe maara.

Sameera (Maan's mom): Maan idhar aao.

A boy of 12 years came running.

Maan: Yes mom.

Sameera: Maan tumne Naina ko maara.

Maan: Nahin mom maine Nia ko nahin maara.

Another boy of 12 years came there and said: Haan aunty Genie ne Nia ko nahin maara.

Maan: Han mom dodo (Navin) sahi keh raha hai.

Naina: Maara hai. Aur ab main aap dono se baat nahin karongi. And she went inside the house and shouted: Champ tum kahan ho?????

An old lady said: Beta Vivek bete so rahe hain.

Naina: Dadimaa Champ itni der tak kyun so raha hai.

Dadimaa: Aap toh uski aadat jaanti hain na Naina.

Naina: Acha main champ ko jaga deti hoon. She went upstairs.

Maan and Navin came inside the house and Navin said: Yaar humne Nia ko naraz kar dia.

Maan: Haan dodo ab hum usko kaise manayenge.

Navin: Pata nahin genie.

They went to Vivek's room.

Naina was sitting there and trying to wake up the 8 year old boy.

Naina: Champ uttho na, tumhe pata hai genie ne mujhe maara aur bhaiya ne usse defend kia aur main un dono se kabhi bhi baat nahin karongi.

Maan: We are very sorry Nia please humein maaf kardo.

Navin: Haan Nia please mujhe aur genie ko maaf kardo, hum tumhe phir kabhi tang nahin karenge aur kabhi tumhara saath nahin chodenge promise.

Maan: Pakka wala.

Present:

Naina: Bhaiya aapne apna promise tod dia aur aapne humesha keliye mere saath chod diya and she was crying.

In Maan's room he was also crying remembering his best friend.

In Capt. Rajveer's room he was also crying remembering Navin.

Flashback:

Navin and Rajveer were passing by the mess when they heard a girl crying. They entered the mess and saw a girl crying as she was being teased by other girls and boys.

Navin: Yeh sab kya ho raha hai???

Boy: Kuch nahin Lt. Navin bas who yeh nayi ladki hai toh''.

Raj: Toh aap log iski ragging kar rahe hain.

Boy: Yes sir yeh toh tradition hai, jab hum naye aaye the toh aap logon ne humari bhi toh ragging ki thi na aur ab humein mana kar rahe hain, this is not fair.

Raj: Okk carry on.

Navin thought of something and said: Lekin yeh toh''

Boy: Yeh toh????

Navin: BC ki beti hai'

Raj and all others in the mess: Kya.

Navin winked at Raj.😉

Raj: Han han yaad aaya.

Navin: Tum log ragging karna chodo aur lunch karo, aur tum humare saath chalo.

The girl went with them.

Girl: Thanks for helping.

Raj and Navin: Our pleasure.

Girl: Hi I am Additi Singh.

Navin: Hi Lt. Navin Singh Ahluwalia.

Raj: Hi Lt. Rajveer Singh Shekhawat.

Additi: Hi Lieutenants.

Raj: Call me Raj.

Navin: And call me Navin.

Additi: Ok aur aap logon ko pata kaise chala???

Raj and Navin: Kya??

Additi: Ke main BC ki beti hoon.

Raj and Navin: Kyaaa??????

Additi: Haan.

Navin: Humne toh aisehi'.

Raj: Bol dia...

Additi: Ok toh kya ab hum dost ban sakte hain.

Raj: Ya sure.

Navin: Main Jai.

Raj: Aur main Veeru.

Additi: Matlab??????

Raj: Are Sholay ke Jai aur Veeru.

Additi: Ohh.

Navin: Aur tum humari Basanti'

Raj: Haan.

Additi: Ok.

Flashback ends and Additi also had tears in her eyes as she was also thinking about good times with Navin.

PRECAP: Cadet's real mission to come to KMA.

Edited by sweetgirls1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
awesome ... superb ...

add me to ur pm list ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
it's preety intresting...!!!
pls update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24

Guys i m sorry i am late this is a short part please do comment

PART 9:

At night all cadets were in the mess

Vivek: Guys what's up??

Tasha: Ceiling'..

Geet: Hahaha'..

Naina: Champ hum sab khana kha rahe hain.

Vivek: I'll join you guys. Wait I'll bring my food.

He went to bring his food while both Captains and Maan came to the mess.

Gunny: Hey cadets.

Maan: Hi cadets.

Raj: So all the female cadets you must be happy.

Khushi: Why so sir.

Gunny: Are kal Raksha Bandhan jo hai.

Geet: Are haan main bhol kaise gayye.

Khushi: Arre han main abhi apne bhai ki rakhee bhijwa doon gi.

Tasha was a little bit sad.

Gunny: What happened cadet.

Tasha: Nothing sir I don't have a brother to tie the Rakhee.

Raj: Oh it's ok. Cadet Singh aap kisko rakhee bandhein gi.

Naina: I don't have a brother sir.

Her sadness was noticed by Raj, Gunny and Alekh while Maan and

Vivek felt her pain. Every one ate the dinner and retired to their rooms. No one could sleep that night because they were thinking about the reason they are in KMA.

Voiceover: yeh saare cadets kisi na kisi wajah se KMA mein hain. Meri behen Naina yahan mujhe begunnah saabit karne aaye hai.

Alekh remand home se bheja gaya hai ek acha soldier ek acha insaan banne ke liye lekin phir uske KMA mein rehne ka maqsad hi badal jayega.

Geet apni family ko yeh sabit karne aaye hai ke who bohat strong hai aur apni protection kar sakti hai.

Vivek yahan aaya hai take who apne Naveen bhaiya ki maut ka sach jaan sake aur apne bhai ki protection kar sake.

Tasha apne dad ko yeh saabit karne aaye hai ke ladkian soldier ban sakti hain.

Khushi ko toh yeh bhi nahin pata ke who KMA mein kya kar rahi hai lekin bohat jald usse yeh baat samajh mein aajaye gi.

Next day rakhi is celebrated. Geet sends her rakhi for Brij and Khushi sends it for her brother. Vivek and maan felt very sad at Naina's state so naina tied rakhi on their hands.

PRECAP: Captain Rajveer comes to know about the spy he's looking for.

Edited by sweetgirls1 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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add me and send me the pm dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice concept
plz continue soon and add me in your pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: sweetgirls1

Guys i m sorry i am late this is a short part please do comment

PART 9:

At night all cadets were in the mess

Vivek: Guys what's up??

Tasha: Ceiling'..

Geet: Hahaha'..

Naina: Champ hum sab khana kha rahe hain.

Vivek: I'll join you guys. Wait I'll bring my food.

He went to bring his food while both Captains and Maan came to the mess.

Gunny: Hey cadets.

Maan: Hi cadets.

Raj: So all the female cadets you must be happy.

Khushi: Why so sir.

Gunny: Are kal Raksha Bandhan jo hai.

Geet: Are haan main bhol kaise gayye.

Khushi: Arre han main abhi apne bhai ki rakhee bhijwa doon gi.

Tasha was a little bit sad.

Gunny: What happened cadet.

Tasha: Nothing sir I don't have a brother to tie the Rakhee.

Raj: Oh it's ok. Cadet Singh aap kisko rakhee bandhein gi.

Naina: I don't have a brother sir.

Her sadness was noticed by Raj, Gunny and Alekh while Maan and

Vivek felt her pain. Every one ate the dinner and retired to their rooms. No one could sleep that night because they were thinking about the reason they are in KMA.

Voiceover: yeh saare cadets kisi na kisi wajah se KMA mein hain. Meri behen Naina yahan mujhe begunnah saabit karne aaye hai.

Alekh remand home se bheja gaya hai ek acha soldier ek acha insaan banne ke liye lekin phir uske KMA mein rehne ka maqsad hi badal jayega.

Geet apni family ko yeh sabit karne aaye hai ke who bohat strong hai aur apni protection kar sakti hai.

Vivek yahan aaya hai take who apne Naveen bhaiya ki maut ka sach jaan sake aur apne bhai ki protection kar sake.

Tasha apne dad ko yeh saabit karne aaye hai ke ladkian soldier ban sakti hain.

Khushi ko toh yeh bhi nahin pata ke who KMA mein kya kar rahi hai lekin bohat jald usse yeh baat samajh mein aajaye gi.

Next day rakhi is celebrated. Geet sends her rakhi for Brij and Khushi sends it for her brother. Vivek and maan felt very sad at Naina's state so naina tied rakhi on their hands.

PRECAP: Captain Rajveer comes to know about the spy he's looking for.



hey plz update this story

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