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mandymore

@mandymore

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Posted: 14 years ago

#591

Superb prt 😊
geet is so filmy n maan so cruel,poor geet nw wht will happen to her fantasy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#592

AYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your back u were missed! 😆 I loved it, and ur writing is always funny no matter how serious the situation is! AHAHAHAHA so good and awesome! hehehehehehehe Geet she's an enigma MAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it and update soon!

Liz

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

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Posted: 14 years ago

#593

Welcome back Mrs. Zalim Singh Khurana! You had PINK eye!!

I hope you destroyed that mofo...and thank god you're theek tak and ready for some Tik Tock (this song is so much better than who let the dogs out...WHO? WHO?)!!!

Firstly, the image is Hotness...2 of my fav moments sandwiched together...Yummy!!! KH and RTM...me so hot even though I'm sitting right next to the AC vent...I refuse to be all besharam like you and strip off my clothes! BTW: that quote is SICK!!! Who came up with it...WHO..WHOWHO WHO?!

I'm tiny bit con-PUSED!!! She met him before...what kahan!! MERE SAWALON KA JAWAB DO...DOOO NAAA! *raising arms SRK style* Oops this is a Sallu song na?! *slams palm to forehead* Hayo Rabba Hayo Rabba!

This girl is sitting naked in the tub thinking about him in a way I wouldn't...only filthy thoughts my way please!

SHAVING TIME!!!! OMG!!! This is such a realistic dream...nicely done! So Geet isn't this Victoria Secret's model with perfectly shaven smooth legs...she's like us or rather ME!!! NICE!!!

OMG!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA!!! Kadz Meets Mads leads to Epic failure...haila!!! I bet now she's signing...

Barso Re Geetu Geetu Barso re Geetu Geetu, Barso re Geetu...Barsooo...Slippery hai, glossy hai...floors mere manhoos hai...tub bahut hard hai, bheja mere cracked hai...naa naa re naa naa re naa naa re na na re!!!

MAAN to the RESCUE!!! Where's his cape though!! BOO! Me feeling some Dark Knight right about now...but it's okay...at least he didn't lose his deep, sexy masculine voice!!

"Well this was certainly an awkward encounter"- And the Understatement of the centurt award goes to...any guesses?! Yes!! YOU!!! Start the party sharty...me ready with my booze!!!

HELLO?! HELLO?! Koi hai...you still paying attention?!

This is him to her:

Did I just see her Vajayjay!??! Bow chicka bow wow! Strip MSK strip.. where's the party tonight?! Down under cowboy

This is her reaction to him:

Too bad poor girl can't move...makes for a hilarious comedic moment though! Aww poor girl wants to die...nahin bewakoof bachi! Plus, she won't be this shamed once they make the BEAST with 2 backs!!!!

HAHAHAHA!!! She is tens time funnier than Kareena from JWM...OMG!!! Somebody give her an oscar...shit! PC give her your National Award for Fashion!!!

OMG!! What a step down...first he's grabbing her "them apples" *Matt Damon style*..and now he can't even touch her hair! Haila...another bewakoof bakra!

OMG!!! She's been there 5 months...damn...there's still no action between them! WHOA!

Chalo...some molestation...finally! GOOD! I was getting worried for these two!

KISS! KISS! KISS!!!!!!!!! *THUD!*

I just fell over by bed and landed on the hard wood floor...me in pain!! Lemme gain back the strength to continue further! OUCH!!! Ouchie-ouchie!!!

OMG!! (they seriously need to invent a new word) but feeling, touching...I think he needs a GPS b/c he went UP when really he should have gone down..meter down, down, down down, meter DOWN!!!🤣🤣

But what's this...UGH!! Maan is so cruel...tumhara Zalim Khurana...uff!! That's okay Geet...come into my arms!!!😆

I just realized MSK likes it rough...Rihanna's SM anyone?! He'll "snap her neck"...that must be an euphemism for something ELS!!!😉

SAM!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome job...thanks for the:

1. Long update! But honey...it really wasn't that long, now was it?! Oh wait...that's just my greedy self!

2. Sexy moment...my filthy mind is running on a threadmill...so many misfiring of neurons...such a over-active imagination...UFF! I stay loyal to my zodiac!

3. Semi-dance number...please please please!! One of these days can we get Geet being All Basanti to Maan's Samba and mar-ing thumkas with her dhanno in front of his "mullis and gajars"!!!

Thanks a bunch!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#594

Oh my God this was hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing!

She's been residing in his safe-house for over 5 months. What a great life, living in a huge modern house with no rent at all -_- I wish I get shot by a hot gangster sometime soon.

Even though the hairy legs bit made me visualise a seriously hairy leg, I just love your heroines. You make'm quite realistic, I mean girls do grow hair, they do have morning breath and they sweat.We're not in a bollywood movie where we wake-up looking flawless. Forget flawless I look like a dead zombie when I wake up. Wait...zombies are dead, so umm...you know just forget it.

Geet at the beginning is so funny dancing in a towel LMAO! I can't believe I'm posting this but I sometimes dance in the bathroom with only a towel covering me, I don't know why but when I'm wet the dancer within me unleashes 😳 LOL!

Why does she always fall into the most awkward and mortifying situations? He saw her NAKED! Naked! My jaw literally dropped to the ground. You are a cruel girl Mrs.MSP LOL

She said her body was reserved for her husband to see, was this a hint? I'm just going to take it as a hint.

I liked Maan's seduction skills, he truly is multi-talented. That part just turned the temperate up in this room. He's a little phasht, he slipped his hand up her shirt! But considering he saw her naked, slept with her (slept as in literally slept not the other o_o...) when she was naked too, so I guess it doesn't really matter.

He stole her first kiss! *gasp* I sort of gave my first kiss to some chinese toddler when I was one, but it was not official so it doesn't count. But back to the point, a girls first kiss is supposed to be special and memorable. But I guess this was kind of significant because not everybody can say they kissed somebody on a wanted list now can they?

Overall fabulous update, your updates always lighten up my mood. Waiting to read more.

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hopehot

@hopehot

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Posted: 14 years ago

#595

Originally posted by: sweet coco
Welcome back Mrs. Zalim Singh Khurana! You had PINK eye!!

I hope you destroyed that mofo...and thank god you're theek tak and ready for some Tik Tock (this song is so much better than who let the dogs out...WHO? WHO?)!!!

Firstly, the image is Hotness...2 of my fav moments sandwiched together...Yummy!!! KH and RTM...me so hot even though I'm sitting right next to the AC vent...I refuse to be all besharam like you and strip off my clothes! BTW: that quote is SICK!!! Who came up with it...WHO..WHOWHO WHO?!

I'm tiny bit con-PUSED!!! She met him before...what kahan!! MERE SAWALON KA JAWAB DO...DOOO NAAA! *raising arms SRK style* Oops this is a Sallu song na?! *slams palm to forehead* Hayo Rabba Hayo Rabba!

This girl is sitting naked in the tub thinking about him in a way I wouldn't...only filthy thoughts my way please!

SHAVING TIME!!!! OMG!!! This is such a realistic dream...nicely done! So Geet isn't this Victoria Secret's model with perfectly shaven smooth legs...she's like us or rather ME!!! NICE!!!

OMG!!!!!!! HAHAHAHA!!! Kadz Meets Mads leads to Epic failure...haila!!! I bet now she's signing...

Barso Re Geetu Geetu Barso re Geetu Geetu, Barso re Geetu...Barsooo...Slippery hai, glossy hai...floors mere manhoos hai...tub bahut hard hai, bheja mere cracked hai...naa naa re naa naa re naa naa re na na re!!!

MAAN to the RESCUE!!! Where's his cape though!! BOO! Me feeling some Dark Knight right about now...but it's okay...at least he didn't lose his deep, sexy masculine voice!!

"Well this was certainly an awkward encounter"- And the Understatement of the centurt award goes to...any guesses?! Yes!! YOU!!! Start the party sharty...me ready with my booze!!!

HELLO?! HELLO?! Koi hai...you still paying attention?!

This is him to her:

Did I just see her Vajayjay!??! Bow chicka bow wow! Strip MSK strip.. where's the party tonight?! Down under cowboy

This is her reaction to him:

Too bad poor girl can't move...makes for a hilarious comedic moment though! Aww poor girl wants to die...nahin bewakoof bachi! Plus, she won't be this shamed once they make the BEAST with 2 backs!!!!

HAHAHAHA!!! She is tens time funnier than Kareena from JWM...OMG!!! Somebody give her an oscar...shit! PC give her your National Award for Fashion!!!

OMG!! What a step down...first he's grabbing her "them apples" *Matt Damon style*..and now he can't even touch her hair! Haila...another bewakoof bakra!

OMG!!! She's been there 5 months...damn...there's still no action between them! WHOA!

Chalo...some molestation...finally! GOOD! I was getting worried for these two!

KISS! KISS! KISS!!!!!!!!! *THUD!*

I just fell over by bed and landed on the hard wood floor...me in pain!! Lemme gain back the strength to continue further! OUCH!!! Ouchie-ouchie!!!

OMG!! (they seriously need to invent a new word) but feeling, touching...I think he needs a GPS b/c he went UP when really he should have gone down..meter down, down, down down, meter DOWN!!!🤣🤣

But what's this...UGH!! Maan is so cruel...tumhara Zalim Khurana...uff!! That's okay Geet...come into my arms!!!😆

I just realized MSK likes it rough...Rihanna's SM anyone?! He'll "snap her neck"...that must be an euphemism for something ELS!!!😉

SAM!!!!!!!!!!!! Awesome job...thanks for the:

1. Long update! But honey...it really wasn't that long, now was it?! Oh wait...that's just my greedy self!

2. Sexy moment...my filthy mind is running on a threadmill...so many misfiring of neurons...such a over-active imagination...UFF! I stay loyal to my zodiac!

3. Semi-dance number...please please please!! One of these days can we get Geet being All Basanti to Maan's Samba and mar-ing thumkas with her dhanno in front of his "mullis and gajars"!!!

Thanks a bunch!!!

😆😆😆😆 u and ur basanti # ...here too 😲😲 ...oh god...any way good thinking ...me also with u 😉

i loved geet barso song ...with the cute baby ...

Edited by hopehot - 14 years ago

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#596

Glad your eyes are better. 😃

Sooo, i was really anxious to read your update (seriously, i was having dreams about this 😆) and was wondering where you were hiding. But, after reading your update, i doubt anyone can stay mad for long! Lol!!!!!!!!!!! Loved Geet's reaction after he saw her naked! It was pretty cute...well, sorta. Loved how Maan tried to seduce her (VERY HOT scene btw) into telling the truth/ him trying to feel her wounds. Poor Geet finally gets her hot gangster, but it was all a ploy. It was pretty smart of MSK though. I wonder what Geet's gonna do since she has no job and no place to live. And of course, they are gonna meet again.

Maan, don't be stupid- don't you know the whole thing about Maan+Geet = Maneet, one of the best jodies. Maybe not, but you will soon 😉 (well, if Sammy wants 😛)

But yeah, LOVED your update, as usual, and can't wait to read what happens next. And hope your eyes go back to normal