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Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Hey i just loved ur ff its really a different concept do update soon

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cyum321

@cyum321

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Posted: 14 years ago

#482

awesome story

i love geet's imaginary thinking fully bollywood style but alas she is facing the bitter reality of life🤣

please add me in ur pm list.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Sammy, Sammy, Sammy😃

lolzz Geet's dream just cracked me up🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

the way she imagined maan dancing was just to halirious

poor her she thinks tht Maan would help her buhh NO😆

i just love Maan's attitude. 😳😳

pls update soon

~Jessica

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soma kazmi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#484

nice update... congo on being rocker...
update soon ... waiting to know what happen next...

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609931

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Posted: 14 years ago

#485

Congrats on becoming an IF rocker 😊
Omg her dream had me in stitches, Geet loves to mentally torture Maan
You included Baa! I remember her 😲 LOL
Uff this Maan is so caring for her one minute & ruthless the next, but he's found his match in feisty, taking-no-nonsense Geet

Edited by walkintomylifex - 14 years ago

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Amiiish

@Amiiish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#486

Really nice update sammy, and ur scenes r so real, I mean u never forget that a hot man/woman can even smell bad😆hehe love ur writing, and ur sense of humor. keep it up dear, but how can Maan be so ruthless?😆

and I have Q, u said that ur mother tounge aint hindi, so are u like arabian or what? hehe curious to know😳

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Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#487

hey congrats on being a rockerz...

now this update was damn hilarious..
u need to post a disclaimer..plzz read the updates when u r alone or else u will be mistake as loony by ur family for laughing holding ur stomach...staring the PC...

geet and her imaginations never fails to amuse me...she is a firebrand material😆
and maan he is anything but chivalrous...but what else can we expect from a gansgster...
and if u r writing a ff..then it has to be unconventional narration...with witty comebacks, humorous oneliners and tongue in the cheek dialogues by the characters keeping a deadpan expression...

maan left the country without paying last visit to geet...
ohhh gosh then i am desperately waiting for their next fiery and adventurous encounter.
i am sure it not going to be pleasant ...but a lot of fireworks are bound to happen😆

thnxxx for this lovely update...completely flawless...and left me speechless...coz all the time i was grinning like a fool
keep writing

love u and ur ffs
reva