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Posted: 14 years ago
tooo short and why does maan have such bad manners..you do plan to make them fall for each other dont you? ..what will be the point otherwise? congratulation son being an IF Rockerz...and next time make it way longer and crack him to admire her beauty
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Posted: 14 years ago
SUM-EERAA!
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Congrats on being rockers 🤣 I remember when i turned one 🤣 it was effortless 😆 The spammer i was back in my days 😛😛 But congratulations and I can't wait until you're tired of that red colour. I know you will be... it will only take a week or something for you to get over it. 😆
As for the update, i want a longer one next time missy 😳 But this one was hilarious 🤣 haha, you reminded me of baa and all that ektaish nonsense. Well, i hadn't been online for daaayss and I read some parts altogether. Your writing is awesomee and update soon. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
LMAO! 🤣
i was practically visualizing Maan dance with graceful classical moves lolzz😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome!!!!
bad maan!...didn't even visit geet again!
continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣ROFL!🤣

Hilarious dream she had!! 😆

OK! So u updated! have waited all week long for your post. And gosh.! congrats on becoming a Rocker!😃

Your comparisons are just effing funny.!! I could laugh my Ass out! I really want some romance in here! dying to witness the passion. ☺️
C'mon C'mon now.Bring him back soon. And make them fall in Loouuu.😆

BTW, the bad breathe thingee was disgusting really. Eeeks. Eeew. You could have, just like in the bollywood movies described the awesome minty fragrance and all. But no! in one of your FF's you have to make her stink like a pig, and in the other, her breathe is like a horse's. Poor chick this Geet Handa.😆

OK.Update soon.Waiting.

Love ya! 😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
part 6
oh that was awesome...
Geet and her dream...🤣
only had Maan had an idea about her dream then all hell would have been broken...
OMG they are literally biting each others' heads...
Maan that was so ungentleMAANlike...
leaving the injured lady just like that without even turning back or checking up on her...
their retorts were so funny...
oh now my doubt is cleared...
twas him Maan Geet was so blindly infatuated in the beginning...
cont soon Sammy dear...

PS congrats dear...
Edited by spvd - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Finally made it ...first comment after reading the entire thing...Sammy 🤗...ur genius...I know me is being too sweet but I have too na..till the FF is ongoing and of course we have another one coming soon...😆😆

Har khushi Hai Logon Ke Daman Mein,


Par Ek Hansi Ke Liye Waqt Nahi.

Din Raat Daudti Duniya Mein,

Zindagi Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi.

Saare Naam Mobile Mein Hain,


Par Dosti Ke Lye Waqt Nahi.

Gairon Ki Kya Baat Karen,

Jab Apno Ke Liye Hi Waqt Nahi.
🤣
🤣
🤣
Zayda ho gaya na...
Loved the updates as always
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Posted: 14 years ago
CONGRATULATIONS SAMMYYY 🤗

I feel soo proud to see you join me in red 😳 Finally we can be twins on IF now 😉 I just crossed the 10, 000 mark too Freaky twin connection rocks 😆

I love it, Geet is totally imaging herself doing all these crazy mad Matrix moves and saving the day. I never do things like that 🤣 Plus I love how you slipped in the comment about her thick eyelashes, I noticed that 😆 I bet their extemely long too 😉

Loving how her minds works even more making him dance with payals on your too good Sammy 🤣

His chicken ankles 😳 no way, I refuse to believe the sexy gangster has such unsexy ankles

Maan as a maid, I wouldn't want to see his chicken legs in his dress 😆

She did the nipple twister on him 🤣 Most girls go for the slap but she is something else, I would love to rub some cream on his pecs they must be awful sore 😈

I just love his rudeness and attitude 😳 the shut up was soo darn sexy 😈

This girl totally knows how to attack, she is perfect gangster GF material 😉

🤣🤣🤣 I shouldn't be laughing about Maan's comeback about her chest, I wish I could up with comebacks like that. Not that I have ever found myself in that situation tho haha

I don't know if I would have been able to think and see why he shot her soo soon after the event as I would be raging still

I love the shout out to the evergreen Ba 😆

OMG he never catched her, he is such a bad ass *swoons on her bed 🤣 Why do we always fall for the bad ass guys? Geet your a goner

He just called her weak, that was below the belt, she was shot twice for godness sake 😳 I thought he would eventually helped her after seeing thrashing about in pain, I'm a tad bit disappointed by him, is he only going to be nice when she is unconscious

the toothpaste and toothbrush remark, he never misses out on a chance to insult her 🤣 she needs to keep mints by her bedside table now i think


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Posted: 14 years ago
awww that was terrific update..👍🏼
BTW congo on being IF rockerz...😳
I was in splits reading Geet's dream🤣I just love her...
loved Maaneet's bickering..ufff this Maan...n his attitude...ye dono nahi sudherenge...
thanks a ton for the PM...
waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 14 years ago
congrate dear for RED COLOR😆🥳🥳🥳awesome update loved it a lot😊

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