The Gangsters Mistress M&G - 2nd Thread Link P.127 - Page 43

Originally posted by: rania786

loved it loved it loved it ...plz don't deprive us of an update... I am commenting ...long on as well... although I usually don't...and you call this long? long is anything that takes more than 10 min minimum to read... I know it takes a long time to write but we the readers gobble it up in a couple of mins and than WE WANT MORE!!! I blame you... its all ur own fault ... if you write such interesting stories and than stop at the most arrrggghh moment ... what else can the poor reader do accept demand WE WANT MORE NOW...

...and the title montage is to die for ...TOO TOO TOO good ... wait ... did that sound over the top and insincere? lol ... no seriously it IS really good ... very dreamy

Haha! My request for long updates is taken more seriously now = P I like, I like. lol! I've discovered that my readers are quite insatiable. Although it's short to read, it takes me a minimum of 2-3 hours to write since I never plan my chapters = |

ROFL. No it sounded VERY genuine. THANK you! = )

Originally posted by: tes_v1

First things first! The new montage is simply beautiful for a first timer! Congrats on that, hun!

Now, to the update: Ouch for Geet, the poor babe was first shot and now cauterized, what is this man upto?!

Me likes the way this gangster's mind works and I ROFL at Geet's reaction! Oh, how he's gonna have to pay for his audacity!

Eagerly awaiting your next update and well, kudos to the way you write and your mind works! 😆

P.S: This was nowhere a long update, barely took me 5 mins to read!

Hi ! = D I believe I have yet to read a long comment of yours that you posted not long ago for 'Irrevocably Yours'. It looks nice & super long - Just to my liking 😆.

Haha! Yes when I re-read the chapter, I realized it was not long at all. = / It's funny how a work that took me 2 hours to write is gobbled up in a span of 3 minutes LOL 😆

hi sammy i would like to know if you are gonna update today please i hope you do because i am in love with this ff please answer my question thanks

Originally posted by: angili

hi sammy i would like to know if you are gonna update today please i hope you do because i am in love with this ff please answer my question thanks

Hey babe I am = )

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

Ok that was just about the most steamy update ever ☺️

Who in the world would not LOVE to ogle at a man doing exercise or punching the daylights out of a punching bag ? 😆 Totally reminded me of his Tai-Chi sessions in the show where his thoughts are bombarded by Geet 😳 .. at first I was like .. what? Why is this son-of-a-mother exercising while she's battling with life? Then the doctor came through so I was like ok good 😆

Ohhh you totally made him wear what Maan did in his first appearance didn't you? 😲 I remember Maan wore a sleeveless hoodie with jeans 😆 Unless that wasn't deliberate on your part lol .. I don't know why I picked out that one fine detail heh 😛

Of course she's sleeping on his bed .. makes total way for him to accidentally fall asleep with her ☺️

Ok I was literally squirming when he was burning her with that rod 😳 .. but I totally knew he was an undercover doctor .. knows all Gangster-ish ways of healing a wound .. burn the poor girl's skin😆 Inflicting pain to ease the pain .. ironic much? But anyways it was completely awww when he was sitting there with his aching neck just so she doesn't turn on her injured side during her sleep 😳 Total hubby-like behaviour 😆

And I just totally knew at that instant that this man is surely gonna fall asleep by her side .. and the part where he pulls her to his chest ☺️ LOL sorry I was turning tomato red the entire update 😆

Ok this girl didn't wait a second before she started blabbing to herself about how the man shouldn't do this to fragile innocent girls 😳 😆 She is a bit much lmao..

And of course Maan Singh Khurana has hell awaiting him when he wakes up .. this girl is going to fry his brain with a million different accusations .. and I can trust "taking advantage of a young girl" being one of them .. here we go again

Aweshum update Shammy 😆 << LOL don't mind me

Love ya 🤗

PS: I was staring at the Title Sigg for so long thinking you used someone's sigg to make it look all pretty and then i look at the top and see the FFs title on it and I did a double-take 😆 .. I was like HAWMYGOSH Sammy made that? I love it 😃

Z

I thought of your drooly expression when I was writing the first part of the chapter ; ) lol! YES I confess his totally dressed up in the same clothes that he wore in his first appearance. He looked so damn hot and that can of coke in his hands was a killer for me! He looked so young, strong, reckless, arrogant and yum yum yum xxx 😳

😆 His a gangster-doctor that knows how to reduce pain by inflicting MORE pain. 😉 LMFAO Z! SERIOUSLY if I ever fall sick, you should be my backup updater! You totally know how to read my mind! 😆 Predicting that he will also fall asleep next to her 😉.

P.S. Thank you! = O I don't steal other people's works (LOL I wish I could though) but thankkks for liking it = D

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Originally posted by: *Dakoo_Minzy*

ohhh yeaaah!! we get an update 😃

lemme say Miss.Sammy your threat of delay in update worked and see i am commenting 😆 btween tat's not the actual reason y i am commenting... just for little flattery mentioned like that..you said like you like fake flattery 🤣

between wait wait am i talking anything sensible here? 😆 ooo girl i am following your path in commenting 😆 hope no one sees my comment and thinks i am crazy..

coming to wat i actually wanted to say...😃 it was a flawless update! 😳 <mai flattery or buttering nahi karti...> 😆 Really could feel Maan and Geet... Maan is very powerful...awww! i love this gangster 🤗 he is dangerously attractive... ☺️

now now i am impatient for the next update... 😭 waiting and looking forward to your pm... 😃 take your time and update long 🤗 you are a fabulous writer...great to come across your piece of writing... 😳

note: the second bullet was good...it increased the intensity of emotions..love you for thinking the perfect plot for the perfect time for the perfect couple in your perfect style 😆 😆 all perfect huney!! 🤗

Oh hell yeaaah! Got a silent reader influenced to FINALLY comment! 🤗 Haha! Flattery or no flattery, threat or no threat, am totally glad that you eventually did mark your presence in this thread 🤣.

Crazy? Babe your talking to the most weirdest gal out in the forums here! So if your crazy then it's very very nice to meet you! We shall get along just crazily as fine! 😆

Thank you darling for commenting and liking the FF! I hope I see more of your comments often

xxx

Originally posted by: niddzz

hey sammy...!!!😊

that was absolutely awesome update...!!! 👏

loved it to bits...!!! 😳 😛

maan dressed her wounds...awww...so sweet...!!! 😛

geet was shot twice...poor soul...!!!!😭

maan is unknowingly attracted towards her...!!!!😳

loved the title montage...loved the text in it to bits...!! ❤️ 👍🏼 👏 😳

maan was by her side the entire night...oops and they slept on the same bed in each others arms almost...cant wait 4 the morning...!!! 😃

the Dr is so dead if he cums in maans sight...!!!😆

sammy dear take a standing ovation 4 writing so beautifully...!!!! i bow to u ...!!!! ⭐️

cant wait 4 the story to unfold and 4 them to fall heads over heels in love wid each other...4 now cant wait 4 the morn...maan is so dead...!!!! coming soon gave me goosebumps...cant wait 4 its full version...😉

Hi Nidz! = D

OOOH colorful comment aye :P I like, I like! Your so cute! No need for a standing ovation or bow, your comments is enough to bring a massive smile on my face.

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Originally posted by: luvabbybaby

OMGGG!!!! LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it! Sammy u r back and I am sooo happy! Love your work! I love all the Geet's you write! Poor Maan . . . He is very complex, and I hope you dwell into his nature (his angrymannness) LOL thats not even a word!

LoL thats what ur updates do to me :)

Loved it all!!!!!!!!!!!! AHAHAHA at the end!

Love

Liz

OMG LIZ! OMG! 😆 I love your use-of-unknown-made-out-of-the-spot-words! I also do that as well! I try to pass it off silently so people do not question me 🤣,

THANKS for LOVING it! I hope I can make you form MORE unknown words with my updates!

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Originally posted by: bmtdluver

I didn't even read it yet, but i LOVE the text on the sig!!

*edit*

Loved the update! It's kinda cute how Maan is taking care of her and thinking about her (Thank god i'd never meet gangster maan in real life. If he knew that i called him/his actions cute, I'd be the one dead ) Lol at the end part. Can't wait to hear Geet's arguement about the placement of Maan's hands

P.S- Bye bye doctor! Maan is going to kill him for not taking care of the second wound

Please update soon when you get time

Hi dear! Aw what a cute emoticon! I'm a sucker for those animation thinga-majigeees! lol I' m glad you liked both the update and my creation lol

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Originally posted by: shruthiR

Hey Sammy!

I read all the written chps that you have written so far and they were fab!👏 I never thought that Maan would be given the role of a gangster in one of your ffs.Getting attracted to bad boys now are we?😉😆Anyway,continue to PM me whenever you update and sorry for the late reply😳Looking forward to the next chp so update soon😊

Shruthi! = D

Missed ya comments 😆. Yes yes you should know by now that I have a serious magnetic attraction with bad boys lol!

Thank you for commenting!

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