The Gangsters Mistress M&G - 2nd Thread Link P.127 - Page 45

Originally posted by: disha_maan

wooowww awsm montage... loved it. cant believe its ur 1st try..👍🏼.

hmmm... i actually loved the cautarization idea. thats something i dint xpect. well by this time i go to know that ooonly unxpected is all i can xpect frm u mrs.MAAN singh PHURANA

how come u never fail 2 give such cliff hanger precap... n last but not the least, where did u put maan's hand???!!!🐷 o gosh...

I always LOVE to give everyone cliff hangers! It's MY THANG 😆. And that surely is expected from me as you know 😉

Originally posted by: Zee89-Maneetfan

wow wow wow!

No words to explain this chapter coz girl it's just BRILLIANT! (this emo makes me laugh🤣🤣🤣)

Uff how can I explain how brilliant this chapter is?

Maan working out


First stages of concern for her well being

Likely to kill the inept doc! And then marking her skin...oh my! His mark on her skin ...sort of anyway And Geet...what can I say??? 🤣🤣🤣 she's just adorable! I love her! 🤣

Then you had to go and PUT A FRIGGING CLIFFHANGER AT THE WRONG TIME MISSY!

I swear...I'm gonna find you stalk you and torture you to write proper chapters without CLIFFHANGERS SUCH AS CHAPTER 4!

Please go down the page to know how I'll find you...

keep going please

just a few more clicks

I don't know how i'll find you, but you'll know when I come knocking! 🤣

So uhh...post another chapter

PLEASSEEE!!!!

Tha title montage siggie thing you made is gooddd...love the picture you used!

Oh and you mentioned something about a vm on Gangster's Mistress, with Ya Ali or that other song 😕 from Gangster?😊 If you haven't got anything so far from other readers/vm makers, i could ask my friend salmz, she's really good at making them!

Check out her youtube channel:

http://www.youtube.com/user/salma434

(p.s what you gonna say about this mesage now, eh?😉🤣)

Oh my! *breathe breathe breathe - laughter bubbles up; Samira tries to hold onto her flying buttocks from erupting.*

... *escaping escaping and BAM! BLOWN AWAY!* L M F A O L M F A O ! 🤣🤣🤣 Your comment was SO amazingly hilarious! YOU stalking MOI! WOMAN after reading this I have OFFICIALLY become your fan! *Standing ovation - throws roses* CATCH EM I PAID FOR EVERY DARN PETAL! 🤣 I am literally having a love-struck-obsessive-breakdown-K-k-kiran-Srk-obsessed moment! This was sooo amazing! 🤣 LOVEDLOVEDLOVEEED IT!

P.S. I haven't found a VM = ( And Salma makes amazing ones!

Originally posted by: Fallen Angel

Wow Sammy...🤗You're an incredible writer!!
I'm not saying this just to get you to get a much longer update out of you next time, but seriously you're writing makes me wish I was as good as you!! The last two updates have been just amazing!! 👏👏👏
Btw I'm loving Maan as a Gangster...imaging him while he's working out. 😳😳😍
Plz cont soon and thnx soo much for the pm!!

Aw thank you so much! I'm sure your also a wonderful writer! You should write something as well and see your own potential 😛

Originally posted by: vardah23

😲

WHT ELSE IS SHE SUPPOSE TO DO OTHER THN SCREAM WITHOUT A WARNING! Maan maan maan...

neways raat gayi baat gayi 😳 rite...hehehe
btw..sam...great riting i love how wen i read ur stuff i cn just imagine it happening rite there...great job

lol! I would have screamed as well! 😆 Thanks love. That is my intention. To make the readers imagine the whole scene = )

Originally posted by: 20tullip2000

hey samira

just caught up with ur ff ...arzoo di recommended it ...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and let me tell u ...frst of all the name is dhamakedaar !!!!!!!!!!

haaye ...wat a start ... maan the gangster ... i loved the 3 and 4 part vry much !!!!!!!!!!!!

mujhe bhi yahi laga tha ki woh koi rajnikanth style karega ...and saare gundon ko mardega singlehandedly ...par u proved me wrong ... ussne to goli hi maar di ...ufff !!!!!!! totally unexpected!!!!!!!!!

par bechara karta bhi kya ...usse geet ki life aur dignity main se ek ko chunna tha ...to dishkiaun ...and boom she is gone !!!!!!!!!

and nxt part was even better ... kaise uski care kar raha tha sabko dhamki de dali ...and them cherry on the cake was the part wen he burned her skin wen she was screaming in sleeping !!!!!!!!!!!!!!kitna chilla rahi thi ...!!!!!!!

maza aa gaya... haaye ...itna dukh dard dekh kar atma santushti ho gayi ... ek dum evil types !!!!!!!!!!!!


i hope u write more sad and dhamakedaar parts in future !!!!!!!!

Hi dear! lol I don't know who Arzoo is but say thanks to her for recommending it to you on my behalf = ) Yes I love the title too! I made it sound awesome to attract readers ROFL. Misleading advertisement 😆.

Okay it took me a while to read the hindi bits but I understood! *PHEW* LOL ahaha! You like emo stuff? 😆 If so you should read my One shots. All of them are dark, sad and twisted! = D

Originally posted by: _Jessi_

Hi Sammy (can i call u tht)😃I just read ur FF, well I truly love the concept, it's out of the world 👏

Maan's a Gangster??😲

I find tht soo😳

and then the gunpoint, wow never in history have i read a story in which the hero really shoots the heroine,😆😆

Poor Geet, buhh then he is cute and who cares getting shot by a cute boy i mean man🤣he might take care of u more violently in the most passionate way☺️

*kk stops my bakwas*

Buh most importantly Maan seems like a pervert to me, *indicates to the ending of part 5*

well ur Maan is too different, instead of taking care of the girl in a waay she doesn't cry, he takes care of her in a ganster-ish way --painfulway... buhh like always he is a sexy man☺️ i find ur gangster ☺️

pls update soon, i can't wait to read wht they do on the same bed☺️

*im truly innocent-just have wild imagination*😆

and if u have a pm list can u add me prettty pweeasse😃

~Jessica😛

Hi Jess! (I'm calling you that 😆), Yes you may certainly call me Sammy !

Yep his a gangster; isn't that SO hot! = D lol! I think I'm the only weirdo who tries to make an acceptable plot whereby it's totally okay for the hero to shoot the heroine! 🤣

Pervert? LOL well I shall let you confirm your suspicions when you read the next chapter. Then we shall see if he remains the perv ahaha!

And I shall PM you for sure! Don't worry, we are all innocent but Maan has corrupted our imaginations for sure! 😈

Originally posted by: bansipatel

hey sameera...
pzl update sooon...
cnt wait for the next part...wea geet will be up soon n will find maan next 2 her...
cnt wait to see her reaction finding him next to her>>>!!!
Plz update soon sameera...😳

Oh my! Sameera? Written TWO TIMES! 😆 PLEASE for the sake of my feelings, don't spell my name that way! lol it's Samira! 😆

Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy

Ok I think, overall, my favorite part is the bed part...well, that sounds wrong... -.-

I feel as if it is too early for him to care about Geet, considering he is a gangster and he is felt emotionless for so many years in this business.

I get it he wants to save her, but feelings on the other hand, way too early.

But Geet. lolz. Well, she has a different story, since she's got her whole fairytale in her head. I love her over-dramatized imaginations.

Anyways, the bed scene was just...Hot...but no-there-yet kind of hot...am i making sense yet?

Lolz, I knew she was going to scream. I mean, they are in a bed together. She's unconscious thinking she's dead. Of course, she would scream.

Just waiting for the next part. HURRY!

Nah, take your time, you must be busy...

...Not...hurry or else...we will whip up a master plan to conquer your procrastination 😈

You know what I love about your comments? YOU tell me the cons and the pros! It's so different and unique and I LOVE it. = )

No no doesn't sound wrong at all. I would like anything to do with Maan + a bed! 😆 And your right; he is by no means falling for her yet. It's more of his reaction to someone trusting him that got him a bit hm less harsh?

Your making total sense m'dear! And I am in full agreement with you = D

HAHAHAHAH! I 'm hurrying ! JEEEZ no threats PLEASE! 😆😆

Originally posted by: febinyusuff

ho dear... the update was lovely... I felt sad Maan when Maan cauterised her wound.. now that mark will there for ever in her milky white skin.. Sam, I must admire your skills to bring humour everywhere.. I was expecting a little bit romance..

Thanks love for your comment! = ) I can't get into the full blown romance JUST yet 😆