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Deeksha

@annie.shona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#401

thats a nice one ...

continue soon

and plzzz add me to the pm list...

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scorpiobhavika

@scorpiobhavika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#402

thats indeed a surprise! never expected you to remember my username when we have hardly talked to each other ..and definitely never expected you to remember a comment from literally a sea of the same ..u have some memory ya

aaand u are right, i hardly comment. but i respect ur insistence about commenting on this ff..thats the only way to keep it driving and is a great motivator for the writer.. so i had to comply. also ur remark about how people comment in the beginning to get added and never show their faces again touched a spot, because thats not the reason for me not making my presence felt frequently. i am not that mean =)

great update. geet's gonna scream her lungs out ;)

i will try to comment more often

keep up the good work

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#403

awesome awesome chapter loved it a lot bechara maan 😆

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Bkhas

@Bkhas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#404

Awesum update
loved it
plz add me 2 ur pm list

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Dristi/twin/MK/D/dumbo/Drizzy

@DrashtiDhamiNo1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#405

lovely update

ahhh i can still picture the scene with maan

intensely doing push ups and boxing with beads

of sweat pouring down his body 😍☺️

now thats something i can gladly get used to 😉😆

awww poor geetu 😔 if being shot once wasnt enough

and that too in the stomach, she got shot again!!!!! 😲

grrr if i was maan i would murder the doc... he's not

doing his job right and is getting paid for it!! 👎🏼

dude what a douchebag!!

looking forward to the next part

cont soon please

thanks for the pm!! :D

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Najmah

@Fallen-Angel

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#406

Wow Sammy...🤗You're an incredible writer!!
I'm not saying this just to get you to get a much longer update out of you next time, but seriously you're writing makes me wish I was as good as you!! The last two updates have been just amazing!! 👏👏👏
Btw I'm loving Maan as a Gangster...imaging him while he's working out. 😳😳😍
Plz cont soon and thnx soo much for the pm!!

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Vardah

@vardah23

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#407

Chapter 4 was so sad for a while but thn wen he turned around because her wound hurt his heart i was so😍...It was a really nice chapter! now she better be saved or else...Good luck mr driver and mr and ms doctor nurse

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Vardah

@vardah23

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#408

😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲

WHT ELSE IS SHE SUPPOSE TO DO OTHER THN SCREAM WITHOUT A WARNING! Maan maan maan...

neways raat gayi baat gayi 😳 rite...hehehe
btw..sam...great riting i love how wen i read ur stuff i cn just imagine it happening rite there...great job