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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

Loved the update

Geet in her innocence is opening up n telling watevr is in her heart

Good her mind stopped making her feel guilty

It was fab

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seher

@love4all

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Wow yaar awesome update he loved it ... Come back soon don't b sad we r with u all time no mater what is it love u take care bye

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

awesome, beautiful part.
loved it.
maan is so possessive for geet.
continue soon,

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sakshi

@tanvi04

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

awsome update loved it continue soon

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lakshmisalvadi

@lakshmisalvadi

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

😉Hi sweetheart

That was wonderful update. Aakhir kab tak geet dur rahegi hamare Maan se. Unka pyar parwan chad raha hai. loved it from bottom of my heart. Plz cont soon. cant u update two in a day. dil hai ki manta nahi. lalach. hai aapke FF padne ka.

Love u dear

Lakshmi

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jasraj123

@jasraj123

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

lovely update. loved it loved it sooo much. love the way maan was sooo possessive about geet and geet said only he has rt to touch her. sooo romantic and how they both lost in each other in office and not paying any attention to anyone😉. the most thing i liked that first time geet didn't scold herself infact she became bold and asked maan to put shirt on😆😉. sooo nicely written. 👏👏👏👏👏👏

the precap is very very interesting. geet asking for kiss😉😉😉 pls update soon and thanks for pm

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Deepti

@sanul

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

love it...

just read it . it's suberp ...

waiting for next...

update soon ...

thanx for the pm dear...

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

i dont kw wht it s ...but i just completely love tis maan nd geet of ur ff...each update i read.. i just fall for tis "untold emotions" more nd more...loved it..eagerly waiting for the next part😍...

all the best for ur MCAT👍🏼...

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#259

wowww awesomeee

it was nice n a bit hottt

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sky_86

@sky_86

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#260

yaar Marvee what do you want me to comment?how much i loooved it or how badly and greedily im waiting for the next part...i have no words to describe how elated i get when i see pms in my invoice...and when its untold emotions my happiness knows no bounds...still smiling and smiling like crazy at the way you have built it up wowww..you should extend this story into something much more diverse ..it has the hall marks of a bestseller splattered all over it ..the steps you introduced earlier..the little subtle hints along the way...you are a scintillating writer in the making