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Congrats on the new tread untold emotions totally deserves it 👏

And awe geet loves maan unconditionally but she herself is unaware of this lol and haha loved the part with sasha geet geting jealous and telling her that she's maans wife and that she's just and employee who should stay in her limit awe and then ooh wonder who the young good looking guy was that sue hugged anyways great update and loving the precap can't wait 😊

omg what stunning sensous

congratz on now thread!!

Congrats! great going!🤗

hiii

congratzzz on new thread,,,,,,,,

Originally posted by: drashsree100

1st things 1st Marvee loads & loads of

to you for such a fantastic update 👏

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You know people always strive for perfection . I feel your updates are an Example of Perfection . The way you write is mind-blowing , the way you justify the sub-plots in sync with your title "Untold Emotions" is fantastic & lastly the characterization of the protagonists , Geet & Maan is prolific 👏

I'm amazed by the way I'm left @ loss of words after each of your mind-blowing updates ; & this is your 1st ever attempt .

Coming to the update . The bed scene was sensuality @ its best ; but what surfaced was pure & simple Love that these 2 have for each other . Loved the witty inputs you gave like the cologne part , facing back to Maan , no bra 😈 !!! 😆 Too good !!

The office part was like a double treat . Geet gave her intro as Maan's wife 👍🏼

Human & robot 😆

Omg !!! I loved how Geet gave it to Sasha 👏 1st her addressing , her dress code & finally how she should address Geet 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Maan thought he could get away getting Geet jealous 😈 But this Geet simply knows her trump card 👍🏼 Entry of another handsome male employee 😈

Oooh !!! I can only imagine how the next update will be .

To add to everything the precap was simply like a

on top of a delicious update .

In a nutshell Brilliant , Excellent & Perfect update .

Keep it up Marvee !!! You're 1 heck of a writer !! 👏

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Lastly my heartfelt

for Thread 2 of "Untold Emotions"

May you have many ,many more & it triples & quadruples the success of its former .

My

to you ...

Oh wow what an update marvee.totally fab.loved it

First of all congrats 4 new thead

its deadly awesome n soo romantic
loved this part a lot

cont asap
cant wait

Congrats on the new thread...