MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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fiza ahmed

@drfizaahmed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#961

true it was the most complex concept u picked up..hats off to u for that..as asa kuch koi likhy ga..thn itna acha...

thn it was way practical...it has nthing, out n out romantic, no false confesions,

loved whn u didnt let thm confesed thy love each other...there are bounds more stronger thn naming feelings..

rahul and pranve relation...sweet inncocnt...n perfectly handled

mayank-pranve, rahul-nupur...amazingly done...leting thm except the new parent...loved it

true human feelings of longings, first love but life doesnt sta like tht u need to take a step further...though the most dificult thing but yet..it was beautfully weaved by u...

it was one of ur bst...

it was an out stanidng journey to be a part of...waitng for u to str a new magic...

lvly...

Ramadan Kareem

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Pradnya

@Prada_176

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#962

Part 21

Mayank's fear can be understood with his past, Nupur taught him to trust in god and past will not repeat, liked her ways of convincing Mayank.

Nupur made decision about pranav's surname. Boys were so happy about baby and they want sister ……… so cute

Last part was heart touching.

Epilogue

When I read part 21 I assumed that may be next part will be last one and it did happened, feeling sad as I wont be able read MN magical updates, reading your update was completely bliss.

Fantastic epilogue, you showed beautiful bond of siblings and it is indeed fragile magic yet strongest and strengthen with love. I loved you message at the end.

Thank a ton for this beautiful and magical journey. This one of the best FF I have read and you did complete justice with story and characters. Every emotion love, romance, care, helplessness, insecurities, fears and confusions so perfectly penned down. I like each and every line of your story and your are getting better and better with each and every magical story

Come soon with another story.

HAPPY FREINDSHIP DAY

Love you & God Bless You

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-Annu-

@-Annu-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#963

I read it when u Updated it...but commenting nw...sorryyy...😳
n i knew...i had this feeling...u gonna end it nw...😔
BUT fantuuu...WOT a BEAUTIFUL Ending...a COMPLETE n HAPPY FAMILY😳😍👏
i luvd Rahul n pranav Fight...n plus...i luvd the pamperng they Gave to Piya...😆
Luvlyyy Bonding btween the Bro n sis...😳
JUST LUVD IT FANTU...❤️

u made the Relationship of Mayank n Nupur...to go Sooo Beautifullyyy...the Comfort ...there understand...There submitting to each other...there care for each other...awww...BEAUTIFULLYYY😍