MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

awww my magician PT..*hugsss*...u alwz make me lost in d dreamland of MN..thnx a ton for alwz givin such magical xtremely soulful updates..gosh d beauty of MN's relationship in this ff is truly vry vry much admirable.. n take my word u r NOT AT ALL rushing nythin b/w MN..so isi tarah continue d story n also isi tarah continue fullfilling ur promise to me..hehe...

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Mulan.

@mulan.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#362

WOW!!! BEAUTIFUL CHAPTER KINZU!!!! SO MUCH HAPPENING AND BESTIE U R NOT RUSHING SIS!!! I LOVE THE WAY U ARE PROGRESSING THR RELATION AND STRENGTENING THR BOND!!!!! MOREOVER I M LOVING THE WAY U R MAKING THESE TWO BROKEN FAMILIES TURN INTO ONE WHOLE, LOVING COMPLETE FAMILY!!!!! WLOVE U BESTIE!!!! :)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

lovely...

i loved the way both were showing their concern for each other... the kids wit mayank were too cute!!!! 😊

n then the shy mayank... awww 😳

hopefully we see them falling in love soon... 😳

BTW, m liking the pace of the story!! not rushed, not slow!!!

keep writing more, thx for the pm... 😊 God bless !!!!

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

strictness and commands sometimes convey a great gesture-possessiveness which is a must in any relation.
its started.

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

beautiful part...really loved it...

do continue soon

thanks 4 the pm

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Trouble

@trouble_006

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

hey

thnx for the pm

wonderful update as usual

i luvd the part where he gives the flower...

there's still hesitation as well as a sense of comfort in their relationship...

you are describing its growth very nicely

continue soon

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nerdndproud

@nerdndproud

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

finally they're moving on...it was great.

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

Kinzuuu another amazing update hun...

they way u r developing mayur's relationship- hats of to u...

slowly and gradually mayank and nupur had started their journey ... journey towards magic... they didnt know whats the future of their relationship...??? but their dedication, responsibility and mostly respect towards each other helped them to make their bonding so strong... i loved when nups called mayank and asked him if he had taken his lunch or not.. I loved her authoritative tone… and nups this attempt made mayank happy…..

Kids were so cute and adorable. They made get well soon card for mayank… loved d kids convo with myank… it was so sweet and nice…mayu tooks flowers for nups.. but he was too shy to give them to nups… nups was touched by kids act…both kiddo loved her a lot…

And at the end mayur scene was out of the world… GOSH I just loved it.. mayu was ruffling her hair…and confessed that she already took place in his heart…loved the way mayu and nupur were snuggled to each other…and they felt so content and comfortable with each others company…

U know what-----Many marriages would be better if the husband and the wife clearly understood that they are on the same side…..

GOD bless mayur

Fantastic update dear

Simply rocking

Loved it to d core

Keep it up