MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#371

outstanding update

luved the kids n mayank part...rahul n pranav made cards fr nupur n mayank buy flowers fr nupur...sooo sweet

luved mayur phone convo...n the way their relation moving in smooth pace was really gud 2c

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Irum.

@Irum.

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#372

The update is very very beautiful.😊Fantasia I must say that u r a fantastic writer.U understand the pace,contrast ,and how imagery plays in the theater of reader's mind.

I eagerly wait for the update...

Keep up the good work👍🏼

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Varshini

@varsh-mayur

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#373

amazing...so cute mayank rahul and pranav

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Mamoona

@Silent.Dreamer

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#374

i am in love with the cute adorable kids, and Lovely Update again!

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#375

awesome part. and i dont think your rushing anything..

nupur didn't know what to feel about mayank, but she was too tired to think about it anymore.

mayank took the kids to the office. they told him that they had made get well soon cards for nupur..and mayank didn't have anything for her. so he bought flowers for her, aww thats sweet

the kids gave her their cards..but mayank didn't give the flowers. he was too shy? lol.

but finally he did put it in her hand..and she woke up at that moment..so cute. she fell asleep in his arms, aww!

thanks for the pm

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Mini4

@Mini4

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#376

nice update😛...

liked d way mayank was taking care of both d kids...he was strict as well as linient towards dem like a PERFECT FATHER.👍🏼

HE WAS CARING,SWEET,OBEDIENT HUSBAND...A PERFECT HUSBAND FOR NUPUR👍🏼..

liked d way mayank held nupur in a soothing embrace tpowards d end😳..

also liked dway nupur was ordering mayank😉.

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#377

have I said this before? that the broken souls are the ones who bond the best? If not, this is the true charm of this story. Appealing.

I loved the update hun. I am seeing how he is struggling with the feeling he has for two women. He probably wont name his feeling for Nupur as love but then it could be more like an understanding love. :)

Awesome. ❤️

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#378

loving the slow change coming b/w dem love will surely make it's way soon 😊

n ye uncle aunty jaldi khtam karo na .

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#379

Angelll...what a chap, lady :))

Loved EVERY bit, from start to end :))

When Nupur called him to warn him about lunch...
When Mayank wished she could see that he had done what she said...
When Mayank loved her care and strictness "God, she is a sweetheart" Sighhh this line made me grin HUGE...
The way Mayank got scared when Rahul-Pranav asked him if he dint have anything for Nupur...
Mayank's care for Nupur...
The way Mayank was shy to give her the flowers but later he put one under her hand...
And the last bit, where he pulls her into his arms and she falls asleep feeling safe and protected; the first time in 5 years...

Something tells me Mayank will probably have the best sleep he has had in 5 years too :)

It was all GREAT :)

Hugs for such a lovely chapter, Angel...and you arent rushing anything...so carry on weaving the magic between Mayank and Nupur :)