MN - The Fragile Magic ** Epilogue - Pg 140.

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#341

Yay! finally caught up with commenting on this ff!! :)

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Sanchari

@--Sanchu--

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#342

wow...awww...so loved it...

that was fantastic...

i could actually feel both their situations...i am all teary now...

too good!!!...awesome...

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#343

awesome part.

mayank just kept the photo of nitesh back, while nupur actually looked at kanchi.

nupur started massaging his forehead, and im sure he felt good. she asked him about kanchi..and he said he'll love her forever. she felt kind of odd hearing that, i can totally understand.

she held nitesh's photo and stood in the balcony. no wonder she got cold in the morning..and mayank was so concerned. thats nice, its time we saw him taking care of her! :)

they admitted her to the hospital, and mayank was telling her to take care of herself. he even kissed her hand and told her she's important, aww so cute!

thanks for the pm

PS: i edited my comment on pg 39

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Mitali

@...Mitali...

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#344

kinzu excellent part...

plz plz plz pm me next tym...

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#345

Lovely update Kinza

loved the moments between kids and nupur my eyes get moist

n last was 😍 thnx for the pm

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Sania

@dynamic_doll

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#346

beautiful update Kinza!

i loved it

continue soon

nd thnx for the pm 😊

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Tasnim

@C_O_O_L

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#347

awesome updt...
finally they r coming close...
cont soon

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Gul

@DhanakZ

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#348

So sorry for late Comment

The part Was beautiful so beautiful

I loved it

The way their relation is growing is beautiful

thanks for Pm

cont soon

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Pradnya

@Prada_176

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#349

Hey Kinza,

I have read every single FF of yours and this time you come with complete different concept and that on Mayur, I wonder how every time you come with such brilliant and unique stories.

Part 1

Second marriage is something terrible and really feels bad who experiences it. But in reality people do move on because life never stops and we have to move on with new hopes and desires.

Nice start …

Part 2

You have aptly and beautifully penned down their nervousness and awkwardness. Combination of past and present is beautifully written.

I can understand Rahul's feeling it is very difficult to accept someone new as our parent.

I like Dia and her concern of Mayank