Life Out Of Control #2 - Page 64

Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Ohh! I loved the update ..

Glad Armaan now realized that his mom had been right about Ridz's feelings. .and the fact that, Ridz loved him too much to lose him ..He's as much a keeper for her as she's for him .. =D

Aaah ! i so love the way Armaan irritates Ridz.. it soo funny and indeed embarrassing for her.. but then its cute too <3 and gosh! Lovely in Armaan's dream.. damn! i fell off laughing at that.. thinking of his wide-eyed, horror-struck expressions.. that must be a sight .. hahahah.. in the beginning i was actually doubtful if that was really a dream ?!! 😆

Surprise waiting for Ridz..wow !! m excited to know what ll the lover boy plan for her 😉 m waiting for it..

Continue soon!

love
Vini

Originally posted by: jeflkjfkljfkj

Hello!! 😃

Lovely update Sanaa.. loved it. It was just perfect and had all the elements in it-love, comedy and loads of cuteness. Again, extremely well written and described. Its like everything is happening in front of you. Beautiful!

So I'm going to give you a big big comment today 😃 Since I love your FanFic so so much!

Okay, I'm going to tell you the parts I loved in this update.

She enlarged a photo of him on her phone and stared it, feeling a slow smile creep up on her face. She really was acting like a teenager with her first crush wasn't she? But this wasn't a crush. It was love. Her love which just multiplied every second.

Awwie, so cute!!:-):-)

Well, she probably was asleep. Now how was he supposed to sleep without hearing her soothing voice? He pouted as he landed himself in bed, his hair tousled.

LOL!! Aw, why is your Armaan so cute, huh? Why, why? He's so darn adorable. I can totally imagine him pouting and then diving on the bed..<3 Wish guys like him really existed. 😃

From reminiscing his moments with her. Taking his phone, he typed in,

I love you xxx

I couldn't help but smile at his. Your writing is so beautiful Sanaa! :) And this was NOT cheesy, gay or whipped... it was just pure touching and cute! And whoever doesn't agree with me is probably a retard!

He felt her kisses on his face as she tried to get him up again. That was just sending him into deeper slumber! Oh the heavenly feel of her lips on his skin!

LOL, awww...<3 AR IS SO CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE CUTE...x100... <3 <3 <3

However, he wasn't going to give in that easily. He loved his sleep too!

"Uh uh.." he replied and turned over, away from her, his face facing the other side.

LOL...haha... 😆 Man, my love grows for him with every update you give. 😳

"Armaan jee.." He frowned hearing that. 'Jee'? Where did that come from? "Uthiye na. Maine aapke liye dekho kaisa breakfast laayi hoon jee. Char omlettes, aur aath toasts. Phir aapko paanch aloo ke parathe bhi khaane hai jee."

"What the hell Riddhima?!" He muttered to himself and turned around, only to see sister Lovely staring down at him, batting her eyelashes with a huge smile and a pink uniform!

"What THE F***???" and Armaan sat up on his bed, his eyes wide with fear, shock and horror screaming out in bold! He looked around, and true, the sun was streaming in, the setting was the same, only, there was no Lovely standing at the edge of his bed, and neither was Riddhima there.

"Bad dream, Armaan. Bad dream." He whispered to himself in shock as he blinked his eyes rapidly, his heart beat racing. Without thinking further, he rushed to the bathroom, to splash cold water on his face.

ROFL 🤣 Oh, my god! Lovely dream must have been horrific. Poor Armaan... first no sleep and then a nightmare... 🤣 How I wish Riddhima could be here right now. ❤️ Plus, I hope Armaan is able to sleep again after the nightmare. 🤣 So jaa Armaan, so jaa...nahi toh lovely aa jayegi...LMAO... 🤣

"Armaan, have you started preparing for them?" Riddhima asked in a small whisper, but Armaan was busy frowning, his head immersed in other thoughts. Why was Lovely smiling at him like that behind the desk? Or did she always smile at him, and he was noticing it just today? Gulping, he shifted closer to his basket, trying to hide behind her.

🤣🤣🤣 🤣 Poor guy! The nightmare must have really got on to him. 😆 Hilarious!

"Tera naa hona, jaane kyun hona hi hai. Tumse hi din hota hai, Surmayi sham aati hai, tumse hi tumse hi," they momentarily forgot their conversation as they saw Sid and Muskaan singing and dancing along with those lyrics.

LOL!! I can totally imagine this. And it makes me miss DMG even more. :(

"Bhaag ke chalein kya?"he winked and Muskaan's eyes gleamed.

"Haan, mujhe toh bachpan se bhaag ke shaadi karne ka bohot mann tha!"

"Le," Rahul put in. "Sasurjee ke saamne meri vaat lagaayi. Agar bhaag ke shaadi karni tha toh mujhse kehti. At least sasurjee ke saamne jhukna toh nahin padta."

"Tu.. chaddo ji! Tenu poochna hi bekaar hai. Aaj subha mujhe ice cream chahiye thi voh bhi nahin mili! Huh..Bade aaye bhaag ke shaadi karne waale." Evidently, the reason Muskaan was pissed was now out as she turned to face him.

LOL!! RM will always be RM, no matter what! My mind keeps going back to how they didn't come back together in 'DILL MILL GAYEE' which is really sad. Anyhow, they are so cute in your FF :) Awww...<3

ROFL...RM fights <3 They are always hilarious! I'm sure Rahul will try to patch things up with her by getting her some icecream. I'm looking forward to that scene <3

She turned to face him and seeing his kiddish, 'I want it MY way' look, she couldn't help but smile.

I don't blame her. Even I couldn't stop smiling at his cute antics.

"How did you turn into sister Lovely? It was so random and so out of the blue!" He looked up at her and saw a huge smile on her face, with her eyebrows raised up out of complete surprise and amusement. When he finished, she closed her eyes, giggling to her heart's extent about the dream that Armaan had seen. She could actually picture his reaction! And Oh how adorable he looked, even now with that confused look hitting a home run inside her heart.

LOL! 😆 Armaan is SO CUTE!! <3

The AR katrina convo was so damn cute and adorable. I can totally imagine them... KaSu... in the hospital... and it is beautiful. I can't stop smiling. Oh, how I love this <3

She remembered how Armaan annoyed her in the library while she tried to read up about the brain anatomy. He would hug her, kiss her randomly, making her loose her concentration much to the librarian's astonishment and disapproval, while she tried to get as much information as she could out of the book. Finally, embarrassed with the glares the lady was giving both of them, to which Armaan just smirked and winked at, she shut the book, and brought it home. Now it lay on her bed, along with other things, waiting to be picked up or strewn across the floor like always.

LMAO!! Armaan will be Armaan <3 And AR will always be AR. I love it when Armaan annoys her like that. It is so adorable..takes my heart away!! :)

Life sucks, was the motto he had been chanting to himself for the rest of the day. But one glimpse of his basket at the end of the day finally made the whole day worthwhile.

Awww:-)

"Aww..mera shweetu.."

"I'm not your sweetu and don't baby talk me..!" he complained, forcing a wider smile on her face.

LOL!! Extremely cute. 😊

And loved the whole gang discussion, Sid answering for Armaan, Armaan getting pissed at that... I'm sure they'll come up with some wonderful for Riddhima. It HAS to be beautiful...after all it is ARMAAN MALIK who is preparing for a date. Oh, man! CAN'T CAN'T CAN'T WAIT to see what it is. Please Sanaa.. update fast, please?

Wonderful writing and description again. All the AR scenes were priceless. Plus, you also added some comic DMG gang scenes... loved those! If you can, please continue adding more crazy gang scenes... I really miss them.

Take care! 🤗

-Deby

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