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Thank you everyone who have liked and commented so far.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~it was just not enough~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Part:12

PAST

They stood in each other's embrace for what seemed to be eternity. None of them had the urge or will power to let go. A honking car broke their moment and Maan reluctantly tried to pull himself back, but that is when he felt Geet go limp in his arms and he realized that she has fainted.

The whole peace of the hospital was broken when Maan Singh Khurana barged inside with Geet in his arms yelling at anyone and everyone who dared to cross his path. Seeing her almost lifeless body turned him into a man possessed. The Doctor-in-charge ran out of his cabin to look into the commotion.

"Is that you Mr.Khurana?"

"I don't have time for your questions Doctor, treat her now", he barked.

"Please come down Mr.Khurana, she will be attended, can you put her down on the stretcher?"

"No, I will carry her"

He was getting beyond the Doctor's tolerance level, still he managed quietly,

"We have rules Mr. Khurana, please put her down on the stretcher, everything will be taken care of, why don't you carry out the other formalities while she is being treated?"

The irritation in the Doctor's voice made him see sense, what was he doing he wondered, he put her down.

The moment he saw the ward boys wheel her away from him, he felt a part of him tear and this time he had a life changing epiphany, he is in love, and he felt good.

*********

He has spent hours attending meetings without bothering about time. It just flew by and he never realized, but sitting outside Geet's cabin, for 30 minutes, waiting for the Doctor to come out with her verdict, seemed like eternity. Just when he was debating if he could wait any longer or to bang open the door, the Doctor came out.

"How is she, Doctor?"

"She is fine Mr. Khurana, I guess she is in shock, nothing serious, she is awake now, you can go and meet her. But don't stress much."

"And when can I take her home?"

"Oh in an hour, I will get you the prescription, make sure she has them and rest."

"Thank you Doctor and I am Sorry for my previous behavior."

"Its alright Mr. Khurana, I understand, we are used to it."

*********

Geet heard the cabin door open and she knew it was him. She could die out of embarrassment. Every time she met him, she was in a vulnerable position and he had to rescue her out of it. He is a busy man, he must have had to leave his all important meetings to bring her to hospital and tend her.

"Babaji'"

His heart was thudding in his chest; he was prepared to see her sprawled across the bed, but the sight in front of him amused him. She was sitting on the bed and cribbing about something looking towards the ceiling with a cute frown on her face.

He did not know how and where to begin, so he cleared his throat to gain her attention.

"Ah'.How are you feeling now?"

"I am fine, thank you for everything."

Silence.

About a quarter to an hour has passed without either of them uttering a single word. They both knew they should speak, but did not know what. Finally the nurse came to their rescue and declared Geet was to be discharged. She helped Geet out of the bed and stand on her feet. The painful expression on her face did not go unnoticed by Maan.

"Geet, are you having any problem?"

"No, it's just that I feel tired, but I will manage."

He knew she was not fine, so he threw all rationality out of the window and picked her up in his arms and strode out of the hospital. The nurse gaped at the scene with her mouth open and Geet was too stunned to react. She got back her senses when she felt Maan tucking her into the passenger seat and putting on the seat-belt.

"Maan, I am fine, please, you carry on, I will take a cab"

But, instead of a reply all she got was a glare. So she began again,

"See, please, don't worry, you must be running late for your work, you are a busy man, I am perfectly alright."

She was getting on his nerves now, why cannot she keep quiet for 15 minutes like she was in the cabin.

"Will you stop talking?", he finally barked.

Geet was shocked at his outburst, she made a fat face, turned her entire attention outside the window away from him and waited for him to start the car.

After an hour of silent drive, Maan parked the car in front of her house. That he remembered the directions to her house from the previous night strangely made her happy, but she was still angry at him, how dare he shout at her just when she was being considerate? Her chain of thought was broken when he honked the car indicating her to come out.

She came out of the car and waited for him to say something.

He was at a total loss of words so he did the only thing he could, he drove away.

Silent tears rolled down her eyes, not even a goodbye, she thought.

**********

Her parents were hysterical when they came to know about her accident and hospital visit. After hours of convincing and assurances from Geet, they came back to being normal. Rano patted her to sleep. But for the first time in her life, her mother's soothing touch did nothing to her aching heart, the only thought that crossed her mind was he drove away without looking back, so was it only charity, the mere thought made her breath choke in her heart.

Rano sensed her restlessness,

"What happened Beta?"

"Nothing Ma, I am just tired."

"Be more careful from now on Geet, we have no one other than you, do you realize what would happen to me and your Papaji if something happened to you?"

"I am perfect Ma, and about today, someone saved me and took care of me till I was fine, Babaji is looking over us Ma."

"Who took you to hospital Geet?"

Her heart gave a flip with his mere mention, but still she managed to say,

"Woh'it was Maan Khurana, you know Yash's elder brother."

"Well, we should thank him properly then, how about we invite him for dinner this weekend? I will send your Papaji to invite him, what say?"

Geet knew he might not be interested in having a small dinner in her home which was humble according to his standards, but she also remembered how considerate he has been during the Annual Function dinner, but when it came to her Papaji, she did not want to take a chance. Even she knew they must thank him properly and dinner was a good idea, but what if he refused, in that case her Papaji should not face the refusal, it rather be her.

"Ummm'..Ma'.don't bother Papaji, I will go myself and invite him."

"Ok Beta, sleep now."

Rano kissed her forehead and left the room, switching off the lights.

*********

It was not a good day for the employees of Khurana Constructions. Maan Singh Khurana was in his worst mood and it was bad news.

Her complaining eyes, which he saw from his rear view mirror as he drove away leaving her at her door steps, did not let him rest. How he wished to turn the car back and run to her and take her in his arms to kiss away that frown, but he didn't, he couldn't.

He was suffering every living moment and in turn made sure no one around him had a moment of peace as well.

He walked out of the Board meeting after cancelling it mid-way out of sheer frustration and slumped into his chair. What was happening to him, this is insanity, but he was helpless.

Just when he was about to scream his heads out, his cabin intercom rang.

"What?", he roared making the receptionist almost faint.

"S-i-r-r'there is a lady here to meet you."

"I don't want any disturbance now or ever, am I clear?"

"Y-e-s-s S-i-r-r'"

Just when he was about to put down the receiver, he heard the receptionist say,

"I am sorry Ms. Handa, Sir is busy, he won't be able to meet you now."

He felt his heart will burst out of his chest'..Ms. Handa'..Geet?

He ran out of his cabin towards the reception as if his life depended on it.

*********

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Edited by justme_12 - 13 years ago
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wonderful update...
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