Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

^^not even thinking about the next update right now...may be mid july :)

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belle_moi

@belle_moi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: esquisse
^^not even thinking about the next update right now...may be mid july :)

What the heck! You love to torture dont u?

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@-Cherry-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Hey Aria, long time sweetie. Your FF is probably the only FF that i follow, i adore your writing style, it so unique and just beautiful. The way you describe everything is sp precise, and just gorgeously done. And i just love reading every part that you've written, this update was just amazing, i love the way armaan cuts ridhima off just by kissing her, their sweet innocence is just beautiful. And i love seeing the way their relationship is progressing, and the way they've got to know each other and let each other open more towards one another. Its beautiful.

Loved the way Armaan opens up a little and little about their past, and even if it's a little confusing for us to follow, it's just lovely. And the last bit is really a cliffhanger, i hope to see the next part soon.

Luv Swancy

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

So, the reason for my presence on this thread is my laziness. I'm feeling ugh right now to even search for IoL. So am gonna bug you for the next part here itself.

A .. UPDATE SOOON!! Angel misses FOTW so much. I even have the farewell speech ready (not). Again - UPDATE SOOON!! *humph*

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: night13
R! for Future! 😉

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Love is blind, and how it's always seen from others perspective vs your own. There's a trick to giving a closure, it always beings with the vision to recognize when a life stage or a relationship is over or yet to really begin, thus letting go! It means leaving what's over without denying its validity or its past importance to our lives. It involves a sense of future, a belief that every exit line is an entry, that we are moving up, rather than out! Armaan and Riddhima has finally moved ahead instead of going back, e.g. growing up is a pain! The much needed closure between Armaan and Ridhima was finally put to a rest. :)

I await for the moment when a father gives to his son, both laugh and when a son gives to his father, both cry!

Great Update!

Absolutely, couldn't agree more. Although I do think, its easy to overlook that and be critical of things or doubt certain decisions at times...all part of growing up I suppose. There is a sense of closure between Armaan and Riddhima, much needed as you mentioned in this update...now everything turns over to a game of choices and mending broken fences...should be interesting to explore.

Thanks a lot Aarya, glad you enjoyed the update.

Edited by esquisse - 14 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: -Cherry-
Hey Aria, long time sweetie. Your FF is probably the only FF that i follow, i adore your writing style, it so unique and just beautiful. The way you describe everything is sp precise, and just gorgeously done. And i just love reading every part that you've written, this update was just amazing, i love the way armaan cuts ridhima off just by kissing her, their sweet innocence is just beautiful. And i love seeing the way their relationship is progressing, and the way they've got to know each other and let each other open more towards one another. Its beautiful.

Loved the way Armaan opens up a little and little about their past, and even if it's a little confusing for us to follow, it's just lovely. And the last bit is really a cliffhanger, i hope to see the next part soon.

Luv Swancy

Glad to know you enjoyed the update, and to see you in the thread after ages. Thanks a lot Swancy. The last bit was every bit intentional...😆

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice part
continue soon

Thanks a lot Riddss :)

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-Aarya-

@-Aarya-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Have you listen to your Muse today... it's telling you to visit Pablo!

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belle_moi

@belle_moi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: esquisse
Working on it A ;)

make it fast:)

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

OYE I didnt get a pm for this update! hmph!

anyway, add me to your pm list now!

coming to this update, brilliant job as always! long, adorable and sexy! a perfect combination of all the elements! i do hope armaan doesnt get into any trouble with shashank due to his father, however now i dont think armaan's dad is that bad, i dont know, i just dont get the same negative vibes from his father's character anymore! maybe because of the revelation of his interest in painting, that is something father son share in this story, it doesnt seem so negative!

as for ridhima's brother's death, i dont understand why exactly armaan's father blames himself for it, i dont get that part so please elaborate a little more on that part of the story in your next update!

i LOVED the part when ridhima and armaan are in the car and ridhima confesses about her jealousy, it was very cute and sooo sexy on armaan's part!

fabulous update! =D

cheers

sonia