Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51 - Page 17

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey aria
great part
finally armaan's back!!! yey!!!
it was a cute part
will post my comments later
gtg now

Originally posted by: -Dee-

Um not really surprised that Armaan shares such a warm and comfort relation with his mother. I loved the easy conversation there. Seems like Armaan is comfortable with his father - his casual reference about his dad's presence the previous night.

Despite the absence of any AR moments, this chapter was a treat. I really liked the subtle romance going on there - just in the way they care for each other. And so Armaan is finally going to get back his sketchbook??? 😆

Thanks for the PM.

Dee😊

P.S. - Don't you think A little bit mad requires a quick update too.😳

Originally posted by: olive.green

Hi sisgeo (can I call you that?). I want to give a little more thought and time for the next part that deals with AR's upcoming meet... so stopped where I did . Yep, small updates (although this wasn't exactly small just not a super lengthy one like some of the previous ones) are the way to go it seems.

Will try and update soon.

Thanks a lot!

Aria

Originally posted by: -Aliya-

This update was too adorable Aria! Seeing the difference in how Armaan speaks with his mother compared to that woman who, in Armaan's eyes, ruined his family was interesting. I wonder if the two women will be shown to come face to face? to settle things once and for all, for Armaan's sake since he was still shaken by what happened to his family? or is that something that won't happen? or have i simply forgotten if those issues were dealt with? Sorry if i have

Anyway back to this part being incredibly cute. I could imagine Armaan's boyish expressions at pretty much being caught as a lovesick boyfriend by his mother. And of course i have to admire how you make even the smallest Anjali-Riddhima parts a delight to read. you bring back good memories of dmg..

i really like the way you write Aria. Simple, cut to the chase, not too much description but not too less either - it goes exceptionally well with this particular ff of yours because this one, in my opinion, is your most romantic AR ff and i'm glad you didn't go to mushy romance. Well as least mushy as dmg can get 😆 no really i love this ff. keep it up Aria! =)

Originally posted by: sonia_92

And so she updates!

I didnt get a pm for this but thankfully i checked the forum for updates just now and THANK YOU for updating! Finally! How many months has it been?

Anyway, better late than never! i'm GLAD they're both up again, i hated the part about armaan being unconscious but glad that everything's better now! Please ab rulaana matt yaar, the next part better come soon, i want to read about how they meet now =D

p.s: add me to the pm list right away ;)

love

sonia