Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

thank-you for finally updating! thanks for the pm! I loved it! I cannot wait to see his mom's reaction! she seemed quite nice in the last update!
update again soon, I beg you
cheers
Sonia

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sisgeo

@sisgeo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Beautifull...i was smiling throughout the update..this was so cute...thanks for pm and update soon..

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: bary

ok i am gonna reply u first read in peace coz i am sort thinking of replying u every time i start reading the update,typical not so patient me😆
@bold,isnt he? u know some times more than wanting some one like armaan in my life(which i am strictly opposing myself now,since i am on ending of my teenage,armaan is no dream man**hiding from chappals😆**,he was once ok coming back to point),i really wanted a friend like atul like he is ridhz,sapna,muskaan,he is just u know friend some times its pretty rare...
i had this avi of ARA(wow its nearer version of ERA😆)

@red,u have no idea,really then i felt atleast sapna/muskaan and riddhima/shilpa exit are a lot more better
🤗here is your hug and thank u soo much for updating it and i am gonna have holidays and i am gonna ride a roller coaster of pablo in order...continuously...

woow! so you are over the Armaan crush finally now Swetha!!?? lol...yeah. Atul was always portrayed as the quintessential friend and I have to agree with you, its rare but not impossible but if you do find a by udd like Atul, don't let him go...😆

I tried using that AVI in my display pic, but couldn't get it to work. :S

Hope you have a relaxing break. Hugs to you too 🤗

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#184

Originally posted by: bary
OMG that's simple...and believe me it was the BEST compliment i could give to this part...the apprehension,interaction,satisfaction of finally able to know fo'sho about each other every thing is just superbly simple and amazing,some times simple is the best thing ever...
u know i sort of felt bad for shashank,one more character who is been misunderstood in show...he totally stands right in his position there and here in not accepting the relationship of AR...i also like that didnt stop AR from loving each other...oh i liked the whole kiss and caught scene soo cute
sketch book???where is my lovely sketch book in here,well finally in atul hands,huh?i missed the sketch book soo much
oh armaan's mom with armaan's girl with armaan's sketch book...awkward...lol,i try my share to be funny
thanks for pm
swetha
p.s.betn did u change ur name back??or is it always this one??coz i feel like i saw another name??well just so u know i love this more😳

I was looking forward to reading your comment to this part. I thrashed two other drafts before settling on this one. Good to see you liked the simplicity of this part, I wasn't sure if readers were expecting something more dramatic but then again thats never been Pablos. And I'm surprised no on so far has complained about the length of this part, because I truly believe this is the shortest update by far in Pablos for a long time :D

I'm hoping to wrap this FF up soon so I had to get the story moving ahead and hence why you see both their parents in this part and not an exclusive AR part. Although this re-union of sorts is incomplete at this point despite the kiss ;)

The sketchbook is finding its way back to its rightful owner Shwetha :) Yes, I had changed my username to Esquisse in between for a year, and got back to olive.green. I agree I prefer this one too.

Thank you for your comment Shwetha.

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desire_20

@desire_20

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#185

Yayy update! I liked it? But kinda short? :/ or maybe I'm just greedy lol update sooner this time!

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ClumsyIntrovert

@ClumsyIntrovert

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

awesome update!thank u for d PM!plz. update it soon!

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fathima

@fatzfathi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#187

greatt part..loved it..so good to c evrything coming bck to normal...dnt know wats up wit shashank though..! but seriously hope u wil giv brains to him soon..!😆

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: -Dee-
Don't you think that was somehow incomplete? I don't know why but I feel that. Anyways, I like the way there's still time for the actual confrontation between Shashank and AR. I like how the former is using his head unlike in the real show. If only they'd taken time to understand the situation. The conversation between AR was simple yet so expressive. Nothing too ovetly romantic but all the same. Anjali barging in one their moment was embarassing but cute - better Anjali than Armaan's mom. I liked the sisterly banter. Seems so much real - two sisters arguing with each other about their clandestine boyfriends. In the end, the show didn't tie lose ends and it lost so many precious moments and beautiful character s. Pardon me, I am just a bit nostalgic. Where is the sketch book by the way?

Dee.
P.S. - the almost quicker update was happy surprise and looking out for another one soon😊

Yes it was. And it was intentionally so, partly because of time constraints and partly because of how I want to take this forward. I needed to have this update out there, if you know what I mean just to get back into things...so yeah..trust you to pick up on it! 😆To be honest, I am not that comfortable with this whole writing about romance thingy..so a lot of that has been kept subtle intentionally. Somehow if I try and change that now, it won't be the same. Not that I could, even if I wanted to <lol> I was having second thoughts about Anjali barging in on the whole kiss thingy but she was a better choice than anybody else. And it was a nice continuation of the rekindling of the sisterhood if you will...between these two.This re-union of sorts between AR is terribly incomplete still, there are loads to talk about..and heal. Will get there eventually, which isn't far away ;)

In my head, the sketchbook fell off Riddhima's hands when she got up impulsively to demand that kiss from her beau😳, it was Atul who picks it up right at the end of the update if you read carefully.

I'd like to believe another update is headed your way soon ;)

Thanks a lot Dee.

cheers,

Aria

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: rtjks
superb part. Thanks for PM. Update soon

Thank you :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: sonia_92
thank-you for finally updating! thanks for the pm! I loved it! I cannot wait to see his mom's reaction! she seemed quite nice in the last update!
update again soon, I beg you
cheers
Sonia

You are welcome for the pm. Yea, AR cannot hide anymore, its all out in the open ;)

Will update soon.

Thanks a lot for your comment Sonia :)

cheers,

Aria