Pablo's Muse#2 - AR Part 35(Completed) Sept.1 Pg 51

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

hey aria
great part
finally armaan's back!!! yey!!!
it was a cute part
will post my comments later
gtg now

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@coffee_beans

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

God, what do I say about this brilliant piece of writing now.. Like all I feel is how come I missed this one?!! Its one of those meticulously articulated stuff that keeps you glued till you reach the end..and when you finish it, you're left craving for more..!

This whole story and concept is beautiful, Aria (btw, u got a lovely name, if I may add that :D) ... brought me a step closer to Art too.. Art's in words too and that this FF boasted of entirely! The character of AR was just perfect.. no mushy romance et al still the feelings so poignant...I was simply in awe.

The slow and gradual revelation of mysteries with any drama was commendable...best was 'between the lines' part that completely engrossed me and swept me away...

I shall definitely, as soon as I can, catch up with ur other works.. You're an amazing writer and you should write so much more.. its all so intriguing, the way you pen down! :)

Hope to see an update soon(er).. and do remember to include me in ur PM list too!!

xoxo

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Um not really surprised that Armaan shares such a warm and comfort relation with his mother. I loved the easy conversation there. Seems like Armaan is comfortable with his father - his casual reference about his dad's presence the previous night.

Despite the absence of any AR moments, this chapter was a treat. I really liked the subtle romance going on there - just in the way they care for each other. And so Armaan is finally going to get back his sketchbook??? 😆

Thanks for the PM.

Dee😊

P.S. - Don't you think A little bit mad requires a quick update too.😳

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

^^A little bit mad yes!! it sure does, you know I have little notes for it on my phone...errm...that doesn't really help, does it? <lol>

May be one more PM update first then everything else ;)

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

^^ So long as the pablo keeps on painting his muse on a canvas or in his leather bound sketchbook and the pangs of lunacy keep on attacking until cured..

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Yes, if everything goes to plan, it should be more of Pablos...I'm going to try and write as much as I can within a short period of time because every break means I have to go back and re-read the entire thing myself. After 29 parts that is going to take out entire evenings!

It's a good thing you don't read Inferno, other wise you'd be asking about Cupid too :D Just that many incomplete ffs floating around me...😆 that needs completion and its been one long break after another! I hope Lady Bug (Garima) isn't stalking this thread right now, if you are. IoL is on that break now.😆

Edited by olive.green - 13 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: bary

You are kidding me...I LOVE ATUL(how i want a friend like him)...n He loves Anjali and so i love AA...some times they show such a good scenes of them that they actually made me think of future of AA and well i am also happy with RM track and BAM they spoiled it...rahul is gone...the only pair who lasted was ignored and i still dont know why the hell i followed the show for AA after KaSh(AR) when i should have known
did i said you when i read pablo it reminds me of good old days with the artisitc tadka...i think i did if not here i am again...
swetha

Hi Swetha, yeah I remember Atul was a sweet and a simple guy - he was pals with both Armaan and Ridz closer to her. These guys spoil t all those potential tracks... including RM? well i didn't watch it up that point, but I'm not surprised. Well in that case, I'm glad I included a bit of AA here ;) And I want to give you a hug for saying that pablo's reminds you of the good old days because thats been the whole idea...in many ways. Glad thats come across.

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: bary
oh you are truly turning yourself in to serial cvs killing us with small updates...lol...i dont mind though coz i like reading you updating though i like more with out stop like first
oh god armaan's mom is here...sounds like a cool one...
that lines and flowers are so armaanish...YIPPEE AR are gonna meet finally
thanks a lot for update and pms
swetha

But you didn't mind the end... sort of evil no? I thought it would be a perfect place to stop 😆 Well in a way, small updates are better than updates every so many months! I just hope I can write a few more this time before that inevitable gap comes along. Will update soon.

Thanks a lot Swetha

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Riddss
nice part
continue soon

Thanks a lot :)

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: fri42911
awesome update!!!!!!!!
done great job with AA scene.
beautifully written!!!!!!!
waiting for AR scene!!!!!!!
please continue soon!!!!!!!
and thanks for the pm.

Thanks a lot. Glad you enjoyed the update.

Will update soon :)

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