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Izzah

@virmaan-virika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: jiyaa
spechless

LOL! 😆 I hope in a good way speechless 😛

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Diyan

@Diyan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

this was such a sad part yaar...but the part where riddhima gave birth right beside armaan watching everything & him getting the chance to see his daughter just seconds before his death is the most touching part ever...who gets these kinda chance but felt bad for riddhima as well

in conclusion the whole story was superbly written

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mehak arora

@Mojo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: monaya-fan
LOL! 😆 keep preparing well for the next part cuz i cried while writing it! 😭 adn thanks sooo much but i promise to come back with another FF soon 😃 😃 i will surely continue soon! 😊

hehehe...well i hope the same does not happen to me...after reading the part which i will read now...and yayyy...you will come with a new one :D...will surely wait for it eagerlyyy :D:D :D

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mehak arora

@Mojo.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

USELESS...COMPLETELY USELESS, it seriously was completely useless preparing myself from not crying...but you wrote so well and the part was really emotional that i couldn't stop myself...urghhh...why did you have to write so good?...that was really a great ff trust me it is the best story one could ever read!!! and what if Armaan's not there but they still are together :):)...that was seriously very very good...and now it's finished so i am even sadder :(, and the thing that made me emotional the most was

Deer Papa I lov yu. Mama mis yu. Me two. Hapee birday. bye

that was really cute :')...i just wish that at least Arima could have got a chance to see his dad :(...but she can always see herself in the mirror...and she will see Armaan😆 i noe i noe poor joke :p...but srslii i loved it very much!!! hats off to you for such a great ff!!!

thank you so very much for the pm :):):)

and ya sorry for scaring you in the beginning😆😆😆

thanx

❤️mehak❤️

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Samica Mehta (Mrs.Mallik)

@ksgforever10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Heyyy🤗

You know what? OK..I am not saying this for the sake of just making you think that you wrote flawlessly fabulous!But actually I am in tears! I was in tears and will always be when I'll think of this part..Seriously..I used to curse you for giving this a sad ending and all..And I actually mein regert it..Cause yaaar I seriously can't tell you that how beautifully you wrote it!The whole idea, concept, executions were just out of this world...I actually should be saying this from the very beginnning but seriously you should not become a writer because if you do! Then you'll make everybody cry so much..Lolzz..Kiddin' !But seriously..Hats offf to you...Salute...I mean...The way riddhima went to the hospital..Then the the thing of 47 missed calls by armaan..Actually shaked me up..I was like.."Just relax..It is just an FF"...But then, as usually it didn'y work. i was like Yrrr should I leave it and not read it cz then I'll get emotional..And seriously things related to DMG & AR make me cry very easily! But then I read the whole thing...I especially loved the small note given to armaan by arima..And I love the name 'ARIMA' Czzz somewhere around it is like armaan! That was just too cute and emotional, and when she digged it in the ground, my expressions turned from an 'Aww' to tears. Actually you've done it sooo nicely that I can't even tell you! GOSH! And then this thing..Of Riddhima feeling his touch, his fragnance, and then all these things going away from her, was just one of the best part of this update.I could actually imagine the whole graveyard scene, of riddhima after being emotional and arima after digging the note, and walking away, with arima giggling and asking about AR sweet moments, and riddhima telling her. That was actually the sweetest of all...

I stand outside in the balcony where we had once shared many close moments together. I can't wait till I see you again, Armaan. I trace my fingers over a picture of both of us together. I love you'forever.

This paragraph, was like 'SPEECHLESS'

Honestly..I am in loveee with this OS ... or Short FF! And Hatss off to you for writing it like as if...Seriously, I felt like reading this part again and again and again! It made me cry, laugh, angry and everything...Thanksss a ton for writing such a beautifull Story on AR! And if you write more, then you dare not PM me! And write stories like this sooon..Love yahh..Muahhh...

-Samica...🤗

P.S-Sorry for the extra bakwaas..But Hats off once again..

Edited by ksgforever10 - 14 years ago

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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

awww

itsss amazinggg

bt y died :(

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Rabia Amla

@-RabiaKSGKaJen-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

IZZZAAAHHH! BABEEE II LOVEE THISS FF <3

OMG! ARMAAN HAD CANCEER!

II KNOWW WHYY YOU CALLD THE BABY;Z NAMEE ARIMA!

AR-ARMAAN

IMA-RIDDHIMA

WWOOOWW IM SSOO CLEVAA RYTT!

AWWW BROUGHT TEARSS IN MA EYEESS!

IZZAAAHHH!

YOUU WROTEE SOO PERFECTLLLYY!

IT TOUCHEEDD MA HEAARRTT <3

MWAAAH. HATSS' OFF!

AWWW ARIMA IS SOOO CUTEE! LOVE WAT SHE WROTE +&& THE ENDED LEFT ME SPEECHLES!

II LOVEE YOUU LOADSS!

PLEASSSHH COME UP WIV ANOTHAA FF <3

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lavanya_armaan

@lavanya_armaan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

😭😭shittt shittt shittt.cried mi hell out 😭

u write sooo guuud...you are fabbb srsliii...

i dont want diz ff to b finished😭

stupid seirals ki tarah...armaan ko zindaa kardooo😭

i knowww m toking stupid bt stilll...wich arima's papa was with her...shittt diz prt was sooo daamn emotional !

loveee ur writting sooo muchhh

thnklsss soo much for the pm 😊

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Samica Mehta (Mrs.Mallik)

@ksgforever10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: lavanya_armaan
😭😭shittt shittt shittt.cried mi hell out 😭
u write sooo guuud...you are fabbb srsliii...

i dont want diz ff to b finished😭

stupid seirals ki tarah...armaan ko zindaa kardooo😭

i knowww m toking stupid bt stilll...wich arima's papa was with her...shittt diz prt was sooo daamn emotional !

loveee ur writting sooo muchhh

thnklsss soo much for the pm 😊

Same with me

Even I cried my asss outtt

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