Maaneet FF: Whispering Knolls Thrd2 Ch41Pg96 8/11 - Page 25

Originally posted by: pushpi

Hehe Kriti is still such a darling :-)

Originally posted by: sharmake11

omg maan has tough time to patch

with kriti because she has attitude like him

i felt sorry when she told to leave the house

arjun & kriti conv so amazing their bond unique one

loved the song

atleast maan find out arjun & geet not married

simply beautiful

love it core

yu pinned down perfectly

fantastic job

meri pyari madhu

bless yu

ty 4 pm

Originally posted by: tanya_vi

Very nice update madhu baby!! I do agree that Kriti is deeply hurt but still she can do with some discipline..a lil' girl like her can't go around hitting elders and be disrespectful to them..Okay I know, I sound preachy..but kya kare?? When I see situations like this,the mother in me comes out in full force!!😆

Originally posted by: Viji79

So Krithika has given a reason for Maan to stay longer. I liked that Arjun, despite his hatred for Maan didnt use it to kindle Krithika's hatred for Maan. He gave her right advice. That shows he is a responsible person. It was heartwarming to see that he has stood besides Geet during her toughest time in life like a very responsible brother. I also felt for Maan who was still unaware of what he has done with Geet. Will he be ever able to forgive himself when he comes to know that he is Krithika's father? When are you going to introduce Radhika?

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great part.

Thanks for the Pm

Originally posted by: -dia-

Finally Geet experienced her First sign of falling in Love ...that was beautiful ...but did she realized anything???

hmm yes i did want to show some changes taking place in her... watch out for past n present... (hint: past geet is developing something and in present: guess who is developing) there is supposed to be a contrast... i hope my writing style makes sense 😕

I know who's feeling ll develop & when ...but I'm putting it down here😉

haha... i know u r intelligent like me... aakhir dost kiski 😉

ha ha very funny ...sweetu asmaan sae neech aaja ..aaja ...Hey Babaji ...kya zamaan agaya hai ...aake kol kar sapnae dekrahe hai😉😆

jaanu sapne mein nahi dekh rahi hoon tumhe galat phemi ho gayi.. hey babaji meri jaanu ko raksha karna plzz

Teek hai meri maa ...tum sach keh rahe hai ...lekin itna bada Jhoot😆😆

😲😡 me pouting geet style...

did Arjun is rehearsing with Geet how to woo Girls???

if not with geet then def with some1 else he is rehearsing 😛

With someone else ...whether he is rehearsing or proposing❓

tum kaho toh i shall refer him to u for proposing 😛

kya?????

future story mein arjun ka jodi tum banogi?? i shall seriously intro a charac named dia dor arjun 😊

ha ha very funny ...arjun ll run away to hell ...kyu ki mein bohot demanding ho😉😆

I loved the way how u implemented Vaaranam Aayiram Scenes into the updates ...Brilliant!!!

actually i was thinking of something different and even wrote it but it was getting too long... so changed to vaaranam aayiram coz i loved that proposal 😳

U have written it know ...I hope u didn't delete it ...save it ...ll come in help in hand for future😳 ..hope u r getting what I mean😆

haha i do know what u mean magar usko toh style se honi chahiye haina? oh maybe we could use to for arjun 😉

Mein FF ke baat nahi keh rahe hai ...I said it would come help in for U ...future mein😳😆

acchaji! chi mujhe sharam aavein hain 😳🤣

oey hoey ...meri sweetu buddhu sharma rahe hai ...chalo teek hai ...lekin don't turn into deep beetroot red😳😆

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Krishna - Radha duo is so adorable ...the whole FB moments were really wonderful ...the way Krishna trying impress his Radha with the help of gramophone was so funny ...bechara ka plan fail hogaya😆 ...lekin life mein pass hogaya😉 ...Maan has no probs coz he has a great guider to guide him in his need @ times ...lekin MSK ka Style ek dum alag hai ...hena Madhu😆

of course ek dum alag hai magar uska style dekhne ke liye bahut wait karna padega kya karein thoda pagal hai nahi nahi completely pagal hai 🤣 buddhu nahi samajh aata 😛

OOYEEE ...😡 samaj the kya apne aapko ..tum Mere Maan ko pagal bula rahe hai😡😡 ...lekin U r right ...Pagal hai ...ek dum mera pagal hai😳😳

adi paavi pagal for u 😲 kadavule maan-a ratchikkavum!!!

urggghhh😡 😡

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😡 😡 😡

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wah wah ...MSK aur Tamil😆 Maan - Geet small talk was lovely!!!

good that u noticed it... i didnt want krishna-radha's lovestory to overshadow the new developments between them... keep a watch for geet's new develops 😉 a new tour is coming up in the past (wink wink)

looking forward let it be romantic ...warna mein tume chodunga nahi😈

dont worry main hoon na 😳

SRK style means I don't want ..YUCK🤢

nahi jaanu maan style 😉

ab teek hai😆

gud gud gud...😉

Maan was sweet ...U have beautifully narrated how much he miss his Mom ...the last part of the update was really really beautiful ...Anu ma - Maan bonding is so sweet.

The way how he is trying to see his Mom in anu ma is really Beautiful.

yes... i really want him to see his mom in her in fact i want him to come out of his sorrow through her... 😊 but good that u like the way i wrote 😃

So U mean that it would be turned to be bad if I didn't like it???

koi shaq 😕

bilkul nahi ...& more over it can't turned to be bad either😛

ek chutki sindhoor ki keemat tu kya jane maan babu ki saali 🤣 i mean that u r good critic and u urself dont know about it

Kya?????????😡 😡 Saali ...😡

😲 gaaliyan de rahi ho!! 🤣🤣🤣

Madhu I need same type of moments in present track too ...sure to some extends some problems can be sorted out through their entry too.

hmm before that i want to eliminate the sour relationship of maan kriti n then i want some family moments 😳 --> the handa girls with khurana boy what say? n then we can see anu-maan relationship... n wait where does arjun fit into this 😲 okay i cannot forget him... the handa girls with the khurana boys plus singhania boy 😉

umm ...so this mean I want to wait ...aww ..Family moment ...it gonna be a much awaiting & beautiful moment ...small correction ..one Handa Girl & one Khurana-Handa Girl with one Khurana & one Singhania sounds interesting😆

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na baba na... tum sab kuch yahaan hi keh dogi kya 😲 tum bolti zyaada ho... 😆

...meine kuch nahi kaha ...very bad😭

accho beri baccha na roya karo...😕

tho phri Chocolate do😆

haina tere paas sexy choco phir bhi pooch rahi ho 😲

Beautiful part!!!

loved the whole package of updates!!

love u🤗

aawww love u too da jaanu!! thnx for the BEAUTIFUL comment i have no words for it 😊 u r my inspiration to write more in spite of the obstacles i face (i kno i got too senti 😛 magar vahi sach hai 😊)

love u too sweetu ...Don't get senti ...Main Hoo naa😛😆 & Btw me aur inspiration ...U must be Kidding ...right Madhu???😆

tumhe kidding lagti hai 😡 chup bilkul chup!

MSK's style or Geet's style????😆😆 ...no i ll pick up ...Mera Maan style😳

Right ON! 😃

Right ON nahi ...Maahi ON🤣

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PS: Sorry for very late comment

aww its okda i always wait for it plzz kno that 😊

I know that ...& I let u never forget that😆😆

mujhe pata hai 🤣

mujhe bhi pata hai🤣 🤣

😲🤣 🤣

😆🤣 🤣

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Originally posted by: -dia-

Teek hai ...rona mat ..he is handsome, ...hot, ...sexy, ...dashing, ...charming, ...macho. ab kush hena😳😆

Hey Babaji ...kaha pasgaye mujhe ...itna bada joot zindagi mein pehele baar likha hai ...maaf karna ...kya karo mera buddu tho naraz ho gaye😆😆

Originally posted by: -dia-

HOT???😲 hey babaji ...I was Kidding ...but U took it seriously😆😆 ab jaldi sae batatho How HAWT ahem ahem😳😆

Originally posted by: -dia-

It was Simply Marvelous sweetu⭐️

Perfect ...well penned down.

tank u tank u 😆

Maan is so sweet (no doubt there ..I know that he is both meeti & mirchi😳😆) ...loved the how he was trying to cajoling her.

yummyyy hot n sweet ☺️...

Ye tho bilkul -------- ki beti hai ...no doubt there ...same attitude,same arrogance(in good way) & same stubbornness.

i know aakhir beti kiski 😉

Bechara Maan ...needs to try really hard ...coz she is a combination of two stubborn & sweet people.😆

of course mehnat toh karna padega hi 😆

But bechari Geet ...kya haal hoga bechari ka when these two sweet devils got together ...Muruga ne tha thonaai😆

i know only muruga cannot help muruga's mama (krishna) will have to give a helping hand 😆

Kirti was so adorable ..loved the authority & stubbornness in her voice.

of coure Don kriti hai aakhir 😉

She is so possessive about her Mother like her buddy😆(Madhu I didn't reval it)

muah for that 😆

Beautifully portrayed the falls of emotions when Kriti told Maan to get out of the house ...very very eloquently written!!!😃

i am glad u liked it... 😊

Arjun was really Sweet😃 ...in spite of all indifference he have towards Maan loved the way how he handled the situation & managed Kirti & tried to explain her.

phew at last ab monogi na he is not that bad 😃 he is a sweetheart too!!!

Finally other two came about to know about their small encounter in Central Park.

yup they had to know why kriti was behaving strangely

Geet tho abhi sae in dono ki beech pasgaye😳 ...one side her daughter & other side her special friend ...ab bechari ka kya haal hoga😆

kya haal hoga u'll have to see kyunki mujhe be pata nahi 🤣

Ok Mr.Ethirkatchi ...bashki rehna😉 ...warna tum hara haal kya hoga sirf Madhu jaanti hai😆😆

poor him pehle geet ab kriti 😆

Beautiful update sweetu ...loved it!!!

awesome!!!

love u sweetu🤗

luv u da jaanu!! my next OS that i am currently writing has a surprise for u 😉