~maitri~ MAANEET FF THREAD 6 - Page 72

Loved the parts...though it was the buildup for the main revelation of Armaan being Maan's son(I am desparately hoping he is)... but what was it in the last part... is Ammy ill?? suffering from some grave desease is he?? dont tell me Geet- sucha happy soul has been suffering such miseries all alone?? n Maan hasnt even been aware of his responsibilities...so I cant even count his fault on that... plzzz dont make the kid terminally ill plzzz...
n as usual superb writing... I am waiting for some huge confrontations n then great makeups between these best-friends who have unconsciously loved each other more than cliched lovers even...they've done things for each other in the name of friendship which even a girl-friend or boy-friend wouldnt do... looking forward to lover-ly love between these two after the friend-ly support n unconditional love they have already showered.
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u seriously listen to your readers or you simply are a fairy godmother... granting wishes ... I had asked for 2-3 quick updates... n u granted my wish... now my next wish is hope u dont make Maan suffer more by making him aware of his son only to tell him that his son is terminally ill... that'll be cruel... plz dont do that

All this I wrote in my previous post ,just when you were about to update part 51...I soo didnt want the kid to be terminally ill.. but, now that Amy is terminally ill... I am sooo sad 😭 ... just completed reading the newer chapters until part 54... my heart goes out for Geet.. poor girl realised her love too late and also understood the pain it brings with it...tragic that the girl had to learn both the meaning simultaneously...all said and done, Geet and Amy have suffered the most...Amy has suffered both physically (the love of a parent helps kids a lot in their illness) and emotionally, since he is of an age where he realises what having a father means in other kids life...n Geet's sufferings have been more evident... financially she had to support herself alone with a kid on the way, must have been very difficult I am sure... emotionally having an unplanned baby at her age when she didnt quite understand deep emotions like love would have been a big deal too..the arrival of baby was what brought the metamorphosis in Geet from a kiddish,impractical student to probably a responsible mother n woman... Maan and Geet's dynamics can be best described as peaceful yet troubled relationship where one of them doesnt know what his past deeds have resulted in and the other doesnt know that 7-8yrs have been futile waste of time since the reason she was away was that Maan's happiness lay with someone else... hope Maan doesnt bring a second child to this world with no love between its parents... he needs to tell geet before she conceives that he loves her, has loved her all along and will love her till his last breath...n same goes for Geet... she shouldnt make Maan think that he is just a sperm bank and he is right now covering for his past mistakes... Amy is not a mistake but a labor of love..an unrealised love at its best...Maan should also be encouraged by geet to divulge his inner feelings to Geet at the earliest!!
superb writing... you're a PRO!!!

Such a sweet prt,baap-beta scared of their dodo.amy is such cute kid apna kaam nikalwa lia aur genie ko daat bhi khila di.luvely prt

Part 53:-
Beautiful, emotional part.
loved amy-maan scene.
loved the way amy tease maan but now maan don't want to tease him back,
he know y every one pampered him.
he want to see him happy, smiling.

Geet come back after long time .

How a mother can bear this, how a mother can see her child is suffering and she can't do anything.

Feel so sad for geet.

Maan understand geet and her pain. And he feel the pain, to see tears in his geet's eyes, to see her in pain, it's hurt more maan.

In every moments geet is crying inside her heart bleed to see her child like this.

And she breaks down.

In past she crying for her result when but now it's about her life, her soul, her child, then her pain is, immense,

Maan know it and take her in his arms and she break down in front of him and want assurance that amy will be fine.

Maan already sad to see amy like this .

To see his geet like this maan feel sad and hurt.

Maan don't know how he will do but he assured her.

Finally maan cut amy's hair.

Poor maan have to face geet's anger.

Loved maaneet , amy scene and conversation.

Amy is so sweet and cute and he told geet that all done by maan,

Ha ha loved it.

geet said maan that amy is bare beta .

Hope amy will get well soon.me sad to see amy is not well

Feel sad to see amy is not well.

In past

Loved maaneet scene and conversation.

Part 54:-

Emotional,beautiful part.

Geet give angry look to maan and fed amy lovingly.

Amy enjoying this and now maan also enjoying this and happy to see geet- amy, happy , smiling.

His heart is feeling happiness to see their happiness. Cause both of them r heart and soul of maan.

Amy is maaneet's son and that's y maan happy to see mother –son happy and smiling.

Maan's happiness, peace all r in geet and now amy.

Geet-amy is maan's heart, soul , he feels a connection with them

He wants to see them happy.

Finally Nt told maan but still half truth.

Ok nt is tensed , sad but y she is so angry on maan every time.

Yes she loves geet like her own sis but still …….

Rahul is more calm and know how look after the matter.

So only bone marrow transplantation is now solution.

Hope amy will fine soon.

After know the truth maan feel shattered. His anger is increasing.

Geet know and understand her maan well.

Oh oh Dr. Garewal is rahul .

Y is nt angry for that, how will maan know that rahul is Dr Garewal?

Maan is only trying to help.

He searching in every possible way to help them .

Maan don't know anything about amy , after he came here know about him then y nt is always behind him to said something him?

I wish geet should tell now the truth to maan.

Now It's high time ….. ami is in danger.

for him truth should come out.

Continue soon

tension tension tension

poor maan not able to understand all this things

why nt always shout maan???????????😡

I strongly believe that maan's bone marrow is match with amy

maan ko kab pata chale ga?????????????

Update soon

Grt prt,but ab maan geet k bare m kya soch raha h,is miunderstng me amy ka treatmnt delay ho raha h.luvd it.cont soon

Hayye...poor lil kid... 😭 n poor maan also...
Continue soon...

well at the moment all i can say is . . . AMY is Maan n Geet's son . . . probably something muct have happened in the past which obviously maan doesn't remember . . . perhaps he was drunk when it all happened . . . aomething like that but amy is Maan's son . . . reason is as much as i understood ur writing style . . . i am more than certain that he is maan's son . . . one more reason would be geet yelling at maan that he couldnt hate amy . . . even other dialogues are there which clearly indicate towards it . . .

jst loved geets valentines day. she so innocent bought a bag out of maans money n asks him to gift her. her 8-9 valentine was good. poor amy is suffering so much. vn will maan come to know that amy is his son?? loved NT she is so caring n worried about geet.