'and then she said it'~3 |AR| *Chapters : 13 - 18*

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perfectsmile

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Posted: 14 years ago

#281

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Hey,

I am not sure if from now I will be able to send the pms or not. I will do it if I have time but you can check the thread for the update in the weekends. Because for the next two months there is no chance that I would be updating on the week days.

And next, I received so many friends requests when I logged in today. I was wondering if the new bies are sending the request for an update or just for increasing their friend list. So please, I request the new bies to send me a pm along with the buddy request from now if they want pms (it at all I manage to send one).

Finally, I might not be able to comment on the regular FFs I follow for the next two months till I complete my probation period at office. The schedule was quite hectic. I managed this part as I had written most of it before joining the job. But plz send me the pm alerts. When god blesses me with time, I might read them and get back to them. Till then don't curse me if I don't comment.

Phew!! Now I have to log off and get back to my online training.

Good luck and Good bye!!!

and yes, keep the comments coming!
-Sushmita

Edited by perfectsmile - 14 years ago

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Medha

@Medha.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#282

Hey! That was an awesome part! Loved it! LOL! Someone's getting desperate here! 😆 Why doesn't she say anything? 😆 I'm just glad AR are going together. Hope to see some good scenes now. Please update soon and thanks for the PM.

-Medzi-

Edited by Medzi_ARian... - 14 years ago

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Aanya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#283

Res!

*EDITED*

Sushmita :)

Haha I shall definitely attend your wedding...whenever it happens 🤣 I have a LOT of family in Bangalore but we're all Gujarati's so yeah :)

Coming to the part, it was aahhhmmaazingg 😆

I loved the awkwardness of the new relationship :) It was beautifully written <3

Haha Armaan was so turned on by her! And then the embarrassment that followed had me laughing out loud 😆 Aww I could totally imagine them like that <3 Picture perfect :)

OMG Muskaan and Armaan's mom were amazing! The way they thought that AR had sex! LMAO :D Bahaha I could totally see him with that vermilion on his neck and stuff... 😆

Haha the expression on her face when he asked her if she had other plans for the night would've been worth seeing! SERIOUSLY! She blushes so often! Oh but then he's quite mischievous too :D Honestly sushmita! I admire your capability to write from a guy's PoV, with you being a girl! Amazing! :) Haha meri toh ek mini FF Armaan ke PoV se likhne mein fat jaati hai! I need to constantly check whether I'm making it girly or anything 😆 Kudos! :)

"What happened to your eyes Riddhima? They appear red." Shashank uncle noticed it and asked her when mom and Riddhima came downstairs to the living room.

"Nothing uncle. Might be due to lack of sleep." She replied smiling.

"Why? Didn't Armaan let you sleep last night?" Padma aunty quipped with a smirk. I choked on my breath and Riddhima's eyes popped out of their sockets. Even mom was struggling to refrain herself from smiling.

"I-I'll go-I'll get tea." Riddhima stammered and fled to the kitchen while I stared at everyone flabbergasted.

"I forgot my mobile upstairs." I got up and ran upstairs while I heard everyone's laughter echoing from the living room. Inspite of the embarrassments, I found myself enjoying each and every bit of it.

^^ This cracked me up! I love your sense of humor! Each of your updates manages to make me laugh 😆 Not to mention that the best quality of this FF is how it's SO real! :)

Aww I liked the moment they shared when she asked him if he was happy <3 It was understated, no "sparks" or "wind-blowing" or anything, yet it was nothing short of magical <3 Loved it :)

I liked the confusion that he faces in understanding her! A lot of authors usually create a PERFECT understanding between the couple even if they didn't understand each other that well before! It's one thing to make them understand each other perfectly since the beginning and it's another thing to make them perfectly understanding just because they're now in a relationship! So yeah, the confusion is good :) Not only does it bring them closer but it's also very realistic!

Aww she wanted to go with him? Psshht. They're SO cute! <3

I love how he keeps reassuring her that she can say anything to him! Maybe it'll make her open up more :)

All in all, a beautiful update!

Continue soon :D

xoxo

Aanya

Edited by Aanya_taanu4evr - 14 years ago

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Coffee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#284

Hey Sush 🤗

That was freaking funny and a beautiful update <3 You're writing it so naturally. Everything feels so falling into place. The awkwardness in the newly weds is kinda sweet and fun to watch .. lol . ..

Armaan's so cute ya.. esp when the guy was like getting all confused with Ridz's silence and trying to comprehend what it meant. But m glad finally his brain proved worthy and things got registered in his mind.. lol .jk.. This seemed so real . .. It normally happens, esp when we havn't been with a person for long time (as in AR) .. The morning act infront of all was hilarious. I could so imagine their faces and horrified expressions and the embarrassment that followed. It was just a swallow-me-earth moment .. 😆

M actually looking forward to married AR! That surely seems to be a new start all together. ..

Update soon!! =D

Love ya
Vini

Edited by coolvini4u - 14 years ago

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Asma Khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#285

OMG!!! This morning of Armaan was awesome.
Gosh I luvd the way u described his feelings about his new bride.
He was feeling good by sleeping next to her.
Poor guy was married last night and his wife slept.
Lols!! Armaan went infront of everyone with sindor on his body.
I simply luvd this part.
Ridz was so cute.She apologized Armaan for sleeping.She surely had other plans if Armaan didn't have for her.
I just can't wait to read more.
U r a wonderful writer dear.
I simply luv this ff.
Love ya.

Edited by asma_227 - 14 years ago