'AASTHA'-Maaneet FF-PART 1 RE-WRITTEN

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Durga

@mrk-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

awsome yaar !! loved it !!

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

awesome concept

plzz add me in pm list

do continue soon

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

wow the outburst of maan was really very powerful even his father begun to worry

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

loved it ...

thanks alot for the pm

love

Sana

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Dilsay

@Dilsay

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Thanks for the PM and update dear...Maan is now in action ..taking full charge of his family...

continue soon

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tania

@wifey

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

tat was awesome cant wait for the next part

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sb1412

@sb1412

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

hey plz dont let geet to accept the apology so soon...awesome update...thankx 4 pm...

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alfiya7

@alfiya7

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

i do feel bad for maan...bt also my heart cries for geet...bt thn dnt let geet forgive him so easiy...

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613528

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Posted: 14 years ago

#89

This was absolutely brilliant. I loved how Maan confronted his father. He lost 5 years with his son, just because of him. I hope everything sorts out soon.

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

amazing update rithika...
loved the way you penned down Maan's confrontation with his dad...
arghhh I hate him...I wanna see Maan now down on his knees...Geet shouldn't give in easily...waiting for the next update...