'AASTHA'-Maaneet FF-PART 1 RE-WRITTEN

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Water.
I loved the update.
But I feel that Maan still carries the aura of domination with him.

I am not sure if he realizes ...that he is coming in with his arrogance, wealth, planning and juss expecting Geet to say yes...

I feel that Maan's parents are nowhere near to understand the fact that Maan loves Geet and I feel his parents will never accept Geet.

And the change in accepting someone with your heart cannot be done overnight...

I do not want Geet and Daksh to be in middle of this mess with Maan's parents and him...cus Maan's dad still said the same time to Maan...that he can take Daksh and not worry about Geet...

How will all of this work out?

When will Maan realize that him juss insisting...that Geet marry him is not as simple as that...

Geet DESERVES all the love from him and all the RESPECT from his parents...

Is that even possibe knowing the history????????????

Dear... You may not have an idea, how happy I am to read your comment, as it shows how deeply you have bonded with the characters...Yes you are right. Maan carries an aura of dominance.. something in his blood and inborn... He loves Geet and Daksh a looot... and he is ready to compromise anything for them... at the same time, he is putting pressure on his parents, to accept Geet with their son, as he believes that is the utmost punishment for them...DOnt you think sooo.. Accepting Geet means, they are accepting their fault... Sooo Maan, want his parents to accept her... then only, he can get her all the respect, and royalty which she deserves...

And, its not easy for Geet to accept Maan easily... He has to go a looot more for that... Daksh is still a kid... A powerful, handsome, dad is a novelty for him... He is a baby... sooo its natural, he want his dad's love as well as mom's...

In the coming parts, you can see... hw maan is making it upto Geet... and Daksh... how his family gonna take it... Will Geet be able to forgive and forget the past...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Myra.nelly
Wow,that was one hell of a first meeting!! Great part,u surely know ur way with the pen...bravo...

Hiii Myra... Thankyou sooo much dear... Thanks a looot... When i sit to write... i will put myself in them... soo its easy... i can feel hw they will feel... their emotions... rage... and i pen down the first thought coming to my mind...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: maaneetsangel
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Thankyou sooo much my dear...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: sharmake11
since maan came into their life
he want to force geet or control her

with the decision he need to understand

her she live her life with her son alone without

his help

i hope if geet say yes to marriage

not give in & maan have to accept new geet

who is independent

simply amazing

love it

cont soonnn

awesome job

love the flow of the story

yaa... You are right my dear... But you know, what i was thinking... He is forcing or controlling her in the hope, then only she will be able to take a decision favorable to him... If he do not pressure her, she will say a flat No! and he knows, very well her happiness is with him... and his happiness with hers... if Maan leave the decision in Geet's hand, she can never come up with a positive decision. She can only think about how, she is been treated in the past. He is guilty about what happened... and he want to ammend it... but what if is Geet says a No!... that is what she will say... RIght????

SOoo Maan is behind her... that is how a true lover has to be... Dont you think so... If we say a NO and he goes without trying and forcing us,we will feel , that much only we are needed... instead, when they are behind us... we will feel... ohhh hw much he wants us in his life... Hey na... Maan is a ruthless, practical business man.. He sees things more practical based on future... where Geet sees it more emotional... She is practical as well...but, bringing us a child, out of wedlock, being a single mother, in a traditional society like India... It will have a very adverse effect on Daksh's future... sooo Marriage is the only solution... But Geet will only say, Yes to the marriage, when she accepts maan and forgive him.. For that, I will make our sweet maan sweat a looot... Dont worry sweet heart...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: MeetPremeer
nice

Thankyou sooo much My dear Meet...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: soumimaaneetsou
hey...i loved the past scenes...

i wanna see more of it...😊

thnx for the pm...

update soon...

Hiii Soumi...

Thankyou sooo much my dear... More past scenes will be there... I will include all the past scened blended with the present...like their first meeting... I hope you will like it as well...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Aashi_saphire
awesome update!!
lovd it!!!👏

Thank you Sooo Much Aashi... 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: ursrithika

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2" color="#333333">Hiii Vidhushi...</font>

<font face="Georgia, 'Times New Roman', Times, serif" size="2" color="#333333"> Thankyou sooo much my dear... Updates coming in few hrs...</font>

Hey, hiii...sory couldnt rply you for the earlier post also...
Yes dear musoorie is a beautiful place...just 35kms from my place, thats why i know quite a lot abt it...

N you are updting today...wow...thats grt...me waiting...

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: teri_susan
Thanx for the PM.It was really a lovely update😉.Loved the past,the way they met was mindblowing. Maaneet started thier journey with a kiss😉.U have descriped thier meeting fantasticly,that was totally awesome.Right Maan still holds the same power with which he captured her at first,she can't deny that.Geet is denying him the marriage,but how she will face Daksh when he will ask Geet that he wants to live with his Papa like other kids do in his class.Hope Geet agrees for the marriage keeping Daksh in her mind,she can give chance to Maan later on,but it is better she agrees for the Marriage with Maan before Daksh demands her.Curious to read more about the past and how they got close,do continue... Love this fiction🤗.U are an amazing wirter.

Susan...

Thank you sooo much my dear... I am happy to know that, how much you liked their first meeting and first kiss... Yaa.. I wanted it a little bit different... and i sincerely hope, it clicked. It will take time for Geet to forget the past and agree for the marriage.. she has forgiven him looong back.. but she is afraid... she is afraid, that what if one day something goes wrong and she will be subjected to another heartbreak ,,,,, or now Daksh with her, she has to be even more careful... Right??? She can never let her son suffer... that is why she is taking time...

I will be revealing more of past in coming parts... along with the present... I always need your support and love my dear... Keep commenting and sharing your view... so when we discuss, i will also get a more clear view, how i should evolve it... Thank you so much...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: harshdb
Hi I m Deepa . I really like your story. I have been a silent reader on this forum from past 3 years. This is the fist time I m commenting on a story. I like the way you described each character feelings and emotions. U said u inspired by a novel can you pls tell me which novel is that? please add me in your friends list.

Hiii Deepa...

Thankyou Sooo Much Dear... Its an honor for me... and I say it sincerely... when you say, my fiction compelled you to comment... what else I can wish for?? I am sooo Happy... I will always try to keep up with your all expectations... The novel is Harlequin Collection from Mills and Boons.Name I dont remember exactly, some 'Child' it was. The first name, I am not getting. This time, when I go India, I will check and tell you , if you want. I read it when i was in Pre-Degree. But it tuched, me deeply i am still in love with that novel... But, real story is short one. only present is there and not much emotional train.

Also, raw sex is more in that... sooo i changed to suit our Maaneet... with past... emotions... guilt..love.. passion... desire...