AR FF: Happy realisation!!! Part 2: Page 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Great part. Update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: RheaKSG4eva

RES

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Hey Pari! Hey Rhea..
Sorry for the late comment!
(Revenge is sweet ain't it ? 😆 )
ya!!! i can see ur enjoying alot... nd i was here like waiting for ur comment.. u know i can understand wat u must have went through when i was not commenting.. but i already said sorry... n maine comment bhi lkar diya hai...
Hehe..
Anyway back to the part,
Wow!
She actually went and told her parents that she's in LOVE?
WOW!
Can't believe it! you should not..😉
But now Pari plz do UPDATE SOON! ya i will most probably be updating tomorrow...
Waiting to read more! m glad to make u wait..😆
Love love- pari
Rhea

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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Hey Pari !

Wow.. u write really well yaar.. m glad ur friend has asked you to write this fic. i love the intro and the first part! Ridz's character is one of a kind.. seems like she resembles you... 😳 love her..

Update Soon! Thanks for d pm..

love
Vini

P.S: The title is really nice.. i wonder if the 'happy realization' means realization of love by Armaan 😛 (as guessed by me from the intro.. lol )
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolvini4u

Hey Pari ! Hey Vini...

Wow.. u write really well yaar.. m glad ur friend has asked you to write this fic. i love the intro and the first part! Ridz's character is one of a kind.. seems like she resembles you... 😳 love her.. thank u sooo much yaar.. ur comment really means a lot to me... i was feeling very nervous about how the part turned out to be.. but after reading ur comment i feel much relaxed... m ya she resembles me i guess... n she loves u too...Embarrassed

Update Soon! Thanks for d pm.. ya i will... n ur welcum..

love
Vini

P.S: The title is really nice.. i wonder if the 'happy realization' means realization of love by Armaan 😛 (as guessed by me from the intro.. lol ) i must say good thinking.. well to tell u the truth.. m nt sure of the track.. n even if i was... i m not supposed to tell u right???😉... ur comment made my day.. thank u sooo much...--- pari

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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
nice part!

cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
hey...
pehle toh yaar im XTREMELY sry.. plzz gussa mat hona... i knw im late in commenting bt u knw me na,, ttns n ol.. upar se mumma papa... n im always wid my phn... voh sab chodh..

the part ws AWESOME...😊 yeh joh ish mein ridzy ka character h i lovd it... n esp padma mom.. kash meri mumma bhi aisi hoti, fir earphns par na daatti na... abh toh earphns dekh karhi phn leleti h...😭 i love it yr... PLZ CONTINUE SOON... as u knw im here just for u, toh help me out.. i clickd on pms as well as buddy... toh lemme knw if im added or nt.. it'll take me some time to get familiar wid it...

love angel..(shona pari)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
PARIII :D <3

Hey! First off, OMG I didn't know your real name wasn't Pari! :O But Pankhuri is so pretty 😳

I loved the update! It was uber-cute! Riddhima is so bubbly, happy and adorable 😆 I loved her! Is she like you? :)

I only wanted to point out one thing- When you write, don't use short forms and divide your writing into short [about 7-10 lines] paragraphs, it's much easier for the reader! :D

I loved part one! It's nice to know that Riddhima is able to communicate with her parents so freely :)

I've seen you as a reader and now I get to see you as a a writer too! Awesome <3

Sorry, but Imma have to keep this comment short :P

Continue soon!

xoxo
Aanya


P.S - I for got to add this - I loved how your prologue didn't reveal anything :D Usually you can tell what's gonna happen but I couldn't tell anything in yours! Kudos 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: angelofurlife

hey... Hey!!! missed u sooo much..tere hi comment ka intezaar tha...

pehle toh yaar im XTREMELY sry.. plzz gussa mat hona... i knw im late in commenting bt u knw me na,, ttns n ol.. upar se mumma papa... n im always wid my phn... voh sab chodh.. Haan haan main tujhe bht achhe se jaanti hun.. tension na le... n main gussa nahi hun.. tune sirf yeh padhne ke liye.. IF join kiya.. thats the biggest compliment anyone can give me.. luv you...

the part ws AWESOME...😊 yeh joh ish mein ridzy ka character h i lovd it... n esp padma mom.. kash meri mumma bhi aisi hoti, fir earphns par na daatti na... abh toh earphns dekh karhi phn leleti h...😭 i love it yr... PLZ CONTINUE SOON... as u knw im here just for u, toh help me out.. i clickd on pms as well as buddy... toh lemme knw if im added or nt.. it'll take me some time to get familiar wid it... its ok na baba.. tension kyun le rahi hai.. n was it such mein awesome.. m toh feeling that it was very thanda... well the ridzy here somewhat remembers the real me... i guess tu samajh gayi hogi?? oh i love both the parents too.. n aunty ko kuchh mat bol.. woh apni jagah sahi hain..n maine tujhe add kar liya.. username padhte hi samajh gayi thi.. ki tu hai...

love angel..(shona pari) angel toh tu meri nhi hai.. khud hi rakh liya naam ... hehehe😉... thank u sooo much SP.. ur the best literally..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aanya_taanu4evr

PARIII :D <3 Aanya!!!!!!!


Hey! First off, OMG I didn't know your real name wasn't Pari! :O But Pankhuri is so pretty 😳 well that was the whole point to not tell anyone my real name... hehe.. hey thanx i know i just love my name... actually super proud of it.. sorry bout that..

I loved the update! It was uber-cute! Riddhima is so bubbly, happy and adorable 😆 I loved her! Is she like you? :) ohhh!! thank u sooo much... mmm.. all i would say is she loves u too... n thanx for the compliments.. yeh riddhima keh rahi hai😉..

I only wanted to point out one thing- When you write, don't use short forms and divide your writing into short [about 7-10 lines] paragraphs, it's much easier for the reader! :D thanks aanya.. atleast some one is there who can point out my mistakes.. i will keep ur suggeations in mind... love you..

I loved part one! It's nice to know that Riddhima is able to communicate with her parents so freely :) well that was what i actually wanted to convey.. m glad some people acknowledged it.. 😆.. its the level of understanding i share with my parents...

I've seen you as a reader and now I get to see you as a a writer too! a guess a writer is big thing to be entitled too... m just a crazy dreamer n i love to fantasize bout various things... Awesome <3 thank u soo much ann... it really means alot to me...😊

Sorry, but Imma have to keep this comment short :P i guess it was ok.. aur lamba hota toh i would have been delighted par uske liye utna achha likhna bhi padta hai.. hehe... u dont know how happy i m after reading ur comment.. as i said it was really imp.. for me to know ur opinion...

Continue soon! ya i will...

xoxo
Aanya


P.S - I for got to add this - I loved how your prologue didn't reveal anything :D Usually you can tell what's gonna happen but I couldn't tell anything in yours! Kudos 😊 hmmm.. well once again thank u... :-)...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey Pari
awesome concept👏⭐️
superb part👏⭐️👏⭐️👏
loved it so much
wowww ridz is one kind of girl...she is so excited bcoz she fell in love...waitng her parents reaction
add me in ur pm list
thanks for pm
update soon
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