AR FF: Happy realisation!!! Part 2: Page 8 - Page 3

Originally posted by: cute.arsh

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Originally posted by: repercussion

For starters...Three Cheers for Pankhuri for actually stepping out form her inhibitory shell and coming up with this! I'm glad you did and shubh aarambh...lol...that's so sweet of you! The most awaited comment is finally here... i was literally dying to know ur comments... n i know m sweet...tabhi toh i come up with the sweetest ideas..hehe.. n thanx for the cheers.. ur the first one to do that... 😆

At the moment, you have maintained a huge amount of suspense with the prologue. But the part that really made me wonder was the reflection of surprise in both Riddhima's and the guy's (most probably Armaan's) eyes, which means the encounter was accidental. And boy oh boy, there's no way I could figure out what led to this. For generally, you can always make out what comes next from the prologue...but this was cool. So well, continue soon and the very fact that I get to pester you for updates, starting now, makes me go all muhahaha! oh u know while writing it i was like the prologue thing is too general.. i mean most of the fics have the same thing going on.. but i guess the story that i have in my mind won't disappoint u... teri appreciation bht matter karti hai... oh i would love ur pestering.. coz it would be a new experience for me.. umm..i wont say anything bout the prologue.. bcoz it would come after very long.. i plan on starting the story from the start... is that fine??

Besides, Thanks for the credit you have given me into getting you back to writing...but really, the credit goes to you for doing what had been on your mind for years!

And moreover, you made me look like you fairy godmother...*dances in joy* lol...Thanks a lot for the special note! That made my day! :D i gave the credit to u.. bcoz u totally deserve it.. u remember our starting waali convos... tu nahi samjhati toh mera kya hota?? ur welcum...

Toh ab bas start writing and I'd be glad to help you in anyway although I'm sure you wouldn't need it! wat makes u think that.. m still an anari... toh khiladi se sikhna padega na!!!

Love,

???? tere ko bhi secrets bht pasand haina!!

PS- revelation of your name came like a shocker to me...I was like WTH just happened? But I'm glad you chose to. Says enough about your mental state at the minute. Don't get nervous! And ab bas bahut tarf hogayi, first update likhne jayiye mahotarma! :P it came as a shock to me also.. but then while writing the first story i just wanted people to know my real name... um i'll try not be nervous.. haan haan jaa rahi hun...

ur comment made my day... the longest comment n that too on such a chhota sa prologue... that shows how much i mean to u... thanx for everything.. - pari

Chapter 1

"Papa!! Mumma!!! Papaaa!! Mummaaa!!!" ab yeh dono kahan chale gaye... uffooo!!! anyways omg m sooo happy... yayyy!!!! u know what today is the biggest day of my life... u wanna know the reason!! well well sabse pehle i need to tell maa-papa.. because they are the most important people in my lil world... n they are the reason i got a chance to be in this world...otherwise Riddhima Gupta would have never exsited... but woh log hain kahan?? wait a minute i think i should shout again... no no bad idea riddhima! you already shouted for them.. lemme go n check in their room... hayyyee!! aise din roz kyun nahi aate!!! u know m smiling so hard that my cheeks are hurting.. but who cares.. apna hi maal hai.. i mean mere apne hi cheeks hai aur apni hi muscles hain.. khana bhi main khud khaati hun.. energy bhi mere system mein hi produce hoti hai.. milti bhi mujhe hi hai.. ok i know i sound like an idiot but yaar room tak pahunchne tak i had to utilise my time na... toh kuchh bhi sochna shuru kar diya... intelligent bachhon ka dimaag hamesha meri tarah chalta rehta hai... hehe.. aur hum pahunch gaye... "Mumma!! Papa!!" "Mum--" omg yeh kya ho raha hai!!! what the hell.. now i know why they could not hear me shouting... meet my pyaari mumma jinko iss duniya mein mujhse bhi zyada ek cheez se pyaar hai aur woh hai MUSIC.. hehe kidding maa loves me the most... but look what shes doing.. kaano mein earphones.. volume full... i know that coz i can hear the song till here... some classical song..i can recognise the music... well u know m thankful to my mumma because due to her i can sing quite nicely... hehe trying to be modest... mere mann se poochhoo it says i m an amazing singer..okay now i have to talk to her.. n if ur wondering where is my daady dearest.. i can hear the shower.. i guess hes taking a bath...

"Mumma" i tapped her on her shoulder... "Oh haan riddhima beta.. do u need anything??" thats my mother.. " haan mumma.. i wanna tell u n paa something" Maa immediately removed her earphones n taking me alongwith her towards the bed she asked me in her most comforting tone" whats the matter bachha" ok now if u go to ur mother n pull off a sad n grumpy face successfully, shes bound to ask with utmost concern that whats the matter... so ummm i m doing exactly that... "Woh actually na mumma kya hua ki..." " Riddhima beta why are u not in ur bed?? its half past 10" uh-oh thats paa.. always following "Early to bed n early to rise makes a man healthy wealthy n wise"... n sooo m ofcourse quite intelligent n smart,, wealthy?? papa gives me pocket money..toh kaam achhe se chal jaata hai.. but the clause is that m a bit tooo much healthy... well i guess its time to answer.. nahi toh he will start glaring at me.. " woh papa!! i wanted to talk to both of u!! something important!" " Cant it wait till tomorrow morning beta?" " nahi na papa.. warna u know na i always sleep at the right time.." "Shashank!! she has some problem n wants to discuss with us.. n aap usko sone ko keh rahe ho!! riddhima u speak beta.. kya hua hai?"maa came to my recue... yipee.. "haan woh kya haina mumma... ab sab kuchh badal jayega mumma.. kuchh bhi pehle jaise nahi rahega" i know both the sentences have the same meaning.. par to press ur point or to waste the time, i apply these tricks.. "aisa kya hua hai beta?"my mum asked looking quite tensed... oh no!! ridzi wat did u do.. just due to ur nautanki dekh mumma kitni tension mein aa gayi hai... m soo bad.. lemme apologise... "woh maa!! i was actually joking...i...i.. i m sorry" i said with a sheepish smile... but when i saw my mum's angry eyes.. smile chhodo one muscle did not dare move itself.. n i knew it daant padegi.. daant padegi.. daant padegi... "Chhodo na Padma!! she was just joking..if u'll look at her like this bichari kabhi mazaak ka M bhi nahi kar payegi" yipeee.. nahi padegi.. nahi padegi.. nahi padegi.. paa comes to rescue.. ridzi now don't u dare smile.. nahi toh maa kabhi nahi maanegi... " haan mumma sorry na please!!! n maine waise toh itna kuchh zyada kaha bhi nahi.. itna zyada tense hone ki---" ok i understood that glare.. which meant shut up riddhima beta NAHI TOH... par main kahan chup hone waali hun...i love talking n mujhe apni mumma ko patana aata hai... " achha mumma... i'll water the plants n wash the dishes for next two days.." oh no!! yeh maine kya bol diya... hayye riddhima tu toh gayi kaam se.. theek time par dimaag chala legi tab toh tu jaise aur moti ho jayegi.. huh!!! i was sulking inside when my mum screamed "Promise??" " Oh my baby, ur soo sweet my bachha.. mumma itna saara kaam karti hai, n u wanna help.." WTH!! inki tension aur gussa kahan gaya? " Mumma?????" " Haan ji Riddhima ji.. nautanki karni sirf aapko nahi aati.. ur mum is a pro at it.." "Aapko pehle se pata tha..?" " Ofcourse beta.. why do u forget u have very expressive eyes... n the from the start they were screaming.. 'I m so happy'.. ur words were not matching wat ur eyes were conveying...n u know i trust ur eyes more.." damn yaar... n now see maa-paa both are laughing.. u must be wondering why my father is so quite.. well he is the silent types.. dont mind him.. " haan toh beta now tell wat u really wanted to say?" n with that the excitement came back... " oh i m so happy maa-papa.. its the best thing that has happened to me.." " toh tell us na!!" " umm.. woh na.. woh na.. I AM IN LOVE"

helloo... i dont know!! how this turned out to be.. m quite nervous.. please please please comment or hit the like tab... m also sorry if there are nay errors... thanx a ton for all those commented to before.. one more thing this part is dedicated to my parents.. who r just the best.. its also due to them that m writing this story.. unhone permission di tabhi toh!!! n if u found the part short m sorry.. with guesta n relatives packed in my house.. wanting me to spend time with them, i could manage only this much... if u would like i will make the update longer...

love u all

-Pankhuri