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Hello guys... i thought of starting my first FF on IF... i know this is the craziest of all the things i have done till now... taking into consideration my not so gr88 way of writing... but anyways i just wanted to do this from a long time.. n so here i am..
i will post the first part as soon as possible.. till then a little something i wrote... please read n let me know ur true opinion...
n ya about the title.. to be very frank i myself do not know how m gonna organise the plot of the story.. n the title itself is something which i thought like all of a sudden.. so i request u all to be patient with a slow learner like me...
I just could not believe my eyes. Was he really standing in front of me. Ri baby!! are u by any chance hallucinating. No no thats not possible...anyhow i could never understand how can people hallucinate about the person they love.. oh no i dont love him.. i dont love him ANYMORE. My surprise or rather shock was mirrored in his extraordinarily beautiful eyes.. oh no ridzi.. they are not beautiful.. they are just slightly beautiful.. ok now why the hell is he smiling.. here i feel like crying.. n this guy actually has the guts to show his damn dimples... oh his dimples.. always used to make me go weak on my kness... see see this happens to me everytime HE is there,i go crazy... ok so we are like staring at each other n he is smiling n m crying, i mean my heart is crying... why u think?? oh well for that u have to know my story right?? neways we will come to that later on.. first of all i have to deal with HIM...
i dont know hows that... sooo i request u all to please comment... coz i wanna improve.. there is one more thing i would like to mention...
i would like to thank a very special frnd of mine going by the username "repercussion".. love u yaar... m soo lucky to have a frnd like u...š
if u guys ever in future like this ff.. its all thanx to her... cause she in the very first place encouraged me to start writing again...
thanx a ton to all who spared a glance towards this piece ..
love
-Pankhuri urf pari
(i know many of u know me as PARI.. but thats my nick name.. starting with my ff.. i just wanted u all to know my real nameš)
INDEX
PART 1---- PAGE 4 š
PART 2----PAGE 8š
i will post the first part as soon as possible.. till then a little something i wrote... please read n let me know ur true opinion...
n ya about the title.. to be very frank i myself do not know how m gonna organise the plot of the story.. n the title itself is something which i thought like all of a sudden.. so i request u all to be patient with a slow learner like me...
I just could not believe my eyes. Was he really standing in front of me. Ri baby!! are u by any chance hallucinating. No no thats not possible...anyhow i could never understand how can people hallucinate about the person they love.. oh no i dont love him.. i dont love him ANYMORE. My surprise or rather shock was mirrored in his extraordinarily beautiful eyes.. oh no ridzi.. they are not beautiful.. they are just slightly beautiful.. ok now why the hell is he smiling.. here i feel like crying.. n this guy actually has the guts to show his damn dimples... oh his dimples.. always used to make me go weak on my kness... see see this happens to me everytime HE is there,i go crazy... ok so we are like staring at each other n he is smiling n m crying, i mean my heart is crying... why u think?? oh well for that u have to know my story right?? neways we will come to that later on.. first of all i have to deal with HIM...
i dont know hows that... sooo i request u all to please comment... coz i wanna improve.. there is one more thing i would like to mention...
i would like to thank a very special frnd of mine going by the username "repercussion".. love u yaar... m soo lucky to have a frnd like u...š
if u guys ever in future like this ff.. its all thanx to her... cause she in the very first place encouraged me to start writing again...
thanx a ton to all who spared a glance towards this piece ..
love
-Pankhuri urf pari
(i know many of u know me as PARI.. but thats my nick name.. starting with my ff.. i just wanted u all to know my real nameš)
INDEX
PART 1---- PAGE 4 š
PART 2----PAGE 8š
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