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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

I know i'm too late to comment on this OS but i can't stop myself from doing so. This is one of the most haert wrenching OS i had ever read. After i read i just wished none should suffer from this fate. You have awesome writing style. It was a pleasure to read emotion of this level of Sharon in the form of letter.

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Priyanka

@CoffeeAddict

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Guys I'm making a PM list... please like this comment if oyu want a PM regarding my new OS or the SS I've just started!!

Luv,
Pree!

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

That was so painfully beautiful. In a single letter you managed to capture so many emotions. It's uncanny. You have a gift. You appeal to people's emotions, making them love you and hate you at the same time. Of course, people will hate you for killing Swayam, leaving a broken-hearted Sharon behind. But you killed him so beautifully, that they can't help loving you. Loving your writing style. It's magical. A perfect blend of emotions.

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

pree i want pms of ur works.

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Its awesome:-)beautifully written:-)pls pm me ur works:-)

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NamD

@NamD

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

loved your OS. I had tears in my eyes, while reading. Really your writing style is awesome.
Hope to read more of your works. Please pm me if you already anything posted

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tashu20

@tashu20

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

beautifully written...heart touching

have tears in my eyes...loved it...😊

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

It is most touching OS i hve read. Words are not enough to express the beauty of this OS. But cant control my tears when i read that swayam died. Swaron milne se pehele bichad gaye😭 You have done a wonderful job Pree.

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Jum

@-Jum-RulzZ-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#49

i dont knw wat to say!

but i started crying fr diss.. and i didnt read the one wer uu wrote in the top dat swayam is dead already but.. i... i am Speechless! i cant utter any word nw!
I literally cried after the story ended!
Beautiful..
Impossible to compliment! i wish.. swayam hadnt died!
but.. It really..really.. made me cry!
a real tear dropped dwn wen i came tu knw Swayam died! alredy!