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Posted: 14 years ago
looks like no update tonight!!!!!!!!!(sigh)😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
post updated - pg 92 Chapter complete
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zephyrr

post updated - pg 92 Chapter complete

yaar u r the best!!!!!!!
u r the sweetest person alive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by narainapurva - 14 years ago
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Ok I fall short of words for this one, I did come to think Riddhima was right, but now I do know HOW wrong she was to do what she did even if she was right with her intentions.

For her its about making him feel better and take the pain away from him, from herself too because she cant see him in pain.But like I've said a number of times ONLY he knows what it is to feel it and live with. He has gone through it and honestly its no joke to live the entire life alone. Riddhima should have thought over what she said , because her words were harsh to say the least, Its very easy to tell him that people get over their grief. People do, but thats when someone else is with them through it, not whem the person is all alone to face all the ordeals possible, and that too at such a tender age. When one doesnt even know the meaning of life, or what its like.
She isnt wrong in wanting relief for him but isnt right in her way at all.
This is like scraping the wounds he is trying to heal.

I do not blame her entirely, she is right when she wants him to remember his parents with a smile, and not be horrified with those memories.But like you've put it, he cant do anything about it, when he feels so much pain, that he cant manage.
Getting over something like that aint easy, and Riddhima needs to stop pushing him into it, rather she should think over it properly and do whats right. Ignoring him, just because she needs time to think over aint helping, that poor guy has too much deal with already, he doesnt need another reason to be worried about.

I just hope they both sort it out soon, and even though Riddhima's intentions werent wrong at all, she was wrong in what she said to him.I can see it affect him badly, and its only her who can get him out of it now.

Rachna, I am in awe of the way you write. The way you can put forward the most deepest, complicated, emotions so beautifully and put forward their opinions so clearly , making us feel the way they do is something man. Its a rare talent and you are fantastic with it.
I love Armaans entire outburst as well as Riddhima's. I hadnt expected Armaan to reply back that way at all, but his outburst almost left me in tears. Thats the power of your writing 😍

LOVE you, you've been working so much on these updates !

Edited by Ankita.M - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey it was heartfull n hearttouching part
loved it alot
it feelx bad to see armaan pain

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Ankita.M

Ok I fall short of words for this one, I did come to think Riddhima was right, but now I do know HOW wrong she was to do what she did even if she was right with her intentions.


For her its about making him feel better and take the pain away from him, from herself too because she cant see him in pain.But like I've said a number of times ONLY he knows what it is to feel it and live with. He has gone through it and honestly its no joke to live the entire life alone. Riddhima should have thought over what she said , because her words were harsh to say the least, Its very easy to tell him that people get over their grief. People do, but thats when someone else is with them through it, not whem the person is all alone to face all the ordeals possible, and that too at such a tender age. When one doesnt even know the meaning of life, or what its like.
She isnt wrong in wanting relief for him but isnt right in her way at all.
This is like scraping the wounds he is trying to heal.

I do not blame her entirely, she is right when she wants him to remember his parents with a smile, and not be horrified with those memories.But like you've put it, he cant do anything about it, when he feels so much pain, that he cant manage.
Getting over something like that aint easy, and Riddhima needs to stop pushing him into it, rather she should think over it properly and do whats right. Ignoring him, just because she needs time to think over aint helping, that poor guy has too much deal with already, he doesnt need another reason to be worried about.

I just hope they both sort it out soon, and even though Riddhima's intentions werent wrong at all, she was wrong in what she said to him.I can see it affect him badly, and its only her who can get him out of it now.

Rachna, I am in awe of the way you write. The way you can put forward the most deepest, complicated, emotions so beautifully and put forward their opinions so clearly , making us feel the way they do is something man. Its a rare talent and you are fantastic with it.
I love Armaans entire outburst as well as Riddhima's. I hadnt expected Armaan to reply back that way at all, but his outburst almost left me in tears. Thats the power of your writing 😍

LOVE you, you've been working so much on these updates !


I'm sure they'll work things out.. But yeah.. I had tipped my scales in favor of Armaan in this chapter.. LOL!! So he's won round two! 😆 But Riddhima always thought how he needed to vent out his pain and get over it somehow.. Or most readers did.. But all i wanted to put forth was that Armaan cant do that.. He doesnt need help.. He knows how to deal with it. The only way he had found when he had faced it all.. Does that even make sense? 😕
Anyway, next part will be lighter.. I hope.. 😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
okay...! I am completely shocked!!!!!!!🤢 I thought u were going to take away armaan's pain forever!!!!!!!!!!!!! But, what u have written is completely opposite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [LIAR😡😡😡]
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: khahani

Riddhima needs to back off and Armaan needs to stop dwelling on his past...R unfortunately is suffocating him with her need to free him from his suffering though she means well...remember me mentioning about her sympathetic behaviour? :s

And I bet he will go home and wallow over his attitudes towards her and come back...which I don't think he should not straight away. They need time away from each other.

And that was my random visit to India-forums and to TWOS...adios :)


A sharp remark that! I'm not sure of what Armaan will do.. But they are not getting any time away from each other...😳😛
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Originally posted by: narainapurva

okay...! I am completely shocked!!!!!!!🤢 I thought u were going to take away armaan's pain forever!!!!!!!!!!!!! But, what u have written is completely opposite!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [LIAR😡😡😡]



I wasnt going to take away anything.. LOL!!
Riddhima was trying to do something but she clearly failed.. so i guess we'll have to wish her better luck for next time.. LOL!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: zephyrr

post updated - pg 92 Chapter complete



OMG u completed :O..LOLL

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