The World's Oldest Story!! #10 - Page 76

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee
it was heart wrenching part
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey!
it's been a while since i visited If!
bt i m glad i did just to see tht u hv updted a lot!i mean two complete parts..
sadly,i can't read it right now!bt i hv got it in my phone so i can reaad it anytime...
thank u!
can't wait to read it!
i shall comment again after reading it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
dat was so amazingly written ... armaan's thots wr vry vry well shown ... bt m feelin bad 4 riddhima ... all she wantd 2 do was reduce armaan's pain bt she ended up increasin his n her pain ...
i just hope evrything comes bak 2 normal ...

thanx 4 d pm n continue soon ...

ritika
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Posted: 14 years ago
I really don't know what to say ...I am still trying to digest the effect of Arman's Outburst. Poor Ridhima was only trying to help him but all went wrong. I had tears in my eyes through out reading this part.I don't know whom to support or whom not. In this situation one has to surrender .And I am glad that Ridhima did realize certain things here. Sometimes it's good to allow the things to be unfold themselves by the own time . It's so true that nobody will ever understand what a ten yr old boy went through that time . Loosing everything in your life at this tender age is not a joke. And may be it was his way of dealing with it. Not only Ridhima's heart by mine also shattered when Arman said "You'll just have to accept me for the way I am.. Or just let me go.. " and i was just praying Oh God not again.

Continue soon. I am keeping my fingers crossed

P.S- But the diary was really awesome. I can't thank enough niki for that. I really really hope that someday Arman and ridhima will both go through that again and read all parts written there and cherish the moments.
Edited by shonagudia - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
situation is quite serious

poor AR

the most scary part
"You'll just have to accept me for the way I am.. Or just let me go.. "

dont do this with us even i can totelate seperation too but not 3rd person between them n that payal gal is there too

nikki's diary is just awsome wowww RULTO RAHUL

but again armaan's past bring tear in my eyes

no bad twist k????/

update soon
Edited by jiyaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
hope everything will be
back to normal between AR
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
the confrontation was awesm... n armaan said the same thing that i had mentioned in my last to last comment abt... the void in his life that cant b filled by n e one...it did bring tears in my eyes.. ofcourse becoz my ammy was in pain... bt i felt bad for ridzy too.. poor girl she isint at fault at all.. she jus wanted to help him... bt she ended up opening his wounds.. bt i knw she will make up to that.. though that pain wont leave them.. bt they hav to live wid it.. n they will by being beside each other in evry step & ya i also feel ridzy is nt wrong abt few things like.. making his family involve in his happiness n to remeber the good times he spent wid them.. bt again its easier said than done.. ... its hard imagining wat a 10 yr old might have gone thru... i cant even imagine my self in that place..

@niki's diary.. it was beautiful.. i always anted to make one.. bt neevr gt time or say my laziness gt ovr me hehe... bt it was splendid..
Edited by vaishiksg - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey :)

I loved the update! It was beautiful! :)

The whole description of the book that Nikki had was AMAZING! I could totally imagine a chotu sa Armaan smiling that mischievous smile of his :D

Damn! He's angry at her? :( Please resolve this soon, I hate to see them fighting :|

Do continue soon!

Oh and sorry if my comment's a little scattered, I'm sick and so I've been in bed :P

Fab update :)

xoxo
Aanya
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Posted: 14 years ago
re edited my comment above
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Posted: 14 years ago
undoubtely very well written but I HATED ridhi here why? She acted lyk dominating character who has all d solutions ,everytyme when she is responsible she'll shed tears &forgiven kyu yaar? How can nikki & Rahul can't see His pain they knew him so well not even Rahul looked at him . Plz no memory loss drama lyk Ekta 'm really afraid of angry young men +highway combo lolzz
I want shanky to come forward to solve dis matter only his fatherly love can make Ammy overcome his past wat i think enough of acting lyk jerk in their life .no more partial towards his daughter
Edited by zara-20k - 14 years ago

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