The World's Oldest Story!! #10 - Page 18

The part is not so YiPII.. LOL!!

Armaans words were definitely harsh, but only the person going through can understand how bad it hurts to be all alone all your life, then have someone in your life who means the world to you and just when you try to get over the pain you've gone through it keeps coming back to you through something or someone time and again.He cant live the happiness , cant not want to celebrate it too.He must be feeling too hollow that he cant manage to keep a check on his emotions and obviously this all frustrates him. He feels lonely, lost confused and doesnt know how to go about managing his feelings towards his past and living with it now in his present with Riddhima. He probably wants to get over the pain once and for all so that he can look towards a better future without all that haunts him now.

Riddhima's concern and her understanding towards him is applaudable, honestly anyone else who was told off in such a way wouldnt have stopped to think back at why Armaan said something like that but she yet sat to think about it and analyse why he said all of it. She wasnt wrong in asking him anything, she wanted him to feel better, but then again like she herself guessed. At times a person just needs to sort himself and his thoughts out and everything cant be explained in words.

What I love about your writing is that you put ahead all the thoughts both of them feel so crystal clear, no ones at fault and yet both want to be there for each other and apologize. I LOVE how each trait about the person and their life and its instances blend so beautifully.

This is so real. A person goes through all of this on a day to day basis and you'v put it real well in the story !

Great part, am hoping they sort out in the next scene, not that they already have but they need to talk it out for sure !