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Posted: 13 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: lakshmi_SG
S3...terrific update...👏👏👏. This is the 1st episode I liked all the tracks. Surprisingly monish has attracted my attention this time. Usually I would admire whatever simple gesture from samrat , this time it is monish who has made a remarkable impression alongwith samrat.

Probably this episode has given a new dimension to monish' characterisation. I think it is a deliberate attempt by you to highlight all the 3 male leads in equal manner , so in that pov monish has been made sloghtly +ve , atleast wrt his feelings for gunjan.

And again samrat's monologue and his internal breakdown , ( feeling that he has done 2 murders ) is so beautifully narrated.

As far as the last scene is concerned I think it may be an imagination by either monish or gunjan, I guess.

@Happy diwali to all of you...!

Thank you LAKSHMi for your nice reply.Its really encouraging for us

V have always said that all 3 R equally positive and equally negative... Each having a shade of 'Gray'. MONiSH also has positive traits which were to be highlighted, and this update was for that. He is not bad person... Due to his parents...he suffered a lot in his life... but,his view about leaving life is totally different from SAMRAT. He doesn't care about Name,Fame or his Status... He only wants his own small family... with GUNJAN.

Thank you for liking SAMRAT's breakdown scene. The last scene will be continued in the next update, which V plan to post soon...May B, on 6th Nov.11.

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: arzzo
hi sorry for late reply was busy in my papers
ur post was really awesome love the emotions of all the four characters
rahul was for the short tym but yet gunji and his conv was sweet and cute the way he expressed his love and tender for gunji was cute😳 and monish he is the girgid (cahmaliyan)😆 of the story uska colour kb change hu no one can tell jb kisi koa us per tora sah taras ahna lagta hai tb he woa koi aisi harkat karta hai kah gussa sah insaan lal (red) hu jahta hai by god😡 the teaser scene was great but really curious to know what happen nxt gunji abi tu usper tora believe karna lagi thi kah usna aisa karkah apna sar per khulhari mar lii 😆ab woa sb plan bhool jayi bt woa monish hai he will figured some thing out kyu kah woa har mana wala nai and as u say that the battle is about to begin and i am eagerly waiting for its begining 😉😍and sam bechara kitna roa raha tha i dont like seeing him crying bt aur tha poor guy 😭per woa bhi samrat hai kuch to kara gha per dekh nah yeh hai kb kare gha aur kaisa 😕 filhaal tu bechara kitna shocked 😲aur depressed hai gunji was so cute and innocent bechari jb kisi per tora believe karti hai woa insaan uska believe tor dahta hai 🥺she was so nervous and scared in kissing😔 scene pata nai ab kya kare gii bechari how would she save herself😕 and love the ending i am so curious to know what happen nxt just cant wait for ur nxt update plzz try to cont soon😊

Thanx ARZZO for your sweet reply and liking this update as well. Extremely Sorry for very late feed-back😳.

RAHUL and GUNJAN... their bond is a beautiful one... and GUNJAN opens up only in front of him. They share a really cute bonding of friendship.

MONiSH is not a chameleon yaar... He is doing all he can to get GUNJAN in his life, he is genuinely trying to change his wayward ways for her. Actually, his past was so much painful...now,he doesn't want to take any risk. He is big threat for SAMRAT & RAHUL , B'coz he is too smart.

SAMRAT has feelings, he is human. So, some day he is going to collapse... and just the thought of seeing GUNJAN with MONiSH has broken him completely.Now, he knows this fact that,he lost her for his Big ambitions... But,Yes he is SAMRAT... He'll be back in action,very soon. And this is really interesting part... Please little wait...😳

GUNJAN is really sweet n innocent... She is still trying to leave her life with same happiness... Very concerned for NANDA's family... B'coz she knows the importance of them in her life. She can't forget that she is an orphan. She is really very hurt with SAMRAT's comment about her character and her lovable parents.

This kissing scene is to be continued in the next update which V will B post on 6th Nov. 11 [Sun].

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#943

Originally posted by: gunurlove
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Hey Joseph..And S3... 😊

Again it was An Awesome...Mind blowing and tremendouse Update...👏👏👏

Starting with Mohish scene in Nanda house..Monish's happiness and Excitement of lunch wid Gunjan and her family were very nicely written...

Gunjan's concern for her family and house was written very nicely..Poor doll.. didn't even know that somewhere shez the reason behind this problem...Innocent baby😳

all she was thinking abt just Rahul and her uncle...and she was exactly ryt with her both P.O.V...definitely she cant go against her Uncle's decision..but she never hide anything from Rahul...so confused and worried Gunjan's whole scene was created very mind blowingly👏

then came again a Comparison between Samrat and Monish in her thoughts...

and as usual Samrat had dominant part in her thoughts...all her thoughts strting from seeing Samrat in Monish's cabin to end were fantastic..every line was just Superb...i love the line" me kyu chahti thi wo mujhe ek bar kehte Gunjan wapis aajao" ..she miss him but still not able to forget that painful n harsh words which he used for her family n parents...and its quite natural...no one can forget so easily any wrong statement for her parents..that too when they r not alive...

n i was laughing at her innocence when she thought.."me monish ko b kahon gi mujhe Shergill k kisi project me involve na karen" i was like..wo to chahta hi yahi he..k samrat se bilkul door kar de..😡

Rahul Gunjan phone conversation was very nice...they truly share a very gud bonding of true frndship...that without seeing her he can find out something wrong sense in her..but poor Gunjan..kya kare wo...hope monish would changed his decision abt that building n appartment matter...coz he z not at all a bad peson by heart...only circumstances have made him too bad at this extent

Samrat in his cabin scene was also a wonderful scene...the way when he was standing near the window made me very sad...obviousely na..today hez going to hand over gunjan or Gunjan's documents to Monish..and the hope of calling back her to in his office would also die with it...😭

im feeling veryyy bad for Sajan...both hide theri feelings to each others..and start thinking anything abt eachother...n totally misunderstand each other.😭😭

Samrat's anger (when he was thinking abt Gunjan-Monish) was so Extreme.😲

this whole scene was wonderful...specially that particula r para.."mujhe ya meri company ko tum jesi employe ki zarorat nai..me aaj b zinda hun wala..)oh God it was so gud.⭐️👍🏼

i wonder he spent only 8 days with her..and hez so much fell in love with her like that Threatened part to Monish...was so much passionate😲

Then Hot caffe scene..it was Mind blowing...OMG all male lead in this FF are so Day dreamers...one is Rahul...who engrosse in his future thoughts when Gunjan just simply says "kch di dino ki to bad he..phir hm saath hi honge.." one is Monish...who imagined his family with Gunjan and baby...while seeing any loving family...though its quite natural..when someone fall in love..he/she always imagine her/his love very where in every relation...but here the probelm is..Our Samrati sir ji will never ever plan or imagine anything like this with Gunjan..not even in his dreams😉😆

that girl part im so sure will not b meaningless.may b further she would creates problem between monish n Gunjan..definitely kisi b tra rasta to clear karna he na Sajan k lye...😉

i was praying that Samrat would listen n see all this..and thanksfully its happend..yaa s3 u were ryt..now u write the same as i imagined...😉

Samrat-Monish confrontation was as usaul mind blowing..Awesome..i can understand Monish condition...n i know after going through all this he has full right to choose a very gud life partner for him...who can soothe him and make his life worth to live... but woi Sam wali baat he a..Sirf Gunjan hi kyun..duniya me or larkiyan nai hen kya😉..this whole scene was Tremendouse...Superb..very very very well written👍🏼

but the main thing when samrat him abt the reason behind all this...oh God...my heart was sinking...when Monish spoke her name..n all...i was copletely feelings the dead Samrat there...🤢...and yup...remember joseph..in 1st Monish Samrat's confrontation scene i had told u na that ye kya bol dia sammy ne Monish ko..ab to wo naha dho k Gunjan k peeche par jae ga...when monish repeated these lines to Samrat...whatever he said to him in Richa's party..in no time i recollected my words upon this statement..😳..and for a moment my heart beat stopped when samrat asked him..does she love u..i knew very well what was Sam feeling at that moment...😭

but i think today Monish all statements abt Gunjan would be clear Sam's all misunderstandings..whatever he thinks abt monish and gunjan's frndship or relationship..😉

Samrat pain was written awesomely guyss...u have written all this FF very deeply and bht mehnat se...hard work is clearly visible..👏

Bestest Bestest part of this whole update was again Samrat's thoughts...his feelings..his conditions..everything...when he go back to hotel for taking his cell..n hear monish taking to gunjan..then in his room..OMG..i loved that room scene alot...❤️

he was crying...bussiness Tycon Samrat Shergill was crying for his P.A..i so wished Gunjan dekh leti..wo jo kehti he unhe kya far k parta he mere jane se..wo to meri shakal b nai dekhna chahte ye woo...😳

Sam's thoughts each n every line was marvellouse...kya kya btaon ab..whole scene was just mind blowing..im speechess.." mene kaha tha ghareeb larki se kare par ye to nai kaha tha gunjan se kare...I agree...Uska childhood meri tarah achha nahin tha... Main uske pain ko samajh sakta hoon... lekin,woh inn sab mein GUNJAN ko kyun laa raha hai...?? Duniya mein aur koi ladki nahin hai kya...?? Usse agar shadi karni hai...apni family banani hai, toh yeh woh kisi aur ke saath bhi toh kar sakta hai... sirf,GUNJAN hi kyun...??

Main...Main...kal hi GUNJAN se kahoonga... khud kahoonga...ki woh chup-chap Office join kare... bas bahot hua... bahot ho gaya yeh sab Drama... Now,I can't tolerate it anymore...agar usne mana kiya toh...toh phir court...

all these lines and others lines were just superrb guys..i have no words to appreciate..and then mene apna pyaar bech dia..that what i was telling na..k ye to aisa lgta he Monish Gunjan ko khareed raha he...Overall Sam's hurt feeling were written an awesome manners...👏

and then finally came My "Manhoos" scene😉😆..and as Soham had said to me to no comments before part 34...so i think its better i dont comment on it...but S3 ji..now i came to know..its must b a dream sequence..May b Monish will b imagining all this...tabhi to fta fat tum logon ne wind up kar dia na scene wahan..suspence create krne ko..😉😉..i wish k yahi sach ho..that y im feeling quite relax..but ye na ho like past me ye sochti reh jaon or tum log sach me reality daal do is scene me😉..

but no my point is.how can it b real...abi to Gunjan ne join b nai kia..or agr Monish aisi harkaten karga..to Gunjan to wahin ta ta byee byee kar k chali jae gi na..😆

ok guys...it was Fabulouse update...continue soon the next part and thanks for the pm😊

Thank U RiJA for your awesome detail Reply.V love reading feed-backs from our readers, so never do V feel bored reading the feedback. Actually, V always wait for your feed-back. Extremely Sorry,for very late answering reply.

GUNJAN is the most clean and pure hearted girl anyone can come across. It is immensely difficult for us to write her character. B'coz, writing about such a simple girl takes a lot of effort, but at the end, V R happy when our readers appreciate our effort. She is really an angel... Uss character mein kuchh toh aisa hona chahiye...jo kisi ko bhi attract kar le...so easily. Her simplicity n pure thoughts is her real beauty.As a writer,V feel that,Her character is most tough character of this FF b'coz, she can't react properly...and woh complain bhi nahin kar paati hai... She always search her fault... aur lastly khud ko hi convince karti hai...

The comparison between MONiSH and SAMRAT, will always be there for GUNJAN, she will think more about SAMRAT as she has admitted her love for him, much as it is now like a dream that will never be fulfilled. She is deeply hurt with his behavior. She respects MONiSH a lot... she can't ignore his kindly behavior in that night of DELHi .

As of now, RAHUL is just a friend. What will happen when she will have to see RAHUL in the same light, hmmm... wait and watch😳.

She has no idea about MONiSH's plan, so she thinks that as they are business partners, maybe she may have to interact with SAMRAT... her simple mind can't think about anything complicated.

Yes, MONiSH is not bad. He just wants a normal life with the girl he loves. Nothing wrong in that. What is wrong is the obsession...??? as of now, none of the 3 characters possess this trait, but then, you never know when this love will turn to obsession.And this is the theme of this 'Love Story'.

Misunderstandings play a major role in the development of a story. You can call it by 'any' name, but at the end, it is one character unable to understand another one that makes the story move forward. And here too, misunderstandings is playing a major role.

RAHUL and MONiSH have painted rosy pictures about their future with GUNJAN. SAMRAT has an aim in life... to avenge his mother's death. So as of now, he is not even thinking about a life with GUNJAN, leave alone dreaming about her.And don't forget that Restaurant incident with RiCHA (Jab usne usse eyes close kar imagine karne ko kaha tha aur SAMRAT ne GUNJAN ko white dress mein dekha tha) He couldn't accept this. He is very practical person... He knows what is the right of his professional life and that time RiCHA is only 1 option left for him.

RiA MODi is an important cameo. Nothing more than that. She is symbol of MONiSH's previous 'Pleasures'.Totally opposite from GUNJAN.

Everyone has a right to a happy life, but then so does GUNJAN. Sadly, here it is only about their past, their life. But then, such is the reality, V guess.

SAMRAT is after all a human. He has feelings too and which better place to open up to yourself than the safe confines of your room. A place where no outsider can enter without your consent. SAMRAT has released just a part of his pent up feelings. He repents giving MONiSH those papers. Yes, SAMRAT SHERGiLL, the business tycoon made a deal... He swapped a person he loves for an ambitious project.

The last scene is to be continued in the next update which V will B posting soon [6th Nov.11]. And V hope this long reply to your comment has not bored U. Thanx for appreciating our efforts at writing the emotions of each character.

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Sonia

@SwaNia_1

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#944

Originally posted by: Joseph_A
Again superb work S3.👏 👏 👏Awesome 👏. Totally outstanding work of piece.👏👏👏Too good.😊

Guys,I really want to say 1 thing about your 'Thoughts Lines'... It is amazing...😊 so much clear...very easy for understand character's view...their confusion... solution... justification... everything so smoothly.😳 Readers can relate or understand them, with so easily...whatever,Gunjan , Monish n most importantly Samrat's thoughts lines ... it was clearing their inner feelings.Really, GR8 work S3.👏

In this Update... Gunjan's part was Awesome...😊 RaJan convo scene was short but,so so cute... I loved it...😳 (specially that Pic. of Rahul😳) Samrat-Monish part was extra-ordinary...again superb piece of work.👏 I liked it so much...what a dialogues... Ria's entry is little surprising for me too...(along with Monish😆) and thereafter,Samrat's scene...It was so touchy n emotional...😭(Perfect pics. selection,It was so easy for visualized whole sequence😭) And last but not the least...that kissing part...I know the importance of that scene in this story so...😕waiting for further parts...😳Please update soon...

Joseph❤️.

Thank You Joseph. What can we say but just thank you??

We are so happy that you like the way we write the thought lines. Writing those dio's is really very challenging and who would understand it better than writers themselves...😃

We are trying to maintain the essence of each character... maintaining Gunjan's innocence is by far the most difficult for us.😳

Thank you for liking the pictures... Soham has a tough job chosing the pics😆

Ria Modi is just an important cameo... and about that kissing scene... will be continued in the next update to be posted on 6th nov.😊

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rija

@gunurlove

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#945

Hey S3...Thanks Soham for so sweet reply..and yup offcourse i have not at all get bored to read ur reply...infact me too wait for ur long replies..on my long long feed back..😃..but Veryy Sorry for my so many mistakes in my comment this time...actually i was feeling very sleepy..and i didn't recheck it...so thats y..i have done so many mistakes this time..Sorry...

Guys plzzz try to update next part on 5th nov na..as i'll be not able to read it after sat nyt to till 14...plzzz try to update one day earlier...😳😳😳..plzzz

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#946

I'm Happy =) 😳 🤗 & Other FF ?! 😆

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#947

Originally posted by: gunurlove
Hey S3...Thanks Soham for so sweet reply..and yup offcourse i have not at all get bored to read ur reply...infact me too wait for ur long replies..on my long long feed back..😃..but Veryy Sorry for my so many mistakes in my comment this time...actually i was feeling very sleepy..and i didn't recheck it...so thats y..i have done so many mistakes this time..Sorry...
Guys plzzz try to update next part on 5th nov na..as i'll be not able to read it after sat nyt to till 14...plzzz try to update one day earlier...😳😳😳..plzzz

Hey RiJA !! don't feel sorry for that mistakes😳 B'coz, I understand those situation... (especially sleepy things 🥱 😆) Its happens with us too...Sometimes sleepy mode mein kya-kya type hota hai ?? yeh toh next department ko zyada pata hoga😳😆.

V'll be try to post this part on next day... but,can't promise... B'coz,Now working on Last part...(Part-F) . Its a important part so take so much time...
and still not satisfied with some Dio portions of ready parts...so,going to change and add some new lines. But,definitely V'll be try hard to post next day.

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Swati

@SwaNia_2

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#948

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
I'm Happy =) 😳 🤗 & Other FF ?! 😆

😳 After this update. One FF at a time, dear 😉

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#949

Originally posted by: cool_tuli

😍 😍 😍
RESERVED...!!!

Okay now... I have finally finished reading 👏 👏 👏
N U GUYS... GET A... 😃 😃 😃 😃
Wait wait wait... lemme make myself clear as for what did u get this! This obviously means that I just loved the update... But sum people might feel like y did I love it so much even though it was really sad for Samrat... So please read d following if anybody interested for d reason! 😉 Warning: This can b deadly boring😛

So lemme tell u guys that this update was basically masculine one! It was for Samrat, Monish as well as Rahul! All the three male leads were present with their own importance... N that was d best part of this update... Watever Monish did was known to all... coz he had revealed his plans earlier... so not a big surprise! Yaa wat surprised me was that Monish confessed his love for Gunjan to Samrat soo soon!! Coz I thought that may b sumwer Monish had doubts that even Samrat loved her... so telling him d truth so early myt hav had resulted into problems for him! N may b he had plans to tadpaaofy his friend-turned-foe Samrat! 😕

M really sorry guys plss don kickass me... I really wanted Samrat to face this day! M very very very very sad seeing him like this but I swear I wanted him to feel this! I didn expect this day wud cum soo soon... (for d same reason given above) but I did... n agar tumlogo ne nai daala hota na!? toh i wud hav had told u to do something lyk this... 😳 😛 Because whatever he was doing was just "vayyiaad" I mean invalid. 1st blame Gunjan n scold that poor thing in that way... 2nd ask her to b back in that hell that too in such a wonderful (sarcasm intended) tone! Then 3rdly at Monish's cabin... Who wud want to cum back to him!? N the worst part was this deal... to earn KIWISH INT. I can understand that from a businessman's POV he was correct but he knew that he cudn survive without Gunjan still went for it...! Ab bhugto... But yes I also have to admit that Monish's kaminapanti led to all this! 😆
But u noe why m happy...!? Coz I noe that Samrat will b more thoughtful n more matured now! And then his new decisions will bring him back to Gunjan... 😊 Coz at the end of the day it has to be SaJan Wonderland afterall... 😉 😳

Yaaa I noticed an exciting thing in this update... That Raheja's thing!!! I have sum thoughts in my mind regarding the further activities with them... will tell u guys only aftr u update ur thoughts... 😉

Okay... what was d last thing??? The Kiss!!? Was that real??? I mean REAL wala real?? 😲😆
wooop that was another surprise...! If it was THAT real then may Monish's soul RIP! no no no I won't do anything...there r people for that!😉 u think I can harm Monish!? 😳 I???

Gunjan n Rahul were cute... very interesting conversation...! Waiting for Rahul's next phone call... 😉 N Gunjan's thinking was also very nice... very practical i hav to say!!! Especially the thoughts regarding her Ex-Boss Samrat Shergill...! From her POV she was absolutely correct... but this may hurt Rahul to the core...!! 😳 Lets see how u guys unfold the story...!! Waiting for d next part now...!! Will switch myself to APHG now... n finish with it too... 😉
Gud luck 🤗

Thank U TULi for your reply and of course for the chocolates😊. [It was so delicious...Thanx for 3 pieces...Easily distribute kar liya...😆 JOS ka piece tum par due raha😆] And please don't say that the reply is boring. V appreciate the time our readers take to write long and appreciating or criticism filled comments... both equally important for us.

At some point in the updates, it is necessary to justify the actions of all the characters... especially the main leads. No point in justifying the actions at one go...better when the story demands. This update demanded that MONiSH's reasons for his behavior and SAMRAT's for his be highlighted. Also necessary was RAHUL's presence in this update as he too is an important part of this FF.

Yes, sometimes such rude awakenings are required...SAMRAT also probably needed one such rude awakening. He is now letting his heart take over, though it cannot be a sudden transition.

Difficult as it is for her to forget SAMRAT...GUNJAN tries...though soft hearten, she tries to be strong.

About the last scene...the kiss scene... continuation of that scene in the next update which V will B posting shortly. [Now,next Day...😉]