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SOHAM SWATI SONIA ...😊😊...OMG!! Wow!! What a Super -Duper Excellent, totally marvellous , Mind blowing Fantabulous and Full on Rocking Update ...JUST Simply OUT-Standing S3 Soham,Sonia,Swati ...Fantastic, Fabulous work guys...Very well written...πŸ‘πŸΌeach scene each part was perfect...U Superbly showed Each characters thoughts, Emotions,feelings,happiness, pain , anger and views ..πŸ‘πŸΌ

U very well showed that though every character is in pain but their way of accepting pain and facing pain is different...and how each characters reacts differently in different situations and handles it differently ...each character is different and has different views about life and situations they have faced But 1 thing is similar in Samrat-Gunjan-Monish each has gone through pain in their life and have handled it their own way and life has taught and given each one different view and experience ...Samrat-Monish-Rahul share one thing they all want Gunjan in their life...and none of them is ready 2 sacrifice ..each wants her in his life and can go 2 any lengths 2 have her in his life...every character wants happiness and peace...and None is thinking about WHAT Gunjan wants...U vert well showed Emotions and thoughts of every character...WELL DONE ...ROCKING WORK SOHAM,SONIA,SWATI...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
...Bahut bahut Bahut mazza aaya read karkey update...AWESOME UPDATE...πŸ‘πŸΌ..
Gunjan is a very simple innocent and sweet girl ...and her emotions and feelings were superbly described...Shardaji and Mr Nanda's emotions and pain were excellently shown...Each person in Nanda household was in pain ...Pain of loosing their beloved home...the home where they have so many memories ...Yes any place they go they will make home their ...they will be together so a new place will also be home and soon they will have new memories BUT BUT the place where they have so many emotions attached ...where they have faced many things ...seen happiness , pain and beautiful moments ...where their child was born and where they spent time with their daughter Gunjan...that place will always hold a special place in their heart...and now they are about 2 loose their home...and SOMETIMES when the pain is very strong and thoughts are 2 deep ...then we donot need words 2 convey our pain...a touch is enough 2 show the pain and emotions we are going..at that time we feel loss 4 words...U showed this situation very well in the nanda house hold...Shardaji Mr Nanda Gunjan each one was going through same pain ...pain of loosing their home...and shardaji and Gunjan each was lost in thoughts...each was loss 4 words ..None spoke 2 the other but could understand the others emotions completely...U showed this pain in a superb Way ...πŸ‘πŸΌ...

Gunjan is so innocent and simple and sweet her each thought in the room proves it.. Gunjan thoughts her confusion about Samrat., her hurt and pain just thinking about samrats rude behavior...her happiness at hearing rahuls voice on the Phone ...every thing was beautifully written....πŸ‘πŸΌ...Gunjan is so confused ..she is in 2 minds ...she wants 2 move on in life and wants 2 forget everything and is determined 2 do so ...But her heart and her feelings 4 samrat are stopping her...she wants 2 forget samrat...His rude and harsh behavior has given her deep pain but her heart drags her back 2 samrat...She is confused and is not able 2 understand the reason 4 samrats anger and possessiveness...her thoughts proved she has not understood and doesnot know that When a PERSON IS ANGRY AND POSSESSIVE Both at the same time then the reason may be LOVE....but its not her fault samrat always showed her that he hates her So how can she understand that actually samrat loves her...her thoughts proved that She loves samrat very much even though he has hurt her still she feels safe with him and thats why she wanted in her heart 4 samrat 2 take her away from there.......She keeps on comparing samrat and Monish and Finds monish behavior and manners good and thinks of Monish as good person But she has not even thought and asked herself 1 question that WHY DOESNT she feel safe with Monish and why does she feel safe with samrat even though when he has hurt her deeply...when she asks herself this question she will understand Monish true nature and will know his Motives ...Her each thought showed her Innocence and simple nature ...excellently written each thought of GunjanπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...I liked Gunjans excitement when RAHUL called ...πŸ˜ƒ...both rahul gunjan emotions excellently shown...each desperate 2 talk 2 the other...share their thoughts...I loved Rajans talk a lottt..πŸ‘πŸΌ.Rahul gave Gunjan Hints about his feelings By saying He is BORED BECAUSE She is not there But Gunjan So innocent she didnt understand...and her excitement at Going 4 holiday with her family and rahul and going on plane 4 1st time was also superbly described...U very well wrote Gunjans situation ..her being in 2 minds ...she wanted 2 tell rahul everything about the situation at home and How monish is helping them But couldnt because Uncle had told not 2 tell...and she didnt want 2 disobey him also...Her confusion at what she should do and her guilt at lying 2 rahul and not telling him anything was excellently shown...πŸ‘πŸΌ...and Rahul happiness at hearing gunjans voice and when Gunjan was crying he knew she was missing him his excitement everything showed rahuls deep feelings 4 gunjan...He is soon going 2 tell his mom everything about his feelings Wow!! 😊...JALDI KEH RAHUL KAHIN LATE na ho jaye...RAHUL IS secure in his thoughts that Gunjan is his and she will say yes 2 him ...What will happen When rahul finds out about Gunjans feelings??πŸ˜•...EXCELLENTLY described Gunjan emotions thoughts pain and rahul emotions were also superbly written...Awesome part Soham Swati SoniaπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...

Samrats anger and desperation and ego his jealousy and pain very well shown..he is in love with Gunjan But not ready 2 accept that she means more 2 him then anything...he cant stand monish in Gunjans life ..and hates monish 4 twisting his arm and making him do something which he doesnt want 2 and he is jealous when he sees them together talking...Gunjan's words AAP kaun hain etc...has hurt him and he is 4 now hiding behind his anger...he wants revenge from Monish and his thoughts that he will not leave monish proves his jealousy and hatred towards Monish...he things Gunjan leaving doesnt effect him ...he is just hiding his emotions behind anger and ego...excellent office scene of samrat...his anger jealousy hatred and pain and everything was very well shown...πŸ‘πŸΌ...

Monish restaurant scene was amazing..U fabulously showed and described monish each thought anger, pain, happiness and hatred 4 samrat ...dreams of his life with Gunjan...his childhood How his parents have hurt him everything was superbly described.πŸ‘πŸΌ..and when that cheap girl RIA MODI wanted 2 get close 2 him the way he handled her shows Monish is willing 2 change 4 gunjan.....BUT WHY DO I FEEL THAT RIA MODI IS TROUBLE WITH CAPITAL T...and may be she will create trouble in Monishs plans and life??πŸ˜•πŸ˜• ...The way she said these words TUm JANTEY NAHI MEIN KAUN HOON ...It shows that may be she IS SOMEBODY IMPORTANT LIKE MAY be she is the daughter of an rich and influential man...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•... Monish happiness that finally he has won and his being lost in dreams imagining a family with Gunjan showed how over confident he is...He has not even proposed but he is sure he will win 😲...and S3 soham sonia Swati U very well described Monish deep pain ...the pain His parents have given him...Samrat still had his Moms love and good memories with his MOM...But Monish parents didnt love him at all ...when he was thinking about his childhood and when he was telling samrat what he had gone through at the hands of his parents showed his deep pain...I had tears in my eyes imagining this scene and just thinking as a child what Monish must have gone thru😭...Why did monish parents marry when they couldn't be faithful 2 one another ??πŸ˜•..Why did they have a child when they couldn't even take care and love their own child?..πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...How could they be cruel 2 their own childπŸ˜•πŸ˜‘.... U very well showed how his circumstances have changed him completely ..why he is like this ...he got into drinking girls his wild ways everything was just 2 run away from his pain and truth of his life ...he was hiding behind his wild ways...and He wants Gunjan is his life because he know Gunjan is a sweet simple loyal loving family oriented girl who will always stand by him through thick n thin ...he has understood this about Gunjan that she is a very lovable person but Samrat hasnot understood this yet thats why he asked MONISH Why did he want Gunjan in his life ...πŸ˜•...Thats why Monish wants her in his life ...and he can go 2 any lengths 2 have her...he wants her by hook or by crook...He knows only she can give him the peace and happiness and kind of family he always wanted...and even knowing GUNJAN MAY NOT LOVE Him he thinks he will make her love him after marriage....he doesnt understand in his desperation 4 family that U CAN NEVER FORCE ANYONE 2 LOVE YOU..PYAAR DIL SEY HOTA HA...even if he marries gunjan ..Yes she will be with him through thick n thin ..she will care 4 him and be with him always...as a wife she may even love him BUT STILL WILL SHE truly be in LOVE with HIM??? as I Feel AAP KISSI KO AAP SEY LOVE KARNEY KEY LIYE MAJBOOR NAHI KAR SAKTEY...... his circumstances are making him do weird things...But his thoughts of nanda and what he is doing 2 them taking their home etc proves he has a heart deep inside ..he knows whats right n wrong and can understand peoples pain But his desperation for love and family is such that he is playing these games...and NOW HE KISSED GUNJAN😳😑😑...How could he force himself on her ???😲😑 doesnt her feelings matter 2 him?? I JUST WISH THIS KISSING SCENE IS A DREAMπŸ˜•...BUT WILL HE STOP ??? WILL HE SACRIFICEπŸ˜•πŸ˜•.As every male lead is a grey character and none knows the meaning of word SACRIFICE...and in Todays time IN REAL LIFE ALSO Are their any people who sacrifice everything 4 their love or anyone ...????I DONOT KNOW...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...ANYWAYS what will happen in the FF MBYPH Only time will tell...Or I should say only S3 knowsπŸ˜‰...I am very curious 2 know what will happen ...WHO GUNJAN WILL MARRY???...😳...

U also showed excellently how much Samrat and monish hate one another the way they were behaving at the restaurant and insulting one another and taking pot shots at each other showed their deep hatred...WHEN MONISH said with this deal he gets GUNJAN I could imagine SAMRATS SHOCK and pain of loosing Gunjan...U showed Samrats DEEP PAIN REALLY EXCELLENTLY .πŸ‘πŸΌ...In his home in his room his each thought and his each emotion Showed How much he loved Gunjan How much pain he was in..😭😭..u superbly showed A man who few moments before had said in his office HIS HEART WILL NOT STOP if Gunjan goes away from his life forever and TODAY FATE proved him wrong HIS HEART STOPPED WHEN MONISH SAID 2 him he GETS GUNJAN and wants her in his life forever...U showed this situation superbly .πŸ‘πŸΌ.I could Imagine SAMRAT shock and pain at Monishs words...his thoughts in the room ..his TEARS showed his deepest pain his blaming himself and realizing he was wrong and shouldn't have done this and accepting his behavior was wrong towards Gunjan and saying 2 himself he commited 2 murders today THESE WORDS SHOWED HIS DEEPEST PAIN...PAIN OF LOOSING GUNJAN,, PAIN OF HIS CHILDHOOD ,,OF LOOSING HIS MOTHER..of being betrayed as a child by his own father...today samrats tears showed his each pain ...the pain he had hidden all this time since childhood This deep pain came out of samrats heart today...Samrat said He killed the Samrat the innocent samrat which DAI MAA wanted back WELL I DONOT AGREE... I FEEL THIS IS THE SAMRAT DAI Maa wanted ..A samrat who shows his tears who accepts his pain Who fights 2 get love n peace in his life ...Who is happy in life...who is not hard hearted....This is the kind of samrat dai Maa wants back and I FEEL THIS IS THE START OF GETTING THAT SAMRAT BACK...In this update U excellently showed through Samrat's deep pain and tears the innocent caring samrat who also has feelings who is not hard hearted...who also feels pain...very well written Samrats pain and feelingsπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘I ALSO GOT EMOTIONAL JUST VISUALIZING Samrats pain and his tears 😭...I could imagine this scene...and I had tears in my eyes just imagining samrats deep pain😭😭😭😭...awesomely written part ...excellentπŸ‘πŸΌ...Though Samrat has not shown his feelings 2 anyone and not even 2 His dai maa but I feel this is the start Soon a time may come when samrat will show and share his feelings...BUT WHEN ONLY S3 knows...AS every character wants Gunjan in his life WILL Samrat fight 4 Gunjan?? will he let go of his ego ??Will he call gunjan back 2 work 4 him??Will he tell her his feelings?? Will Sajan be together again?? will he marry RICHA ..How will he get gunjan in his life ??πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•πŸ˜•..SO MANY Questions only 1 answer S3----SOHAM Sonia SWATI πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š...DO UPDATE SOON ...😊... ... ....

real meaning of True love is giving and making your love happy and sacrificing everything even dying 4 ur love and not expecting anything in return...I KNOW S3 In your reply 2 me LAST TIME U SAID LOVE without expectations is a bookish though...YEH SAB KITABI BATEIN HAIN and in life we always have expectations I AGREE FULLY WITH YOU ALL SOHAM SONIA SWATI...THAT WHen we love we always have expectation from our love and we want 2 possess by hook or crook and and when are expectations are not fulfilled we get hurt ...and sometimes angry I AGREE THIS IS REALITY OF TODAYS LIFE ... In todays times WILL ANYONE SACRIFICE EVERYTHING 4 their love πŸ˜•πŸ˜•I donot know...SHAYAD YES OR NOπŸ˜•πŸ˜•...can we love without expectations MAY BE NOT...as feelings and expectations hotin hi hain...BUT History has also proven that their has been lovers who have just given and sacrificed everything 4 their love ...and have loved without expectations BUT that is history WOH ZAMANA AUR THA...BUT KYA IN TODAYS TIMES DOES THIS TYPE LOVE EXISTS...??? PATA NAHI...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...BUT TRUE MEANING OF LOVE is this only Love is giving , sacrificing dying 4 your love and doing everything 2 make your love happy ...
everyone who is in love will try 2 make their love happy but he/she will have expectations also...SO I AGREE S3 Love without expectations is a bookish thought ...And HERE ALL MALE LEADS love 1 girl and want her their lives and none is willing 2 sacrifice ...each can go 2 any lengths...WHATS GONNA HAPPEN?? WHO will back off 1st...Who will finally Marry Gunjan?who will be the lucky one?? I am really very curious 2 know whats going 2 happen next in your FF MBYPH...PLSS DO UPDATE SOON...😳...😊...ONCE again SOHAM SONIA SWATI Each characters feelings emotions thoughts nature very well described...Awesome and amazing work S3πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...Loved reading it a Lottt...bahut BAHUT BAHUT awesome update tha...πŸ‘πŸΌ..OUTSTANDING WORK SOHAM SONIA SWATIπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...

SORRY 4 LATE COMMENT...I was not well...had little fever and headache due 2 fever...and cold ...so thats why late read and comment kiya...SORRY 4 late comment😳😳...

ONCE AGAIN ROCKING UPDATE πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...

THANKS 4 Pm ...πŸ€—...Plss DO UPDATE SOON GUYS 😊...REALLY WANT 2 know what will happen next 😳...

AND...
CONGRATS 4 crossing 100 pages πŸ€—πŸ₯³πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...

A Bouquet of roses 4 You Soham Swati Sonia 4 writing such a Mind blowing update ...


AWESOME UPDATE ...DO UPDATE SOONNN...

Love Your good friend
Gunjan😊...


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Hi Friends,
Back with the next update of MBYPH...😳 V would like to thank our lovely readers for commenting on our updates and hitting the LIKE tab too... V R happy to read the comments our readers post, inspite of being pressed for time. V do understand that it is indeed time consuming to pen down a few words.

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..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]




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MONiSH looked at GUNJAN , who was looking out of the car, enjoying the music and the slight breeze that was caressing her face... stray strands of hair kissing her cheeks as she tried to push them behind her ears. MONiSH was unable to keep his eyes on the road. He knew he had to stop the car and speak up... today he would have to speak. As If he had made a decision, MONiSH stopped the car. The jolt made GUNJAN look at MONiSH, worried. Why had he stopped the car?? She asked him...

G - Aapne car kyun rok di?? Kya car main kuch problem hain??

MONiSH could not help but smile at her innocence. He spoke in a soft tone...

M - Nahin, woh... (He was hesitating to speak) Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...

G - Par woh toh aap car drive karte huye bhi keh sakte the...

M- (with a smile on his face) Haan, keh sakta hoon, par chahata hoon ki jab main woh baat kahoon, tumhara chehra mere saamne ho...

GUNJAN looked at him, with a surprised look. Definitely, something was different. She kept looking at him questioningly. He said nothing more and got off the car. He walked over to the Passenger side and opened the Door. GUNJAN was not feeling OK... She felt weird... This kind of behavior from MONiSH... She undid her seatbelt and got off. She moved towards the Passenger Door at the back, while MONiSH almost slammed the Door shut. GUNJAN was startled on hearing this. She looked at MONiSH... His stares were getting weirder... She looked downwards...
He came closer to her and keeping his hand on the car, he said... in a gentle tone... " GUNJAN... ab main hamari friendship ko next level tak le jaana chahata hoon..."

She was shocked by these sudden turn of events. What did MONiSH want to say??

She stared at him as she said... "Main... main samajhi nahin Aap kya...

But,she could not complete her sentence. MONiSH silenced her as he kept his finger on her lips. He moved his hand on her shoulder, his finger tracing her face... He was moving his fingers on her lips... GUNJAN shuddered...with fear... and she pushed him away as she tried to get away. But,strong arms held her... and pinned her against the car. GUNJAN looked at MONiSH... Love, Respect...all seemed to have vanished... She said in very worried tone... "MONiSH...yeh aap kya kar rahe hain...? Please...Aap...

He said nothing. He just cupped her delicate, pretty face in his hands and moved his lips closer to her lips... GUNJAN tried to move her face away, but MONiSH's strong grip did not let her succeed. Her lips quivered as MONiSH brought his lips closer to her. She shut her eyes in fear as she felt the inevitable...MONiSH's lips firmly clasping her lips...

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SAMRAT VILLA
" G U N J A N !! "

... As SAMRAT called out this name, he opened his eyes...



His feet which were resting on the center table hit the floor with tremendous force... beads of perspiration forming on his forehead and slowly making their way on his cheeks, his nose, his lips and his chin, wetting his face. His eyes showed fear...for GUNJAN...
He wiped his face with his hands first and then with the sleeve of his shirt as he looked around. This was his room... his house...then what he just saw was... He sighed in relief... as he shut his eyes and realised that all that was just a dream...no...not just a dream...it was a nightmare.
Slowly he opened his eyes again and stood up. He walked towards the window... He stood at the window, looking out at the dark night... just to see the clouds make way for the moon to spread its cool and calming light. A slight breeze soothed his nerves considerably... (( Thank God ! ki,yeh 1 dream tha...1 bahot hi bura dream... lekin...?? Agar yeh dream sach hua toh...?? yeh sab sach bhi toh ho sakta hai...? Woh khud usse pick-up karne jaane wala tha... It means GUNJAN abhi MONiSH ke saath hi hogi... and I am sure that,usse uss cheap person ke intention nahin pata honge... She is too much innocent... woh toh khud ko protect bhi nahin kar paayegi... kahin us MONiSH ne uske innocence ka wrong benefit lene ki koshish ki toh...?? No... Main aisa nahin hone doonga... kabhi nahin...

By the time this thought crossed his mind, his eyes had thrown out all the worry and care for GUNJAN and had accommodated instead, hatred and anger... for MONiSH... MONiSH I'll kill U... agar tumne usse haath bhi lagaya... I swear I'll kill U... Mujhe kisi bhi tarah usse rokna hoga... check his wrist watch... 10pm !! Itni raat mein woh usse kahaan le ja sakta hai...? Pehle toh mujhe yeh pata karna hoga ki, woh usse le kahaan gaya hai...?? toh hi main usse rok paaoonga...lekin kaise...?? Kaun batayega mujhe ki,woh MONiSH abhi kahaan hoga...?? MONiSH khud toh kuchh batane se raha... GUNJAN ke paas abhi cell hai ya nahin... mujhe toh yeh bhi nahin pata... Phir kis se poochoon main...uske baare mein..??
SAMRAT felt helpless at the moment...THE SAMRAT SHERGILL... who could do anything he wanted, today was so helpless... he wanted to protect her from MONiSH... but how?? In anger, he clenched his fist and banged it hard on the window sill... he turned around angrily...and stormed to his bed...and sitting down he started to think. There had to be a way... his eyes fell on the landline and he remembered... he had got the landline of GUNJAN's residence repaired... that was it!!! 1sec. !! Mujhe na sahi...uski family ko toh pata hoga...!!uski Aunty zaroor jaanti hongi ki,woh iss waqt kahaan hai...?? Mujhe unhein hi call karna chahiye...
He looked around for his cell. It was nowhere to be seen. He stood up as he moved the pillows and blanket to see where his cell was. He walked to the desk and saw his cell. He picked it up and hurriedly dialed GUNJAN's residence number...

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NANDA HOUSE
In the study room, Prof. NANDA and SHARDA Jii were busy. All files were out of the cabinet, some lying on the desk, some on the sofa... as SHARADA Jii was checking each file... they were searching for the original documents of the flat. SHARADA Jii was grumbling after looking at all the files.
Her husband just did not want to dispose off any useless Documents...very old Power Bills,Telephone Bills and what not. Had they been disposed off, finding those important Agreement Papers would have been so easy. This grumble continued as she flicked through the files. When the land line sprang to life, she looked at her husband, waiting for him to go and receive the call. But, he was not even aware of the continuous ringing of the phone...so, busy he was in reading some papers. Giving her husband an exasperated look, she walked out to the living room and received the call.She picked up the receiver and her tone sounding gentle, she said...
Sh - Hello !!
she heard a familiar voice from another side...with very sweet tone... "Hello Aunty...!!"
Sh - Oh ! MONiSH bete...!! Itni raat ko...?? Kuchh kaam tha ...??
M - Aunty...!! Its not fair...Kya main bina kisi kaam ke aap logon ko call nahin kar sakta..? (said in fake upset tone)
Sh - (with smiling face) Arre...!! nahin bete mera woh matlab nahin tha...Main toh..
M - (cuts softly) Its ok Aunty...Main bhi serious nahin tha... Woh actually mujhe GUNJAN se kuchh zaroori baat karni thi woh kal Office join karna hai na usse...iss liye kuchh
Sh - (cuts lovingly) Arre bete... Tum thehro... Main abhi usse bula deti hoon... n said loudly... " GUNJAN..!! Bete tumhaare liye MONiSH ki call hai..."
GUNJAN was busy in the kitchen at that time...she replied... "Jii Aunty...abhi aayi...Aap receiver rakh dijiye...Main...Main...room se call le loongi..."
Sh - Thik hai bete..! said to MONiSH... "Bete,woh abhi aa rahi hai..."
M - Thanx Aunty..
GUNJAN hurriedly shut the gas knob and scurried to her room. As she walked past the study, she saw her uncle and aunty busy searching for some papers. Thank God, she thought... she did not have to worry about either of them over hearing her conversation with MONiSH... she reached her room and picked up the receiver... stuttering, yet her voice sounding sweet as she spoke... GUNJAN said... "Hello...!!"
But she got no response. No one reciprocated her 'HELLO'... the line was disconnected. She kept the receiver back in it's hook and turned around. But her feet refused to move. She was hoping to clear this matter now that MONiSH had called, but then the line had got disconnected. She turned back and put her hand forward to pick up the receiver and dial MONiSH's number, but on second thoughts, moved her hand back again and turned around to leave.



Just then the phone rang again and it did not take GUNJAN more than 3 seconds to turn around and pick up the receiver... and her tone as soft and sweet as it normally was, she said...
... " MONiSH...!!"
The person on the other side was initially shocked to hear GUNJAN's voice... but this shock soon turned to happiness as he realised GUNJAN was home yet... SAMRAT, who was on the other side was unable to contain his happiness. But as always, his happiness was short lived as he realized the name which GUNJAN had uttered was MONiSH... He felt bad, but said nothing... and GUNJAN did not even allow him to say anything as she continued....." I know aapne abhi call kyun kiya... lekin aap kuchh kahein, uss se pehle main kuchh kehna chahti hoon... Please,don't take me wrong... Main really aapko hurt karna nahin chahti thi... I am really sorry for that...


As she continued talking in her sweet, soft voice, SAMRAT on the other hand was curious to know what she was talking about...?? How could a person like MONiSH get hurt with GUNJAN's behavior of all people?? She continued... " Aisa nahin ki main aap par trust nahin karti yaa phir aur kuchh... Main aisa soch bhi nahin sakti... Kyunki,agar aapne uss raat DELHi mein meri help nahin ki hoti toh,mujhe nahin pata main uss waqt kya karti..kahaan jaati...? Aap 1 achhe insaan hain...yeh maine uss raat hi jaan liya tha... lekin,phir bhi main aapke saath aaj Party mein nahin aa sakti thi... I know shaam mein mere mana karne se aapko takleef hui hogi... but,believe me...main koi bahana nahin bana rahi...
MONiSH... Uncle-Aunty abhi kitne pareshaan hain..yeh aapko pata hai...Main unhein abhi iss waqt akela nahin chhod sakti... they are my priority...Woh mere liye sab kuchh hain... Waise bhi,main jab ghar par nahin hoti...woh mere liye pareshaan ho jaate hain...issi wajah se maine SAMRAT Sir...(She paused as she remembered the day of her interview at the SHERGILL's... she started speaking again...) ...Unse request ki,thi ki woh mujhe evening tak ghar jaane ki permission de den... aur unhone mujhe jaane ki permission bhi de di thi... lekin phir...

She stopped again as she remembered the incident at THE AMBASSADOR... the humiliation that she had endured that day was not easy for her to forget. Had it been only she who was humiliated, she would not have bothered much, but it was her parents who were insulted... and that was hurting her... as she continued after wiping her tears , her voice reflected the hurt...the pain...
Any way...main aisa kuchh bhi nahin karna chahti, jis se unhein takleef ho... I know.. aap mujhse upset honge... shayad aapko kaafi bura bhi laga ho...I M really sorry for that... I really don't want to hurt you... Uncle aapko iss ghar ka 1 family member maante hain... Main khud aapki bahot izzat karti hoon... Main aapki... insult karne ki soch bhi nahin sakti... Aapne khud call kiya...yeh mere liye bahot badi baat hai... Kyunki,shayad main aapko kabhi phone nahin kar pati... I hope ki...aap meri situation ko samjhenge... aur agar aapko mera mana karna bura laga ho toh,uske liye maaf kar denge... (she said with very sweet appealing tone)
Ab aap sab kuchh jaante hain... Aap jo chahe keh sakte hain... Mujhe really bura nahin lagega... Main sun rahi hoon...
For the first time since she had started speaking on the phone, she realised that the person on the other side was not responding at all. As she waited for who she thought was MONiSH to say something, she realised that she recognised the silence on the other side, the soft breathing of the person on the other side sounded so familiar... but how could it be who she thought it was ??? She asked ... "Hello...!! MONiSH !! R U there...?? Kya aap mujhe sun rahe hain...?? "
SAMRAT hurriedly cut the call as he sat on the bed...keeping his cell by his side. He was confused at what GUNJAN had said... at the same time he was happy she had refused to go out with MONiSH...but why was she so indebted to MONiSH?? he flopped on the bed, his legs still on the floor as he kept his hand on his forehead after moving the lock of hair on his forehead behind... his thought process continued as he shut his eyes...
On the other side, GUNJAN kept the receiver back on its hook as she turned around. She felt bad for hurting MONiSH again... she had no intentions to, but... (( Oh !! Call cut kar di...?? Shayad unhein mera inkaar karna kaafi bura laga hai... Unhone kuchh kaha bhi nahin... Lekin,main kya karoon...?? Main Uncle-Aunty ko chhod kar kaise ja sakti thi...? She had reached the door of her room. She peeped out and saw that Mr. and Mrs.NANDA were still in the study... well they must be as they were not to be seen in the living room... Thank God ! Uncle-Aunty mein kisi ne kuchh nahin suna...warna,unhein bhi bura lagta ki,main unke liye MONiSH ki Party mein jaane se mana kar diya... Lekin,Main unki Party mein jaa kar karti bhi kya ...? Woh toh 1 bahot badi Party hogi...wahaan toh main kisi ko jaanti bhi toh nahin... waise bhi mujhe Parties-warties mein jaana kahaan pasand hai... Lekin,ab main kya karoon...?? MONiSH ko again call karoon...?? No...woh naraaz hain...kahin daant diya toh...?? Lekin,ab kal Office jaaoon yaa nahin...?? Shayad unhone Office aane se mana karne ke liye hi phone kiya ho...?? aur woh keh nahin paa rahe hon...?? Aise mein Kya mera unke Office jaana sahi hoga...?? ))
She turned around again and walked back in her room. She was now confused and she missed RAHUL a lot. He would be able to guide her... she needed his guidance today.Her thoughts process was interrupted by the ring of the phone again. She picked up the receiver as she said in her normal, sweet and soft tone... "Hello !"
This time she heard a voice that she she knew... and that voice said in a very apologetic tone... "Oh Sorry ! Signal weak tha iss liye,call disconnect ho gayi thi..."
G - (strangely) MONiSH aap...? Aap toh abhi...?

M - (cuts in soft tone) Arre kya hua...?? MONiSH bol raha hoon... awaaz nahin pehchani...? (asked in teasing way) Arre maine hi call kiya tha... Aunty ne kaha tum aa rahi ho... lekin,meri call hi cut ho gayi...dobara try kiya toh line engage aa rahi thi... Kaafi long call thi shayad...? Koi special tha kya...? Hamein nahin bataogi...?? (asked in sweet teasing tone)

G - (in hurry way) No...wo...woh...koi toh nahin woh bas... (She stammered as she herself did not know who she had spoken to...)
M - (with a smiling face) Arre...Just kidding Baba...I know aisa kuchh nahin hai...just relax... As a friend kya itna mazak nahin kar sakta...??
GUNJAN didn't answer immediately. She was thinking about her conversation with the stranger earlier. Who could it possibly be?? RAHUL??? No...if it was RAHUL he would have said something...atleast asked why uncle and aunty were tensed?? He would not have disconnected the call. Then was it...?? No, why would he?? MONiSH's voice brought her back to the present as he spoke...
M - Hello..?? Kahaan kho gayi...?? Tumse hi baat kar raha hoon...
G - No..nahin...wo...woh...main bas waise hi... Aap...aap... kuchh kehna chahte the...??
M - Oh Haan...woh main tumhein Office timing toh batana bhool hi gaya..toh socha khud call kar bata doon...kunki,tum toh mujhe phone karne se rahi...
G - Ji...Ji..woh...aisa nahin hai...Mujhe laga ki... I mean kya aap mujh se naraaz nahin hain...??
M - (strangely) WHAT...?? Naraaz...?? Kyun...?? Tumne aisa kya kar diya jiski wajah se main naraaz ho jaaoon...?? Waise mujhe naraz hona chahiye tha kya...?? (asked in curious tone)
G - Ji..Ji...wo...woh...maine aapke saath...Party mein aane se mana kar diya toh...
M - Oh...woh.. ?? (He shook his head as he smiled, but in a fake serious tone , he said... ) Yaa...U R right...Mujhe naraaz toh hona chahiye tha.. but,actually I was not sure ki,tum mujhe manaogi yaa nahin...? toh socha Naraz hone ka toh koi benefit hi nahin... (said in flirting way)
G - Nahin... main...mera woh matlab...
M - (laughed loudly) Arre , relax... mazaak kar raha hoon...Tum har baar itni serious kyun ho jaati ho...?? Its ok baba... Main really naraz nahin hoon... In fact,main toh uss baat ko bhool bhi chuka tha. I M not upset with U B'coz,I know and understand your problem... RAHUL bhi nahin hai... Uncle-Aunty tense hain... Unhein iss waqt tumhaari zyada zaroorat hai... Lekin,Please unse kaho ki,woh pareshaan na hon...main kuchh na kuchh kar loonga... aur jahaan tak tumhaare Party mein aane ka sawaal hai,toh its not Big deal...Parties toh hoti rehti hain... iss baar na sahi..phir kabhi saath chal sakte hain...No problem... (MONiSH said all this as if he understood her predicament...)
GUNJAN felt a lot relaxed as she heard MONiSH speak with such maturity. She said... " Thanx...Thanx for understand me..."
M - Its ok...Just relax...
G - Ji...waise aap kuchh keh rahe the Office timing se related...?? (asked softly)
M - Arre Haan..! Main toh bhool hi gaya tha...Ok..now,come to the point...look,waise toh Ofice timing 9 O'Clock ki hai lekin,main thoda different type ka Boss hoon... (said with attitude) Main bilkul aaram se work karta hoon... toh,kyunki tum meri P.A. ho..iss liye,tumhein bhi aaram se work karna sikhna hoga... (said in ordering tone) and don't worry...woh tumhaara bhi Office hai...Iss liye,bilkul relax rehna... jaise main rehta hoon... Woh FUNDA suna hai naa...
Aaj kare so Kaal kar...
Kaal kare so Parson...!
Itni jaldi kya hai Dude...
Jab jeena hai Barson... !!
GUNJAN stifled a chuckle as she heard MONiSH speak. He always made her smile with his funny talk... but this time, MONiSH could hear her chuckle. He smiled, but putting up an act of being serious, he said...
M - Arre...!! Tum hans rahi ho...?? I M serious... Yeh lines especially mere liye hi write ki gayi hain... toh,main toh iss "Million Dollar Mantra" ko kaafi seriously leta hoon...Tum bhi follow karo... dekhna life ko kitna enjoy karogi...

G - (smiled softly) No... Mujhe nahin karna aisa Enjoy..main jaisi hoon... waisi hi thik hoon... Aur jahaan tak baat Office ki hai...Don't worry main time par aa jaaoongi... Aap ki baat aur hai...Aap Boss hain...Aap jab chahe aa sakte hain... Mujhe koi problem nahin... (said sweetly)
M - Ok Baba...! As U wish... Maine toh tumhaare bhale ki liye kaha tha... lekin,Yeh 'Bhalai' toh mujhe hi 'Bhari' pad gayi...
G - (strangely) Means...??
M - Arre agar tum time par Office aa jaya karogi toh,mujhe bhi toh time par aana hoga naa... Agar main hi nahin raha toh,tumhein tumhaara work kaun batayega...?? Toh,ho gayi na mere liye problem...??
G - (smiled) Hummm !! Problem toh hai..lekin,iska 1 solution bhi hai...
M - (asked in very exciting way) Solution...?? Kaisi solution...?? Tell me naa...
G - (in very relax way) Simple... Aap mujhe appoint hi mat kijiye...Na main rahoongi aur na hi yeh Problem...

M - (smiled) Very good solution...!! Thanx for your suggestion...lekin,agar yeh solution hai...toh Mujhe woh 'Problem' hi zyada pasand hai...so,Relax...Next day,Office mein milte hain... Bye...Good Night...
G - (with smiling face) Good Night...
As she cut the call and kept the receiver back, she had a smile on her face. She walked back towards the living room as she thought... (( He is so Funny...(smiled) Kitne Funny logic hote hain unke... Oh God ! Main kitna darr rahi thi... kya-kya khyaal aa rahe the...?? Lekin,woh toh kaafi alag hain... Bilkul normal...so understanding... Mujhe toh darr tha ki,kahin woh mujhse naraaz toh nahin... Uncle ko keh dete ki,maine Party mein jaane se mana kar diya toh woh bhi bewajah khud ko guilt feel karte... Par unhone aisa kuchh nahin kiya... He is really nice person... ab kal se New Office... New working technique... Mujhe bhi ab sirf apne work par hi concentrate karna hai... Lekin...?? But then her smile disappeared as she thought about her conversation with the stranger... the thought about who it could be was not leaving her...
Lekin...?? Woh call kiski thi...? Kisne call kiya hoga...? Main itna kuchh kehti rahi...usne kuchh kaha kyun nahin...?? Kitni badi duffer hoon main...Maine kaise soch liya ki,woh MONiSH hi honge...?? at least,1 baar name toh poochna chahiye tha...?? I wish ki,woh koi wrong number ho... warna...?? Oh !! Main bhi yeh sab kya soch rahi hoon...?? Maine aisa bhi kuchh nahin kaha jiske liye mujhe embarrass hona pade... phir,tension kya leni...? Abhi toh chal kar Uncle-Aunty se dinner ke liye pooch loon... Kaafi raat ho gayi hai... Uncle ko Diabetes ki medicine bhi deni hai...phir,subah uthna bhi toh hai... warna time par Office kaise jaaoongi...)) and she walked hurriedly towards the study room.

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PART-34 [2/4]


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Meanwhile MONiSH

An elated MONiSH disconnected the call and kept his cell on the side table as he made himself comfortable on the bed. He leaned back, his hand on his forehead and the other one on the pillow that he had placed on his lap as he thought about tomorrow... the beginning of a new day... when, GUNJAN would be with him...through the day. Hes hut his eyes as he visualized GUNJAN...sat on the bed.

(( She is really cute... How can she think like that...?? Main aur uss se naaraz...??
(smiled softly) Is it possible...?? It can't be possible... Koi itni sweet, pyaari si ladki se naraaz kaise ho sakta hai...?? Aur,woh bhi main...?? Impossible !! But, iss se yeh toh clear hai ki woh mere baare mein sochti hai... Meri naraazgi uske liye matter karti hai... How sweet...
(smiled widely)!!
I think main kuchh zyada hi extra careful ho raha hoon... Woh waisi hai hi nahin... Mujhe uske liye koi Game plan karne ki zaroorat nahin... Kal se woh Office mein mere saath hi toh hogi... Mujhe sirf usse comfortable feel karana hai... Kyunki,kal ko jab Prof.NANDA uss se hamare rishte ki baat karein... toh woh mana nahin kar paaye...! Aur jab tak woh inkaar nahin karti... mujhe bewajah darrne ki koi zaroorat nahin...
and I M sure ki, woh inkaar karegi bhi nahin.. .bas,mujhe Right time par uncle se hamare rishte ki baat karni hai... Lekin , Kaise?? Khud se jaakar Rishte ki baat karna... shayad unhein achha na lage...Phir...?? Kya karoon main...?? Kiski help loon...??

Oh !!
(smiled as a winner) How can I forget 'them'...?? 'Unhein' koi toh 'Keemat' chukani hogi... Fake hi sahi... lekin,GUNJAN ke liye mujhe itni acting toh karni hi padegi... After marriage...Main usse sab kuchh bata doonga...))



He smiled at this thought and opened his eyes. He kept the pillow to the side and lay down on the bed. Switching off the light.
MONiSH went to sleep...highly strange for a person who till recently started his evening at 10...now time to sleep was just that. GUNJAN had definitely made a huge difference to his lifestyle. This when she was not even legally his... a smile plastered on his face, MONiSH slept, dreaming of GUNJAN and his new life with her...

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Meanwhile SAMRAT
SAMRAT was now perhaps the happiest person on earth. It was as if a huge burden had been lifted off his shoulders. He had heard 'HER' voice...

Her sweet as honey voice which was still ringing in his ears... Her soft breathing that he could hear as she spoke and as she took a pause in between sentences... Her face was flashing before his eyes...



that pretty face which proudly sported those beautiful, twinkling eyes and those pretty lips which in turn carried that awesome smile that could light up a dull day.
He walked towards the cupboard to take out his night suit to change into, every step he took having a spring... He shut the cupboard and turned around... his face having a smile after a really long time now.

He leaned against the cupboard as he thought... ((I can't believe ki maine abhi-abhi uski voice suni... Wo...woh kahin nahin gayi...woh ghar par hi hai... Kitna galat socha tha maine uske baare mein...kitna galat samajhta tha usse... Woh bilkul waisi hai...jaisi woh dikhti hai...so simple...so innocent...so Pure... so caring... so charming...GUNJAN...my GUNJAN... aaj usne mere thoughts ko completly wrong prove kar diya... lekin,aaj main pehli baar wrong prove hone par bhi khush hoon... bahot bahot khush... (He playfully hit the side of his head as he moved forward
and changed into his night suit. He then walked towards his bed and lay down... one hand under his head and the other on his chest as he continued with his thought process...)


Uski koi galti nahin hai..., woh toh MONiSH ko sirf apna friend maanti hai... shayad kabhi DELHi mein usne uski koi help ki hogi... issi wajah se woh usse jaanti hogi aur mujhe laga woh apne benefit ke liye MONiSH se friendship kar rahi hai... Oh ! God kitna galat tha main... But,now Its clear that, MONiSH is her family friend... iss liye, woh uski respect karti hai aur woh MONiSH uss respect ka wrong benefit lena chahta hai... Iss mein GUNJAN ki kya galti...?? I know,she is so much innocent...usse toh Uss MONiSH ke intention pata bhi nahin honge... She is really a sweet girl... Jaisi khud hai... sabhi ko waisa hi samajhti hai...
Thank God ! ki,mere saare doubts clear ho gaye...warna main kabhi relax nahin ho pata... lekin...?? woh kaun si problem ki baat kar rahi thi...? Uske Uncle-Aunty kyun pareshaan hain...?? Kahin woh uski job nahin rehne ki wajah se toh pareshaan nahin hain...?? May be...aisa ho sakta hai... Maine bhi toh kitna bad behavior kiya tha uske saath...

Lekin,ab nahin... Main kal khud uske paas jaaoonga...aur usse again SHERGILL's join karne ko kahoonga... usse kahoonga ki,some misunderstandings thi... jo ab clear ho gayi... ab usse yahaan... mere saath kaam karte hue koi problem nahin hogi... She is really sweet... I know,woh maan jaayegi...


Ab mujhe unn Agreement Papers ki bhi koi zaroorat nahin... Kyunki,ab Mujhe uske saath koi zabardasti nahin karni... whatever, MONiSH ab woh Contract tod dega... shayad ab main kabhi KiWiSH ko takeover bhi na kar paaoon...
(This thought and SAMRAT sat up on the bed. His smile had vanished as he realised that this would mean him losing the KiWiSH contract forever... but then, he visualized GUNJAN again and the smile was back as he slid down back on the bed to lie down... this time both his hand behind his head as he thought...) I don't care... mujhe ab aisi koi deal hi nahin karni jiski wajah se main usse hurt karoon... Nahin chahiye mujhe KiWiSH ki ownership... GUNJAN ko khone ki keemat par toh bilkul bhi nahin...



Mujhe ab sirf usse SHERGiLLs mein wapas laane par concentrate karna hai... Mujhe apni galtiyon ko sudharna hoga... maine already usse kaafi...


He moved his hand from behind his head and turned over to his side, cuddling one corner of the pillow, when his eyes fell on a box that lay on the side table... he had missed it earlier B'coz of the tension that he was when he had come home.

He got up and picked up the box, opening it. They held some samples of wedding cards. SAMRAT then remembered his planned wedding with RiCHA... He shut his eyes as he realised RiCHA's presence in his life... but then...
RiCHA se marriage 1 different matter hai... Magar main uss sach ke liye iss sach ko ignore nahin kar sakta ki, I love GUNJAN... uske paas hone se hi mujhe 1 sukoon milta hai... main usse kaise jaane de sakta hoon... I want to protect her... RiCHA , Mrs.SHERGiLL ban sakti hai... lekin,woh meri life mein.. mere dil mein, kabhi bhi GUNJAN ko replace nahin kar sakti...
woh kabhi GUNJAN ke liye meri feelings ko kam nahin kar sakti...



1 mariage ke customs kuchh change nahin kar sakte... Lekin,main yeh sab useless baatein kyun soch raha hoon...?? I know, I love GUNJAN... this is important than other things...

Waise, ab mujhe uss MONiSH ka bhi kuchh na kuchh toh karna hoga... Woh aur uska so called 'Love'...achhi tarah samajhta hoon main... uske 'Love' jaise 'Lust' ko... Usse abhi iss baat ka ehsaas nahi ki, SAMRAT SHERGILL kya kar sakta hai...?? Usse 1 last warning deni hi hogi ki, woh GUNJAN se door rahe... Mujhe hum donon ke beech mein kisi 3rd person ki tension nahin chahiye... woh mujhe already kaafi pareshaan kar chuka hai.. .lekin ab aur nahin... ))


Keeping the box aside, SAMRAT lay down again... He had decided upon something...something that he was sure would ensure that MONiSH went away from his and GUNJAN's life... and he shut his eyes... sleep overtaking him instantly... after a long time, SAMRAT slept peacefully without the use of sleeping pills...


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NEXT DAY

SHERGILL GROUP Of COMPANIES [H.O.]
As his car halted at his office entrance, SAMRAT's staff was in for a surprise. In the first time since GUNJAN had quit her job, SAMRAT SHERGILL was at the office on time. The Receptionist was gaping in surprise as he wished her 'GOOD MORNING'...

She only nodded back. The person manning the elevator had the exact same expressions as SAMRAT smiled at him. None of his staff could understand the reason for SAMRAT's good mood... but, they did have to admit...SAMRAT Sir did look handsome with that smile on his face and the person who could get that smile on his otherwise harsh face must be someone special.

SAMRAT reached the floor on which his cabin was situated. As he passed GUNJAN's cabin, he stopped and then he opened the cabin door He was smiling...
and walked in..



Very soon... She would be here, he thought as he continued walking towards the desk...

GUNJAN
would be sitting on this chair...he moved his hand over the arms of the chair first and then the back of the chair. The smile still intact, he looked around and then after a thought, he called up Mr SHARMA... asking him to come to his boss's cabin, Mr.SHARMA's boss, SAMRAT, left from there...
SAMRAT reached his cabin and sat on his chair... he leaned back and shut his eyes... and before his eyes flashed the face of his pretty P.A.... her breathtaking smile and her gleaming eyes. He did not want to open his eyes, least she vanish, but the knock on the door ensured that he did exactly that. He sighed as he sat up straight and said in a normal tone...
S - Yes...come in.
Hearing these words, the cabin door opened and in walked a 24/25 year old girl, dressed formally.With a smile, she said... "Good Morning Sir...!! Woh yeh Files..."
SAMRAT looked at her and then without wasting much time, he cut her off as he said..."Oh, haan Rozy...!! Main inhin files ka wait kar raha tha... woh 'Advance Tax' finalised karne ke liye inki zaroorat padegi...
R - Ok Sir...Maine saare figures check kar liye hain...woh sabhi sahi hain..
S - Good ! Tumhein Mr.SHARMA ne last day 1 file di hogi...GUNJAN ki banai hui Report ki file. Tumne preparation toh kar li hai naa...? Ho sakta hai tumhein aaj uss Report ki presentation deni pade...
R - Ji Sir...!! Mujhe Mr.SHARMA ne last day woh file di thi... but,It was not new for me
S - (strangely) Means...??
R - Sir ...woh File ki original copy Aapne mujhe uss din hi inn Files ke saath de di thi...Mujhe laga account verify karne hain but,uss mein Report aur presentation content the... Iss liye,maine usse study kar liya tha.Inn files mein woh bhi file hai.
SAMRAT looked at ROZY with start. He quickly took the files and checked them. And amongst those files was the RAHEJA's 'Project Report'... He opened the file and flipped the pages...



His smile had by now disappeared... this was the same file which GUNJAN had claimed she had brought with her and submitted at the office. He shut his eyes, he had realised his folly. He opened his eyes to see ROZY staring at him strangely... he quickly composed himself and said...
"Ok...You may go now... Main tumhein baad mein bulata hoon..."
R - Ok...sir...!! And she turned around and left...
SAMRAT looked dazed as he realised the grave mistake he had made that night. He stood up and walked towards the window ... life was rushing by...no one having the time for anyone here, but SAMRAT... He had all the time to realize his mistake... in understanding GUNJAN...

His mistake of yelling at her...humiliating her... unknowingly, a tear escaped his eyes...
(( Yeh mujh se kya ho gaya...?? Main itni badi galti kaise kar sakta hoon...?? Woh File mujh se misplace huii... woh galti maine ki thi par... he visualized her tearful eyes... when he ordered her to say sorry to GAUTAM. How,can I behave like this...??

Kya ho gaya tha mujhe...?? Kis baat ki sazaa de raha tha main usse...?? Main uss se itna kuchh kaise keh gaya...?? Woh puri tarah innocent thi... Kitni labour ki hogi usne yeh report banane ke liye... aur maine badle mein kya diya...?? Itna saare ilzaam...?? Woh toh 'Inaam' deserve karti thi...lekin ,mere ilzaamon ne usse itni chot pahunchai... ki, usne unn ilzamoon se bachne ke liye apne bachpan ka 'Locket' tak bech diya...
Woh sorry nahin kehna chahti thi... lekin,maine usse majboor kar diya... Kunki,main usse apni power ka ehsaas karana chata tha... Maine uss ki bebasi ka fayda uthaya... kyunki,mujhe pata tha..woh kuchh nahin kar sakti thi... Mere order follow karne ke siwa uske paas aur koi doosra raasta nahin tha...

Main itna kaise giir sakta hoon...?? 1 baar bhi nahin socha ki,uss masoom ladki par kya beet rahi hogi...?? Aaj mujhe khud par sharm aa rahi hai... Agar main uss se pyar karta hoon... toh maine kyun uss par yakeen nahin kiya...?? Kyun naraz tha main...? Usse hurt kar main 1 pal bhi sukoon se nahin reh paya... Uski kya halat hui hogi...? Maine yeh kyun nahin socha...? Main uss raat ke liye khud ko kabhi maaf nahin kar sakta... kabhi nahin... Mujhe usse wapas laane ke liye kuchh bhi karna pade..main karoonga... Mujhe hamare beech ke differences khatm karne hain... kisi bhi tarah...))
He wiped his tears as he made this resolution. He turned around just in time to hear Mr. SHARMA knock at his cabin door. SAMRAT granted him permission to enter as he walked back to his seat.
Mr.S - Good Morning Sir...! Aapne mujhe bulaya...??
S - (He spoke without looking at Mr.SHARMA... adjusting his specs as he took his seat, in a straight tone, he said...) Yes Mr.SHARMA ... Aapko kuchh instructions deni thi...
Mr.S - Ji Sir...Aap bataiye...
S - Mr.SHARMA...first toh aap meri New P.A. ki appointment...
Mr.S - (Unfortunately, cut SAMRAT off...) Yes Sir...! Woh aaj hi ho ho jaayega...Humne aaj hi interview arrange kiya hai... I hope ki,aapne jo previous instructions di thin uske according hi koi suitable candidate mil jaayegi.

S - (SAMRAT glared at Mr.SHARMA... his voice echoing his anger as he boomed...) Maine aapki opinion yaa aapka Point of view nahin maanga hai... aur SAMRAT SHERGILL ki baat khatm hone se pehle...koi aur bole...yeh mujhe pasand nahin...
Mr.S - (quickly looking downwards.his tone reflecting his worry as he spoke... ) Sorry Sir... I'll be careful next time...
S - (strictly) Its better for U. Now,aap issi waqt woh Interview cancel kijiye...ab uski zaroorat nahin (said very confidently) aur GUNJAN ki appointment waali file bhejiye... and 1 more thing...can U tell me...mera New Cabin kab tak ready ho jaayega...?
His fingers entwined and his hands resting on his desk, SAMRAT asked in a no nonsense tone... Mr.SHARMA got all the more worried... now what ever had the 'Interior Designer' done??? Everything was as SAMRAT had wanted... then now??? He slowly looked at SAMRAT as he stuttered...
Mr.S - Sir.. wo..woh...Cabin toh almost ready hai...only some finishing work bacha hua hai...I hope next 2-3 days mein fully complete ho jaayega...
S - (said after a Pause) Ok...then Aap uss Interior Designer aur uss Engineer ko bhi bhej dijiye... abhi issi waqt... Mujhe kuchh new changes chahiye... jiske liye mujhe unhein kuchh instuctions deni hain...
Mr.S - Ji...Ji...Sir main abhi unhein bhejta hoon... Mr.SHARMA quickly turned around to leave when SAMRAT's harsh tone stopped him...
S - Mr.SHARMA...!! abhi meri baat khatam nahin hui... aur agar aapko jaane ki itni hi jaldi hai toh keh dijiye... Main aapko hamesha ke liye iss office se jaane ke liye keh doonga... (said more angrily)
Mr.S - (turned quickly and said in low tone) Sorry Sir... !
S - Its better... now,GUNJAN ki Appointment File ke saath saath, Kisi achhe Legal adviser ko bhi bhejiye... Lekin,woh Mr.AGRAWAL yaa unke Firm se associate nahin hona chahiye... I want to change our Legal Firm too...
Mr.S - Ok Sir... Main abhi Kisi Top Legal Firm se contact karta hoon...
S - Good...!! I M waiting...now, can go.
Mr.SHARMA left the room so quickly... SAMRAT relaxed... (( Now, main koi risk nahin le sakta... GUNJAN ke 'Agreement Papers' ki info sirf aur sirf Mr.AGRAWAL ko thi... I m sure MONiSH ko yeh info unhin ki Firm se mili hai... Ab main uss MONiSH ko koi chance nahin doonga... Now,I want to her in my office... aur woh main karke rahoonga... (He visualized her face,smiled softly) Ab woh jitni der office mein hogi...mere aankhon ke saamne rahegi... 1 pal ke liye akela nahin chodunga usse...
Iss se pehle ki,woh MONiSH koi naya step le... Main aaj shaam khud ja kar uss se baat karoonga... agar zaroorat padi toh... ??I will think of something... Ok...Fine...!! zaroorat padi toh 'Sorry' bhi keh doonga... whatever,maine apni life mein kisi ko 'Sorry' nahin kaha... apne uss baap ko bhi nahin...

This thought was enough to bring back the bitter memories of his childhood... the beatings with the cane that he had to endure when asked to apologize and a stubborn child that he was would refuse to... the tears in his mother's eyes as she probably felt the pain more than SAMRAT himself did as his Dad went on hitting his tiny palm with the cane.

Unknowingly, SAMRAT looked at his palm... his eyes shut as the pain along with hatred for his Dad came rushing back... with the same clenched fist, he wiped his tears... Main uss se 'Sorry' keh sakta hoon... Maine uske saath jo kiya hai... uske liye toh 'Sorry' word bhi kaafi chhota hai...
I know,woh mujhse naraaz hai..tabhi toh woh kal mujhe MONiSH ke cabin mein ignore kar rahi thi... but, I M sure agar main uss se thik se baat karoonga... uss se wapas aane ko kahoonga... toh,woh maan jaayegi...

Main hamari misunderstanding ka benefit uss MONiSH ko nahin lene doonga... kabhi nahin... Bas 1 baar woh SHERGILL's ko re-join kar le... phir toh sab kuchh thik hoga... Main khud uska khyal rakhoonga... Ab kabhi daantoonga bhi nahin... phir,dekhta hoon... woh kaise mujhe chhod kar jaati hai...
Moving his fingers over her file that lay on his desk... he smiled... wait GUNJAN ,I M coming...))
Just then the buzz of his desk phone brought him out of his trance. It was the Interior Designer of his new cabin with whom he wanted to have a word. Giving him instructions about the changes and some additions that he wanted to be made in his new cabin.

Sometime later, he checked his wrist watch... it was now time for the meeting with Mr. SATYAM RAHEJA...New MD of RAHEJA GROUP. He must reach 'Conference Room' in time...

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KHURANA INDUSTRIES [H.O.]
As the auto rickshaw came to a stop outside the KHURANA's H.O. , GUNJAN got off the auto, and she looked at the huge structure that stood in front of her. After paying the auto driver off, she walked towards the lobby of the huge building. The security at the entrance saluted when he saw GUNJAN. She flashed her smile at him as she entered the lobby. The Receptionist also acknowledged her with a smile and a nod, which GUNJAN was quick to reciprocate.
She looked at the huge wall clock which showed the time...8.50 am...a small frown creased her forehead as she looked at her wrist watch. It showed the exact same time... She hurriedly walked towards the elevator which was waiting for the staff that had just reached the office premises. One by one, they got in the elevator... talking and laughing... the atmosphere so casual and cool here as compared to... GUNJAN shut her eyes as she thought about that... all that was the past now...
She was about to enter the elevator when she was stopped by the guard. He gently reminded her that she had to use the glass elevator. This was what Mr. MONiSH KHURANA had instructed them to tell her. Flustered, she simply smiled and nodded as she turned to walk towards the glass elevator.When she reached the 12th floor and got off, she stood there and said a silent prayer... remembered her parents...and asked them to be with her as they would, had they been alive.
She then walked slowly towards MONiSH's cabin. She was about to knock on the door, when she moved her hand back and closed her eyes... slowly opening her eyes, she was about to knock again when the door opened and a surprised GUNJAN saw MONiSH standing there, a smile on his face.. as he said happily...
M - Hi ! Good Morning... He looked at his wrist watch... and then at GUNJAN as he tilted his head and pouted ... indicating how impressed he was...
G - (with very soft tone) Good...Good Morning...
M - Oh ! Sorry...andar aane ko toh kaha hi nahin...Please come...
And he turned around and walked back in. She followed him in a bit gingerly... her past experience at work was not really something that could relax her here. So she was trying to be cautious with every step she took. MONiSH took his seat and looked at her, she stood there...looking downward... not knowing what to do. He smiled as he spoke...in a gentle tone...
M - Oh ! Tum ab tak khadi ho...? Please take your seat... don't be formal with me...

G -
Thanx... Thanx Sir... She spoke in her soft, sweet voice as she took her seat, still avoiding direct eye contact...

M -
(smiled softly) Mam...You can check the time... Main bilkul right time par aa gaya...
GUNJAN looked at him as he said this and smiled at him. She looked away flustered...

M -
(with little serious tone) Now, thoda kaam ki baatein ho jaayein...?? After all I M your new Boss.
Now GUNJAN was even more worried after hearing him speak in a serious tone. She stuttered...her eyes unable to hide the worry... "Yes...Yes Sir... !! Please,aap mujhe mera work samjha dijiye... main...main puri koshish karoongi ki,aapko complain ka koi chance na doon...
M - Good ! I liked your spirit... and 1 thing...I M very strict in my Office... Mere saare staff mujhse bahot darrte hain... and I lose my control jab...jab koi staff mere instructions follow nahin karta... (He spoke this in a even more serious and strict tone, scaring GUNJAN even more... )
She looked at him, her beautiful, brown eyes filled with fear...she gulped as she spoke in her soft, sweet voice... " Sir...! I'll try my best... toh...
M - (Cuts with his strict voice) Good ! toh work samjhane se pehle tumhein kuchh rules bata doon... Jo tumhein strictly follow karne hain... aur iss mein koi mistake main tolerate nahin karoonga...
G - (worriedly) Ji.. Ji... Sir...
M - Good..! toh Rule No. 1 (Slyly he looked at her and could not resist a smile as he saw fear writ large on her face. Quickly changing his expressions to serious and his tone a bit strict, he said...) Tum ab ke baad mujhe kabhi 'Sir' nahin kahogi..."
G - WHAT...?? She stood up as she said this with shock...
M - Yes... Don't worry take your seat...abhi aur bhi hain...
GUNJAN realised she had stood up and she was embarrassed... She quietly sat down again... MONiSH continued with his strict tone and expressionless face...

M -
Rule No. 2... Mere saamne...yaa Office ke kisi bhi staff ke saamne... 'Thanx' and 'Sorry'... yeh donon word ka use kabhi nahin karogi. By mistake bhi nahin...
G - Sir...par...?? (asked confusingly)
M - Phir se 'Sir' ?? I told U naa...I M a very strict Boss... Be careful. and Rule No. 3...Tumhein kabhi bhi ,koi bhi problem ho... yaa phir,Tumhein office mein Kuchh bhi wrong lage...tum direct aa kar mujhse baat karogi... Hum donon hi uss matter ko mil kar solve karenge.
G - Ji...! But, Sir...
M - (with fake anger) Again 'Sir' ?? Minus 2 point.
G - (worriedly) Minus 2...??
M - Haan...mere Rule batane ke baad bhi tumne 2 baar mujhe Sir kaha...iss liye.
G - (confusingly) Lekin... agar main aapko 'Sir' nahin kahoon toh kya kahoon...??
MONiSH smiled at hearing this simple question from her... though expected, he loved hearing her ask it.He looked at her and in a loving tone, he said... "Batata hoon...lekin,uss se pehle apne yeh face expression thik karo... U R looking so worried and scared. Yeh woh GUNJAN nahin hai jis se main kal ghar par mila tha... Yeh toh woh GUNJAN hai jis se main DELHi mein mila tha...Mujhe mere office mein kal waali GUNJAN chahiye...toh please smile... and don't worry... main bilkul bhi strict nahin hoon... (laughed)
GUNJAN smiled on hearing MONiSH speak... she felt relaxed when she heard him speak in a gentle tone... " Ok...phir aap hi batayein... Main Aapko kya kahoon...? "
M - Kyun... tumhein mera naam nahin pata...? Arre Wohi...jo ab tak kehti aayi ho... MONiSH... sirf MONiSH... No 'Sir' No 'Par' ... simple !!
G - Haan... lekin 'Office' mein kaise...? Aap Boss hain toh...
M - (Cuts quickly) Toh kya Office mein mere sir par 'Singh' nikal aate hain jo, tum mujhe 'Sir-Sir' kahogi...??
G - (innocently) Nahin aisa nahin hai...Lekin phir bhi...
M - (in very caring tone) Look GUNJAN !! Tum yahaan meri help karne aayi ho... Meri employee ban kar nahin, meri Friend ban kar...Hum ek dusre ko jaante hain... Toh achha hoga agar hum saari formalities chhod kar 1 friend ki tarah hi behave karein... Tumhein yahaan kisi bhi tarah ki problem ho... Tum direct mujhe keh sakti ho.Its just like your company too.
MONiSH waited for her answer. GUNJAN simply nodded... this also expected by MONiSH... he said again in his most gentle tone... "Good !! Now Main Mr. BAKSHI ko bula deta hoon... Woh tumhein saara work samjha denge...Sorry main khud saath chalta but,abhi mujhe thoda pending work complete karna hai... 11.30 mein KiWiSH INTERNATiONAL ke office mein meeting hai... Tum wahaan mere saath hi chalogi... Jab tak main apna work complete karta hoon...Tum Office mein apna work samajh lo... Hum on sharp 10.30 mein nikal jaayenge.



GUNJAN
looked at him and smiled while nodding a YES... He smiled back...She was so innocent... never did she object to anything... He picked up the receiver and made a call... "Mr.BAKSHi ! Please came in my cabin... fast."
Disconnecting the call, he looked at GUNJAN again. She had moved her gaze downwards again. For some time, MONiSH just kept on staring at her and then bringing himself out of the trance, he spoke in a gentle tone as he forwarded a file to GUNJAN... " This is 'KiWiSH INTERNATiONAL' File , May be meeting se pehle shayad tum isse dekhna chaho..." GUNJAN moved her hand forward to pick up the file .
Silence prevailed for some time and just as GUNJAN was about to ask MONiSH permission to leave, someone knocked at the door. When MONiSH permitted the person to enter, Mr BAKSHI entered and wished MONiSH curtly. He stood next to GUNJAN in front of MONiSH, his hands behind his back ... MONiSH said...
M - Mr.BAKSHi !! Please meet... Miss GUNJAN BHUSHAN
He turned to GUNJAN and in a professional tone wished her... " Hello Mam...!"
GUNJAN looked at him and smiled, but she was embarrassed... She was not used to being spoken to like this at the workplace... She remembered her last workplace... though everyone else was nice to her, She was always addressed by her name, never had anyone called her MAM ... in her sweet and soft voice she replied... Hello !!
M - (to Mr.BAKSHi) Yeh aaj se meri new P.A. hongi... RAVi aaj leave par hai so, I want that Aap inhein inka work bata den... aur Office ke some important sections mein inka introduction bhi de den...
Mr.B - Ji Sir...! Main abhi inhein inka work samjha deta hoon.
M - Its better. He looked at GUNJAN and in the gentle tone that he had spoken to her till now, he continued... "Tum apne cabin main jaa sakti ho... Please check !! koi need ho toh usse Mr.BAKSHi ko bata dena...woh usse manage kar denge"
GUNJAN collected the file and stood up... smiling at both MONiSH and Mr.BAKSHi, she said... "Ok... Main 1 baar dekh leti hoon..."
M - (with smiling face) Sure... And nodding a bye to both, she left the cabin...
MONiSH waited for her to leave and then ordered Mr.BAKSHi to take a seat.
As Mr. BAKSHi took his seat, MONiSH spoke to him in a strict tone... "Mr.BAKSHi !! I want to clear 1 thing... She is just like my Family member... toh usse yahaan koi problem nahin honi chahiye... Woh yahaan kya karti hai...?? kyun karti hai... ?? Yeh uss se koi nahin poochega... Uski yahaan wohi position hogi jo meri hai... Yeh baat aap sabhi staff ko samjha den... Mujhe kisi ki koi complain nahin milni chahiye..." said more strict way.


Looking at MONiSH wave a finger as he spoke in this tone, Mr.BAKSHi got worried. MONiSH had never spoken to him like this before... his tone reflecting his worry... "Ok Sir.. !! Main sabhi ko keh doonga... don't worry,aapko koi complain nahin milegi."
M - Good...!! Its better for all of U.Kyunki agar iss Office mein usse problem hui... toh yahaan kaafi logon ki Job ko problem ho jaayegi...

Mr.B - I... I... understand Sir...

M -
Good...!! Now,U can go...

Mr.BAKSHi left the cabin as MONiSH had a huge grin... he was happy with the way things were going... just as he wanted them to...


GUNJAN's Cabin

As GUNJAN entered her cabin, she felt weird. This cabin was so warm and welcoming. Her earlier work station was so formal... She quickly brushed aside those thoughts as she walked over to her desk and kept the file on it. She then sat on the chair and thought about her conversation with MONiSH... (( Oh God !! Kitna darra diya tha unhone...bilkul kal ki tarah... (smiled) MONiSH kabhi strict Boss ho hi nahin sakte... Kitne funny hain woh.. aur unki baatein...?? Kab kya bolenge...? Kab kya karenge...? Koi guess hi nahin kar sakta... Main hi be-wajah darr jaati hoon... shayad iss liye ki,maine ab tak sirf SAMRAT Sir ko hi as a Boss dekha hai...

Mujhe toh aaj bhi unse darr lagta hai...
(visualised his anger face) Ab tak toh kisi new P.A. ko appoint bhi kar liya hoga... I wish ki,woh usse job se na nikalen... (feeling a little pain) No... shayad woh mujhse better work karti ho...?? Phir usse kyun nikalenge...? Lekin MONiSH...?? Kya agar kabhi mujhse yahaan bhi koi galti hui... toh woh bhi mujhe ussi tarah job se nikal denge... Kya woh bhi waisa hi karenge... jaisa SAMRAT Sir ne kiya...?? shayad...!!
I wish ki main unki expectations par Right prove ho sakoon...! Yahaan main aur bhi hard labour se work karoongi... Lekin,maine hard labour toh SHERGiLLs mein bhi kiya tha... Raat bhar jaag kar kitni mehnat se woh report banai thi...par kya hua...?? badle mein kya mila...?? Itni insult...?? aur phir termination...!! ))

She sighed as she stood up and walked towards the window. Her eyes were a bit moist as she remembered her time at the SHERGiLL's. Much as she tried, why was she not able to forget her Ex Boss?? She stood at the window for sometime... the cool breeze felt nice. Now she would have to forget all that had happened at the SHERGiLL's. She wiped her eyes and turned around.
As she reached her desk, she saw the file of KIWISH INTERNATIONAL... Again, she remembered the Report she had made for this project...

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((KiWiSH ki file...?? yahaan...?? Yeh toh wohi company hai jiske maine FUND FLOW STATEMENT aur BALANCE SHEET ke basis par woh short 'Note Report' banai thi...Kya MONiSH bhi issi Company ko take over karne ke liye try kar rahe hain...?? May B...YES !! Its means... (feeling little scared) Its means wahaan SAMRAT Sir bhi aayenge...?? aur 1 baar phir...?? ))

A tear fell on the file as she remembered all that...and she decided that she would tell MONiSH...(( No... Main ab unse koi matlab nahin rakhna chahti... Mujhe unse aur apni insult nahin karani... Unka kuchh pata nahin...woh meri wajah se MONiSH ko bhi kaafi kuchh keh denge... Mujhe MONiSH se abhi request karna hoga ki,woh mujhe iss Project se door rakhein... Be-wajah unhein kaafi kuchh sun na padega... she was about to go...just then think again...
Lekin main iss tarah unse kab tak bhaagoongi...?? MONiSH unke competitor hain... agar main SAMRAT Sir ke darr se MONiSH ke har project se alag hoti rahi toh main unki help kaise kar paaoongi...?? Aakhir toh main yahan sirf 1 month ke liye hi hoon... Mujhe apni responsibility samajhni hogi...!!

SAMRAT Sir hue toh kya...? Kya main apni feelings ko bhool nahin sakti...? Maine khud se promise kiya tha ki, main unhein ab kabhi yaad nahin karoongi...phir kyun...?? Kyun main kamzor pad rahi hoon...??
Mujhe unhein ignore karna hoga... Agar meri wajah se woh disturbed nahin hote... Unhein koi farq nahin padta toh phir main kyun...?? Kyun main hi unhein sochoon...?? Nahin... Ab mere dil mein unki ki jagah nahin...

He is just like stranger for me... Main ab unhein nahin jaanti... Dekhoongi bhi nahin unki taraf... Bhool jaaoongi ki, kabhi mere dil mein unke liye koi feelings develope hui thi...(wept her tears) Main wahaan apni New Job ki wajah se ja rahi hoon... aur mujhe sirf ussi par concentrate karna hai...other kisi bhi cheez par nahin... ))
She took the KiWiSH INTERNATiONAL file... opened a 'Note Pad'... and started to read and note some important information and point there...

She had just finished reading the file, when Mr.BAKSHi entered her cabin, after taking her permission. GUNJAN looked up as he entered. Mr. BAKSHi told her that he was here to show her the office as instructed by MONiSH. GUNJAN smiled at Mr.BAKSHi and nodded... then, shutting the file, she left the cabin with him.
By the time she returned to the cabin, It was 10.20 am . She opened the door and walked in to see MONiSH waiting for her. He informed her that it was time they left for the meeting with KiWiSH INTERNATIONAL's office. GUNJAN scurried over to the desk and was about to pick up the file and her note pad, when MONiSH picked it up first. He asked her to lead the way and Gunjan could not help but smile and do as he said.

MONiSH
and GUNJAN left the KHURANA INDUSTRIES's H.O..


As GUNJAN
sat in the car, she had no idea about the storm that was brewing some miles away.



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PART-34 [4/4]


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SHERGILL GROUP of COMPANIES [H.O.]
SAMRAT at 'Conference Hall'
When SAMRAT entered the 'Conference hall', He saw a well dressed 28-29 year old, A Handsome guy waiting for him. He was SATYAM RAHEJA ...!! who had just returned from the UK and taken over the reins of the company was a lanky young man... An orange silk shirt ensured the very sober casual look

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... SAMRAT was little impressed... finally he would interact with someone who looked professional with his behavior, unlike that slimy GAUTAM... just his thought and SAMRAT clenched his hands... just then, luckily, SATYAM moved forward and forwarded his hand for a hand shake. SAMRAT also reciprocated the handshake and smiled faintly. A crisp handshake and after taking their seats, the 2 businessmen indulged in some formal talk, after which SAMRAT spoke, his tone serious...
S - Mr.RAHEJA ,I M glad ki aapne yeh meeting possible karne ke liye khud effort liya and I respect this effort But, Aap kuchh kahien iss se pehle main yeh clear kar dena chahta hoon ki... Maine aapke ex-CEO, Mr.GAUTAM Mehta ke matter mein aap ki koi help nahin kar sakta...This is my last n final decision... Agar aap uss matter ko solve karne ke liye khud aaye hain toh I M really sorry for that but,main aapki koi help nahin kar paaoonga...
Without pausing, SAMRAT blurted out everything... he had absolutely no intentions of forgiving that slimy snake...who had dared to talk all those horrible things about GUNJAN. SATYAM listened to him, not interrupting SAMRAT... His anger reflected in the words he spoke. After SAMRAT had stopped, SATYAM spoke up, in a very calm and composed tone...
SR - Thanx for clearing all things Mr.SHERGiLL. Don't worry... mere yahaan aane ka purpose bilkul different hai... Main yahan really uss matter ko discuss karne nahin aaya... Mujhe aapse koi aur hi matter discuss karna hai...
S - (looked at him strangely) Main samjha nahin... Please explain clearly...
SR - Ok..!! come to the point... Maine abhi kuchh dinon pehle hi Hamari company ko join kiya hai... GAUTAM was a not good person... Woh apni commission and some other unusual 'Demands' fix karne ke baad hi kisi company ko contract deta tha jiski wajah se hamare products ki quality aur Profit par huge effect pad raha tha,Aur shayad yeh decrease hote profit figure 1 din Loss mein convert ho jaate...
S - Main samajh nahin pa raha...Aap kehna kya chahte hain...?? I think yeh sab aapki company ke internal matters hain...
SR - Yaa... Its an internal matter of my company But,Yeh sab hamein aapki bheji gayi 'Presentation Report' ke some points ki inspection karne ke baad pata chala... Hamare Experts ne uss Report par apni 'Advisory Report' submit ki hai... according to them..uss report ke saare points aur quote kiye gaye saare figures n reasons... 100% right hain...
SAMRAT was unable to understand a thing ... which 'PRESENTATION REPORT ' was SATYAM talking about??? And who had sent him this Report??? Without his knowledge?? He asked SATYAM...
S - 1 sec. Mr.RAHEJA... Aap kaun si Report ki baat kar rahe hain..?? Kyunki,jahaan tak mujhe knowledge hai... Humne sirf 1 hi 'Presentation Report' banai thi... Mr.GAUTAM ke liye but,due to some problems hum woh Presentation nahin de paaye the...toh..
SR - (cuts quickly) Yes...I M talking about same Report Mr.SHERGiLL.Woh Report hamein E-Mail ke through send kar di gayi thi... see this... He forwarded a File... Yeh uss Report ki printed copy hai... Jo aapki hi staff... 1 sec... He checked somethings in his lappy...
SAMRAT was surprised when he opened the file. He recognized the Report... He realized who had sent this report and in a tone that was not only low, but also riddled with guilt, he said... " GUNJAN ! "
SR - (said quickly) Yaa... GUNJAN... Miss GUNJAN BHUSHAN, Inhone hi woh E-Mail send kiya tha behalf of your company. She has pointed out everything with such details. Agar yeh Report nahin aayi hoti toh shayad hamara attention kabhi iss Scam ki taraf nahin jaa paata...
SAMRAT was not listening... He just went on flipping the pages of the file... (( Yeh sirf wohi kar sakti thi... Itna perfection sirf ussi ke liye possible hai... maine bahot-bahot bura kiya hai uske saath, sirf personal level par hi nahin,uske professionalizm par bhi doubt kiya hai... Kitni hurt hui hogi woh meri baatoon se...??

Koi itna achha kaise ho sakta hai...? Maine
uske saath kitna bura kiya... lekin,woh phir bhi hamari Company ke favor mein hi sochti rahi... Usne jo kiya woh,toh shayad main kabhi soch bhi nahin sakta... Kaas GUNJAN tumne mujhse 1 baar baat ki hoti... 1 baar mujhe samjhane ki koshish toh karti... Lekin,tumhaari bhi kya galti...Main toh hoon hi aisa... Tumhein kuchh kehne ka mauka bhi toh nahin diya...
Kaise nazrein milaaoonga main uss se...?? Kaise kahoonga ki, GUNJAN wapas aa jaao... mujhe tumhaari zaroorat hai...?? Lekin, Main iss tarah haar bhi toh nahin maan sakta... Ab kuchh bhi ho... Mujhe usse manana hoga... Jo galti maine ki hai...Mujhe usse sudharna haoga. Mujhe sab kuchh pehle ki tarah hi karna hoga... Kisi bhi tarah... woh mujhse naraz ho...mujhe manzoor hai but, at least mere saamne toh ho...)) SATYAM's gentle voice brought SAMRAT out of his trance...
SR - Mr. SHERGILL !! Aap kuch kehna chahte hain shayad...??
S - (said quickly) Yaa... I want to ask ...Now,What do U want..??
SR - Its very clear Mr.SHERGiLL ,Now I have realized our mistake so,I want to rectify it.
S - (confusingly) Means...??
SR - Means,Hum apna Next CONTRACT aapki company ko dena chahte hain.. Hum saare 'Terms & Conditions' ko detail mein discuss kar sakte hain... aur agar sab kuchh set hota hai...toh, hum iss CONTRACT ko next 5 yrs. ke liye extend kar sakte hain.. lekin...
S - (in very serious tone) Lekin...??
SR - Don't mind Mr.SHERGiLL... I know this is your internal matter but, I want to clear something...
S - Please say... I M listening...
SR - Actually, Hamari Companies ke some next Projects MUMBAi se hi operate honge... Main sabhi par equal focus nahin kar sakta...so,I want that, iss CONTRACT ke equation ko Miss BHUSHAN hi Supervise karein... B'coz,Unki Report detailing se yeh clear hai ki woh hamare compaany ki policy,Nature and Demands ko achhi tarah understand karti hain... Agar Miss BHUSHAN isse khud Supervise karengi toh,main zyada assured rahoonga aur mere other Projects par bhi concentrate kar paaoonga...
SAMRAT was confused... what was SATYAM implying??? Before he said anything else, he had to clear his doubts. So he asked SATYAM... " Kya aap chahte hain ki, yeh CONTRACT ke work, GUNJAN handle kare...??"
SR - (In very clear way) Yes. I want that.
SAMRAT was about to say something, when ROZY, who had accompanied him blurted out... " But,Sir...Its not possible... kyunki...? " SAMRAT glared at ROZY... just when he was about to yell at her, SATYAM interrupted...
S - I know... may b,she has resigned from her job... No problem... !! Aap hamein unki saari details de dijiye... Main usse hamari Company mein Job de sakta hoon... woh hamare behalf mein woh Project handle kar sakti hani... Actually humne unhein Mails bhi send kiye hain but,shayad woh apne E-Mails regularly check nahin karti...warna itne attractive offers koi reject nahin kar sakta...
SAMRAT lost his temper completely now. First ROZY spoke when she should not have and now this SATYAM wants GUNJAN to join him... just when he thought GUNJAN would be with him, another obstacle... but this time he would not make any mistake... he looked at ROZY and said harshly... "Miss D'souza... Aap yahaan jis work ke liye aayi ho... achha hoga agar... Jab aapke work se related koi baat poochi jaye...aap tab hi answer karo...mujhe kisi tarah ki disturbance pasand nahin... U got it...??
R - (said worriedly) Sorry Sir...!!! and looked downward ...



SAMRAT
then looked at SATYAM and said to him... his voice indicating attitude along with seriousness... "Aap hamari Company ke saath CONTRACT sign karna chahte hain... I M really happy for that... But, SHERGiLLs mein work karne ka 1 system hota hai... Hum usse hi follow karte hain... Aap chahte hain GUNJAN iss CONTRACT ko handle kare...Its fine.. woh karegi...

but, SHERGILL's ke behalf mein... Kisi aur company ki taraf se nahin... and for your kind information... She is still part of this COMPANY...aur hamesha rahegi... aur jahaan tak baat aapke attractive Offers ki hai... toh aap woh offers kisi aur par try kar sakte hain...GUNJAN par nahin... She is my...
(SAMRAT stopped when he realised what he was about to say... adjusting his specs, he composed himself and said...) She is my P.A. aur main yeh kabhi tolerate nahin karoonga... His tone was harsh and his eyes blazing red as he said this...
SATYAM noticed how SAMRAT flared if anyone mentioned GUNJAN.. He just went along with SAMRAT... as he said... " I M extremely sorry Mr.SHERGiLL ...mera woh matlab bilkul nahin tha... I only want that,woh yeh Contract ko khud Supervise karein that's all... mera intention unhein aapki company ko chhodne ke liye kehna nahin tha... maine unhein offer diya kyunki,mujhe laga after SHERGiLLs...
S - (cuts again in strict tone) Aap ko kisi ne wrong information di hai... due to some personal problems...woh leave par hai... that's all , not a serious issue.
SR - Then,Fine... If she handles this project herself,This is enough for us...RAHEJA GROUP ko aapse kabhi koi complain nahin rahi hai... I really hope ki aage bhi aisa nahin hoga...
S - (little calmly) I hope so.
SR - Aap jab chahein... Next meeting arrange kar sakte hain...Yaa phir,Aap Miss BHUSHAN se meri meeting fix kar sakte hain.. Main unhein hamari saari requirements samjha doonga... Aise mein hamein aage bhi 1 saath work karne mein zyada...
S - (cuts in little harsh tone) 1 sec. Mr.RAHEJA...She is my P.A. uske paas already kaafi saare work hain... Woh iss Project ko Supervise karegi...iss mein koi 2nd opinion nahin hai... Woh bhi iss liye nahin ki,aap aisa chahte ho..woh iss liye kyunki,I strongly believe that, Yeh Project uss se better koi aur handle nahin kar sakta. Lekin,aapko saari requirements details hamari working team ko hi deni hogi... woh unse discuss kar Final Working Procedure' ready kar legi... CONTRACT sign karne se pehle aap woh check kar sakte hain... Agar aap uss Plan se satisfied hon toh hi hum next step lenge...
SR - (said after a short pause) Ok...No problem... Hamein sirf apne work ke perfect equation se matlab hai...and I trust U... agar aap aur Miss BHUSHAN same interest se isse fulfill karte hain toh hamein koi problem nahin...
S - Thanx for understand my point. Main 'Working Team' ke members final kar unhein aaapke Office bhejta hoon... Aap unhein apni saari required details de den... Saari proceedings final hote hi main aapse miloonga... (said in very confident tone)
SR - Ok... Fine...phir abhi mujhe chalna chahiye... Mujhe aapki call ka wait rahega... (smiled softly)
Some formalities had to be completed, some signatures to be taken. After ROZY finished taking signatures of SAMRAT & SATYAM, the 2 men stood up and shook hands. SATYAM then took leave of SAMRAT and left the conference room. SAMRAT again sat down, thinking about something when ROZY asked him...
R - Excuse Me...Sir !! May I ask 1 question...??
S - (turned her side) Yaa...
R - Sir ! GUNJAN toh ab iss Office mein nahin hai phir aapne...aisa kyun kaha ki...
S - (angrily) Miss D'souza...!! Don't cross your limit... Ab kya Tum mujhe bataogi ki,mujhe kis se kya baat karni hai...?? and By the way... I don't want to talk anything to U, about GUNJAN...
R - (ROZY looked down, scared... she knew she should not spoken... in a low tone she said...) Sorry Sir...
S - Good !! Now U can go...Yeh Project ab GUNJAN hi handle karegi... and this is my last n Final decision.
ROZY scurried out of the conference room... to bang into Mr SHARMA... apologizing, she rushed off. Mr. SHARMA entered the conference room to see SAMRAT lost in deep thought. He waited for some time and then gently spoke... "Sir ! Interior Designer ne assure kiya hai ki,woh next 2 days mein saare required changes ke saath apna work complete kar lenge. New 'Legal Adviser' se bhi baat ho gayi hai , woh bas aate hi honge... Waise,hamein thodi der mein hi nikalna hoga... KIWISH INT. se related meeting attend karne ke liye hamein unke H.O. jaana hai...
SAMRAT looked at Mr SHARMA and simply nodded. He stood up as he spoke... almost ordered... "Ok !! Good ! Aap sabse pehle uss Legal Adviser ko mere Cabin mein bhejiye... Usse kuchh files study karne ko deni hai , uske baad hi main KIWISH INT. ki meeting attend karne jaaoonga...

Mr.S - Ok Sir...! Main unke aate hi aapke paas bhejta hoon... and he left from the cabin...
SAMRAT checked his wrist watch... 10.25 am... ((Good ! Ab bas uss advocate ko GUNJAN ki files aur uske appointment se related saare facts bata doon...phir, dekhte hain...kya ho sakta hai..?? I wish ki koi solution nikal aaye...Main usse force nahin karna chahta... lekin ab woh 'Agreement Papers' uss MONiSH ke paas hain... Ab uss galti ke baad main koi aur risk nahin le sakta... Mujhe pehle usse SHERGILLs mein laana hai... This is my Priority... uske baad hi kuchh aur sochunga...
KiWiSH INT. ko take over karna...mera dream ho sakta hai...lekin,ab nahin...Ab mujhe woh company nahin chahiye... sirf uss company ki wajah se kal maine uss MONiSH ki woh saari bakwas suni...woh bhi GUNJAN ke baare mein...??

Kya ho gaya tha mujhe...Maine usse 1 Punch kyun nahin maara...?? Lekin ab nahin...Ab main aisa kuchh tolerate nahin karoonga...Agar unhein KiWiSH , SHERGiLL's ko sell karni hai...toh unhein at least meri RiCHA se hone waali marriage tak toh wait karna hi hoga... warna woh jise chahe apni Company sell karein... mujhe ab kisi 3rd Party in involvement nahin chahiye... ))

He stormed out of the Conference Hall... confident that all would be back to normal now...very soon.

By the time SAMRAT ended the meeting with the new advocate, he felt a lot more relaxed. Mr. SHARMA then informed him about his car which was waiting for him in the drive way to take him for the meeting with KiWISH Int.

Normally SAMRAT would not have liked this, but today was different. Everything would change for the better after this meeting. He left the cabin and walked towards the elevator.
But, SAMRAT too was unaware of the new developements that were going to take place soon...whether they would shatter him or make him happy...only time would be able to answer this question.

[To Be Continued...].


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Hi Friends !!
Finally done 1 more update😳 .
Hopefully, this update stands up to the expectations our readers had from us. Hope V have not disappointed you all. V do agree this update was slightly longer than the earlier one, but as usual, this is the story demand. So V R helpless.

V know that...U all R little curious about SATYAM entry...😳 This time...V can't say anything about him... so Wait n Watch..😳. We R sure that as always, our readers will understand our predicament. Thank U for being so patient with us


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In Next Part... [TEASER Scene -G]
The Elevator door opened and GUNJAN entered the empty elevator. She was about to Press the Ground Floor button as she saw the door close,when suddenly... someone forced the door open. GUNJAN moved her hand back... and looked in surprise... this look turning to fear as she saw the person who had entered the elevator... SAMRAT... She was scared. She moved back... without looking at her, He pressed the 15th floor button and did not face her. She saw this and in a tone which reflected her fear, she said...

"Yeh aap kya kar rahe hain...Mujhe Ground-Floor par jaana hai..."
He said nothing...simply glared at her... She was very worried. gathering courage, she said again... "Please stop on the next floor... Mujhe jaana hai..."
He pressed the 'STOP' button... Elevator stopped... He turned to look at her. She moved another step backwards. SAMRAT moved towards her, his eyes blazing with anger... As he moved closer to her, she moved back... till she could no more move back... she hit against the hard cold steel wall of the elevator...
She looked downwards as SAMRAT came very close to her. In a tone that not only reflected his anger, but also his pain, he said... " Kyun jaane doon tumhein...? Kyun manoon main,tumhaari baat...? Kya tum mujhe jaanti ho...?? Kya hum ek dusre ko jaante hain...? Tum mere saath aisa kaise kar sakti ho...? Main... "



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Till then drooling...😳.

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heheheheh... m reserving the post b4 ur PM... πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†
Yesss I beat Ekta n Sanzzz πŸ˜‰ πŸ‘
Edit the remaining parts soon...

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1st reserve n last comment on Part-34 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† 🀣
Again a gorgeous update frnzzz...! πŸ€— No sadness... li'l bit for Samrat but that was necessary as it was a continuation from d last update...! I loved the part where Gunjan talks to Samrat thinking it is Monish! It showed that her heart wasn't hesitating from talking to a stranger only bcoz it knew that it was him. That mention was really beautiful... 😊 😳 It also showed d care n concern Samrat actually has for his lady-love. BTW plsss don temme Monish will involve his parents in this...! It will b crap then! Plss don do this guys... it will b a very bad turn! Plss don involve them!! πŸ€” πŸ€” This stuff has taken an awesome track now... I want it to retain that awesomeness into it. Samrat's character is taking a very nice twist... wanna see sum more of it... πŸ˜‰
Shergill Industries... Samrat was THE BEST...! He realised his mistake, decided to apologise to Gunjan, developed more feelings for him, and wanted her to come back. All positive things... loved it! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ€—
See my Monish is sooo cute πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 Soo cutely he treated Gunjan. However I noe that wat he is doing is actually wrong but he is doing it only for his girl! Although it is wrong but he'll fix it soon! Gunjan was super-cute there... All her expressions were soo beautifully justified. I cud imagine everything with humor...! Gorgeous part... Her thought process is very brilliant and worth getting know about...! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊
Okay did I just see Harman Baweja there? Are u serious that he is Satyam Raheja? πŸ˜† mahn... u didn get anybody else on this BIGGG EARTH!? πŸ˜† But ignoring the face of d character the Satyam-Samrat part was good. Especially when that poor Rozy got d scolding thats too for doing nothin πŸ˜† only her timing was a bit wrong!
Teaser scene was scary... 🀣 I was actually scared when I read d name 'Samrat'. I thot it'll b Monish to enter d lift... 😳 Will read d next part weneva gt tym... n comment asap...!
Overall superbbb update... Loved it to d core...

@Joseph... Seems that Planning Commission will b closed in some days... Plans r not being a success these days. Business bandh hone waala hai 🀣 🀣

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fast!!!!hehe...read it before ur pm!!! jaldi parts update karna!!!!omg!!!precap is awesome!!!!!!!!nice...is satyam also another gunjan craze??????





neefa!❀️
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Res😊.

Thanks alot guys...Thank u very veryyy much for updating it today...πŸ˜³πŸ€—
will comment in detaill..after one week...till then take care...Eid Mubarik...n again Thanks alot..😊
plzzz bear with me..coz i'll read it tonight and will not b able to comment today itself..so plzz after my come back..i;ll surely unres it...😊
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Hey S3 and Joseph...im back with my feedback...sorry for waiting u long...
okk Updat was as usual Mind blowing awesome and Fabulouse...Out standing πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
Starting with that Climax point...Gosh it was dream sequence...we were ryt na...but the diffrence is it was Samrat's dream not monish's...oh God S3...this thing never striked to my mind...it was really shocking for me...as well as it was Veryyy Good too...okk guys but im telling u plzzz dont count this kiss scene in all that 2-3 kisses scenes abt which u had told me once...i want atleast 2-3 scenes like this only of Sajan..plzzz dont reduce one more...πŸ˜‰
Samart scene in his room (that dream sequence ) was Marvellouse..it was too gud...loved it alot..all his care..fear..love n protection for Gunjan were described so wellπŸ‘πŸ‘
the way he was trying to poiny out the location of Gunjan and monish at that time...was awesomely written..he was so worried abt her...😳..n obviousley he should be...coz he knows Mohnish very well ..though he became quite change bcoz of Gunjan or for Gunjan..but its not easy for Samrat to take all this very easy or beleive on this fact so easily...Land line scene remind me soo soo beautiful memories of this ff...Sajan's best scenes and days...😳😳
nanda house scene was also very nice...Gunjan is such a sweetheart...shez so concern for her family...Telephone scene was just a treat for me...After so long i got this...Sajan's phone conversation..though it was one sided but its okk ...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
Poor Gunjan didnt even try to realise whose on the other side...kept on speaking...(it was better for Samrat as well as for all of us too...πŸ˜ƒ)
i knew that 2nd time it would be definitely Samrat on call..and when she said Monish...i completely felt Samrat's bad feelings on this statement.....ok then moving on next...
each n every line was spoken by Gunjan was wonderfull...thanks God she was speaking all this in one go...otherwise how would Samrat get to know abt reality...reality between Gunjan and Monish actual relationship...this whole scene was Fabulouse...Specially when he cut the call and felt content to know she didnt go with Monish..and the same time Gunjan's feelings...everything was very nice...and when Actually Monish called him...wowww that was a great scene...i loved the fact when deep down inside she was guessing the strange person..except Rahul who could it be...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰..shez still thinks abt him...Monish-Gunjan phone conversation was also nice...Monish delightfull feelings were nicely written but again Samrat's scene dominated his...
all thoughts and feelings of Sam were mind blowing...the way he was feeling light..happy and relax after hearing her voice on phone..and then abt her and Monish friendship..etc etc...and praising Gunjan alot...everything was perfectly written.specially he was so curiouse to know abt that problem...which Gunjan was talking abt...once again hez so desprate to calling her back again in his office..i also so wished the same...and Gud..this time hez very determined in his intentions..that hez ready to sacrifies that Kiwish international project just for Gunjan ..wowww😳😳
then came Samrat's office scene...finally he came to know abt that file truth...thanksfully...i must say always u work hard on writing Samrat's lines in this perfect manners...always it seems so natural and completely real to feel the situation or his condition...πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ
this time too...when he realised his mistake and his behavior with Gunjan ...then he cried..ohhh so touchy scene it was...
is baar sammy pakka arrangment (Kaam) kar rha he Gunjan ko wapis lane k lye...u know what guys...this time again i missed Arnav in that Sorry scene...when Samrat thought mene aj tak kisi ko sorry nai bola...πŸ˜†
Main uss se 'Sorry' keh sakta hoon... Maine uske saath jo kiya hai... uske liye toh 'Sorry' word bhi kaafi chhota hai...
I know,woh mujhse naraaz hai..tabhi toh woh kal mujhe MONiSH ke cabin mein ignore kar rahi thi... but, I M sure agar main uss se thik se baat karoonga... uss se wapas aane ko kahoonga... toh,woh maan jaayegi...

Main hamari misunderstanding ka benefit uss MONiSH ko nahin lene doonga... kabhi nahin... Bas 1 baar woh SHERGILL's ko re-join kar le... phir toh sab kuchh thik hoga... Main khud uska khyal rakhoonga... Ab kabhi daantoonga bhi nahin... phir,dekhta hoon... woh kaise mujhe chhod kar jaati hai...
Moving his fingers over her file that lay on his desk... he smiled... wait GUNJAN ,I M coming.
i loved this para alot...😳
Gunjan joined khurana industry finally...light and frndly atmosphere of Monish's office and staff would definitely made her remind the tough n strict envoirment of Shegill's company...and speacilly the Major diffrence and confliction between his both Boss's behavoir n nature...Monish treated her so nicely and gently...
the way he became strict with her then stop her to saying sir to him..everything was totally new and diffrent for her...as compare to her previouse experience of work😊..shez feeling so relax and comfortable in his office...ab wo itni mehnat kare ga usy comfortable feel karwane ki to obviousely she will na...
Gunjan with Kiwish international file...great scene it was...again n gain she miss her ex-Office and Ex- Boss...morever she was thinking abt Samrat's new P.A...so sweet...her thoughts and lines were also Wonderfully written..
then Raheja's owner and Samrat's confrontation was totally bussiness meeting...very very very well written...u had created a totally bussiness like envoirment...Fabuluse work...fora moment i thought ek or Haddi between Sajan..when he was continuously talking abt and praising gunjan...but later its okkk.but point is Samrat ne bol to dia that shez still his P.A..and she'll manage this work..but how would it be possible...now S3 will say..Wait and Watch...Overall Awesome work...thanks again for updating it one day earlier...PLzzz update soon the next part..
tnanks for the pm
Edited by gunurlove - 13 years ago
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Fantastic part.. superb, amazing, awesome...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Waiting eagerly for the next part

cont soon

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