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rija

@gunurlove

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#921

Edited my comment on Pg 117..and i think its quite quite long this time..😉.

u must be get tired or get bore while reading😆

Edited by gunurlove - 13 years ago

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arzzo

@arzzo

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#922

hi sorry for late reply was busy in my papers

ur post was really awesome love the emotions of all the four characters

rahul was for the short tym but yet gunji and his conv was sweet and cute the way he expressed his love and tender for gunji was cute😳 and monish he is the girgid (cahmaliyan)😆 of the story uska colour kb change hu no one can tell jb kisi koa us per tora sah taras ahna lagta hai tb he woa koi aisi harkat karta hai kah gussa sah insaan lal (red) hu jahta hai by god😡 the teaser scene was great but really curious to know what happen nxt gunji abi tu usper tora believe karna lagi thi kah usna aisa karkah apna sar per khulhari mar lii 😆ab woa sb plan bhool jayi bt woa monish hai he will figured some thing out kyu kah woa har mana wala nai and as u say that the battle is about to begin and i am eagerly waiting for its begining 😉😍and sam bechara kitna roa raha tha i dont like seeing him crying bt aur tha poor guy 😭per woa bhi samrat hai kuch to kara gha per dekh nah yeh hai kb kare gha aur kaisa 😕 filhaal tu bechara kitna shocked 😲aur depressed hai gunji was so cute and innocent bechari jb kisi per tora believe karti hai woa insaan uska believe tor dahta hai 🥺she was so nervous and scared in kissing😔 scene pata nai ab kya kare gii bechari how would she save herself😕 and love the ending i am so curious to know what happen nxt just cant wait for ur nxt update plzz try to cont soon😊

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#923

Originally posted by: gnaneswari
Awesome update. Loved it a lot. Superb. u guys had shown gunjan's confused state very nicely. And her convo with rahul is really very nice. happy to read Rajan scenes. They were always my favourite. Rahul and gunjan share a special bond, which i like a lot. And i can understand it is not easy for gunjan to lie to rahul. But, What will be the reaction of rahul when he comes to know that gunjan had actually, hided the truth from him. I really hope that he won't get very angry on gunjan. But, yes he will be hurt too. And yes, gunjan will be shatered when she come to know that she is indirectly responsible for the problem. I hope when this truth will out, there will be someone with her to console her and to give emotional support to her. Samrat's thoughs in his cabin made me little scared, that will samrat really do something to take revenge on gunjan! And monish's thoughs scene in cafe was my favourite. Really, i hadn't expected that monish will think that by sending notice he did wrong! And honestly, i have started to respect him after this. u guys have justified his charector very brilliantly. After reading the previous part, i had thought that may be monish will turn negative as the story proceeds. But now, i don't think that he will. And i'm happy that he is not turning negative. Monish's past is really painful. And his dreams to have a happy family proves that he want's to change genuinely and he thought that he don't want to start a relationship in the basis of lie is really impressive. And he deserves to posses a happy family. So, now i don't have any complaints with his charector. Now, i get to a conclusion that all the 3 guys deserves to be with gunjan. And this scared me, thinking about how will other two bear the pain when one gets gunjan?! they must feel very shattered. I don't want any of the leads in this ff to be sad in he ending.And who is this ria modi? Is she one of the 3 new entries, which u have mentioned earlier? And monish-samrat conversation was very nice. And i'm once again suprised to read that samrat came to know that monish loves gunjan! It was really unexpected! Poor samrat, i can't see him in this pain. And samrat's thoughts in his room was expressed so nicely that i got tears while reading that scene. Really, when i read that, i felt his pain. And this is not an easy task. This proves that how much talented u guys are. A standing ovation for u for this scene. I loved it. And monish-gunjan scene was also good. But, as a sajan fan it is little hard for me digest, so i had read the whole update another time as a neutral then, i have liked that scene too. But, i'm not saying that monish kissing gunjan with out her wish is correct. it is wrong for sure. But the scene has justified monish's charector, it was not out of his charector. so, i don't have any complaints. I'm waiting eagerly to know how will gunjan react to this. i can guess her reaction, but let's see how much my guess proves correct. Will she join monish's office after this? And samrat had realised his mistake, now what will he choose? revenge or love? And most importantly what will happen when samrat and rahul comes to know that monish had kissed gunjan?! I know the answer wait and watch. But, i'm very exceited to read the furthur story that waiting patiently is now impossible for me. So, please update as soon as possible. And sorry for my late, long and boring reply. Do cont soon. Thanks for pm.

Thank U LAKSHMi for your lovely reply. V R overwhelmed to read your detailed feedback on the update.

RaJan bonding is 1 of the strongest part of this FF... They share a great bonding. V do try to do full justice to all our main characters. And as usual for all your questions, just one reply...wait and watch😳.

GUNJAN is very soft hearted, She knows that the NANDA's have done a favor by taking her under their wings. Else in an orphanage, she would have lived a horrendous life. So, when she finds out that she is the reason for their discomfort, she is going to need a lot of comforting.

Both MONiSH and SAMRAT have had a painful past. But that really does not justify their behavior. However, the good side is visible when MONiSH repents his actions of sending a notice to the NANDA's.He is not 'Negative'.

And as for SAMRAT... his aim in life is avenging his mother's death, till GUNJAN enters his life. He never really intends hurting her, but his mind wins over his heart every time. But seeing her with MONiSH and his heart this time won...at least he accepted his love for GUNJAN. But,problem is...He knows,he loves GUNJAN but,don't want to merry with her...😕 His revenge is more important for him.

Yes, all 3 deserve her... but what about GUNJAN?? Does she not deserve someone who will value her emotions?? Who will give her what she wants?? She loves SAMRAT but,same time she knows,Its not a possible dream... Now,she is trying to forget everything...

The character of RiA MODi is not 1 of the 3. But,She is important for story too.

Now,story is going to very interesting turn... some many unexpected things will be come back to back... just like,GUNJAN at KHURANA INDUSTRIES... RAHUL's secret... GUNJAN aware with SAMRAT-RiCHA thing... Her approval for marriage to NANDA's choice, GUNJAN's accident...n many more...

Thank U so much for appreciating our writing. This is the best compliment any writer/s can receive from readers...telling us that they are able to feel the pain of the characters V write about.

This lovely feedback was a treat to read, definitely not boring😳.

Edited by SIZZZLER - 13 years ago

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#924

Originally posted by: fend
hey guys🤗 it was amazing update loved it a lot👏 so finally samrat is aware abt monish n his love for gunjan but feel bad for samrat n now that he has realised his mistake how much he loves gunjan n regrets abt it n knows howmuch important place she holds in his life 😳monish past also was very terific loved rahul n gunjan convo n love bond they both share 😊n last scene monish kiss gunjan😡 hope its a dream😆 gr88 gng guys each n every scene beautifully written n potrayed👏 keep it up👍🏼do cont soon n thanks for the pm

Thanx 4 your precious feed-back.

SAMRAT has realized MONiSH loves GUNJAN and this makes him think about his feelings for her. So he does finally admit to his feelings.Now,he don't want to lose her.

GUNJAN and RAHUL share a lovely bond. Whenever, GUNJAN needs him, RAHUL is always around.

Thanx for your compliment.The last scene to be continued in the next update. V'll try to update soon.

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Lekshmic7

@Lekshmic7

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#925

Hai Guys!! As usual , firstly sorry 4 d late comment. As 4 d part.. I just want to say only one word ...WOW!!!!! Seriously.., wt an update guys?? It ws extraordinarly brilliant. All scenes wr exhibited very well. U guys really deserves applauses 4 ds part. For me ds part totally changed d whole equations! till nw am considering monish as a creepy obssessed villain.bt After reading d part am seeing monish in a new light ( bt i still dnt like his ways). Ds part also give us a new face of samrats feelings. Der is tears in my eyes while reading sams pov.he is accepting everythng nw. I really liked d way u showed how sam felt sorry 4 his previous deeds to gunjan.bt he is too late nw. Now d ball is in monishs court. Loved d way u have described gunjans feelings too. It is so painful to read. Rahul- gunjan scene ws great. I really wish rahul to b here to gv gunjan a supporting shoulder in ds situation. Den comes d new entry Ria Modi!! she is d one na, who s in dat teaser scene along with gunjan?? So she is also an integral part of ds story...! As for d kissing scene.. After reading d teaser scene am always scared of dat scene. Bt after reading ds part am nt complaining...& am nt predicting anythng like wt will monish do aftr ds, wt will b gunjans reaction ...etc. bcaz once u guys told me( in a reply of one of my prevs comnt) dat.., dnt judge d kissing scene in part 33 before reading part 34. So am waiting eagerly 4 d next part.( fingers crossed) I am expecting dat all our qstns will b answrd in dat part. As u said nw d battle is begun. I knew it will b a long battle of feelings & emotions like love, passion, obsession, hatred, revenge etc... ..bt am still believing dat at d end of all des only pure love will exist & else all hs frgtn. Brilliant update guys... Seriously u r doing a fab job. Continue soon. Thanks 4 d pm. Love u all- lekshmi

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Swati

@SwaNia_2

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#926

Originally posted by: PrincessBushi
wow awesome update
so hugeee 😛
loved it .. cont. soon

Thank you dear for your reply. Glad you liked this update. will be updating soon.😊

Edited by SwaNia_2 - 13 years ago

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#927

Again superb work S3.👏 👏 👏Awesome 👏. Totally outstanding work of piece.👏👏👏Too good.😊

Guys,I really want to say 1 thing about your 'Thoughts Lines'... It is amazing...😊 so much clear...very easy for understand character's view...their confusion... solution... justification... everything so smoothly.😳 Readers can relate or understand them, with so easily...whatever,Gunjan , Monish n most importantly Samrat's thoughts lines ... it was clearing their inner feelings.Really, GR8 work S3.👏

In this Update... Gunjan's part was Awesome...😊 RaJan convo scene was short but,so so cute... I loved it...😳 (specially that Pic. of Rahul😳) Samrat-Monish part was extra-ordinary...again superb piece of work.👏 I liked it so much...what a dialogues... Ria's entry is little surprising for me too...(along with Monish😆) and thereafter,Samrat's scene...It was so touchy n emotional...😭(Perfect pics. selection,It was so easy for visualized whole sequence😭) And last but not the least...that kissing part...I know the importance of that scene in this story so...😕waiting for further parts...😳Please update soon...

Joseph❤️.

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SIZZZLER

@SIZZZLER

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#928

Originally posted by: cool_tuli
Okay m finally done with the Beautiful Part-32
Monish's Cabin scene was really really really surprising...!!! N m soo happy for Monish now... 😃
see I knew he is not a person to do all those stuffs... 😃 😃 😃 Thank you thank u thank u thank u... in Jab We Met Geet's style... 😉 Havin Samrat there was scary... 😆 I actly imagined SaJan scenes mentioned in d part... The pulling hands, scolding, forcibly talking n all... So well expressed... I cud very well imagine Samrat's anger n Gunjan's scare...
N then Monish's plans... poor thing... The way he shouted to that Ravi... 😆 uski toh lag gaye... 😆🤣
But I still dislike Monish (li'l bit 😉) for 1 thing... his plan to expose himself n Gunjan to d media only for d sake to grab her into his life... I don think thats love...!! Love is not about taking sum1 its about havin sum1...!!! I am severely against this idea of Monish... But in d rest part of Khurana Industries Monish was superbbb!!! Soo adorable... felt lyk doin a Coochie coo to him 😳 That Gunjan punishing Monish was a bit off-track but cute... soo maaf kiya 😉 m sorry m not gettin d apt word for it 😆
Okay... Wo OFFICE CABIN tha??? I mean soo decorated n all????? Fish... i wud hav had slept if I got such a cabin for myself... I wont thats a different issue... but still... 😆 I had imagined my bedroom to b like that... that too only for sum days... 😛 🤣 But wen it cums to Gunjan... thats gud... I guess girls like such kinda rooms n all... am i right??
Loved Samrat a lot in d whole update...!! Especially his solo part... wen he is in his own thoughts... Sum aspects like pointing on Gunjan's char was uuurrrggghh kinda but his thought process was well matured...!! Very nicely written... courtesy whoever u wanna grant to 😆
Okay I have a qn... 😆 thanx to my Ghajini effect... did Monish send that Notice to Nandas???
well Nanda family drama was soo beautiful... especially Mr.Nanda...!! He was sooo nice...! I wish sabke parents aise hi ho... 😊 Awesome one...
Too good guys... write more... (aftr i finish d next part 😆) Lets see wat more u guys hav in store... U hva talked about sum Major Twist... waiting to look out for it... 😉 Wish me luck... 😆
N gud luck to u all too... 🤗
Sonia... this time u all got saved... 😉

Thanx TULi , for your comment and also for saying that Part 32 was beautiful.

V have always maintained that none of the three male leads are really negative. Like V see around us, each has a shade of gray b'coz, no one is really perfect. MONiSH is also not bad. He only wants to live a life he always dreamy of...a serene, simple and happy life with a family to dote on. And he sees this kind of life with GUNJAN. Yes, he does go overboard sometimes... but from his POV, he is right. He will ensure that ultimately, GUNJAN is away from all this. So he justifies his behavior.

Thank you for appreciating SAMRAT-GUNJAN scenes in the cabin.

The cabin was subtly done up. MONiSH just assumed that a simpleton like GUNJAN would love her cabin to be simple... so just some flowers, a painting, simple curtains and a very simple chandelier... MONiSH anyway does not intend to burden GUNJAN with too much work. His aim to get GUNJAN working for him is just to be with her through the day.

SAMRAT is only trying to justify his actions about staying away from GUNJAN. So he thinks somethings which his mind allows, but his heart rejects, which is why we have a confused SAMRAT as regards GUNJAN.

Yes, MONiSH did indeed send that notice to the NANDA's.

Best of luck... when you read the next part 😳

Best of luck to us too... when V read your comment on the next part.

This time toh we were saved, but after TULi reads and comments on the next part... God Save us...😆

Do comment soon😳.

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TULI

@cool_tuli

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER

Thanx TULi , for your comment and also for saying that Part 32 was beautiful.

V have always maintained that none of the three male leads are really negative. Like V see around us, each has a shade of gray b'coz, no one is really perfect. MONiSH is also not bad. He only wants to live a life he always dreamy of...a serene, simple and happy life with a family to dote on. And he sees this kind of life with GUNJAN. Yes, he does go overboard sometimes... but from his POV, he is right. He will ensure that ultimately, GUNJAN is away from all this. So he justifies his behavior.

Thank you for appreciating SAMRAT-GUNJAN scenes in the cabin.

The cabin was subtly done up. MONiSH just assumed that a simpleton like GUNJAN would love her cabin to be simple... so just some flowers, a painting, simple curtains and a very simple chandelier... MONiSH anyway does not intend to burden GUNJAN with too much work. His aim to get GUNJAN working for him is just to be with her through the day.

SAMRAT is only trying to justify his actions about staying away from GUNJAN. So he thinks somethings which his mind allows, but his heart rejects, which is why we have a confused SAMRAT as regards GUNJAN.

Yes, MONiSH did indeed send that notice to the NANDA's.

Best of luck... when you read the next part 😳

Best of luck to us too... when V read your comment on the next part.

This time toh we were saved, but after TULi reads and comments on the next part... God Save us...😆

Do comment soon😳.

Yeahh I said it was beautiful bcoz it was kinda Monish dominated... n u noe wen Monish is into d picture everything is gud for me... 😉 Yeahh I remember u had told me that all d kide-kandis r there in Part-33... I did start reading it but didn finish yet... Wat surprised me were Samrat's crying pics... God noes wat u guys hav done with that poor thing!!!
Yeahh Gud Luck to you all... Jhansi Ki Rani is on her way... If she likes the next part U'll get Dairy Milk Silk n if she doesn... U'll get bashed up... Haa haa haa (laughs like Gabbar Singh) 🤣