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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PrincessBushi

oh wow Amazing part ..
loved it
thanx for the pm



Thank You dear for liking the update and your comment.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fend

hey guys🤗 awesome update loved it👏 hate monish😡hez taking advantage of gunjans innocence poor gunjan is unaware of all this n feels hez a nice person hope sam understands her n saves her from monish eveil intensions n hope he realises his love for her😳 very well written keep it up👍🏼 do cont soon n thanks for the pm



Thank you dear, for your comment.😊 Gunjan is really very naive, she is unable to judge the character of a person. Seeing the world through her clean and pure heart often puts her in trouble. but this is also true, that people with clean and pure hearts always have a guardian angel looking over them helping them tide over all problems. Who will be Gunjan's guardian angel... wait and watch.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

frnd...😉...

4 Pming Me...😛
👍🏼4 ur
updates.👏👏👏..
me dear...😃..
really dear..😛
lots of hugs n kisses 4 u...🤗...
lov,❤️
Tama
P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...me only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as me saw many of my comments r copied me'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but don't coppied it whole as my post...😡
P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...me tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕
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guys...me sad...me PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕
me said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials me don't watch but me read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...me really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...me never pm u...4 my any update...
but i updated 4 whom woh waited...me know just few..but me updated for them surely...but that surely me said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭



Thank You dear for😊 this lovely reply here.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: gunurlove

Hey S3 and Joeph... 😊

Again very sorry for not commenting on 1st look one...but i had not read it thats y could not comment...and later i thanked that i had not read it before...coz muft me 1 week ki tension mil jani thi mujhe..😉..i like to read whole part...phir mujhse wait nai hota na...isilye...😆

okk now come to the latest update...As usual Mind blowing...

With Gunjan i too felt veryyy relaxed to see Samrat on door...REALLYYY...

Thanksfully she saved...but till when....kabi na kabi to wo Manhoos scene aye ga na.🤢

but filhaal to Bohat acha hua Monish k satha..Bohat...😳

Monish's Anger was fully expected in that situation...his plan was failed by Samrat...Very gud...
Sajan's meeting was Superb...though i was not craving for their meeting in such condition or in Monish's office...but main thing is Sajan's meeting..n thats what i got it...😳
whole scene was Very Well written..completely justifying the whole situation...Gunjan's shocked behavior as well as Samrat too was shocked to see her in Monish office..that too in his cabin n alone...his anger n insecurities were very natural then...you have written this tense n intense scene very very Well...loved it alot...firstly his feelings to seeing her after 2 days..n then realized where she is yet...it made him angry n when she was not rplying his question it made him angry even more...😲...this time i love the wy Samrat yelling on her...coz in her anger there was hidden love, care , possesivness n insecurity for her...somewhere Gunjan too was feeling the same ...she sighed with releive after seeing him...afterall she trusts him...and feeling safe with him...😳😳 so sweet...but inspite all these she was upset with him...
whole conversation between samrat n Gunjan was very nice..though it was short but Superb..👏
but the best scene was when Monish enters in the cabin...Samrat's jealousy n anger towards him was sooo sweett..when Gunjan rplied him sweetly n softly..then Our Samrat sir became jealouse...awww😳😉
i love the line..."ye meriii" 😉😉...guys this is not fair na...YE Meri whattt...i knew he will not speak further..but i was dying to listen...phir is Monish k bache ne sara maza khraab kar dia...Ye tumhari Ex-P.A thi..ab nai he...😭..n after that a touchwood para was came...Sammy's thoughts to seeing her crying..was so touchy...😳..kaash Gunjan k saamne bolte un papers ka..par itne Pagal thori na the...u know i was really wishing k wo reportars ajaen or Gunjan samrat ka scandle bn jae..instead Monish Gunjan..to maza ajae..but
That Monish gunjan scene was ...😡😡..what would i say ...i hate Monish alot in that scene...really wanted to kill him...n i was thinking abi to sammy office me hi hoga kahin na kahin...but somewhere i knew he will not do anything wrong with her now...definitely na...abi trust regain kare ga to hi to wo scene aye ga...
but i want to say something...Monish is a big problem between Sajan ryt now...but phir b...after going two HADDIES i feel really light this story now...though i missed themm..coz all r important to making this story soo Special n Extra ordinary..but still deep down inside im happy ryt now..coz Sajan's meeting k chances nikal ate hen na kahin na kahin se..or Samrat gunjan k scenes zyada hojate hen ab...😳😉
then came Nanda's family scene...ahhh Monish was too smart...he is trying to win their hearts..n somehow he z succeeded in all these...🤢...n i knew wo Appartment wala drama isi ka hi hoga...😡..guys love aesa hota he kya...ye to zabardasti Gunjan ko apni life me enter karne ki planning hui na...he z thinking he will be do everything alright after marriage with her...but the way he was planning her to trap infront of media.by making her scandle with him...is it alryt with Gunjan or her family's respect...Stupid guy...😡
but u writers are impossible...in one scene we felt too much anger on one character..n in the next para..u will describe their inner most feelings in such touchy n miserable way..that we have to compell to think their condition..n then i was like...hmm somewhere hez ryt...like when he saw Mr and Mrs Nanda..concern care n love for Gunjan...then his thoughts n feeling were written Awesomly...besides parents being with him..he was alone...he spent his childhood alone...
But inspite all these...HE is a Great Haddi between my Sajan..😆
ab dekhna le jaega Nanda family ko yahan se...humph
then Samrat scene came...again he misunderstood Gunjan...Oh God...Samrat's mind is a factory of misunderstanding in matter of Gunjan...hadd hoti he.is bar to us ne pyaar ko hi attraction n infatuation ka naam de dia..😲..Samrat thoughts have been always written veryyy Beautifully...his each n every word ...whatever he thinks abt her..was Awesome n mind blowing...thinks gud or bad...but u always use Impressive words to describe his feelings n emotions..👏👍🏼..totally rocking Update...👏
eagerly waiting fot he next part...
thanks alot for pm...



Thank You RiJA for your in depth analysis on this update.😊

SAMRAT's entry was the surprise of this update, if U do not consider what MONiSH actually does to B one. Do believe us when V say that every scene in the TEASER is very important for the story to move forward. Even 'Woh Manhoos scene😳' as you say. After you read that scene once we update it, then V'll discuss in detail.😉

And U say V never write scenes that you would love to read😳 Now,V hope this complain no more exists...😃

Though SAMRAT is in conflict with his heart and mind, sometimes his heart does manage to win, so when he saw GUNJAN after 2 days, his heart pined for her, to hold her, comfort her. But, then his anger got the better of him. Though this time his anger was out of concern n Love for GUNJAN.

Unfortunately 4 us, the NEiL track was cut short in MJHT and we could not get to see a possessive SAMRAT. This time V R going to make the most of it, SAMRAT's possessiveness for GUNJAN.😉

MONiSH only wants GUNJAN in his life. He justifies his actions when he keeps convincing himself, that whatever he does, he will ultimately take GUNJAN away from all this and she will not have to bear the repercussions of his actions. Love is making him do things that may not seem normal to us, but from his POV, they are perfect as long as his goal is achieved.

NANDA family scenes are what happen in most household's... short sweet Nok-jhoks... making a stressful life seemingly less stressful to live. And V have only tried showing every characters POV...the reason for their particular behavior. See RiJA, the thing is no one is bad... circumstances makes one behave in a particular way, which may seem bad to others but, maybe that is the only way out for that person. Yahaan 'RAM' (Lord) Kaun hai yaar...?? Nobody can Perfect here...so...😳

SAMRAT's conflict between his mind and heart will continue... he has lived a life devoid of love... this is his way of coping with his grief.

V'll B post next part very soon...😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: MoNayaHolicPrag

Okay.. weell a really nice update... so much of twists and turns...

i am liking the way it is going... but i would love to see more sajan scenes please...
and just i feel ki the story is going a bit slow..
i mean.. thats my take... sorry..
all in all i enjoyed reading all the parts.
hope you guys continue really soon :)


Thank you Pragya for your comment...the story demands that the pace be this slow now, but later the story will pick up pace,.this is emotions based story...So we have to understand every character's emotions and move the story accordingly...however we will try to keep this suggestion in mind... Thank you for your frank comment here.

Edited by SwaNia_1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

😆😆😆bt seriously...i hate monish!!!!!!!i mean throw him out na!!!!!!!!!!! do 1 thing...g8 him GANG RAPED BY BOYS 🤣 den he'll flea from india!!!!!!! wat say????🤣 else l8 gunjan add poison in his coffee!!!! SAALA MUFT MEIN "WORLD'S BEST COFFEE" BOLKE COFFEE PINE AA JAATA HAIN!!!!KAMINA!!!CHINDHI CHOR!!!!🤢 ask samrat TO THROW ACID ON HIM!!!!😆
TRY USING DESE IDEAS...I'LL L8 U NOE MORE WEN U UPDATE D NEXT TYM!!!!😉



OMG... itna hatred😲... and so much violence Gunjan can never do anything like poison another soul... but thanks for all these suggestions😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Pleashhh Continueee This Oneee NOW ! 😳 You Guyss Have Updated The Other FF Naa SOO This Is Why I Need Update 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7

TEASER-1st LOOK--PART-32

Hi Soham,Sonia,Swati-S3...wow!! man what a teaser...👍🏼...1st LOOK-PART 32 teaser was just MIND Blowing...👏...So full of suspense ...I am very confused after reading the teaser...it is very well written and very well prensented...👏👏...awesome teaser...What a twist👍🏼...Yesterday I read TEASER-1st LOOK--part 32 and after reading the teaser I am very confused, totally shocked ,scared 4 Gunjan and ANGRY AT MONISH😡...I really DISLIKE Monish 😡...WHAT is he up to Now????😕..😡..removing his belt tie folding sleeves MAN Gunjan was so scared... ...KYA KARNA CHAHATA HAI MONISH?????😕...Poor Gunjan I hope he doesnt harm her ...But on 2nd thought I know Monish will never HARM Gunjan physically ...But 2 get his own way and 2 get Gunjan in his life he can go 2 any lengths...and can even hurt her family and THIS will hurt Gunjan emotionally as she loves her family very much...How could MONISH even think of executing plans like these...😕...PATA NAHI MONISH ka PLAN Kya hai aab...???😕😕...His plans will hurt Gunjan in the long run and Samrat has behaved so badly with her when she comes 2 know MONISH plans HOW will she react then???????WILL she still TRUST Monish and respect him?? I know when she comes 2 know Monish hurt her family just 2 make her his She will loose trust in Monish and she will blame herself even when IT IS NOT her fault at all...she is very senstive and soft girl she will be hurt bec of Monish plans...Monish was so angry at his Employee BUT WHY???😕😕what has R done??...it looked 2 me as if Monish ka koi plan FLOp ho gaya thats why he was reacting this way But what plan????😕😕...and MEDIA and camera man whats This???? reporters coming BUT WHY?? and His thoughts his justifying his actions PROVES Monish knows in his heart that His actions are wrong his plans are wrong and His Plans will hurt GUNJAN and her family BUT STILL he is executing his plans😲...His love is turning into Obsession..he wants Gunjan in his life by HOOK or By CROOK..IS EVERYTHING really fair in love n war😕😕...SHAYAD NAHI...PATA NAHI...I am so confused😕...I think Monish should stop BEFORE he looses Gunjan friendship ...as the way he is going some day Gunjan will find out his plans and deeds...WHAT will happen then...?????😕😕 Samrat has hurt her so much and If she finds out about Monish plans Monish whom she trusts and respects She will be hurt very much...WHATS gonna happen???... I really excited 2 know what will happen next...I know some answers 2 my questions are In PART-32 --
I have read A-B part...C-D-E-F parts left 2 read...I will try 2 read as soon as I can and will comment after reading...😊...SORRY 4 late reply SOHAM,SONIA,SWATI...😳...

Once again 1st LOOK part -32 TEASER was EXCELLENT ...👏...

Love Ur good friend
GUNJAN😊😊...



Thank You Gunjan for your reply on the teaser. We can see the teaser has done its job 😉 Monish is now desperate to get closer to Gunjan and he will do anything for that. He does not intend hurting her or her family. What he is doing is right as per his view and not necessarily right for everyone else. You have rightly said that Gunjan will blame herself as that is how she is. All of the answers are in the full part that we have updated eons ago. 😳


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Pleashhh Continueee This Oneee NOW ! 😳 You Guyss Have Updated The Other FF Naa SOO This Is Why I Need Update 😆



Working on the update dear. Since we are a bit busy because of the festivals, it is taking time. But we will try to update soon.😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2



Working on the update dear. Since we are a bit busy because of the festivals, it is taking time. But we will try to update soon.😊


Ohh, That's Fine :) 🤗 Will Wait For It . The Most Scary Part Is Coming Also Naa ;) 😆 Monish Doing Something Terribly With Our Sweet Gunjan :( 😳

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