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Posted: 13 years ago
Wen R U Updating Guys?! 😳 M impatiently Waiting for this...!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awsum update guys...

do continue soon...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SwaNia_2



OMG... itna hatred😲... and so much violence Gunjan can never do anything like poison another soul... but thanks for all these suggestions😆

suggestions dene mein kya jaata hain!!!!!! wat if she is preparing coffee n she sees a mouse in d kitchen n gets a poison to kill it n all of a sudden it falls into d coffee n she doesnt realise it n gives d coffee 2 dat BHUKKAD!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_tuli

Finally done with Part-31...
Love you guys 🤗 A completely Mohnish dominated part... 😳 😳
I jus love him d way he is... look m not supporting his rude n harsh nature but I like to see him like this...!!!
Mohnish-Samrat conversation was awesome...!!! The way he caught Samrat under him was splendid. Of course I don want Samrat to fall into any kinda trouble... but I loved Mohnish's style... there is some uniqueness in it... 😉 Wen he tries to threaten somebody, he is d best... as if he is the king!!! 😉 😳 Superbbb mahn...! I hope Samrat's dillema gets solved as soon as possible... coz there r lot of things cumin his way!!! Its lyk sum raahu-ketu thing is revolving around him... 1st Gunjan left him, 2nd Mohnish's proposal n 3d Pratap's warning...!!! Poor thing yaar...!

BTW I noe wat he'll select... no no i didn read the next part yet... but i still noe... Hopefully 😆
If m not wrong it was Mr.Agarwal right who told Mohnish about everything, unknowingly of course...!? n is that notice to Nanda house from Shergill's??? 😲 Itne jaldi????
Gunjan...!!!😡 Gosh... how can somone b sooo innocent? or rather brainless! 😛 She noes d world that she resides in is dark then how can she trust upon sum1 she has met only a couple of times? I mean kisine coffee ki taarif kya kar di wo toh udhar hi flat ho gayi! She met a person 2 years back who had helped her... n now also he's doing the same... but yaar koi usko bolo... THAT 2 YEARS BACK D SITUATION WAS DIFFERENT N MOHNISH WAS DIFFERENT TOO!!!! She had intuitions for not going with him... she cud hav had stayed back... but no... jaana toh hai hi... aise MAHAAN INSAAN ko koi naa kaise bole... 😡

But u noe wat is making me more angry??? That if sumthing happens with Gunjan... everybody will blame Mohnish for it! Nobody will bother to noe wat Gunjan did...! what her stupidity was...😡 Y is it always that the boys r blamed for everything??? 😛
Anyways keeping it aside... m sure u hav sum thoughts in ur mind... so go ahead with it...
Nanda spouses' discussion was good, matured n well written... The emotions n concern was well-seen...!!!
Nicely expressed everything... loved the writing skills... sum ignorable errors were there too... but thats okay!? 😉 feelings pohoch gayi 😆
Gud luck... 🤗
will comment for d 1st look asap...



Thank U TULi for your reply on Part 31.

Each character plays an important role in this FF. So MONiSH [Its MONiSH...not MOHNiSH😳😆] also deserves equal space which V have given him. He is not a 'Negative' character... He do,what he want.V can't describe his character in any single word... Very soon U would be get my point.

SAMRAT is facing the worst phase of his life now. Whether MONiSH will be successful in snatching SAMRAT's happiness remains to be seen. But MONiSH is a shrewd person, knows to give it where it hurts.😉

But,I M little surprised...that,after all 32 long parts U didn't understand GUNJAN's character very well😲.I think this is the failure of our writing skill😭.

GUNJAN is not very out spoken.RAHUL n his family was always protective for her. She never faced any Bad experience in her life, except SAMRAT's behavior in "The AMBASSADOR" .

GUNJAN trusts anyone. She does not think anyone can be bad. Also consider, that MONiSH is not entirely a stranger. He is the Trustee of the college Mr. NANDA works in and has been to their house a couple of times. Her uncle and aunt trust MONISH, so it is but obvious for GUNJAN to trust him.

The MONiSH 2 years ago was worse than this MONiSH. Then he was a complete stranger and yet he did not misbehave with her then.If,he wanted then,he could any thing with her but,he didn't. So now there is no reason for her to doubt MONiSH's intentions.

If something happens to GUNJAN in MONiSH's presence, then is it not obvious that he will be blamed?? And the type of person that GUNJAN is, will it be possible for her to do something wrong and let someone else take the blame?? She will blame herself even if, she is not at fault.

By the way thanx for taking side of Boys😊😆.I M happy😉.

Thank U for appreciating the NANDA's scene and convo.

Waiting for your comment on the 1st Look😳.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..

Do Continue Soonish =) 😳 🤗



Yaa...V'll be post very soon... Actually,Next 3 Parts (33 to 35) is very important for this story.so,V can't take any chance... MONiSH-SAMRAT confrontation n that most awaited 'TEASER' part😳 is Highlight of the next Update.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ekta_monaya

Wen R U Updating Guys?! 😳 M impatiently Waiting for this...!!😳



Thanx EKTA 4 Reminder Reply😳. Next Part is almost ready... but,still not satisfied with some portions... would be try to post on 26th Oct.11[Wed]😳.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: monaya_sajan

suggestions dene mein kya jaata hain!!!!!! wat if she is preparing coffee n she sees a mouse in d kitchen n gets a poison to kill it n all of a sudden it falls into d coffee n she doesnt realise it n gives d coffee 2 dat BHUKKAD!!!!


Suggestion accepted... super. 👏 😊 Thank you for giving us suggestions.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER



Thank U TULi for your reply on Part 31.

Each character plays an important role in this FF. So MONiSH [Its MONiSH...not MOHNiSH😳😆] also deserves equal space which V have given him. He is not a 'Negative' character... He do,what he want.V can't describe his character in any single word... Very soon U would be get my point.

SAMRAT is facing the worst phase of his life now. Whether MONiSH will be successful in snatching SAMRAT's happiness remains to be seen. But MONiSH is a shrewd person, knows to give it where it hurts.😉

But,I M little surprised...that,after all 32 long parts U didn't understand GUNJAN's character very well😲.I think this is the failure of our writing skill😭.

GUNJAN is not very out spoken.RAHUL n his family was always protective for her. She never faced any Bad experience in her life, except SAMRAT's behavior in "The AMBASSADOR" .

GUNJAN trusts anyone. She does not think anyone can be bad. Also consider, that MONiSH is not entirely a stranger. He is the Trustee of the college Mr. NANDA works in and has been to their house a couple of times. Her uncle and aunt trust MONISH, so it is but obvious for GUNJAN to trust him.

The MONiSH 2 years ago was worse than this MONiSH. Then he was a complete stranger and yet he did not misbehave with her then.If,he wanted then,he could any thing with her but,he didn't. So now there is no reason for her to doubt MONiSH's intentions.

If something happens to GUNJAN in MONiSH's presence, then is it not obvious that he will be blamed?? And the type of person that GUNJAN is, will it be possible for her to do something wrong and let someone else take the blame?? She will blame herself even if, she is not at fault.

By the way thanx for taking side of Boys😊😆.I M happy😉.

Thank U for appreciating the NANDA's scene and convo.

Waiting for your comment on the 1st Look😳.


Chammat padega if u balme ur writing for me not understanding Gunjan's char...!
See wat i wanna say is that you guys hav written it very nicely... n the story is goin amazingly with d flow...!! But a reader will always try to relate the stuffs written with d actual n obvious happenings in d world.
I noe how innocent n simple Gunjan is... i also noe that she easily trusts people... but tell me one thing...!? (Do ask ur fellow writers especially d girls abt this) Don't girls have a sixth sense to understand wats goin on in d air around!? Of course she does... Is Gunjan an ALIEN for not gettin that 6th sense 😆 ? U r giving a reason that she was always very much protected by d Nandas... but can't even she think that y were they SO much concerned for her or rather so much Protective, to b precise!? It was jus my POV... I jsu hope that my MONISH (correct?) 😆 doesn juggles up himself...! If he does so I'll b the first one to kill him... 😕
N u Mr.Soham... stop crying 😛

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: SIZZZLER



Thanx EKTA 4 Reminder Reply😳. Next Part is almost ready... but,still not satisfied with some portions... would be try to post on 26th Oct.11[Wed]😳.

OMG! Matlab DIWALI DHAMAKA?! 😆 But on Diwali...🤔 We'll be havng Laxmi Pujan, & Frnds Relatives visiting houses, Loads of Masti & Stuff... I guess i wont be cumin Ol9 on Wednesday as its Diwali... Matlab mera 1st Res Gaya... Still i'll try to cum...😈 Koi baat nai, i'll read it nxt day...😉 But Plz Dont Delay it ok... Want it on 26th...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ekta_monaya

OMG! Matlab DIWALI DHAMAKA?! 😆 But on Diwali...🤔 We'll be havng Laxmi Pujan, & Frnds Relatives visiting houses, Loads of Masti & Stuff... I guess i wont be cumin Ol9 on Wednesday as its Diwali... Matlab mera 1st Res Gaya... Still i'll try to cum...😈 Koi baat nai, i'll read it nxt day...😉 But Plz Dont Delay it ok... Want it on 26th...😳



Yaa... Totally DiWALi DHAMAKA...😊 Next Update is really tough part for us.😳
Now,V'll B try to post Next day.
Edited by SIZZZLER - 13 years ago

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