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~ENIGMA~
Part 54






He may be talking to shamrat, but his eyes were on geet, who looked beautiful with each passing second, & the temptation of him having her in his arm, it startted to get far beyond his control...

Geet looked at him now & then in fear. She could see how those hungry eyes eying, & most importantly, the fact everything is new to her. Maan came by & offered her a drink- alcohol free! She smiles & easily accepts the drink...
Maan "dance?"
Geet nodes for a no! Sigh! Smiling.
Maan "may I ask the reason for no?" his hand slowly makes its way to her... Stroking it gently...
Geet "I ju..." she could barely finish her sentence when maan forcefully brings her in his embrace... Taking her way to the dance floor. Geet looked at him in shock. Surprised with the sudden agretion!
Geet "I am sure!... I am not in a mood!" maan somewhere felt really sad, & the sadness came out as a anger.
His anger could not take full effect when a girl pushes him way from her... "let's give your girl some space!" she smiles. Taking his hand & resting it on her bare waist. "call me ...!" she smirks.




Geet was not sure what to expect. What exactly that half naked girl was thinking! & chi! Chi babaji! He comes to this type of party. She makes a baby face. Looking up. She also did not like how he comfortably moving hips with her... Or the way he was comfortable!


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I thought he was different! She looked at him across the other side of the dance floor. I thought he likes me! Yes, she is jealous, very jealous! But the jealous would not appear unless she have some attraction toward this person. She smiled... Not to smile in his smile but smiling sadly. A mask smile. Geet looked at him, who also looked back across the dance floor! It was a unnecessary step, just because she refused he went to another girl for dance. Geet could feel her burning cheek in jealous, but her past experience was playing more in to it. She smiled again. Samarts GF came by taking her to the dance floor... She hesitated for a minute. But then to show & for the plight sake... she had to dance, but the thing that took her in surprise was maan... The way he was dancing on "shila ki jawani!"





Geet backed way as the crowd started to woo the dancing couple. She was shocked to see this new side of maan... No regret.. No tension that someone may be watching him. Someone waiting for him...




The way he behaved... It really did hurt her allot... But she smiled way... Showing she is perfectly alright...

It was 2 am when maan eventually managed to free him self way from the crowd!
Maan "you did not enjoy at all!" he told geet. She basically made her self comfortable at the far corner of the bar.
Geet "I am fine! Shall we go!" she smiles...

Maan still looked at her with passion, for past 4 hours in attempt to make her jealous, seems like it went perfectly well. He could sense, how uncomfortable she was. How he sussed, but she did not react very well... Wasn't she suppose to jump, scream at him! Dragging him way from the girls, claiming him, nothing like that seems to take place. He wondered why?
Maan "tum tikh to ho na?" he asked to make sure! Did he go over board? No, he must not! All he done was flirt & dance with the girls, nothing more nothing less, but when she will agree that she is really made for me! When I get angry, she dare not to come on my bad list. Doing everything as possible to pacify me! & here, instead of getting Angry, she seems to be perfectly alright!
Geet "I am fine! What's wrong with me?" she asked the same question as maan, throughing it back at him. Geet seems to be in her deep meditation! What she have done? Came this far! To far...

Geet did not realized when the car have stopped, & when on spur of moment maan comfortably cupped her cheek. His shimmering eyes was full of lust. "what's wrong misty?" a unknown protective rhythm came out of his mouth. The solicitude showed a clear appearance on his face. He knew somewhere he may have went beyond the limit! "The amor he have in depth in his heart, does she feel the same?" he questioned him self, he could not jump in those eyes, to be lost. What was stopping her to let him in! If even somewhere she felt the same lasciviousness, she would have fought to bring him back from them. The apprehensive maan was in fear with the enigma! She is in disguise . He did not know anything, she refuge to open up & with every passing second his ear died to listen. She almost shelter those word in her lips, with non-stop maans questioning eyes, eventually a lie came out. "I am fine, I am so tired, shall we go..." a fraudulent smile arise on her cheek.Mere lie did not convince maan.
Maan "are you sure?" he tried to persuade an authentic answer again.
Geet "it's to late! Let's go," she again gave a dissemble answer & walked out.
Maan left there with her unwanted truthful thought. His concern was more on why she did not react? Why her behave somewhere making him anxious.
Maan decided to ignore the thought for the night!

Morning sun came early for some while let for another! Geet slept in a bed gull of dilemma, confusion. Regret & somewhere shame on her self. She have lost her goal when maan walked in, it's nothing new, she have been like this for a month! Since they broke up & now back together. & again she is somewhere where this relationship is so unstable. She wakes up & walks in to the bathroom...

Maan walks out of the bathroom... He quickly looks throughout his mailbox & phone... "20 miscall- dadi!" there must be something serious he gathered, otherwise why so many miscall!
"hello! Is everything alright dadima?" he could here she is crying on the other side of the phone. "is everything alright?" he repeats worriedly...
Dadi "rik is in hospital! He was playing with a ball near the road & ... " she could say any more word as maan ran to geets bedroom...

Geet on the other hand stood under the cold shower! Rethinking about her thought! "maybe he was anticipating for me to react! To bring him back! He probably was trying to make me angry! Jealous! Probably!... But..."
Maan knocks had on her door.. "geet! Geet!" she quickly dries her self & dresses up,
"what happen?"
Maan was not sure how to say, or way to say... How will she react as well..



next- twist...

hay you all... how r you????

i am so sorry for lateness.. but i am not feeling that well lately.

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xxxGULAAL & KESAR FF- MEANT TO BE- PART 1


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Yayy me first,,,whoop whoop
Awesome update::
Loved how maan was trying to make geet jealous
Geet was jealous but she didn't show it
Maan was curious as to why geet wasn't reacting...
Get well soon
Wonder wat this new twist is...
Continue soon Xx...
Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
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yay...me 2nd...but i wanted to be 1st though!!
chal koi nahi
me still 2nd😃



ooo i wonder y geet's not reacting!!
may be her past experience!!!
maan is so damn confused!!!

and twist???
i hope riks okay!!😕
now am scared about the next part! awesum update keya
plz continue soon!😳
Edited by kawaii_geet - 14 years ago
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I am scared of this twist! Twist now! Ooo rik is in hospital, I wonder what will happen!
Oh hope geet do not blame maan! :/
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awsome yaar !!
loved it !!
hope nothing wrong with rik ...
update soon ..
waiting
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awesome...great work...
hope rik will be fine soon...
waiting for d twist, hoping it for d good...no negative 1
Edited by Manpreetmann - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
kemya ur precap scarys me.humm waiting for next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. hope it is a happy twist n not sad one safi ... pls continue soon.. n take care😊

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