newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 52

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dadi is a super cooolll sweetheart... 👍🏼😆😆😆😆
love her a lot...🤗
all the best 4 mission MAANEET...😉😉😉😉😃😃😃😃
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nice one ... good analysis ..
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wow nice analysis...
yes Maan the BHK is one I loved...
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Very good post
Nice analysis👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome analysis dear
do cont. soon
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awsom update piya !! thanks for the pm! 😊
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What a beautiful update...please carry on!! :)

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Nice part


Annie -Dadi-Dev Cupid

Waiting 4 more


Continue soon
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Part 10

Next day

Maan wakes up and moves towards the window

Maan: (self talk) Hmm' aaj uss geet ko pata chalega ke Maan singh khurana se dushmani mod lekar ussne kya kiya hai ( Today that geet will realize what a big mistake she has committed by insulting MSK)

Maan: Bechari ka pata nahi kya haal hoga jab dadima usse iss ghar se chale jaane ko kahegi' subah toh wo office mein rahegi magar raat ko kaha jaayegi (Poor Geet she will really b shocked when Dadi will tell her that she cannot stay with us)

Maan: Main bhi dekhtha hoon usse delhi mein rehne ke liye ghar kaha se milta hain (I'll ensure that she doesn't get a house anywhere in Delhi)

The outhouse is clearly visible from Maan's room.

Maan notices that Nakul is cleaning the outhouse

Maan immediately comes out

Maan: Nakul ye outhouse ki safai kyun kar rahe ho?

Nakul: Wo Maan sir dadima ne kaha hai k aaj se Geet Madam outhouse mein rahegi issliye main yaha ki safai kar raha hoon

Maan: (shocked) Kya? Geet outhouse mein rahegi' hargiz nahi' ye saaf safai abhi bannd karo samjhe tum (What geet is going to stay here no way stop this work right now)

Nakul: Sorry Sir jabtak dadima ye khud nahi kehti main apna kaam bannd nahi karunga (No sir until n unless dadima herself doesn't tell me I won't stop)

Maan gives an angry glare to Nakul.

Nakul starts shivering

Maan then decides that he will first meet Dadima and then he will decide his next step

Meanwhile,

Annie: Good morning Dev bhai

Dev: Good morning Annie. Waise geet kaha hai kya wo utt gayi

Annie: Haan bhai wo apna saaman sameet rahi hai. Office jaane se pehle wo apna saara saaman outhouse mein shift karna chahti hain

Dev: Waise Annie main toh ye soch raha hoon k jab bro ko pata chalega k geet outhouse mein reh rahi hain tab kya hoga ( just imagine Annie what would b bro's reaction )

Annie: (starts laughing) Wo tho thode der mein pata chal hi jaayega humhe bus itna khayal rakhna hain k humhe maan bhai ke saamne ekdum innocent bacchho ki tarah pesh aana hai as if humhe toh kuch pata hi nahi aur waise bhi dadi hai na maan bhai ko samal legi

Maan: Brij tumne Dadima ko khahi dekha hai? (Brij hv u seen dadima)

Dev: Annie lagta hain bro aa gaye chalo ek jagah jaakar baith jaate hain

Dev and Annie pretend to read the newspaper

Maan: Dev Dadima kaha hai?

Dev: Kya hua bro aap bahut gusse mein lag rahe hain?

Maan: Wo main tumhe baadmein batatha hoon pehle ye batau k dadima kaha hai?

Dadi: Kya hua Maan bete aaj aap savere savere humare naam ka jaap kyun kar rahe hain?

Maan: Dadima maine aapse kaha tha na k geet humare saath humare ghar mein nahi rahegi (Dadi I told u that geet won't b staying with us)

Dadi: Haan bete humhe ye baat ache se yaad hai aur humne bhi aap se vaada kiya tha k geet humhare sath KM mein nahi rahegi (Ys dear I remember )

Maan: toh ye sab kya hai dadi nakul outhouse ki safai kyun kar raha hai?

Dadi: Wo issliye kyunki aaj se waha geet rehne wali hai

Maan: lekin abhi toh aapne kaha k

Dadi: Maan bete aap ko kuch galat fami ho gayi hai humne aapse vaada kiya tha k geet humare saath KM mein nahi rahegi humne aapse baar baar puchha k agar aapki koi aur maang hai tho wo bhi batadijiye magar aap ne clearly ye kaha tha k aapki bus yahi ek sharth hai' geet outhouse mein nahi reh sakti ye aapne kab kaha? (maan I had promised u that geet won't stay at KM n I was asking u again n again whether u hv any other demands n u clearly mentioned that this is your only demand u never told me that geet cannot stay at the outhouse)

Maan: thik hai dadi agar pehle nahi kaha toh ab keh deta hoon' geet outhouse mein nahi rahegi (Ok dadi fine if I hadn't mentioned it previously then I m doing it right now)

Dadi: Bete umar toh humari ho gayi hai magar aapki yaaddash ko kya ho gaya hai' aap shayad bhool rahe hai k aapne vaada kiya tha k humara jobhi faisla hoga wo aap ko manjoor hai (Maan I m the one who is growing old bt it seems that ur memory is bcming weak' u r forgetting dear that u had promised me that u will respect my decision)

Maan: Magar dadi'

Dadi: Magar vagar kuch nahi Maan ye humhara aakhiri faisla hain' aur ab aap chahkar bhi isse badal nahi sakte'samjhe aap'jayiye apna kaam kijiye (No further arguments Maan I m nt going to change my decision' u can go and do ur work)

Maan is helpless. He goes from there.

As soon as Maan leaves Dev and Annie start laughing

Dev: Dadi u r just too good

Annie: Haan Dadi bechare Maan bhai apne hi baato mein ulaj kar reh gaye

Dadi: Are geet bete utt gayi aap' aur ye aap apna saaman kaha le jaa rahi hai

Geet: Dadi main apna saaman outhouse mein shift kar rahi hoon

Dev: Loau geet main tumhari madat kar deta hoon

Geet: Thanks dev but I will manage

Dadi: Thik hai bete aap jaakar apna saaman outhouse mein rakh deejiye

Geet goes.

Maan notices that geet is entering the outhouse.

Geet is very happy

Maan: Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? (Wht r u doing here?)

Geet:Ye sawal toh mujhse aap se karna chahiye' aapko itni bhi tameez nahi k kisi ladki k kamre mein jaane se pehle door pe knock karna chahiye ( This question should b posed by me n not u' u don't even have d manners to knock the door before entering someone's room)

Maan: oh toh tum mujhe ab manners bhi seekhaugi

Geet: Mere paas itna waqt nahi hai k main aap jaise insaan pe apna keemati waqt zyaaya karu (My time is precious I can't waste it on someone like u)

Maan: u chuttarpattar box main yaha tumhari bakbak sunne nahi aaya hoon

Geet: kya aapne mujhe chuttarpattar box kaha?

Maan: kyun jab tum mujhe ajeebogareeb naam se pukar sakti ho toh main kyun nahi?

Geet: Look Mr. Galtfaimi ki dukan' aaj mere life ka bahut special din hai aur main nahi chahti k aapse ulajkar main apne din ki shuruwat ek kharab mood mein karu

Maan:Kya tumne mujhe Galatfaimi ki dukhan kaha

Geet: Maine kaunsa jhooth keh diya' waise mere paas aapke liye aur bhi kahi der saare naam hai lekin aaj mera mood nahi hai un sab naamo ko reveal karne ka

Maan: Dekho

Geet: Aap dekhiye' aap pehle ye bataiye ke aap mere kamre mein kya karne ke liye aaye hain (first u tell me what r u doing in my room)

Maan: Ye tumhara kamra nahi hai 'samjhi tum ( this is nt your room got it)

Geet: Sorry Mr ye kamra ab se mera hi hai kyunki dadima ne mujhe paying guest rakh liya hai (Indeed this is my room Dadima has kept me as a paying guest )

Maan: Paying Guest!!! Oh toh iska matlab hain k tum iss ghar ka kiraya bhi dogi' toh chalo iss mahine ka kiraya de do (Ok then give me the rent of this month)

Geet: Jab mera wo khadoos boss mujhse meri salary de dega tab kiraya bhi de dungi (I will pay d rent once my arrogant boss gives me my salary)

Maan: tumne mujhe khadoos kaha ab toh tumhari salary gayi samjho

Geet: (smiles) Shayad aap bhool rahe hai ke maine aapki company ke saath 2 saal ka contract sign kiya hai aur agar aapne mujhe meri salary nahi di toh main aapke khilaf kanuni kaarwai karungi ( I think u r forgetting I hv signed a two year contract with ur company if u don't give me my salary then I will drag u to the court)

Maan: Bahut udd rahi hona pehle office aa jao phir main tumhe sabak seekhatha hoon ( u cm to the office I will teach u a lesson there)

Geet: Office ki baat office mein dekhenge pehle mere kamre se bahar jaayiye

Maan: Nahi jaata kya kar loogi

Geet: Kehte hain latho ke bhoot bato se nahi maante

Waha pe ek jhaadu pada hua tha

Geet goes and picks it up

Maan shocked to see this

Maan: ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: Mere kamre mein meri ijazat ke bagair koi bhi aira gaira nahi aa sakta

Geet: Get out of my room u Dhust dhanav

Saying so geet starts beating maan with the broom

Maan cannot handle the situation and runs away from there

Geet: Bade aaye the tees maar khan
Geet smiles at her victory.

Annie and Dev had witnessed the whole drama they just couldn't stop laughing

Precap 1: Dev: "Geet apne bhai ke saath tho office chalogina"

Precap 2: ouch😲😲😲

Precap 3:😉😳😊

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PART 11: PAGE 94
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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