newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 56

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brilliant part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thank you dear friends. I really love reading your comments and I feel each one of u enjoyed to see maan getting hit by a broomstick😆😆😆
Pari
Thanks for ur lovely comment dear
Srirad
Thanks dear
Ritzy
I really hope that I live upto ur expectations
Zahra15
Thanks dear so u enjoyed maan ki pitai 😆😆😆
Preethia
Ys dear humari sherni se pange lekar maan ne thik nahi kiya
Abi
Yes dear ye himmat tho sirf humari geet hi kar sakti hain
Khushboo
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Silky
Dear I m fine now😛 Yes u r right u r short in comments today but neways I always enjoy reading your comments. Lagta hain maan ki pitai dekhkar kisiko bahut maza aaya hai ab aage aage dekho hota hai kya😉
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wow loved ur comment dear
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Dear love u loads
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Nilam
Ys dear maan apne hi trap mein phas gaya hai😆😆😆
Tanu
Ys dear the great MSK was beaten with a broom😆😆😆
Anuandavi
O i m so happy i could make u laugh well u r the first one to comment on Maan's new name "Galatfaimi ki dukhan"
Atiffa
Thanks dear i will try my level best to make office fun. Love u
Shwetha
Dadi is tho our main cupid... n maneet nokh jhok toh abhi shuru hui hai
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Hey dear loved ur comment... good i was successful in making u laugh
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Thanks dear future mein aur bhi naam maan ko mil jaayenge
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thanks a ton dear.ys dear abhi toh maan ki pitai ki shuruwat hain... geet teacher se maan ko abhi bahut kuch seekna hain
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Dia
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Anu
I always love reading ur comments I don't mind u calling MSK as BHK wo naam usse zyaada suit karta hain😆😆😆
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ys dear tom n jerry chase has begun😆😆😆
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Hmm... 3rdwala precap😉
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Yes poor maan😆😆😆
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PART 11

Dev and Annie just couldn't stop laughing.

Annie had taken a snap of Geet hitting Maan with the broom

Annie : Ye dekhiye bhai kitni achhi photo aayi hai

Dev: Annie tune iss incident ka photo bhi le liya? Kyun?

Annie: ofho bhai aise mauke roz thodi naa aathe hain jab Maan singh khurana ki pitai dekhne ko milti hain aur waise bhi maine ye photo kisi aur reason se li hain (there r very rare occasions where u get to see the gr8 MSK been beaten by a broomstick n besides this I hv taken this snap for some other reason as well)

Dev: Dadi ko dikhane ke liye na

Annie: Dadi ko tho dikhana hai hi magar iske saath ek aur reason bhi hai

Dev: Kya reason Annie? (what reason Annie)

Annie: Aaj se jab bhi koi special moment maan bhai aur geet k bheech mein hoga main uss incident ka photo le lungi aur inn sab photo ka ek album banakar unhe unki first wedding anniversary mein gift kar dungi. (From now onwards whenever Maan n Geet would b sharing any special moment I will capture it in my camera and on their first wedding anniversary I will gift them)

Dev: Annie dear abhi toh ye duno seedhe muh baat tak nahi karte aur tum inke wedding anniversary ki taiyaari kar rahi ho? (Dear they don't even talk to each other properly and u r dreaming of their wedding anniversary)

Annie: Toh kya hua bhai aaj baat nahi kar rahe toh kya hum sab hai naa bhul gaye mission maneet (So what we r there naa we will make them to come closer)

Dev: Yes Mission maneet aur hum sab milkar iss mission ko successful bana denege

Annie: Bhai main ye photo jaakar dadima ko batathi hoon (I will show this photo to dadi)

Dev: Thik hai Annie tum jao tab tak main taiyaar ho jaata hoon (ok till then I will get ready)

Meanwhile

Geet: Wah geet tere paas toh har problem ka solution hai' uss dhust danav ko tho tune achha sabak seekhaya'(smiles) (Wow geet u hv a solution to every problem u taught a good lesson to that Dhust danav)

Geet: Oye geet yaha se tho tune usse bhaga diya magar office mein wo zaroor kuch chaal chalega tujhe pareshan karne ke liye' hmm' mujhe zara samal kar rehna hoga ( I m sure he will definitely plan something to trouble me'I need to b careful)

Maan: (self talk) Uss ladki ki itni himmat k usnne MSK ko jhaadu se maara aur upar se mujhe galatfaimi ki dukhan aur dhusht danav kehkar pukara'

Maan: Miss Chutter putter box tumne mujhe yaha se toh nikaal diya magar maine bhi agar tumhare haath pair nahi todh diye toh mera bhi naam MSK nahi'

Maan leaves for office

Maan: Good pehle hi din tum late ho jaayogi geet mujhe toh tumhe daatne ke liye baahana bhi dhundne ki zarurat nahi hai (Good first day in office and u r late I got a good reason to shout at u)

Dev goes to meet geet

Dev knocks the door

Geet: Are Dev aap andar aayiye

Dev: Geet tum ready toh hogayi hona, toh chalo office ke liye nikalthe hai (Geet let us leave for office)

Geet: Magar Dev main aapke saath office kaise jaa sakthi hoon aap bhi toh mere boss hai na' staff kya sochega (Dev how can I come with u' u r my boss'what will the staff think?)

Dev: Ofho geet unki chinta tum mat karo. KC ka staff bahut hi samajdaar hai

Geet: Magar Dev

Dev: Achha baba apne Boss k saath naa sahi apne bhai k saath tho office chalogi naa? (Okay don't come with ur boss but u can cm with ur brother right?)

Geet: Bhai?

Dev: Haan kyun tum mujhe apna bhai nahi baana sakthi mere liye jaise Annie hain waise hi tum bhi ho geet

Geet (had tears of happiness) jin rishto k liye main itne din tak tarasthi thi aaj mujhse wo saare ek pal mein hi mil gaye

Dev: Ok then my sweet little sis jaldi karo already hum office k liye late ho chuke hain office k pehle din hi agar tum der se puchhi naa tab toh bro k gusse se main bhi tumhe nahi bachapaunga (Ok geet now hurry up if we get late then even I won't b able to save u from Bro's anger)

Geet (smiles) Chalo chalthe hain

Both of them leave

Khurana Constructions

Maan: huh' jab main office k liye nikla tha tab geet ghar par hi thi'iska matlab hain wo pehle din hi office k liye late ho chuki hai (gives a satisfactory smile)

Maan gets an idea

Maan: sunno aaj k din lift chal nahi raha hai (Listen today the lift is not working)

Lift man: nahi sir lift mein koi bhi kharabhi nahi hai (No sir lift is perfectly fine)

Maan :( gives an angry look) Tumse jitna kaha jaaye utna hi karo samjhe tum ( u just follow the instructions don't use ur brains)

Maan: (selk talk) Hmm' pehle din jab 10 maala chadkar aana padega na tab pata chalega (First day n u have to climb 10 floors)

Maan enters the office

There is a lot of hustle and bustle in the office

Adi: Haan isse bhi remove kar dijiye (Yes remove this as well)

Maan: Adi ye kya ho raha hai

Adi: Good morning Sir. Actually sir ye thode purane furniture pade hue the inmese kuch tutheputhe hai toh main unhe remove karwaraha hoon (Sir these r some old furnitures I m removing them)

Maan: Hmm'good

He was about to enter his cabin when

Maan: Adi is stool mein kya kharabhi hain (what is wrong with this stool)

Adi: Sir ye dikhne mein tohthik lag raha hai magar iski taang mein problem hai' koi bhi ispar bait ya khada nahi ho sakta (Sir there is a problem with the leg of this stool anyone can get easily hurt if they try to sit or stand on it)

Maan: iska matlab hai k jo koi bhi issek saath chedkhani karne ki koshish karega usse chot lag sakti hain'right?

Adi: Yes Sir

Maan: Thik hai isse jaakar uss kamre mein rakh do (Keep this stool in that cabin)

Adi: Uss kamre mein?

Maan: Haan wo meri new secretary ka cabin hain waha jaakar ye stool rakh dho ( yes that cabin is of my new secretary)

Adi: Magar Sir'

Maan: (angry)Adi'

Pinky: Maan Sir ye wo Rathore Sir ki file hain

Maan: Pinky jaakar isse meri secretary ke cabin mein rakh aao' ye file pehle wo dekhegi (Go and keep this file in geet's cabin I want her to analyze this file first)

Pinky: Okay Sir

Pinky goes and keeps the file

Maan enters Geet's cabin and places the file in the topmost shelf. He was sure geet would have to take the aid of the stool for removing the file

Meanwhile Dev and Geet arrive

Dev: Are Ramu kya hua lift nahi chal raha?

Ramu: Ji Sir lift mein kuch problem hai

Geet: Hmm' toh Dev kya khayal hai gyarah number ki bus pakad le?

Dev: Gyarah number ki bus?

Geet: Haan mera matlab hain ke seediyon se chalte hain

Dev: Hmm' aur koi chara bhi toh nahi hai

Both of them start climbing the stairs

Precap:

PART 12 : PAGE 101
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update..👏
Precap interesting..Can't wait😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome yaar maan tu sahi main dd ban gaya dust dhanav😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
bt precap is more interestinggg😉
cont sooon
thnx for d PM 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part!!
Loved the annie plan i hope i come true very soon..
omg Maan is really mean..evil scheme of arrangement for Geet..
precape looking very interesting...
really excited for next part..
please continues soon and thanks for pm:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yeh maan toh bada zalim aadmi nikla... i mean pehle lift tudwa di aur ab tute hue stool uske hi kamre main rakdiya!! kya baath hai?? The update was really good!! 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb
pls waitng for the next aprt
update soon dear
wow mann u only held her in ur h ands

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