newFF(Maneet)Mere humsafar Trd 1uptd prt16 pg 138 - Page 39

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ApoorvaShah

its lovely...have just finished reading everything! Its really gd...keep going! 😉

thanks dear😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks dear😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: luckystar007

great write yaar thanks for pm

thanks dear😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks 4 ur appreciation frnds here is the next part.
Part 7

Maan gives a wicked smile to geet and leaves her room

Maan: (self talk) tum jaanti nahi geet ke inn papers pe sign karke tumne kitni badi galti ki hai. Jald hi tum samaj jaaogi ke Maan singh khurana ke saath dusmani mod lekar tumne kitni badi galti kar li hai. Uss thapad ki ek ek gunj ka hisaab tumhe chukana hoga ( Geet u don't know what a big mistake u have done by signing this contract. Soon u will realize the consequences of slapping Maan singh khurana u will have to pay a very big price dear)

Meanwhile

Annie: (very happy) Dev bhai m so happy today

Dev: Kya hua Annie wo khushi ki baat mujhe bhi toh batau (What happened Annie why r u so happy?)

Annie: Dev bhai aap vishwas nahi karenge ( U won't believe me)

Dev: Aisa kyun keh rahi ho?

Annie: Jaante hai bhai aaj maan bhai pehli baar kisi ladki se wo bhi akele mein baat kar rahe hai ( It is 4 d very first time that Maan is speaking to a girl n that too all alone)

Dev: What? Are u serious?

Annie: Dekha I told na u won't believe me

Dev: Annie waise tum kis ladki ki baat kar rahi ho kahi geet tho nahi? (r u talking abt geet?)

Annie: Aur kaun ho sakta hai? (who else?)

Dev: Waise kehna to padega k geet mein wakai kuch khaas baat hai warna bro itne jaldi impress hone walo mein se nahi hai (There is definitely smthng special abt geet otherwise it is not an easy task to impress bro)

Just then Dadi arrives

Annie: Dadi lagta hai mera sapna jald hi haqeekat mein badal jaayega (I think my dreams will turn into a reality very soon)

Dadi does not react

Annie: Kya hua dadi aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi? (What's d matter dadi why r u silent?)

Maan arrives

Dev: Are ye lo bro bhi aa gaye

Annie: Tho maan bhai bataiye kaisi lagi meri best frnd geet? (so tell me what do u think abt geet?)

Maan: Haan acchi hai (ya she is nice)

Annie: Wo tho mujhe pata hi hai bhai warna aap khud usse milne thodi na jaate waise kitna maza aayega meri frnd ab humesha meri nazaro ke saamne hogi (I know that she has impressed u otherwise u yourself would never go to meet her. Wow m so happy that now my best frnd would always be in front of my eyes)

Maan: Ek minute Annie tum galat samaj rahi ho ( One minute Annie I think u r misunderstanding me )

Annie: kya matlab?

Maan: Ye baat sach hai ke maine geet ko apne office mein kam par rakh liya hai lekin iska ye matlab nahi ke wo mere ghar mein reh sakti hain (Annie this is 100% right that I hv employed geet in KC but this does not mean that she can stay in my house)

Annie: Ye aap kya keh rahe hai?

Maan: Mujhe galat mat samajna annie lekin kya tumne kabhi bhi ye suna hai ke koi employee apne hi boss k ghar mein rehta hai (Don't take me otherwise Annie but have u ever heard an employee staying at the residence of his boss)

Annie: But bhai this place is completely new for geet I can't leave my frnd alone

Dev: Bro I think Annie is right

Maan: ok fine abhi aap decide kijiye ke geet ko KC mein naukri karni hain ya fir KM mein rehna hai aur agar aap ye chahte hain k geet humare saath KM mein rahe tho main usse ye naukri nahi de sakta (Ok then if u wan't geet to stay with us in KM then I m sorry I can't give her d job now u decide which option do u want to choose)

Dev: Bro this is not fair

Maan: Dev I really don't care whether this is right or wrong but if u want geet to work with us then u have to accept my condition

Dadi: Maan bete aapki yahi sharth hai na ke geet KM mein na rahe aur koi dusari sharth tho nahi hai na? (Maan u don't want geet to stay with us in KM that's it I hope u don't have any other condition)

Maan: Ji Dadi

Dadi: soch lijiye bete badme aap apni baat se peeche tho nahi hatenge na ( Think once again Maan u hv to assure me that u would stand by ur words)

Maan: Ji dadi I promise meri koi aur sharth nahi hai ( I don't have any other condition)

Dadi: ok then hum aapse vaada karte hai k geet hum sab k saath KM mein nahi rahegi ( I promise that geet won't b staying with us in KM )

Annie: But dadi

Dadi: Annie humhari baat abhi tak puri nahi hui

Dadi: Maan humne aapki baat maani hai ab aapko bhi humari baat manni padegi ( I hv agreed to ur terms now u will also hv to respect my decision )

Maan: Ji Dadi kahiye aap kya kehna chahti hai (Yes dadi tell me what u want me to do)

Dadi: Abhi nahi maan hum aapko ye baat subah batayenge ab aap ja sakte hain ( I would b telling u in d morning right now u can leave)

Maan: Ok dadi

Maan leaves

Dev: Dadi aapne bro ki baat kyun maan li?

Dadi: Batate hain pehle geet ko tho aa jane dijiye ( I will clarify ur doubt first let geet come )

Annie: geet yaha kyun aayegi bhala? (Why will geet cm here)

Dadi: wo zaroor aayengi hum baitkar unka intezaar karte hain (She will definetly come we will wait for her)

Annie and Dev confused.

Precap 1: Geet's decision

Precap 2: Mission maneet
pls leave ur valuable comments 😛
Part 8 pg 73
Edited by piya- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
now i am getting more & more curious. Awesome update
Keep Rocking
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Posted: 14 years ago

maan beta vo teri he dadi hai ... vo pakka usko outhouse mai rakhegi...

loving it
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb
want to see what dadi want to ask her
i knew she aks to marry mann
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

loved part 7 ...

thnx 4 d pm...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
k y was daadi talkng like that...did she hear their convo????eagerly waiting for the next part ...do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome n amazing dear

getting interesting part by part

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