FANTASY (Maaneet FF)-Link to thread 2 Pg-151 - Page 9

hey sarzah

its a very nice and strong attempt.. not a feeble one..

and nice update

continue soon :)

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Originally posted by: sarita21992

I just found this one today!! Superb:-) loved it! D first part made me think cmmon geet, what cud have been so bad tht u r not allowing maan to come near u, but gosh d next few parts made me say, maan just GET LOST!! I mean how can he... I wish he sees d wound tht he has given her, d final nail in his coffin which arose from his guilt.. N better u come up with a reunion only after maan pays properly for his sins. Also lookin 4ward how he ' d dumb msk' got to know abt d truth: ...

Originally posted by: aziza_ahmed

wow sarzah great job ...you express thier pain in such a way it felt greattt.awesum job buddy ...will wait for next update ...keep rcking ...tc...

Originally posted by: maaneet_ayla

how on earth did i miss this amazing ff..??😲

omg omg..u r brilliant...i love the way u smoothly narrate everything with ease..i love ur style..👏😳😊

do continue soon..and plz plz add me in ur pm list..😳

Originally posted by: shivgauri89

gr8 yaar
pls update sooon...
w8ing...