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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
so maan got to know the truth but it is too late i guess...
he trusted some one else's word than his love...
he is right he doesnt deserve geet...
he has to suffer losing her in front of his eyes...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii sarzah...
let me start with saying that this was a splendid update...
finaly we get what actually transpired between geet and maan and how maan got to kno the truth...
ayan's much required meet with maan was a relief...
i think ayan is really an inspiration and the love between ayan and his beloved is something to look upto...coz its very difficult to find such selfless love
its quite a pity that ayan was able to identify geet's undying love for maan which shamefully doubted upon
but now i am really worried how maan is going to make geet stay till she is fine and hope he is able to earn back his lost love and restore back geet's faith and love for him...
i want him to feel tortured every moment before he is redeemed for his abhorrable actions...
he has a lot of making up to do...
nevertheless it will be fun to watch what have u planned for our beloved maneet...
once again thnxxx for this wonderful update
looking forward for some amazing updates
keep writing
love u and ur ff

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago

i hope geet doesn't give in

so easy &maan need to work hard
to gain geet trust
what he did was very wrong
brilliant part
love it
ty 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

hy i jst startd gng through ya ff its awsum plz ad em 2 ya pm list

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Posted: 14 years ago
Waiting for d update:-) u were supposed to update once a day na!
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Posted: 14 years ago
FANTASY
CHAPTER-6
The morning sun tickled her eyelids,as Geet stirred awake slowly. She felt a tingling pain in her wrist and her head felt considerably light. She looked around herself and her eyes widened as she realized that it was Maan's room. She caught sight of him, sleeping uncomfortably in the couch and whispered softly, " Main yahaan kya kar rahi hoon?"

Maan woke up immediately and walked up to her side.

" Geet!! Jaan, how do you feel now?"

" Why did you bring me here? Mujhe yahaan nahin rehna. Mujhe jana hai,"she tried to sit up when the blanked slipped exposing her shoulders, and she screamed out aloud.

" Mere kapde!! Maan aap ne yeh kya kiya? Kal raat!!! Mujhe kuch yaad kyun nahin aa raha hai.. Mujhe chor dena kaafi nahin tha ke aapne mere saath'", she clutched the sheets tightly to her body and cried out loud.

" Nahin Geet' Tum galat samajh raahi ho. Tumhe sponge bath dena tha aur'"

" Aur aapne socha ke iski izzat toh waise bhi nahin hain toh kya farq parta hai hain na? Mujhe nafrat hain aapse Maan. Main yahaan nahin rahungi. Aapke aas paas agar rahii toh main mar jaungi. I hate you Maan. I hate you!!!"she started hitting him with her fists as he came close to calm her down.

" Wait Geet!!! Tumhe sponge bath maine diyatha. Maan ne hi mujhse kaha tha. He' he didn't touch you last night. After you fainted, he brought you in here!!!", Pari ran into the room desperately and started explaining, but Geet started breathing hard and lost conscious yet again. Maan held her up immediately and made her lie down on the bed gently.

" Pari!! Get the doctor'now", he said desperately.

After giving her another sedative, the doctor left. Pari tried to talk to Maan," Why didn't you tell her? You were standing there listening to her accusations!!! I mean'."

" Its ok Pari. She was right, anyone would have freaked out. And she has every right to be angry on me!! After all, I am responsible for whatever she is going through today!! Aur waise bhi, mere upar gussa nahin nikale toh kisper nikale!!!" he said smiling sadly.

It was almost 10pm when Geet gained consciousness. Maan was sitting on a chair near the bed, and as soon as she saw him, she tried to get up but Maan held her by the shoulders gently.

" Geet please, just listen to me once. Main jantaa hoon humare beech mein jo huwa, uske bad tum mera chehra bhi nahin dekhna chahti, mere saath rehna toh dur ki baat hai. Main tumhare layak nahin hoon Geet. You deserve someone way better than me. Lekin tumhari yeh halat meri wajah se huwi hai. Please stay with me till you recover, let me take care of you, look after you atleast till you are healthy again. Main tumse wada karta hoon, I will not ask you to stay back with me or forgive me. Ek bar tum thik ho jao, phir tum jo chahti ho wahi hoga, jaisa tum kahogi main waisa hi karunga. Please Jaa' I mean Geet.. Aakhri baar meri baat manlo."

" Lekin aap jitney paise mere elaj ke liye kharch karenge, woh lautane ki haesiat nahin hain meri. I don't want you to spend anything on me that I wont be able to pay back.", she spit out rudely and then felt a sharp pang of regret as she saw Maan's eyes cloud with shock, guilt, pain and sadness!! She thought, she saw tears in his eyes, but before she could make sure, Maan turned his face away.

The silence was uncomfortable and heavy with remorse, indecision, pain and regret.

" Thik hai. Lekin sirf kuch dino ke liye!!"

The days passed as Maan spent hours looking after Geet. He got the tests done, and had a 24-hr nurse, who gave her the baths and changes she needed. He never touched her, except when he fed her medicines or food. They hardly talked to each other, but Geet had caught Maan staring at her lovingly and silently many times when she pretended to sleep.

" He loves you so much Geet!!",Pari sighed as she sat on the bed drinking coffee." I wish I find someone like him too. The way he looks at you, the way he holds you is enough to make anyone crazy. I mean, ever since the day he carried you in here, he hasn't even slept properly. I'm just glad you are here."

That night, Maan came in to feed her the meds. Geet stared at him as he slipped his hand gently under the blanket, and gripped her waist softly. He helped her to sit up, their faces inches apart, and his breath fell on her parted lips, giving her a splendid sensation. He gave her the meds and water, wiping her lips, his thumb lingering on her lower lip. He then gently held her shoulders, and slowly lowered her on the bed, wrapping the blanket. He was moving away, when Geet held his hand and he froze on his tracks. It had been weeks that Geet had touched him. He missed her touch, love, affection, laughter so much' he turned around with a smile on his face, which was short-lived.

" Maan!! Meri tabiyat aab thik hai. Mujhe yahaan se jana hai. I think it's time for me to leave your house!!!"

PRECAP: " Mujhe chor ke mat jao Geet. I am sorry!!"

"Aap ne mujhse wada kiya tha Maan ke ek bar main thik ho gayi toh aap mujhe nahin rokenge!!"





I am so sorry guys, I know I had said that I will update more often, but I was not in the country for one week!! But now I am back, so now I can work on this FF more,...

Thank you so much for all your love and support, and the 55 people who liked my last chapter, A BIG HUG and all my commenters, you people are the best!!!

I hope you like this chapter too...

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE press the like button and leave me longgg comments... They reallly motivate me A LOT!!!

Edited by sarzah - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part...is geet really going away?
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii...sarzah
thats simply a fabulous update...
feeling extremely sorry for maan...
but then he is reaping the consequences of his irresponsible actions and accusations...

the precap is a bit scary and heartwrenching
wll b waitng for the nex part
keep writing
love ur ff

reva
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Posted: 14 years ago
well written update...eagerly waiting for the next part...

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