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Deeksha

@annie.shona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

awww...

nysh story..

m happy to see a fanfic on abhi nikki after a long time

do continue soon

and plzzz add me to the pm list..

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Indira

@bmtd18

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Hey Khushboo,

Congrats on your 2nd FF!! Just wanted to say that I love part 1 and can't wait for your following updates.

If you could add me to your PM that would be lovely

Lots of love

Indira

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

@Pri...thanks! Yeah I stole that poem from Honu's COL 😳 Dunno where it's from hehe...well actually school has started and I just don't have time...I get some spare time and I pop in for a few secs to just reply to things...and no, this was an experiment and I've written it already, it has 10 parts...sorry to disappoint, but it just won't go any further than that. Extending on what I already have would mean adding water to milk and that is the last thing I want to do with this one.

@shonababx...thank you for the comment! Sure I'll add you to the PM list...what's your name?

@Indira...thanks, and yes I'll add you to the list.

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Deeksha

@annie.shona

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN
@shonababx...thank you for the comment! Sure I'll add you to the PM list...what's your name?

hey this is Deeksha here.. :) ..

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

wow kush awesome fic cont soon

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

@ Khush Edited my comment on pg 2😊

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NEHU

@Glitter_In_Eye

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

@Neha...thanks! Well I couldn't think of what I wanted the sig to look like so I just made it animated 😆 Waiting for you to un-res that!

But I really loved it, especially the effects actually, those streaks that you've made. I told you before also that I loved that style. By the way, when are you planning to teach me that?
@bold done.
Sorry for spamming but it shouldn't bother you much na after all you've only 10 parts to update.😉😆

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anotheranfan

@anotheranfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN
adding water to milk and that is the last thing I want to do with this one.

Then dont :) but atleast promise to write epilog or something as a bonus :) Dil always maange more. Great work girl.. you have come long way in writing FF.. really looking fwd to next part...

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

@Deeksha...welcome to my thread! 🤗

@Jyothi...thanks!

@Neha...yes well before learning animation you need to learn how to make sigs in the first place 😆 So that is a long way away!

@Pri...I'll see...let me finish posting the FF first, then if I can think of an epilogue that will be appropriate, you will get it.

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Nehu_1
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OMG, what a start Khush, awesome...I was already knowing that it's going to be a heck of an FF mixed with all emotions that you've become a pro in portraying. You made me crave for this FF since the day you posted that sneak peak.

Coming back to the part, it was bloody intense and I liked the way you expressed the tension, the confusion, their feelings. I always like Abhi and Nikki this way only, all messed up, confused and intense. The part was indeed worth the wait.😊

"Why do you always hurt me so much, Abhi?" the vulnerability that exposed itself in her voice had his eyes snapping back to her face.
But his severe need to be honest to her won out. He answered in a voice that was laden heavy with emotion and fear at her possible reaction.
"I love it."

Khush, You took my heart away with this one. I couldn't have imagined an answer different than that. I so loved this dialogue.

The whole part was so easy to imagine. Once again, great job.👏

Continue soon.

PS the avi you used is fab. I loved it.

Thank you for the edit, Neha!

Glad to know you're excited about this, because this FF will be radically different from things I've written till now...as I keep stressing, it's an experiment. I've been listening to a few songs lately, and this is a culmination of all the ideas the individual songs implanted into my mind...let's see if you like what it ends up being 😳

I love that dialogue too...I also love the intense, disturbed, passionate, angry, and to some extent demented 😆 AN ⭐️