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ok ... so the above comment was made when i read it late last night .

Khusboo come back and give me part two right now !

You'll have to wait, Mitzi! One update per week...I have it written out entirely and it has 10 parts so you're gonna have to be patient!

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OMG, what a start Khush, awesome...I was already knowing that it's going to be a heck of an FF mixed with all emotions that you've become a pro in portraying. You made me crave for this FF since the day you posted that sneak peak.

Coming back to the part, it was bloody intense and I liked the way you expressed the tension, the confusion, their feelings. I always like Abhi and Nikki this way only, all messed up, confused and intense. The part was indeed worth the wait.😊

"Why do you always hurt me so much, Abhi?" the vulnerability that exposed itself in her voice had his eyes snapping back to her face.

But his severe need to be honest to her won out. He answered in a voice that was laden heavy with emotion and fear at her possible reaction.

"I love it."

Khush, You took my heart away with this one. I couldn't have imagined an answer different than that. I so loved this dialogue.

The whole part was so easy to imagine. Once again, great job.👏

Continue soon.

PS the avi you used is fab. I loved it.

I hate u ... wish I could unlike ur post 😛

OMG khush!! I wish i could tell you how much i liked your first part in words.. Its a brilliant start.. 'Sometimes when we touch" Title explains everything.. As if its made just for AN.. You have indeed made us desprate to read more ..

Now coming to your 1^st part.. It's a wonderful start.. I loved the way u expressed AN dilemmas.. I could actually imagine them, feel them myself...Awesome start.. *You know lately I'm using this phrase a lot more for you *..

Adamant Nikki.. Stubborn, angry, confused, hurt Abhi.. A wall where he can pin her' and a smoking hot intense AN moment.. Absolute perfect blend of everything.. Can't ask for more in the first part, can i?.. Agaaz ye hai to pata nahi agey anjaam kya hoga!! I think its gonna be hotter n hotter in each updates, right?.. Phewww..

It's always a treat to read their unpredicted reaction towards each other when they are in close proximity. You can never predict how they gonna respond.. That's the beauty of these two characters... I love the way they hurt each other when they meant to show care.. the way they instigate, provoke each other to get some reaction.. These are the qualities which you'll never find in any other couple..

I've read your posts in FC where you've described few An scenes in the depth.. You have always caught their right emotions and must say you are too good in explaining depth of each n every AN scenes..

You definitely deserve a round of applause for such a brilliant and intense start..

I must quote this thing:

"Why do you always hurt me so much, Abhi?" the vulnerability that exposed itself in her voice had his eyes snapping back to her face.

But his severe need to be honest to her won out. He answered in a voice that was laden heavy with emotion and fear at her possible reaction.

"I love it."This dialogue is like a heart of this part..

Loved every bits of part.. Please update soon.. We have had enough of waiting for this FF.. Now update ASAP *in an impatient tone*..

@Rucha...glad to know you believe it's worth the wait 🤗 That relieves me quite a bit. Added to the PM list!

I'm keeping up our tradition! RES.

Originally posted by: AbhiNikiLuver

I'm keeping up our tradition! RES.

LOL I <333ed it.

khushboo,
great start. Loved the poem.. emotions so well expressed in those poetic words. Simply great.

Loved the whole emotional drama between A and N. Liked how you are expressing those unsteady feelings. It can go anywhere from here and cant wait to find it out.

Once in a week is too less :) update twice a week atleast :) and i second mitzi.. we want more parts.. this ff has so much potential..